Reviews by moremoo
Strawberry Wine by Isis Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 255]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Seventeen year old Alli Wilson falls hard and fast for the cowboy next door. She lies about her age, and has the most magical summer of her life. Things get down right awkward once school starts and she stumbles in to her AP English class to find the cowboy next door is her new teacher.

First assignment? An Essay: How I spent my summer vacation.

Lemons.

 

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Categories: Original Fiction, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Romantic Comedy
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54159 Read Count: 21171
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2011 Updated: 09 Mar 2012
Reviewer: moremoo Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Oh poor Jason, I just want to give a big hug. At least he got to see Allie. I hope the Margot gets to help Jason out by backing up their story. I hope the next one comes soon. 



Author's Response:

I know - poor poor Jason.

Next chap will be up soon!

Reviewer: moremoo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

I'm so sad. I can't believe it's done. I'm not ready for it do be done yet. But all good things must come to an end. Good luck with the other version keep us posted on any devolpments. And thank you for a beatuiful story, it was wonderful. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and giving me such wonderful comment support. I'll be sure to let everyone know if/when the longer version is available to read!

Reviewer: moremoo Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Oh my goodness.  I can't beleive you did that. I can't hate you because you'll make it all better, but I still can't believe you did that.  I hope we don't need to wait long for the next one. 



Author's Response:

It was not an easy decision to make - believe me.

The next chapter will be posted soon. Probably tomorrow. Or should I apply the whoring rules again?

Reviewer: moremoo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Awe Jason is going to be all by him self. But they get to be together sinner then later. And Jason can bring her a bottle of strawberry wine with him on her birthday. I can't wait for the next chapter. 



Author's Response:

He does in fact bring her wine!

Reviewer: moremoo Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I love Margot she is an awesome sister. And I can not wait to meet the juvy boy and see how much of a bad boy he is. 



Author's Response:

Yeah, Margot's a sweetheart.

Juvy boy's bark is worse than his bite!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: moremoo Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

What if you get ten reviews from one person. Does that count? Cause just say the word and I review nine more times. ;)



Author's Response:

I am a review whore - I'll take what I can get!

xo

Reviewer: moremoo Signed
Date: 29 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Please tell me somebody gets to put Yvette in her place. That would be good



Author's Response:

Yvette is barely worth Alli's time. That said, karma usually finds its own way around...

Reviewer: moremoo Signed
Date: 29 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I'm sure we'll all be happy what even way you end the story. But I have to ask is it just about over, because see any way to end it soon. But then again I'm just a reader not a writer.  Hope you guys get better soon. I had a house full of sick kids last week so I feel you pain. Any ways can't wait for the next one



Author's Response:

Thanks! My husband is the worst sick person EVER. Very needy.

This version of the story is almost over :(

There are 30 chapters total, including the epilogue. There is another version of this story. It has an alternate ending and shows you Jason and Alli 6 years in the future. It's about 30,000 words longer than this one. I'm debating whether to post it or not.

Reviewer: moremoo Signed
Date: 29 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I say post the longer one, because I know I can't get enough of Allie and Jason. But that is just my two cents. 

Reviewer: moremoo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I knew Margot would come to the rescue. And Jason is to perious for words. 



Author's Response:

I like Margot's spunk. She's a good sister.

Second Spins by Isis Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 45]
Summary:

 

Lara's common sense and her body are of two different opinions when it comes to Julien Diotallevi.

She remembers all too well the passionate summer they spent together on the French Riviera. It left her heart-sick, pregnant and alone.

She never expected to see him again, but what happens on the riviera doesn't always stay on the riviera. Now he stands before her, still as breath-taking as ever, only this time he comes bearing startling news, and a legacy of danger.

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Categories: Original Fiction, Mystery, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dangerous Liasons
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44801 Read Count: 5671
[Report This] Published: 11 Jul 2011 Updated: 08 Oct 2014
Reviewer: moremoo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I finally had time to sit down and read this story and I have to say that I am really loving it,  especially Pops. Can't wait for the next chapter. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Banner by the talented: SoapyMayhem FanFiction

Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for.  She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given.  Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him.  Can an uneducated Bella teach him something?  What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325411 Read Count: 263046
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: moremoo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: ABC Easy as 123

I'm really not liking Alice right now. Please tell me she had a reason for saying those things



Author's Response:

Teaser for chapter 11.

Thank you for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View.  Well in this chapter you were given the chance to know Edward a little better, in the next chapter you will get to know a tad bit more about the kids and the background story on them, but you will also learn more about Bella.  Alice and Jasper are still together, but Jasper does have issues with Alice and her behavior and he will continue to call her to the carpet on it.  Rose wants the world to revolve around her, and when she rages there will be all kinds of fun things going on.  More to come on their bad behaviors, lots more...  Don’t everyone lynch Carlisle, he is just worried for the welfare of the children, and he will be a saving grace in Bella’s life because he is now the children’s doctor.  Edward and Bella are both going to be learning form the other.  Edward doesn’t realize what Bella is teaching him yet, but he will figure it out.  Thanks again for having some faith in us, I know we can’t redeem him in everyone eyes and there are a few of you who are still very upset about his time at the club.  If you are still upset, I hope by the end of the story, you’re not dwelling on that, because the basis of the story is so much more than that.

Thanks so much.  Kasi (&Nikky)
PS...As for alice, she is just alice, and there is much more of her evil ways coming.  Neither Alice or Rose are going to be wonderful bright and happy characters in this book.

 

 

 

 

Chapter 11 teaser… Subject to changes during beta process.

“I am Seth Charles Swan.”

“Do you know your date of birth?”

He nods his head. “December, 31st, 2003.” So that makes Seth seven years and almost nine months.

Carlisle looks to Bella. “Was he born in a hospital, or at home?”

She looks at Seth. “Hospital, mom had a few weeks left before they were supposed to be born. The police had come to tell her dad had died, and her water broke when she was shouting at them. Then the EMT people came, one of them was a lady and they took mom away to the hospital.”

Carlisle looks at Bella and nods. “Do you know how early?” Bella bites her lip and shakes her head. “After he came home, has he seen a doctor?”

Bella nods her head.  “I had to take them to see Aro’s doctor and he gave them all the immunization shots they needed.  Zafrina took them for me if I was at work at the hotel.  Zafrina is Aro’s mom and she promised that they would be okay and said that they needed those shots. She told me that they were very important for them to have so they stayed healthy.”

Carlisle looks at her. “Can you tell me who Aro is, or the doctor’s name?”

Bella frowns at him and then looks at me. It is clear she is confused as to why he doesn’t know who Aro is. “Zafrina lives next door to me, she very kind and looks after Seth and Leah when I am at work because you’re not supposed to leave them by themselves, that is very bad.  Aro is her son; he helped me get my jobs. They help me, but I know that I should have been there, but… I… have I done something bad?” She looks like she is getting upset, and at no point has she told him that I know Aro. I grip her hand and rub the top of it and give her a smile to thank her for keeping my secret.  I turn to look at Carlisle and tell him who she is speaking about.

“I know Aro and the doctor she is talking about. His name is Jason Jenks, I am sure you are familiar with him. I will give him a call to fax all the paperwork he has on them.” Carlisle looks at me nods his head, and gives me a clear look to say that he wants to know more about this. I stand up heading to the door.

“Okay, Leah can you tell me your full name?”  She smiles and nods her head.

“Leah Sue Swan,” she smiles at him.

“Do you know your date of birth?”

“Yes, it is January 1st, 2004.”

“Ah, the twins have different birthdates, so that tells me that you Seth were born very late at night, and you Leah were born very early in the morning.  Am I correct?”

They nod their heads all together, and I smile.  

Reviewer: moremoo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Nicknames

I would love to see the whole bra sceen played out. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View.  Edward’s view is improving, and he is learning quickly that he is not able to function to his fullest at Aro’s club.  Aro’s club and Aro and some of his girls will remain a vital part of this story.  Having Edward putting on one of Bella’s newly gifted bras was such a fun thing to write about, we hope you all found it just as amusing as we did.  This story has a long way to go.  We have been asked when things will pick up between Bella and Edward.  Well we promise they will be together, but Edward is just learning to change and before he could give himself to her fully, he has to let go of a few things from the past.  There are a few more bricks that need to come down off that wall he has built.  As for Bella, her pure innocence alone is a good reason for things between them to simmer slowly into a boil.  I will tell you this, there first kiss is written already...and Lordy I needed some ice water after that one.  WOOOWHOO!  I know the weekly updates, seem like forever, but if we get things wrapped up and have the story done on our side then we will post faster.  Right now Nikky is working on 25 and I am working on 24 and we know that there will be at least 30-35 chapters.  Thanks again for the story love.  This story is dedicated to those of you who care enough to review!  With our love, and until next week.   Kasi and (Nikky)

Chapter 13 teaser...subject to changes during beta process.

I hear the beep of a horn, and know that the car is here. I grab my overcoat, and I head out for my painful evening.

“Good evening, everyone,” I say as I close the limo door.

“Hello Edward, I see you still haven’t tied your bowtie, Siobhan can tie it for you if you’d like; she’s really good at them.”

I turn to face Alice, trying not to scream at her. “No Alice, I can manage myself, thank you very much. I will tie it right before we arrive at the Autumn Ball.” I feel eyes on me, and my head turn’s to see who else is in the limo. There sits Siobhan, in a…dress? Fuck, it leaves nothing to the imagination, the dress… if that is what you call it. It’s more like a sheer piece in the front, glued to her skin. There doesn’t appear to be any cloth on the sides of her entire body at all. She cannot be possibly wearing anything under the dress. I can see from her armpit to the sole of her foot in the clear stiletto shoes she is wearing, there is nothing but skin. She looks like she should be working for Aro, what a trashy high class whore!  I am sure she thinks it’s attractive, and I am sure everyone will know she is going commando. I mean I like women to go commando, but I also like to be the only one that knows. If I wanted my date to not wear panties, I wouldn’t want every other person in the general vicinity to know too. I don’t want to share! Thank God she isn’t my date! There is another reason on the list of why I won’t date her, or any other women.

“Wow, Edward, you look really good,” Siobhan smirks at me before crossing her legs. She lets her dress fall to the side, I am sure if I was looking I would have seen her pussy. The way she was right now I, or anyone for that matter, could finger fuck her here and now for all to see. I turn my head in disgust at her behavior.

“Edward, are you going to tell us how we all look?” I look back at Alice, with a broad smile on my face. “Sorry, forgive my rudeness. Alice, Rose, Esme, you all look very beautiful.” I give them my best smile that almost says, see I can do nice.

“Siobhan, your dress is very…nice?” I make my statement sound like a question because I real don’t know what she has on. Siobhan laughs and goes to touch my arm, and I shrug away from her.  I see she’s about to speak, so I jumped in first. “And of course Charlotte, you look beautiful as always. Peter is an extremely lucky guy, and if he does not mind me stealing you for a few minutes tonight, I would like to ask you something?”

Summary: Past Featured Story

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President Edward Cullen decides to pass a bill that will change life as Bella Swan knows it. A misplaced Jimmy Choo and a stupid publicity stunt will change the lives of Edward and Bella. Are either of them ready?

Banner by the lovely vbfb1


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 130734 Read Count: 215884
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2012 Updated: 12 Aug 2012
Reviewer: moremoo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 When Vultures Attack

Wish your little Cayden the best of luck, he'll be in our prayers. Also great chapter I can't wait for the next one. And to hear Prez Cullen's reaction to what happened to Seth. Take care and good luck. 

Reviewer: moremoo Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Barbie Bella

I can't wait to hear about Seth jumping on the couches, or maybe even coloring on the desk or maybe even the walls. Can't wait. :)

Reviewer: moremoo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Demands

I can't believe you left it there, such a tease. 

Reviewer: moremoo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 PJs and Ringing Phones

Bella's moving to the white house, right. 

Reviewer: moremoo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 Daddy and State Dinners

Mystery pov is Jane right. That's my guess can't wait for the next chapter. 

Reviewer: moremoo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45 Life and Death

So James and Royes are the same person. Right?

 

Love in a Trio by tawelephant Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

This was my contribution to 01/11/12 Squeeze My Lemon Wednesdays, by Dirty Cheeky Monkeys. Bella thought she was happy until two men enter her life and change everything. Poly/Slash E/Em/Bstories/8475/images/Squeeze_My_Lemon_One_Shot_Love_in_a_Trio-_Pic.JPG


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward/Emmett
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Pure Romance
Series: Emmett Stories
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5784 Read Count: 6344
[Report This] Published: 09 Mar 2012 Updated: 31 May 2012
Reviewer: moremoo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed it. Sweet and steamy, the best combination. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for the great review. I'm so glad you liked it. 

The Western by kts Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 92]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward's a hit-man with one rule; he doesn't do women.  When he learns his next target is Bella, he makes a decision that changes his life - and hers.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, To Read (Geddy), G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 84930 Read Count: 22871
[Report This] Published: 27 Mar 2012 Updated: 03 Jun 2012
Reviewer: moremoo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ok I'm interested. Looking forward to the next one

Reviewer: moremoo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh crap the copers are bad guys aren't they. Can't wait for next one. I'm totally hooked now

Summary:

 

Emmett McCarty, owner of a foot with a stubbed toe, is distracted by a beautiful brunette. She teases him for wearing flip-flops and helps him to a nearby coffee shop. He can't get enough of her, nor she him. Their attraction is undeniable.

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Emmett Stories
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1111 Read Count: 728
[Report This] Published: 02 Apr 2012 Updated: 02 Apr 2012
Reviewer: moremoo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 1: A Tale of Two Feet

Totally cute. I must admitt I was totally confused for about 2 minutes with the whole Mrs part. But super cute. 



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you, moremoo!

Sorry for the confusion, but I did mean for it to be a bit of a surprise. Glad you liked it and thought it was cute.

Thank you so much for reading! 

Take care.

 

Summary:

Two Girls, One Heart

A story about a girl... who loves a girl... who loves a boy. 

**AU, AH, OOC, FS 

***Bella, Edward, Angela

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Edward/Alice, Edward/Angela
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37508 Read Count: 7394
[Report This] Published: 13 May 2012 Updated: 29 Mar 2013
Reviewer: moremoo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 May 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Heartache

Defenatly intregged. Look forward to reading the next one. Just thought you diserved a review for this one. 

Reviewer: moremoo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 May 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Selfless

Quick question. Does Bella that Angela is gay? Just wondering. Can't wait for the next one

Summary: Past Featured Story

(E & B Version) A free-spirited archaeologist and a shy, absent-minded genius find a 500 year old vampire who thinks she's a goddess. They trying to sneak back to the US, teach her about the modern world, and trying very, very hard not to fall in love with the Dark Goddess. OOC/AU

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 149771 Read Count: 33296
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 25 Nov 2012
Reviewer: moremoo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Super excited to be the first one to review this version on TWCS. You are be far one of my favorite authors. Anyways loving this story and can't wait for the next chapter

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Emmett, Jasper and Edward have been in the Army for the last 9 years together. Bella is Em's little sister. One package to Em changes everything. AH. HEA

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44063 Read Count: 93614
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 13 Jun 2013
Reviewer: moremoo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

So super excited to get three chapters what a treat. Loving this story. Can't wait for the next chapter and maybe another day like today. 

Wild Child by FluffyLiz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 756]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Just months away from inheriting a fortune and the family business, 17 year old orphan, Bella,  is out of control – a wild child with a platinum card and a killer bod.  Can Edward, as her legal guardian and CEO of Swan Publishing, rein her in and prevent her from ruining everything he’s worked for?  AH.  Rated M for a reason.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, G8or Favor8s Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 212285 Read Count: 153179
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Oct 2012
Reviewer: moremoo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Loving your story. How far into it are we?

Reviewer: moremoo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Thanks for answearing the questions we were all asking. Also thanks again for an amazing chapter.

Offbeat by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 323]
Summary:

He's a cop. She's a student. A missed connection during a traumatic time leaves them both longing, until fate brings them back together again. Romance, humor, slight drama. Canon couples. OOC. AU. This is my version of Copward, and this is a working summary.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92614 Read Count: 42684
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2012 Updated: 19 Oct 2012
Reviewer: moremoo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Cop and Copper

I really liked it. And was so excited to see another story of yours. I vote no drabble. Anything else would be great.

Raising Ashlynn by jess2002 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 187]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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thanks to teamalltwilight and le crepuscule for the awesome banners!

 

Bella meets a man who in one night leaves her body humming for more. What should she do when the next time she sees him, he is dropping off his daughter, begging her to keep her. With an odd sense of obligation, a person who never saw herself as a parent—is now moving across country with a child who thinks Bella is her mother.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30699 Read Count: 31986
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2013 Updated: 22 Jan 2013
Reviewer: moremoo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am totally sticking with you on this one. Can't wait for more.