Reviews by NatalieLynn
Summary:


Everyone is human. Bella lived in Phoenix with her mom and Phil, she was a rebel - in trouble with the police, never going to class, getting wasted and dong drugs. After one final 'incident' Bellas' mom decided to send her to stay with her father in the tiny town of Forks. Bellas' boyfriend (Jasper) and his twin sister, who is also Bellas' best friend (Rose) decide to move with her and take over Forks. Bellas' aim is to cause as much trouble in the little town as she can. But when she runs into The Cullens, things become complicated. Will Bella and Jaspers' relationship survive when Bella comes face to face with gorgeous bad-boy Edward? And will he and his family help her in her quest for excitement in Forks, or change her life forever?


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 51788 Read Count: 2443
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2010 Updated: 17 Aug 2010
Reviewer: NatalieLynn Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Confessions - BPOV

Aha!  So this is where you moved this story!  You haven't added on to it yet though. :(  I hope you will someday soon...

Summary:

Taking Bella swim wear shopping was suppose to be easy. But what happens when Charlotte gets more than she bargained for? One Shot for now

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2849 Read Count: 1661
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2010 Updated: 23 Jun 2010
Reviewer: NatalieLynn Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Excellent!  Who knew that bikini shopping could be so fun? :)

Tropical Escape by busymommy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

Submitted to Dirty Cheeky Monkeys for the Squeeze My Lemon feature. What do you do when your tropical vacation is being rained out? Find a better way to occupy your time, of course! non-canon J/B, AH


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3139 Read Count: 398
[Report This] Published: 30 May 2012 Updated: 30 May 2012
Reviewer: NatalieLynn Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Tropical Escape

Wonderful story!  Great way to spend any rainy day!

Educating Jasper by emmzz75 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 121]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is a highly successful sex surrogate. She is professional and used to dealing with men and women with complex sexual problems...but nothing has prepared her for what happens when shy and broken Jasper Whitlock walks into her life. AH OOC Non-Cannon pairings - Jasper/Bella


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Love and Faith
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19377 Read Count: 24177
[Report This] Published: 07 May 2013 Updated: 15 Mar 2014
Reviewer: NatalieLynn Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 May 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wonderful story so far! It will be very interestimg to see how things progress between them with the background you have given Jasper.

Reviewer: NatalieLynn Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 23 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Very interesting twist!  Alice needs to learn how to hold her tongue and her liquor though.  As unorthodox as it was, Bella sensing his discomfort and coming to his rescue like that I hope showed him that she sincerely cares about him. I got the impression that her comment abut him having her as long as he wanted her, sparked a hope in him that her caring went beyond that of her job.  Hopefully that spark wasn't totally extinguished by her later comment about pretending the night never happened.

Reviewer: NatalieLynn Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I loved her little confession to put him at ease.  I'm going to bet that if he thinks back on their session later that evening and gets a mental picture of her and her BOB that he ends up doing a little extra credit homework. ;)  He probably won't full on whack off, but he'll at least think about doing so and maybe try touching himself a little bit.  Will you be including his POV at all in this story?  If not, would you consider doing an outtake or two?



Author's Response:

Maybe a little later I'll do a Jasper POV outtake. The story will be in Bella's POV throughout as I want J's feeling and thoughts to unfold during the sessions, so doing his POV at the moment would give too much away, if that makes sense!!! So until then, you'll have to continue to use your imagination :) But if you do have any ideas of what you'd like to see happen, then email me and I'll do my best to include them (em.de3010@gmail.com)

Reviewer: NatalieLynn Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 24 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Wonderful chapter!That was quite the emotional session they had.  Her confoting him so tenderly as he cried was a lovely moment.  I also loved how yu made their first kiss so natural, not clinical



Author's Response:

Thank you :) I am really pleased with how this chapter came out in the end, as I was stuck on it for quite a while and it ended up taking a different direction to what I'd planned (for the better I think) xxx

Reviewer: NatalieLynn Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I hope she's careful  That was a pretty loaded statement he made.  The second part is especially so and could easily be misconstrued, particularly with the connection Bella is already feeling.

Reviewer: NatalieLynn Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

It's horrible that a young man can be made to feel that just having another person's fingers touch his is sexual and evel and wrong.  Granted, those feelings are likely exacerbated by the obvious sexual chemistry these two seem to latently share, but even so...It should be an innocent gesture signifying anything from acknowledgement or a greeting (such as a hand shake) to a comforting touch of solace, the innocent friendships of hildhood where one holds hqandsw as part of a gam e or4 as you run together,  Yes, it can be the opening step to exual intimacy, but that is in a small fraction of the number of times we touch another's hand during the course of our lives.



Author's Response:

Thank you for such a lovely review x

Reviewer: NatalieLynn Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'm not sure why you're nervous about this.  I think you did a lovely job writing about a verty sensitive and touching moment that they shared.  It's good that they are developing emotional intimacy along their road to physical intimacy.

Reviewer: NatalieLynn Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Ooh!  As is she wasn't all too tempted by the man already, now she sees him in a social situation.  Has he seen her?  Did he hear them?  If so, will he be hurt by her denial?  What about Alice's little slip?  Is she more interested in him than she should be too?  This has the makings for a very interesting evening...

Reviewer: NatalieLynn Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Ooh!  What a nasty cliffy! I hope it's because he's developing feelings for her beyond what one should feel for a therapist and not that Alice steered him away fom her because she's wanting to help him in that regard as well or because Alice's drunken comment at the bar bothered him.

Tired of Being Sorry by speklez Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 18]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by Ellie Wolf

Even death couldn't free her from the iron grip that was held over her life. Even vampirism wasn't enough to allow her freedom to live. After a century of being placed in glass on a shelf, she breaks free and runs. She put no thoughts to her actions and must now face the consequences.     


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6601 Read Count: 2857
[Report This] Published: 23 Oct 2013 Updated: 23 Oct 2013
Reviewer: NatalieLynn Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 29 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story!  I had not read this one before.

Summary:

Banner by: Caiteexx

Bailing Peter out of jail was as routine as eating for Jasper. However, this time, he wasn't the one to do it and the choice to ask Bella to go instead would rock the coven to its core as everything she thought she knew was questioned by someone with his own developing agenda. AU/OOC/Bella/Peter.  All normal disclamers apply


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future , Wanna read
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13505 Read Count: 12745
[Report This] Published: 29 Jul 2014 Updated: 02 Feb 2015
Reviewer: NatalieLynn Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 21 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

That sure shocked her!  It shouldn't have after the argument she heard between Rose & Edward.  Of course Rose wouls be on the side of Bella living it up a little and that Peter would at least let her have some fun and actually live her life not watch it run through her fingers.

Reviewer: NatalieLynn Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wonderful story so far!  I love your Peter!  I look forward to reading more soon.

Reviewer: NatalieLynn Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Great chapter!