Reviews by lazydaisy679
Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by: DeebelleOnefic

 

This is a story of a tough as nails, Bella, who can bring a mob boss, Edward, to his knees, but in all the right ways.  What happens when these two strong personalities collide in more than one way?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Family, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125775 Read Count: 478046
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2014 Updated: 13 May 2014
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Wasnt Paul Sheldon from the Misery by Steven King?

 

Looking forward to more :D

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Looking forward to more :)

 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

So... why is she going after Edward and his family?  Are they the ones that killed her father?

 

Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Ut oh... I think that Jessica might be a plant from Jacob? Maybe??

 

Looking forward to more :D

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Looking forward to more!!

Glad that Donkey is going to out on her ass.   I hope Edward is smart enough to question her.  She is up to no good!!!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

My thoughts....  This is some high tech stuff they are messing with.   Which is awesome.  

I can not wait for more.   I love this story HARD!! :D  Amazing as always.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I am sooooo loving this story!!  I love that she calls Edward Stark!! ( I love me some Iron Man!! :))

I dont trust Jess~~ Donkey.. kinda of fits her, she is a ass!

I am looking forward to more :)  And her telling Edward her story! Cassie and Cullen are adorable!

MORE, MORE, MORE  PLEASE!!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Mercy! 

I bet Dora is Felix, cause he is one scary dude in the the Twilight movies!!

 

Mike is a sick duck!! 

 

Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I am glad she was able to open up to Stark.  I am glad she is trusting him.

 

Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I am so loving this story!!  You have hooked :D

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I am glad she is opening up about with Edward.  I hope during the training she put Jasper so hard on his ass!!  So fast he may never recover!!  LOL

 

Looking forward to the upcoming stories :D

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Wow... I am surprise Bella didnt rip Sasha head off!

Chaos is her voice activated computer program.  Has to be, there is one else she would trust but herself!

 

Looking forward to more!! :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I only have one thing to say about this chapter.....

 

I LOVED IT!!  I love the beginning, the middle and the end!!

 

This is one of my favorites so far!! 

 

MORE, MORE, MORE PLEASE :D

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I love badass Bella.  But I hate when she is so cocky you want her smacked down.   I think your Bella is the best mix of the two.  

 

I really, really, really wish that Chaos would have shocked the shit out of whiney, pansy ass Jasper.  I have never seen a worse Jasper in a story where he is suppose to be a badass guard. 

Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 01 May 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

They got engaged!! :D

 

Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 12 May 2014 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

This has been such a phenomal story.

 

I loved it!!

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

fertile

 

 

Summary: Almost over the hill--in her own mind--Bella wants a family, so she chooses in vitro. Tainted by playboy father, Charlie's need to date barely legal girls, causes her to push away a younger Edward. AH/Rated M

Edited for content on FFN. Unedited will post on TWCS and FicPad.

Banner by: Beffers87

Birthday story for: Bobbi Wordsmith aka: AWayWithWords


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20562 Read Count: 56065
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2014 Updated: 13 Apr 2014
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Looking forward to more :)

Summary:

 

 

The rich kid and Maid meet, but go their own ways. They meet again years later. Very little angst. This is a one shot only I hope you enjoy!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5540 Read Count: 1326
[Report This] Published: 08 Apr 2014 Updated: 08 Apr 2014
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was really sweet!!  I enjoyed it..

Thank you for posting it :D

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner made by:CaiteexxGraphics

SUMMARY: Edward, fresh out of veterinary school moves to the small town his grandfather was from, after his sudden death. There he inherits his veterinary clinic and ranch. He finds himself intrigued by the young Isabella who tries to runaway with her brother several times. What will Edward do when he finds a journal his grandfather kept and realizes that his own grandfather was trying to help her and her brother get away?

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76586 Read Count: 117708
[Report This] Published: 16 May 2014 Updated: 29 Jun 2014
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Love this chapter :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 27 May 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

More :D

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 17 May 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

First I have to say you ladies amaze me!!

I am so impressed by your talent.  The way you weave a story, that just pulls me in!  I love it.

 

I am looking forward to more of this.   :D

 

 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Man, poor Bella...  What a ordeal they have been through.  One question, how old are Bella and Peter?

 

Thanks :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oh.. explain how she killed charlie?

 

I have read it three times.  How did she shoot charlie?

Glad the dick is dead! 

He had her sold, to who??

 

Looking forward to more :)



Author's Response:

She didn't Peter did, but she wanted Edward to tell the police that she did it.

 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Wow.. the abuse was awful...

 

Damn this is sad.....

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Wow.. Poor Bella and Peter

 

I hope Jasper, Rose and the rest of them feel like complete shit!! 

 

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Mercy, those poor kids!!

 

And those nasty nosey, selfish neighbors.   I wouldnt want rose and kates help.  i would rather ask the devil!  Wait the devil was those kids father.  Maybe his minions instead.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

So is Bella going to be a little buddy, by the name of Peaches?

 

(I adopted a rescued dashound in October.  He was pretty badly abuse.  Very malnurished.  Now he is may baby boy!  I an I love his to bits!!! )

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

How can he say "enough of the heavy" when her life has been nothing but pain and drama??   How can she just turn that off?  He was attacking her little brother.  The only person he could turn to was Bella?

The lawyer was a ass!!

Edward's comment sucked!!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

My thought is, Charlie was going to sell Bella to the highest bidder.  Who is to say he hadnt done that already?  Who's to say that he hadnt gotten half of the money?  Who's to say (other than you two)  that there isnt someone out there waiting in the wings to snatch Bella from them??

 

Looking forward to more!!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

So Misty wasnt Peaches correct?  They didnt put down Bellas dog??

 

Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Loved it! They have came soo far!

 

Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Loved it :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I am wondering when the man the purchased Bella is going to come look for her??

 

Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

My, poor Bella!!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

90,000 sounds like a lot of money.  But for a house, its really not.  Although they may not want to live with the ghosts of Charlie and Tanya. 

 

Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Great date!!

 

Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Ah, what a sweet proposal!! :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I am glad that is light in the lemonade department.  With the hell that Bella went through.. that would be just...wrong..

 

Loved it and looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Great story loved it!! :D

Summary:

 

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True love never dies, it only grows older with time.

 

Thank to heartfortwilight for the beautiful banner


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Family, Hurt/Comfort,, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1161 Read Count: 459
[Report This] Published: 22 May 2014 Updated: 22 May 2014
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 22 May 2014 Title: Chapter 1: True love never dies

Tear jerker indeed!  Wow...

They died together..  Oh.. tears...



Author's Response:

Yeah, I cried writting the ending to this, ty  for your review

Summary:

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A ruthless criminal detached from all emotions brought to Las Vegas on a job. A young woman trying to move on after escaping an abusive relationship.

 

One drunken night brings them together. Can they survive in a world filled with lies and deception? Mobward/Mafia.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 136341 Read Count: 126011
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2014 Updated: 04 Feb 2016
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

So Bella has a new game to play... its called        

"Who's Your Daddy??!!"   hosted by Renee Swan.... 

 

Poor Bella, Renee is a nasty P.O.S!  Man..

 

Looking forward to more :D

Summary:

He's roamed the world, protecting the innocent from the evil who prowl among them, an Angel of Death on Earth. It is his sole purpose in life since he lost his other half and became immortal, until he finds her again. She's young and innocent, studying the criminal mind and how to combat it. She's glimpsed the darker side of humanity and is ready to join him in his crusade.    

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12940 Read Count: 1627
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2014 Updated: 04 Jun 2014
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

GReat story!!! :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

CITF_Chandra

Banner by Chandrakanta

Isabella Swan, an up and coming graphic artist, lived in the heart of the Gold Coast in Chicago. She was comfortable in her brownstone, left to her by her grandmother.

Edward Cullen, a lieutenant in the Chicago Fire Department and the head of the rescue squad in Department Eighteen. He risks his life on a daily basis, putting out fires and saving strangers from burning buildings and mangled vehicles.

She was an innocent…someone caught in the cross hairs of their obsession with fire.

He was a hero…a man desperate to save the woman who was in danger from a serial arsonist. 

Little did they know, this monster was going to be the catalyst to start their fire, their fire of passion. 

They were Caught in the Flames

 

CITF

 

Banner by Fallingsnow Winter! Thank you! 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244154 Read Count: 1081558
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2014 Updated: 24 Dec 2015
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 126: Chapter 126

Sweet!! :D

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 166: Chapter 166

She is feeling weird cause she still has her baby belly...

 

Looking forward to more :D

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 122: Chapter 122

Loving this!! 

 

James and Renee are evil!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 170: Chapter 170

Thats why she didnt want him to look to close :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

ahh.. I am loving this Edward!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

It may have been better for Edward to see Tanya without Bella being involved. 

 

Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 125: Chapter 125

Oh, wow!!  Poor Bella!  I know you have plans on when James gets caught.  But I hope he get the poopy flu!!!  Cause if anyone deserves it.... yep thats him!!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 169: Chapter 169

Thats good.  Maybe he does need closure.

 

Looking forward to more :D

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 175: Epilogue

Loved this story!

 

Thank you for sharing! :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 163: Chapter 163

Awww.. sweet shower, loved the pic's.

 

Marie is on her way :D

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 23 May 2015 Title: Chapter 146: Chapter 146

Ahh.. poor Edward and Bella..

 

I hope James bleeds out somewhere!

Love it!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

So, she is starting to line up people to work for her.

 

Looking forward to more :0)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 173: Chapter 173

Sweet!!   Loved the wedding :D 

 

Loved the pics on your blog!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 161: Chapter 161

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HALLELUJAH!! HALLELUJAH!!

HHHAAAALLLLLEEEEEELLLLUUUUUUJJJJJJJAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

I'm sad! No chapter :(

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 157: Chapter 157

Loved the pic of the nursery..

Cant wait to someone knocks off James.

I hope it Charlie!!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 152: Chapter 152

I loved this chapter... they needed some smiles.

 

I am glad you are naming this baby after your mom.. What a incrediable memorial for your mom.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 172: Chapter 172

Alice is a idiot!! That was kind of cruel to say on a wedding day...

 

Looking forward to more :D

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 158: Chapter 158

Poor Edward... James need to die! Soon!!

 

Looking forward to more :D

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 160: Chapter 160

Nice... where the hell is Bellas gun???  I hope she shoots him in the balls!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

Oh.. no!!  Is Victoria caught in the fire??

Looking forward to more :D

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Lovin'!! 

 

It such a great story.  Rose is a bit*h!!   Poor Bella, she had been throught hell and back again.

I hope Renee and James get hit by a big freaking truck!!!   And it hurts bbbaaaddd!!

 

 

How many chapters do you think this story will be?

 

Looking forward to more :)



Author's Response:

I don't know how many chapters there will be. If you've read Mafia Princess...it might be closer to that length. I'm not sure, though. 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

Loved it!  :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

Conserving water??  Great ideal Bella!  ;)

 

Looking forward to more :D

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

LMAO!!! Charlie Swan, cockblocker.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

First, I am from Indiana, the middle part. Not everyone here are bad drivers! Just sayin'!!

Rant over...

 

Poor Bella she has her share of  issues. Rightly so!! 

Looking forward to more :D



Author's Response:

I'm not dissing Indiana drivers...just the bottle neck on the roads leading into Indiana...It. Takes. Forever.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Ah..  they are squeeking out a little happy in her horrible situation.

 

Love it!! :D

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

Sounds like they are going to have a great weekend together!

 

Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

I think the entire firehouse will end up being Team Bella before its over.  They might even make her their mascot!! LOL :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Poor Bella!

 

Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

Love it! As always!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

Dad's here!!

 

Let see Renee and James start their shit now!! :D

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 11 May 2015 Title: Chapter 143: Chapter 143

Love it and looking forward to more :)

James is like Valtamort... he is vile like a snake!  Thats how he excaped!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

HOLLA!!

Loving it, and looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Poor Bella... can not wait for the James asskicking!

And Renee.. such a nasty hateful woman!!

 

Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 153: Chapter 153

This a sweet chapter

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh my!!

Loving it so far! :D

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Loving this and looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Thank you!  Thank you! Thank you!! 

A mellow Alice would be wonderful! 

I loath when she is a pushy no it all!! Grr.

 

Looking forward to more :)

 

 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 25 May 2015 Title: Chapter 147: Chapter 147

A boy, I think...  Adam McKinley  (that isnt one I have heard!)

 

Glad things are starting to look up :D

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

What amazing person!  Human kindness never stops surprising me. Love seeing that you used it in your story!

 

Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

So who crushed her soul????????????

 

Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Edward and Bella have both got scar's.   Looking forward to Bella's story.

 

Loving it!! :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Ahh.. Poor Bella! Who's the dick who's harassing her?

 Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Some!! :D

 I still think that Renee is a horriable parent.

(never liked her in the books either!)

Looking forward to more :D

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Love that she is trusting Edward.

 

Looking forward to more  :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

oh..... Poor Bella!

 

Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I couldnt hate Bella.  She hates herself to much as it is.

 

Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Loved it!!

 

Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Think Edward and Bella will be adopting little Melanie??  I mean, thanks to James, Bella will never be able to have childern....  They would make great parents.

 

Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Wow..

I still think they should check on the baby and see if she has any family.

 

And Tanya... I dont think Bella will be to upset.   But I do think that Tanya will  be back like a bad penny!

 

Looking forward to more :D

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

She may not like who he sleep with before her, but what can she do about it.

Its not like she can un-sleep with James, or him Tanya or Irina.

 

Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

What did Bitchnee tell Charlie??  Did Bella ever tell Charlie about Bitchnee or James did to her??

 

Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

I am so glad that Bella got ahold of Charlie.  I hope he rip Renee a new one!!  And even get to smack James around a few times too!!  After Edward, and maybe Emmett.  Emmetts a big guy.  I am sure he packs a whallop!! :) 

 

Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

I am glad that Charlie is going to be likable.  I love that Edward is so good with Bella.

 

Looking forward to more :D

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

Part of me thinks he should tell Rose that she made her bed.  She destroy all his stuff.  Got him basically kicked out of his apartment.  Tell to f-off. 

But Emmett is a good guy.  I can not see him doing that. 

 

Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

OMFreaking God!!!

Can I slap the the shit out of Monster Mother??? What a heinous bitch!!

James can not be far behind her!!

 

Looking forward to more:)