Reviews by annie345
Summary: Past Featured Story

A night of Halloween trickery & secrets leads to some unexpected treats for Bella. Will this night of debauchery be a one time occurrence? Or will Bella & Edward risk the burn and attempt a relationship? Contains Mature Language and Situations, along with some violence.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 726775 Read Count: 366143
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2011
Reviewer: annie345 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 58: If At First

Ok, I know that I'm reading this long after it was finished and won't get any real time input, but I have to say this. I have been trying to understand the logic behind this but just can't. Why is he the villain for trying to protect her from his heart problem and she is not for trying to protect him by leaving? Should he have told her? Yes, absolutely. But he had what he thought at the time were good reasons. She chose to believe his brother's rant and left him at such a critical point in his life instead of talking to him. She also thought her reasons were good. She claims he didn't trust her to tell her about his heart. She didn't trust him to tell him about Emmet's words and stay to work that out. Why does she get to be the wronged party here? She messed up, too. Yeah, she was hurt. Wasn't he? She left by leaving a ridiculously casual note, basically dismissing their whole relationship and now gets to be the one who calls all the shots.  Bella agrees to give him another try? What Bella needs to do is accept her huge part in this mess and  stop playing the only injured party. This guy deserves sainthood in my opinion.



Author's Response:

I'm sorry that's the message you took from it.  It wasn't just lying about his heart that put Edward in the position of needing to earn back trust.  It was every lie he told to hide his secret.  It was pushing her to be honest while he knew he was lying.  He even went so far as to lie about what he would be doing for almost an entire summer away from her and the rest of his family.  It was months of deceit that put him in the position of needing to prove himself.  As for Bella, she cannot be faulted for believing Emmett when he never once lied to her in all the years of their friendship.  He knew Edward better than she did in her opinion so he would know what drove Edward to lie for months.  She left out of love and respect for Emmet and the entire Cullen family just as much to make sure Edward was out of harm's way.  And she did accept her part in things - she agreed to go to counseling with Edward and she participated and learned to both be a better listener and speaker.  No one deserves sainthood in this story because no one is perfect.  They are all flawed and all make mistakes - and they all try their hardest to remedy those mistakes and make amends.  The story isn't about one person being less wrong than another - it's about accepting that we all screw up and finding a way to forgive ourselves as much as the loved ones who accidentally hurt us.

Quiet Storm by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1708]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Two weeks. Two years. Who cares?" A lesson in love, crime, and passion. When two young lovers find themselves in the middle of the storm, can love conquer all? AH. OOC. Rated M Mafia fic. 

Humor/Romance/Violence/Drama...you name it, QS has it, or will. Canon couples. Not canon characters. (Mafia fic) MobWard

 

Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight. 

Beta'd by aeglow

Banner by the amazing RoseArcadia


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Shena's Storys to Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Storm Saga by SexiLexi, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618485 Read Count: 2669125
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2011 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: annie345 Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Epilogue

Wickedly good story! I couldn't stop reading. Now I'm hoppin' right over to the sequel!

A Fresh Start by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 588]
Summary:

Bella is a recent divorcee, reeling from the abrupt ending of her marriage. In walks a certain green-eyed stranger. Can he convince her trust and love again? Or will she just ignore his advances? ExB, AU, AH

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 271752 Read Count: 339210
[Report This] Published: 01 May 2011 Updated: 04 Jun 2011
Reviewer: annie345 Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 31: The Hospital at Christmas

I know this story was written a while ago so it's probably too late to see if this chapter was fixed somewhere else, because clearly a lot got lost somewhere. I am confused but I hope that either the stuff about Todd is explained later or it doesn't matter. I am loving this story however.



Author's Response:

Apparently, it didn't transfer over...or something. I've fixed the chapter

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1531318
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: annie345 Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 19: A Tight Fit

That's right, you stop defending yourself. This story is raw, gritty and awesome. I think anyone would be okay with constructive criticism but mean or hateful comments belong to bullies, so pay them no mind. You are an excellent writer and have given multiple explicit warnings to readers about the subject matter so it's on them, the haters, to stop reading if they don't like it. 'Nuff said, Onto the next chapter!

Black Diamond by Dishie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 622]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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The black diamond slopes of Lake Tahoe are just what Bella needs to start living her life again after a painful breakup left a hole in her heart that work couldn't fill. Will a handsome and charming skier also prove that her heart is ready for love too?    

 Banner by Amandac3 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, TBR
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 267782 Read Count: 165795
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 07 Oct 2012
Reviewer: annie345 Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

perfect ending to a great story



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, annie345. I'm glad to see people are still reading this story. xoxox

Walk by mustlovertp Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 259]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a betrayal leaves Edward reeling, he decides to change the course of his life. Starting over can be a daunting task. Will he let a certain brown eyed beauty help him find what he's looking for?

Rated NC-17 for adult situations and language           *Banner by Falling Stars*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 110402 Read Count: 49585
[Report This] Published: 15 Jun 2012 Updated: 28 Mar 2013
Reviewer: annie345 Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I love this story as much as the first time I read it. Thank you!