Reviews by TheLadyKT
IMMERSION by katmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 70]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

...Immersion... 

 

Suppose that vampires "imprint" based on smell and the connection is immediate and irresistible. What will happen when vampire Bella Swan meets her mate at Forks High? 

 

 

Immersion: involvement in something that occupies all the time and energy available. AU...Canon Couples

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 46809 Read Count: 6473
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Feb 2010
Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

LOL for Rose threatening Em.  I'd call that a limon.....  :-)

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Loving the twists and turns you are doing to the canon story.  He is def taking things well.

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Date: 06 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

ROFL for her sneezing on the kid and putting off Neuton.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow  This is a different twist to the typical twilight story. Can't wait to see where you take it.

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Date: 07 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Side Shot...Alice

LOVED IT.  Ty for writing and sharing

ty

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Alice have been friends with benefits for ten years. When they meet Edward and Jasper, they find their missing peices. How will their families deal with their relationships? NC-17 for Lots of lemons: E/B, A/J, B/J, A/E, A/B, E/J, E/B/A/J

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga, to read
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102919 Read Count: 303477
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 18 Apr 2010
Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

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Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella has grown from an orphaned sixteen year old raised by her older brother Emmett and his friends affectionately known as ‘her boys’, to an up and coming first year medical intern. When a day in the ER turns dangerous can her boys, now members of the best SWAT team in Chicago save her? Eventual Canon pairings. Rated 'NC-17' for strong language, lemons.

 

 

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Newest fanmade banner that I thought was cool and had to add by Twilighted's ebonyy:

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Fics to Read, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Twilight - Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 413119 Read Count: 752810
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Feb 2010
Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 51: Fly Swatting Shirts and Citrus Flavored Showers

ROFL for the skanks trying to get their men's attention.   yummy middle.     ROFL for PEN15.  Took me a minute or two to catch it.   

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Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Surfacing From the Deep

ye for Char.    Poor E and C.   World on the shoulders thing.   Chief is a goober.  Was still wondering if he's not involved with the whole Sellers/Trager/Mob situation.  

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Date: 22 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores

Great start. How have I not read this yet? Poor crushing b. Too cute.

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Date: 22 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Femme Docs and Self -conscious Sluts

Ah an Eddie pov. Wonder if em notices like Jazz?

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Date: 22 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 3: The Day From Hell

Hee hee for andy catching them.

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Date: 22 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Avoidance and Disappointment

Oh my. Not good.....so not good. Poor Ethan and poor b

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Date: 22 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice

B is gonna be a great doc. Peds in her future. Mama d is cool.

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Date: 22 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Puppet Master J

awww jazz is in luv.   Glad Alice helped her find her girly self again.   Thank goodness for Carlisle and Esme.  His mom is so pathetic.

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Date: 22 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Femmes Night Out

great night out.  Guessing Trevor will turn out to be an Attending doc somewhere?  aww for the girls leaning on each other for strength.   Glad e told her but he's still an idiot

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Date: 22 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Sleeping With An Angel

E does have a lot to make up for but its a start.  I never liked Rob when I lived in the state either.

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Date: 22 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 9: McDreamy, McSteamy, and McCreamy

Hope that they get B away from Trevor before she gets too hurt.   Ugh she has crappy male attractions huh?

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Date: 22 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing

Cant really blame B for being pissed and how and when he did it.  At least he finally got it out.    Dont trust Trevor at all.   Guess we'll see.

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Date: 22 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Roommates and Baby Steps

Sweet chapter.  Glad E got some good advice from Andy.  Ugh  Trevor gives me the creeps.  Awww for B looking out for Ms D

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Date: 22 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Be Careful What You Wish For

Esme and Carlisle are great.   Very nice showing up there that nice.   Yey for new date plans.

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Date: 23 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Perfection

Wonderfully thought out date.  So sweet.  They are too cute together.

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Date: 23 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 14: The Inner Sanctum

Gravitational Magnet....haha.    Oh Trevor.... you've pissed off the wrong girl.   Uh oh for the mobish connections.   

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Date: 23 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Bonding and Plotting

oooh Trevor is the new "boss" huh.  Interesting.   Ugh for Tony being a rat for the bad guys.    Bella did come up with a good plan though

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Date: 23 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 16: New Heat and Old Flames

hmmmm Hope Jake has really grown up and isnt a plant or something.   Gotta have a little fluff.  

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Date: 23 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 17: The Unexpected

Love the ring. Lauren is so pathetic.

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Date: 23 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Missing and Misunderstandings

oh my  Of course Skankya had to kiss him.   sigh.  his mother huh?   interesting .

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Date: 23 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Runaway Rollercoaster

oh Tony..... you really screwed up huh?  Glad B stopped to listen to Em.

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Date: 23 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Decoys and Deprecation

good plans.   hope Mel is ok.    Cool car game.  Glad they talked things out.

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Date: 23 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Getting Reacquainted

Glad Tanya is turning out to be a nice girl.  glad for the little lemony time

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Date: 23 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Truth Revealed

hmmm still think its bogus that she didnt try to come to Chicago or anything, but to each his own.   lol for lemonyish goodness

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Date: 23 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Empowering and Contentment

Wonderful day.   She is doing such nice stuff for Tanya.   She is such a sweet girl.

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Date: 23 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 24: For The First Time

Wonderful chapter.  He made it special indeed.   First time gets you the dancing lemon.

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Date: 24 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Rearrangements and Rock Stars

YEY for Rose and Em.     Go Femme's. Kick some boy butt!!!

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Date: 24 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Moving Ahead and Protective Mama Bears

Oh Tanya..... silly girl  your would have been found out sooner or later. Ah well

Yey for Em and Rose.

Go Mama Esme.   Glad someone went off on Elizabeth.   Happy Bear Dance

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Date: 24 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Underneath It All

As the singing story comes out. Poor B.   Glad Turkey day went well for them.  Ha ha that I'm reading this chapter on black friday and getting ready to eat some more leftovers.

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Date: 24 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 28: The Angel's Kiss

Damn Bella is one brave girl.  Wow

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Date: 24 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Focus Fluctuations

Wow   that night nurse was a real biatch.    Glad E seems to be doing ok.  cute angel story.

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Date: 24 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 30: For The Love of Esme

Esme is such a wonderful woman

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Date: 24 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Warmth In the Darkness

ah  that explains the bitchy nurse.

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Date: 24 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Reaching Into the Darkness

Poor B   This is going to take a long time to get over.

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Date: 24 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Disturbed

Glad B has such a great support team.   Dr K seems cool.

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Date: 24 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Equivalency

Wow  Vandice is a dick.   Glad Dr C and Dr K were in her corner.   SHe is so lucky to have family and friends supporting her.

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Date: 24 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Crankward

Ugh  Another Dr Dickhead for her to deal with.   yey  Angela appears.  Dr cope was funny.   hmmm who crawled into E's bed I wonder (figuratively that is).

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Date: 24 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Sympathetic Solitude

Gotta love big bro Em.  Although B kinda jumped to an extreme conclusion.  likeing Carmen

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Date: 24 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Home

Glad E is doing so much better.    hmmm now I wonder why Skanren left?

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Date: 25 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Concerning Charlotte

Aww poor Charlotte.  At least Peters behaved at the end.   

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Date: 25 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Declarations

Poor little charlotte.   She is a great doc.

 

Lovely ornament and presents.    Aww for proposal

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Date: 25 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 40: The Name Game

Sweet chapter.

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Date: 25 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 41: A Happy New Year

Bella is a great doctor.  Good job with Charlotte.  Heidi is being a witch.

Yummy New Years

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Date: 25 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Outside The Bubble

Good chapter.  Glad to see those conversations that have only been alluded to in the past.     Ugh ridiculous lawsuits.....that and unions are the bain of our existence. 

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Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Enjoying the Dreams and Facing the Nightmares

excellent plans.  glad char getting better.  poor ethan

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Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 45: A Raft In The Flood

B is growing up aint she.  Taking it so well.   I like E's ideas for new job too.

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Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 46: The World Spins Madly On

rough chapter but glad you wrote it.

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Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 47: A Missing Piece of the Bella & Emmett Puzzle

great chapter.  Makenna seems great.   

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Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Surprise, SURPRISE

wonderful insight into Em and B's lives.

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Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Justice Served and Champagne Consumed

go bad ass bella. glad they got him.  hope they can keep him and not make a deal to get someone else.

 

Yummy end

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Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 50: The Human Incubators

hmmm hope Laurant got ran over by a bus at some point.

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Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 52: Rock On

Great songs in this chapter.   Loved it.

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Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 53: Pressure

glad E is getting some good training.  Rose is going to pop soon I think.  Hmm hope Dimitri behaves himself.  Uh oh  what is up there at the end.  not good.

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Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 54: Gearing Up and Getting Off

Damn lawyers and thier tricks.   ah well.  Cant wait cause I have a feeling Bella is going to hold her own.   ROFl for Eddie going of on Em regarding phone sex.

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Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 55: On The Hot Seat

lawyers can be the dregs of society cant they.   Go Bella!!!

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Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 56: The Eye of the Storm

Hmmm now how did the smarmy lawyer know about the name change?  A rat in their house???  or am I reading to much into it.

Glad Rose and emma are doing ok.  

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Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 57: Connecting the 'Future' Dots

great pre wedding stuff.  Yey for Tanya having a healthy baby and hopefully a healthy relationship.  ROFL for drunk dialing/texting.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 58: I'll Always Be Right There

Wonderful wedding. Gotta love Carlisle and Esme.  the baby's dress is adorable.

ROFL for Elizabeth's reaction.

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Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 59: Everything

Sweet reception.  Glad Edward gave esme the real mom treatment. 

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Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 60: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later

wonderful end and follow up to the wonderful families.   Only thing missing was a Tanya update.

Thank you for writing and sharing.

ty

Black Swan by Raven Jadewolfe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 127]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Black, having divorced her husband Jacob after he finds his imprint, reconnects with the man who stole her heart many years ago, but she soon learns that she isn't the only one keeping a secret. There will be lemons, language, and violence. If you aren't 18, go read something else.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Themslovebug90's read stories
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 109285 Read Count: 20701
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Feb 2010
Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Hawt Dayum.  Another female for leah to bond with.  Wonder who Claire will imprint with?  hmmm

Go Bad Ass Bella!!!!!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love how men love to turn shit around when they cheat.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

They'd known all along because they had no choice?!?!   I call BS. Its a lame "man code" excuse.

So Jake is a wolf but the Cullen's aren't vamps???

 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

hmmm so they are vampires.   Interesting twists to the orignal vamp story.   Bet Jake is going to have a cow when he comes to pick up the kids.

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Date: 22 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wonder if Jake will be a dick about custody when he finds out about Edward?

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Date: 22 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Ugh poor bella.   Jake would be hard pressed to get custody because she got mugged.   Although he'd figure out the vampire thing too I assume.   Gotta love Carlisle.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

hmm So Jake has extra "conditions" on the divorce.  How pathetic since its all his fault.   Wow Tia is a real biatch.  

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Date: 22 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wow  Tia is sure full of herself.  What a little biatch.  

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Date: 22 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

OMG  Can't believe Jake had the nerve to hit her.   He deserves to lose his job.  Glad Seth and Leah have good heads on their shoulders despite having an arse for a dad.  Hope Tia behaves

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Guess Tia didn't get the message.  Sigh.  Love Leah giving it back to her in spades.  Seth is one smart kiddo.  

Sucks that Jake made her feel that way.  And that she's on welfare while he has the job with benefits and all.

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Date: 22 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

what a nice V day.  Wonder whats up with Leah?   Jake putting ideas in her head?   She should get alimony.  I'm not one for automatic alimony, but in this instance, when she took care of the house, kids, and him while he got to advance his career and then he cheats on her......yeah she deserves alimony.  

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Date: 22 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Wonder how Snakey is gonna take it when he finds out E spent the night?   Ugh Hate snotty gossiping women.  Poor B.   Take the help girl.  Everyone needs help once in awhile.    

hmmm  dunno if that was the right time to ask her that, E.

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Date: 22 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Poor B.  So much happening so fast.

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Date: 22 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Hope Randall is good to Leah.  Of course, first loves rarely last (in my opinion).  

Leah needs to get over that getting back together thing.  Sad really.   Wonder what she has to say about the chick her dad's been seeing while mom and dad were still actually married.  Considering Jake left her with a clunker of a vehicle, he has no right to say squat about her car.


Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

wow  Jake's got a lot of nerve.  Glad Leah told him off.  Oh so Jake is the alpha.  That kinda explains why the guys didnt tell her, but not the girls.

OOOOh I LOVE Mr Danford!!!   Glad Em and Jazz came over.   

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Date: 22 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Nice seeing Edwards POV and how he feels about everything.  Jake needs to be reined in.

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Date: 22 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

oooh yummy beginning

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Go Mischa.  What is that moron up to now?

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Date: 22 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Wow  Jake is really delusional.   Glad Sam stepped up and took some charge.  Elizabeth has alot of nerve too and is probaby fueling alot of these issues.

Glad Sam is being reasonable.  I think Jake is going to get himself killed before this is over.  Moron of a man Jake is.  

Leah is old enough to know the truth and to stop living in dream land.

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Date: 22 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Glad the family helped the kids have a good birthday.  At least Tia is following Flower's advice to say nothing if you can't say something nice.

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Date: 22 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Why do I get the feeling B's got an inoperable brain tumor?  

Yeah I think the kids are gonna change soon.

Ack   Hate that I was right

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Poor B.  Good things always seem to happen to good people and kids.   Hope Sam doesnt' give them too much crap about her change.   We already know Snakey will.

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Date: 22 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Glad The kids came back.  Don't think B is going to last too much longer.

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Date: 22 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Kinda had a feeling what you were going to do with the imprints.  Too cute.

Poor B  Hope she's ok and E doesn't go crazy.

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Date: 23 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Glad they are all coming together as a big blended family.   Ugh Jake is just trying to get himself and those real werewolves killed.  

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Date: 23 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

woo hoo for the claiming.  Go E.     Glad the kids are being so cool

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Date: 23 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Great first hunt and all.   Um wait, doesn't Charlie already know about vamps? or am I getting my stories confused?

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Date: 23 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

what a wonderfully fun chapter I never would have thought of a water slide like that on the side of the mountain

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Date: 24 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I see Irina is going to be a real piece of work.  Probably worse than Tia.

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Date: 24 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

ugh letting them go is gonna be a mistake.  What do you want to bet they run right to the volturi...... or help jake.

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Date: 24 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

B is an idiot to think they'd let her leave alone.   

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Date: 24 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

utter silliness.  I love it

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Date: 24 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

ugh.   Who the hell screwed up Liz in the head?   Sucks that Jake has all this time on his hands?  Isn't he supposed to be working sometimes?

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Date: 24 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

well at least Jake is gone.  Surprise Jake didn't try to use Charlie to get to B.   

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Date: 24 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Cute ending.  TY for writing and sharing

ty