Penname: ColouredWilde [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: 21 Mar 2012
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Hello! 


Call me Tea or Wilde. 


I'm mainly a O/S writer. I was on FFN and I had two accounts, I haven't decided whether or not to post the stories here since it was such a long time ago that I posted them there. 


If you're looking for a beta let me know I'm always happy to help.


Beta-reader: Yes
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Reviews by ColouredWilde
Summary: Feature

When faced with a betrayal that could tear them apart, Edward and Bella must put their faith in the healing power of love. WARNING: this story deals with rape and its aftermath. Post-Eclipse, AU.

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MT came in at #5 on the top ten stories completed in March 2020 as voted by visitors of www.twifanfictionrecs.com. Thank you!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186548 Read Count: 48387
[Report This] Published: 13 Jan 2011 Updated: 31 Mar 2020
Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

There are times when I'm reading this, especially at the beginning where I'm jarred by the change in tone or maybe flow of the story. It's subtle, but it's there. Also, please correct me if I'm wrong but psychiatrists only prescribe the medication whilst psychologists perform the active counseling with the possibility of prescribing medication depending on their training.

Those are just small things that stood out to me as I've found and read this beginning to now in a few short days, it seems like you've found a steady tone/voice/flow at this point. All my feelings follow.

So good that I couldn't stop reading. This is beautiful. Beautifully written with beautifully full characters, full of depth, full of something so tangible that it aches. I am grateful that this is a story that I can read. Your talent, skill, and joy of writing is plain to see in every word. I love that there's a real relationship here, something with roots. It's not borne of fantasy and mystical frivolities, at least not in its entirety. These characters are people I know, people who I want to be in some ways. I've read a great many fanfiction and while each one holds an enjoyment, very few manage to make me feel just as immersed, drawn in, and captured as if I were reading an original story complete with characters who I need to, and want to, meet. 

I am very much looking forward to whatever is next for these unmistakably beautiful and artfully crafted characters. 



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for your wonderful review. Your honest critique and kind words combined made for one of the best reviews I've ever gotten. 

I started writing this story WAY back in 2010, then stopped writing in 2013 after reaching to ch29. The story was then on hiatus for about 6 years. What I've struggled with most is that I was young (22) when I first started writing it and it was also the first story I'd ever written. The heart of the story and the ideas were there but my writing skills weren't up for it. (Of course, my writing skills got to where they are BECAUSE I started writing it, but such is the way of it...). I'm not at all happy with the way earlier chapters of the story are written. It's a real sore spot for me - so much so that it robbed me of the inspiration to keep going many times. I had to get myself to ignore them and not think of it in order to keep writing. Re-writing them is just not something I can bring myself to do - the heart and inspiration is not the same to me in a re-write. Recently, I did go back and do a bit of clean-up on earlier chapters, but without a complete re-write they are what they are unfortunately. The change in tone/flow you notice is probably due to 1) I was a new writer back then and my writing was a bit more all over the place 2) I've gone back and done some clean-up that may have inadvertently caused this, though I had hoped to avoid it. I hope it's not too bad. While I'm disappointed to hear that it IS noticeablely jarring, I do appreciate you telling me, because it is soo difficult for me to judge it myself, having agonized over those earlier chapters far too much already. If I feel up to agonizing them some more I may take another look :P

You are correct regarding the psychologist vs psychiatrist. I'm not sure how I made that mistake since I do know the difference, but I wrote that chapter over 7 years ago so who knows! I'm going to go in and correct it. Thanks for pointing it out!

Thank you very much for the lovely compliment. That's the best gift. And at least I know my earlier chapters are still readable to get through and hopefully not as cringe-worthy as I sometimes fear!! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

A cocky QB runs into a snarky band geek. What happens when they collide on and off the field?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 182382 Read Count: 104169
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 25 Nov 2012
Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 07 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Absolutely lovely story that allows these characters we know and love to take on new roles, and runaway with them in the best of ways. It's a wild ride full of ups, downs, unexpectedly delightful twists and turns that will keep you on your toes, or the edge of your seat. Wonderfully written, with superb character development, and even if you're not a sports fan this story will have you cheering for the home team. 100% worth your time. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm glad you enjoyed them :)  Sequel is up if you're interested!

Summary:

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One is the mayor, happily married to the perfect woman, adored by the townspeople.  The other is the sheriff, distant, gruff and feared. They both have secrets that can only be shared behind closed doors.  Written for the pick a pic challenge.

 

Banner made by vbfb1

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4664 Read Count: 2336
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2012 Updated: 30 Jul 2012
Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story, that wasn't a pairing I really considered, nor was it who I would expect to be the dominant one.

The character category is wrong though, I found this looking for Jas/Bella.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

The summer of 2005 was the summer that changed Bella Swan's life forever. Sent to Ohio by her mother to attend a school for debutante girls not quite up to par, she meets Edward Masen, an apprentice. But is that really all he is? AH

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94846 Read Count: 109185
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2013 Updated: 10 Feb 2019
Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23 Physical Needs give Second Chances

Well she didn't kick him in the balls, but that's okay who wouldn't want to drive manual with a hot man? 

Anywhooo, you deserve ever6good thing this story is bringing your way. Keep up the good work, when you create from your heart it resonates.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31 Epilogue

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Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 27 May 2018 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 Shock After Shock

!!

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Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 27 May 2018 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 Shock After Shock

!!

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Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28 The 'Mom' Thing and Reunions

Well. The best way to introduce babies to new people is the same way you introduce your pets to new people: let the baby go to the stranger. Humans are animals afterall and babies are just a tiny bag of instincts. 

Looking forward to tomorrow's update (: Let's hope they get some talking done.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29 Figure Stuff Out

This update came on my bday! And Bella isn't being selfish, that's a reasonable request.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 29 May 2018 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20 Confrontation

I'm not a mom but on the kind side it's just pain from a released hormone produced during pregnancy. Relaxin is great during birthing, but reeks havoc on ladies leading up to that point. 

Is he working for the same group as in the previous version? If not, then the answer is still a no to the CIA for me. 

I'll stay awesome if you stay creative, deal?



Author's Response:

Sounds like a good deal to me! ;-)

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 31 May 2018 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21 Discomfort

I hope she punches him in the face. It didn't happen last time, but this is a better Bella and she deserves to land on solid punch that puts him on his ass. Then... well she can forgive him.

I really do like all the changes, I will say that the beginning of the story felt more rushed than in the previous version, but I get that the focus of the story is now and not when she was younger.

 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22 Answers

And then she kneed him in the balls and uttered a simple, "I forgive you, but I won't forget."

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24 Clearing the Table

:'( 

Also, great chapter. Thank you.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25 Comfort

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Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26 Worst Time Ever to Fall

The first time I read this story, I was able to forgive Edward, to see his side and say, "I get it. Okay. Give me a few chapters.", but this time around I have gone through my own heartbreak where my trust and confidence were broken, where relationships that could've gone somewhere were infected. I still have those scars on my heart, and despite being with someone who is going to stick it out with me no matter what, I still feel that pain every day. Thing is I tried a do-over with the person who left me with these scars and it just couldn't work. So while I understand Edward, and my real life Edward, there's no forgiving this pain. I've let lots of things go and have moved on, and I still love my Edward with so much of me, but somethings cannot be forgiven. 

TMI? But you also asked so... anywho great chapter, and I think Becca is a wonderful character that always offers the right perspective. Characters that function as a protagonist's conscience are always the most interesting to me and say the most about the protagonist than backstory can. 

I guess some fluff is on the horizon along with a taste of the kind if angst that goes with broken trust and long distance? Can't wait. 

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Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 22 May 2018 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 In Order to Heal

My poor Bella. Stop making stories that make me weep for her. Also, there are things I love about both versions of this story. I think that the strong point of this one is in fact Bella being so independent and herself from start to well I'm going to assume finish. This Bella is just more, and I love it. It's a bit hard to remember all the finer points of the previous version, but I felt that that was a mellower Bella and while there's nothing wrong with that, I feel that this badder, sadder, tougher, more independent and confident Bella fits the idea of the story more. 

I'm looking forward to what's next. Bella is going to have a baby, and hopefully that puppy comes along at some point too!

Would it be weird if I said that I can tell that this really is what you wanted to write? Your writing style is very identifiable for me now, and there's more confidence and flow in these words than the previous, so I'd like to thank you for doing a rewrite because I can read the care and love you put into this story, and I'm enjoying it so much! 

Now if only I could remember to read updates on time... 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 24 May 2018 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18 Huge Commitments

Yay baby time! I think you did well in this version specifying that Edward wasn't the donor without the A/N tbh.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 Single Again

As far as what you said in the preface, I'm sorry to hear that happened to you, but I'm over the moon at the chance to read the story you wanted to write from the beginning. 

I'm looking forward to the changes, seeing what's essentially new characters, and getting invested in this story and your creative talents all over again. Pretty stoked about that 3x/wk update schedule. 

(:

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 Acceptance

The relationship between Vharlie and Renee is so sad. Well all the relationships in that household are dysfunctional and sad. I'm really excited about this rewrite, now let's go party with Bella!

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 Arriving

I've been to Ohio, I hated living in Ohio. Also, nice transition chapter, I'm ready for the nitty, the gritty, and scandalous. 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 Arriving

I've been to Ohio, I hated living in Ohio. Also, nice transition chapter, I'm ready for the nitty, the gritty, and scandalous. 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 Conversation

I hate that "falling hard and fast" stuff because it simply isn't true. The beginning is just infatuation and a piqued interest. Falling in love takes some time, even for those who fall the quickest of us all. So no, Bella and Edward both just feel the chemistry they have and are curious and excited to see where it could lead. I mean I'm stating this as a fact when it's your story and you can do whatever you want. 

I don't want a teaser, just to know if the 3x a week will always be the same days or not. I don't remember if I ever reviewed on the old version of this story, but this is really a nice refreshing revamp (: It's like when your glass of water is topped off at a restaurant and some ice cubes fall in kind of refreshing. 



Author's Response:

Yes, updates will always be on Mondays, Wednesdays, and Fridays :-D

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 Introductions

LOL I love your TL;DRs as if we aren't here to do exactly that. Never change! Nice base chapter for character intros and stage setting :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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I was having a really bad day. Boys are persistent, and Edward Cullen is laughing at me. A little daydreaming never hurt anybody. AU BPOV


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 192783 Read Count: 70389
[Report This] Published: 29 Dec 2013 Updated: 03 Sep 2018
Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2018 Title: Chapter 46: Epilogue ~ Decisions, Decisions

Thank you.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45 ~ Time to Celebrate?

I enjoy this. It's a better love story than Twilight, in fact it's very close to what I imagine what Twilight should have and could have been. Thank you for sharing this story, and I look forward to more!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Awesome banner by: LittleNudgerLove.

 

Set Post-Eclipse. Canon until that point. HEA. Mere weeks before her wedding, Bella disappears. With vampires, werewolves and humans to blame, no one thinks to look to the more sinister monsters lurking just off shore. As Bella is thrown into a frightening new world, Edward and Jacob must put aside their differences to save the girl they both love. But will they be too late? ExB

 

NOMINATED: for the Fanatic Fanfics Award 2015!!! For Favorite Action/Angst/Horror/Otherworld/WIP Fanfic.

FINALIST: Fav Newbie Author!

 

 

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'Still My Bella' Created by manu-chann, commissioned by silverhawk88.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Angst, Friendship, Horror, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure, Supernatural
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 65 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 251232 Read Count: 47010
[Report This] Published: 24 Oct 2014 Updated: 31 Aug 2017
Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58 - The Request

Every time there's a new chapter I can't help but to smile and dive right in. Thank you for this story and I continue to look forward to more. 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 - New Guests

Omg, I love this Jasper so much.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57 - When all fails, the sun still shines.

This was so nice to see in my inbox. I'm excited for the next chapter!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Mister Fancy Pants and Busy Bee are like oil and water, they do not mix. They're competing for top academic spot at Forks HS when fate intervenes. Busy Bee has a secret and when it comes to light it changes everything. Bee's been doing it tough but this girl is no push over. Omniscient 3rd person (wtf that means). There's some humour in here too. AH, HEA, mostly canon.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102709 Read Count: 38428
[Report This] Published: 09 Dec 2014 Updated: 23 Feb 2020
Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Homecoming

I'm glad this is still updating. Sweet intro chapter. 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2019 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Homecoming

I hope this story continues to update! 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Belonging

Thank you for a lovely story (: 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1093818
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 143: Chapter 20 part 2

I'm ready for more relationship building, oh and the children. Plus going public, and family drama, and other things that may or may not have been foreshadowed... please don't leave me high aand dry plot wise for sexcapades. I favorited this story because it had all the right things. Please bring them back.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 144: Chapter 20 Part 3

Yes! Ah, I'm so excited to see what's next! 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 23 May 2016 Title: Chapter 145: Chapter 20 Part 4

It was nice to see other characters! I'm excited for more!!

Dissident by hellawhitlock Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

Catching her eyes across the crowded cafeteria, I couldn't help thinking back to where we had been several hours earlier. Her beneath me calling out my name with such a breathy moan... I gave her a lopsided grin, it growing wider as I could see her blush spreading across her cheeks. She looked away quickly and back up at her boyfriend. My step-brother. AH. JxB


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8772 Read Count: 2796
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2015 Updated: 29 Jan 2015
Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 14 May 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Left Alone

Do you plan to finish this?

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Heavy is the head that wears the crown, noble the ill-prepared to turn it down. Bella is no one, a lady's maid at a girl's school until the princess she serves changes her life with a choice she would never make herself. Now she sets off into a world she doesn't know, betrothed to a man who will never know her.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 123897 Read Count: 107452
[Report This] Published: 21 Mar 2015 Updated: 26 Dec 2016
Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Thank you. 



Author's Response:

This has probably been the most talked about moment in this fic, and as a thank you for your reviews throughout this process, I’m going to go behind the nearly closed door in Chapter 18 and show the conversation between Sam and Edward in full, so you can see exactly how much of a misunderstanding it was.

Also, this fic is up for Top 10 completed fic of July at twifanfictionrecs, so if you would like to support me, they allow daily voting for the month and the link is in my profile. Without further ado, here is the full conversation in Edward’s office:

Sam leaned against my desk, shaking his head at me. “You’re quite taken with your princess, the whole country can see it, especially after that display at her welcome banquet.”

“Do not remind me,” I groaned. “I’ve never seen my father so upset, and Isabella…”

“Oh come now, there is no way that you look upon her and see no faults. I love Emily with my whole being and I can still see the things that aren’t perfect. They are what gives her substance.”

“Truly, she is everything I could want,” I said before hesitating.

“But…” Sam pushed.

“Her coloring is darker than I’m used to, but it adds to her intrigue. She is pretty in her own way, that is sure, but a little slight for me. I enjoy someone that I can have without fear of breaking them. And that long peasants bob that her hair is styled in, something will have to be done about that.”

Sam smiled as he moved closer to me. “See, that was not as difficult as you thought and the two things you mentioned are temporary.”

“How do you mean?” I asked.

“From what Lady Tanya said in front of Emily, she used to dye her hair and it damaged it, so it is not a fashion statement but a necessity. And she is still young, she will fill out into a womanly shape by the time she is nineteen, even if she has not given you a child by then.”

 

I sighed, thinking about what it will be like when we are married, already anxious for the day that she is mine.

The Body by aliciaw68 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 340]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has a fetish that no one else in the world knows about. Except the thousands of followers on his anonymous blog. What happens when Bella works out who 'The Body ' is.

Ths was my submission to the twkink 2015 fest.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 121593 Read Count: 141164
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2015 Updated: 19 May 2017
Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Well I'M mad he ruined the surprise, I was looking forward to that.

Guns and Pies by acullengirl40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 153]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella a bakery owner in a small mountain town where she grew up has sworn off men as most of the men she comes in contact with every day are tourists, until one day a sexy bearded man walks into her bakery wearing camo. Will he end up being her prince charming or will another summer tourist win her heart.

Edward an Ex Army sharp shooter is sick of his current situation with his demanding vegan girlfriend. He is on the verge of breaking up with the green monster as he likes to call her. Will walking though Bella's bakery door make him see that he needs more sweetness in his life and finaly cut his girlfriend lose or will he keep her around out of fear of being alone

Will these two let their hearts finally decide their path in life or will they both let fear drive their hearts away from what they both need, each other.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44255 Read Count: 19892
[Report This] Published: 01 Aug 2015 Updated: 09 Sep 2017
Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Cheaters never Prosper

I like this story, but I think it woild benefit from having a beta and being flushed out a bit more. 

Buying Love by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2001]
Summary:

Buying Love

Edward Masen is the most popular escort working for Esme Platt. He’s the best at what he does and no woman ever goes unsatisfied. He’s smooth, sexy, dangerous and in control. In many ways. His employer holds him to this job due to the debt he needs to repay her. He’s a slave to the job in more ways than one. He lives in the best apartments, dresses in the nicest clothes and drives the best cars. All of it, though, can disappear in a moment’s notice all because Esme knows Edward’s secret. 

Isabella Swan is an heiress to the Swan fortune. Her father, Charlie Swan, owns a string of high end hotels and resorts all over the world. Bella, as her friends call her, is also going through a nasty divorce from her husband, Riley. He cheated on Bella with the limo driver, the gardener, the pool boy and Bella’s assistant, Maggie. She’s bitter and angry, hating all men and abhorring her soon-to-be ex-husband. 

Charlie is having a grand opening for his newest hotel in Seattle, Swan Towers. Bella is expected there, with a date for the lavish party. Rose, Bella’s best friend, suggested that she use a male escort, handing her Esme Platt’s card. Bella calls and asks for the best. Edward arrives, all suave and debonair, but detached and cold. However, the attraction between the two is palpable. 

 

Will they succumb to their attraction? Will Edward pull Bella down the dark path in his need for control? Or will Bella be his light? Or is all of this a ploy for Buying Love?

 

 

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Banners by Mina! Thank you!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Spicy
Series: Stories I've Already read, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 101 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 196696 Read Count: 304674
[Report This] Published: 07 Sep 2015 Updated: 30 Sep 2016
Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 92

Tbh, I'm torn on Esme, life means she can suffer, suffer from loneliness, prison abuse that goes with others finding out how awful her crimes were (studies show that human traffickers, rapists, etc. receive the worst abuse of all other prisoners), suffer from having to face herself, suffer from many many things, but life means that people of Seattle would have to pay to keep her. Their taxes would go to keeping someone so awful and vile alive, or even protected from other inmates if the abuse became too bad, and even worse she can plot escape and probably succeed and reek havoc once again. Where do you draw the line on who deserves to die and who doesn't? At what point is deciding the plans of the cosmos okay? In the end weighing all the pros and cons of each option the death sentence is probably best for all the innocent that are or would become involved, including giving peace of mind to her victims. 

Anyways, great chapter! I'm proud of Edward.

 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 04 May 2016 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 63

Why would you do that to me? Also I'm hoping that basic anatomy and physics is putting me on the correct path and that the bullet was caught on the ribs, or at the most barely grazed a lung. These are wounds can be recovered from, hard to say how fast they'd get her to the hospital though... yet there is a helicopter so maybe... just don't do anything to hurt these characters anymore, well except Esme. She can get it.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 95

Again I think death would've been better for many reasons, yet life in many ways is more humane. It was an interesting chapter, Edward is obviously still not over things; he's using sex which is unhealthy no matter the intention behind it.

Heaven Knows by LadyHazelK Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 56]
Summary:

There as a warning in that dream; one that plays on her fear. Things don’t always happen the way we want them to, but I will do whatever it takes to keep her in my life. **Sequel to The Woman in the Woods** Drabble. EPOV.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18664 Read Count: 7731
[Report This] Published: 14 Oct 2015 Updated: 01 Jan 2020
Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34: Epilogue

I blasted through both stories in one day. They were great! The highs, the l iws, everything was written with such feeling and clarity.... Thanks for sharing (: 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bad boy Jacob Black doesn't return Bella's crush, so she decides to date someone safer: a harmless nerd in her math class named Edward Cullen. Little does she know that he is secretly a powerful and ruthless gang leader enmeshed in a vicious drug war that will put her life—-and all her beliefs—-at risk.. AU, AH, E/B, HEA. Co-authored with Sophia Amador.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dangerous Liasons
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 65 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6456 Read Count: 87943
[Report This] Published: 15 Nov 2015 Updated: 02 Oct 2016
Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 04 May 2016 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

Do we get that 'story for another time'? I think this story was a nice ride! Thanks for writing and sharing (:



Author's Response:

Thanks and we are working on epilogues and possibly a sequel. :)

Tie the Knot by Payton79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 345]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Banner made by heartfortwilight

 

 

 


Statistics say arranged marriages have a better chance at lasting. Is that still true if the couple is chosen by a group of experts and married on TV with at least one partner in it for the wrong reasons?

 


A lost bet, the promise of money and a stranger for a bride. Will confirmed bachelor Edward Masen find a match made in heaven or hell?

 


~Inspired by the show Married at First Sight~

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117195 Read Count: 54549
[Report This] Published: 21 Dec 2015 Updated: 26 Jan 2017
Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 10 May 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Truth or Dare

Bella is really getting on my nerves. She continues to get super pissy about this game but refuses to ask for any sort of clarification, nor is she upfront about the stuff that's bothering her. Actually neither of them are but that was addressed. The game thing is really irritating though, I hope she talks to Tanyaor someone and they tell her to pull her head out of her ass. Also Edward needs to relearn boundaries... and masturbate. 



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I don't see how Bella's pissy about the game. She actually enjoyed it. Now, as for masturbation, maybe he won't need to do that any longer ;). See you Monday.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - False Pretenses

Oh goodie complicated angst just when i don't need it. First Bella and now according to your preview and commentary Edward. Omg.



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts. I promise this chapter was as angsty as it gets. There will be drama but no more angst. See you next chapter when Edward does something really stupid to prove to Bella that he's being sincere.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Original Outline

I love the route you decided to take, in fact I prefer it to what you had planned, not because I dislike angst (I love it in fact), I just agree that the breaking up and getting back together route is used too often. In my opinion a lit of relationships can't come back from that, so to have done it with how rocky their start was would've made it unbelievable to me. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts. And thanks again for your help with the restaurant name. I was totally clueless there.

The epilogue will be up in a few days. See you then.

Clarity by maymay74 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 58]
Summary:

When you're the son of an ex-boyband member, certain benefits come with the title: A privileged upbringing, money, fame... Some are wanted, some cause more trouble, especially when people wants to be with you to become famous by association. What if you find the one person who wants you for being you? What if, unknowingly, she has more in common with you that you know about?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 42983 Read Count: 9799
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2016 Updated: 11 Dec 2017
Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Hi! I just found this story and I think it's a cool story. I think it could benefit from having beta, but that being said the story is pretty fun and I'd like to see the cumulation of this tale. I hope you're still working on it. 

Six by Sarges Girls Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 371]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Sixth sense: a special ability to know something that cannot be learned by using the five senses. Humans use 10% of their brain, but it's been proven that those with a sixth sense use more. Some wish to harness that power. With a target on us, sixxers are hunted as we try to stay hidden, blending in with the average world around us...when we are anything but average.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Adventure, Fantasy, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 151831 Read Count: 38424
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2016 Updated: 23 Aug 2017
Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

So, why doesn't Edward just project images of places others have been to Bella? That would help solve the problem of teleporting around. Of course Vella needs to be able to do it froma picture, but if they're in a pinch and need to jump quick and safely then why not? Like Rose in the form of that doctor probably saw a bunch of dark corners she could jump to in her mouse or other small animal form that Bella wouldn't have seen. 

 

I love the creativity in this story, can't wait for the next update!

Chimera by WeeKittyAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1005]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Summary: Bella Swan has lived a sheltered life, and chooses to go to college as far from home as her strict parents will allow. She runs into Edward Cullen, a gorgeous law student. They become friends and one night cross the line of friendship in a way that will alter the life of both of them more than anyone can ever believe. When DNA doesn't tell the same story Bella tells, how will her young life be altered?
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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 256985 Read Count: 326948
[Report This] Published: 02 Aug 2016 Updated: 30 Mar 2017
Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I pray neither of them taped it. How could Angela knowingly date a rapist, and how could Alice knowingly let her best friend do so? While Alice has a few screws loose, the fact that ALL rapes committed by Ben were filmed (right?) then it couldn't have been them. 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Wtf. It should get blocked. Rapists shouldn't be able to talk about their crime in explicit detail. The only reason murderers and serial killers and the like have stories out there about them is because  court/police/investigative records are released to the Commonwealth after a certain time frame. Ugh, that just makes me sick to think people do this in real life. I'm glad the first time I've encountered this idea is through fiction.

Summary:

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After a traumatic event resulting in the deaths of her parents, seventeen-year-old Bella Swan decides to kill herself. Still feeling responsible, she is shipped off to live with her estranged uncle in a small rainy town located in the middle of nowhere. Still struggling to cope with everyday life, Bella wants to take the final plunge to end it all. Enter Edward, a 20 year old group counselor and five-year survivor of an attempted suicide, who still struggles daily with his own dark past. With inside and outside factors threatening to intervene in their lives, can Edward and his friends show Bella that her life is worth the fight? Rated M for dark themes OOC BPOV *Edited for content 2020*

Non Canon pairings ,but eventual B/E

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 69986 Read Count: 5103
[Report This] Published: 12 Aug 2016 Updated: 23 May 2020
Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Hm, I'm conflicted on this story. There's a lot of things that I think Phil and the WTF group are doing wrong, and for a medical professional to not notice all of the previous cuts on her arm annoyed me to no end. Cutters are never trying to kill themselves and the fact that everyone ignored that still bothers me especially because that's a separate issue that has to be addressed. Cutters don't get better just because an issue is fixed, cutters still cut under duress if they don't learn proper coping mechanisms to avoid that feeling. I know because I know cutters. It's just like an addiction. It has to get addressed. Constantly pushing someone that's a cutter to talk with supplying other ways for them to cope will lead to them cutting more and potentially accidentally killing themselves how Bella almost did. In terms of realism she'd still be cutting, maybe even after all these sessions she's forced into. 

Another thing that I find traumatizing is the way they ganged up on her, and how she has no alone time. Regardless of everything, people in therapy (including in patients) recieve ample alone time to process and work through things themselves, it sounds like she rarely has that. How can I be mad at her for lack of growth or willingness when she doesn't even get proper space to breathe. This girl also hasn't properly grieved her parents and still another medical professional hasn't picked up on that? There's a lot to unpack in the situation that is Bella's trauma, but no one is working with her on grief counseling either...

I obviously read this straight through, so those are all my thoughts up til this point on what doesn't make sense to me. Especially being someone who has worked with and knows these types of people on both sides of the coin. However, I think this is a great story. I enjoy your writing style. Is it new? It seems like you kinda firmly found your footing in it after the first few chapters. If I'm right congrats it really seems to suit you. I can easily imagine the pictures you're painting. I also think that overall these kinds of stories aren't told, so big kudos to you for the effort and dedication to tell one like this.

I hate combative Edward lol, but I love that Alice isn't extremely pushy in this story! I feel like a lot of authors would've done the opposite. I love Jasper with Bella, he's so kind. I feel like he'd be the perfect one to address the cutting if you decide to listen to my critique. And oh gosh, I hope Emmett is the next counselor she's paired with. I think he'd be great for her in general. He's so open and free as a character that I think it would spark something in anyone; Bella could use a spark. 

Excited for the next chapter!

xo



Author's Response:

Thanks so much reading, I know a lot of things aren't the most medically sound but it's is fiction so I'm taking a lot of liberties. I am always open to feedback and willingly take suggestions But please keep in mind, that these situations are different for everyone. There's no exact way to sometimes notice something. While not an exact copy of Bella's and the gangs backstories, majority of this is based on my own 10+ year journey of dealing with mental health and some of the experiences I had with my own therapists and group sessions. Bella is still very early on in her journey. Just stay with me for a bit. 

Summary:

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Banner by CloRodeffer

Photographer Bella Swan loves everything about living in Hawaii. The beach, the surf, the warmth. Everything but the two weeks when Professional Beach Volleyball takes over. Now, she's been cast with the joy of capturing every moment with her camera. Only, a tall, auburn haired player isn't making it easy for her to stay professional. Cannon Couples. UA and MA


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 43885 Read Count: 25183
[Report This] Published: 19 Aug 2016 Updated: 16 Aug 2019
Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2019 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Heavy. 

Can't wait for the next update! Glad you're back!!! (: 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Well okay then. Also did they win? 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I love this story, and I'm glad you and it are back. Take your time, masterpieces aren't made in a day.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Well a lot has happened since my last read. I don't know what to say really and then this ending happens. Wow. 

Always supporting those that can, working hard. Thanks for continuing to update.

Summary:

Evidence

Isabella Swan knew exactly what she wanted always and did everything in her power to get it. She was a strong successful lawyer who thought she had everything in her life figured out, until she met him.

Edward Cullen is an international music star who had the entire world in the palm of his hands, and lost it all. He doesn't know what he wants and has no idea where his life is headed. He had nothing in his life figured out, until he met her.

Nothing is ever as it seems. The truths we hide are far greater than any mask we wear.

A story about rediscovering oneself, the world, and each other. 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15100 Read Count: 2881
[Report This] Published: 19 Dec 2016 Updated: 11 Feb 2017
Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Wow. (Good wow.) I'm interested in seeing what else you have planned for this story.

Summary:

What if Bella had reacted differently after she saved Edward in Italy? Abandoned by the family, Bella slowly grew stronger in their absence and, even though she loves them all, Bella decides to hold the family responsible for their actions when she returns from Italy. Bella teaches them all that their choices have real consequences, ones that just might change everything… JxB O/S

Choices and Consequences


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4646 Read Count: 676
[Report This] Published: 19 Jan 2017 Updated: 19 Jan 2017
Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aw, beautiful. I wish this was a full story! However, I'm a one-shot writer myself and the thought of writting a multi-chapter story often tuckers me out. Loved this! I'm going to check out what else you've written. 

Thanks so much for sharing!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Yeah, this is one of those pieces where I'm actually a little afraid of ruining it by turning it into an m/c story. Lol. Don't want to mess with a good thing.

Tiger Stripes by juliangelus Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Separated by hatred, can they overcome the darkness...

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64886 Read Count: 4599
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2017 Updated: 18 Mar 2020
Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 16: Epilogue

I don't know if I'm disappointed or if I'm just sad that they didn't have more time together. Five years of separation and agony over actions that weren't there own... but some people have lived a story such as this and because of that, this is beautiful in its own right. 

Thanks for sharing!

Red Light by Frogie48 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 95]
Summary:

Bella is having a bad day that only gets worse when she finds out her marriage of 6 years is over.  Who knew running a red light would be the end of one life and the beginning of another. 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 29003 Read Count: 9721
[Report This] Published: 02 May 2017 Updated: 19 Apr 2018
Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wtf. It's been less than 24h dude. Seriously?

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I'm enjoying this story, I'm just confused about the timing of everything and the pacing throws me for a loop sometimes. I know that the divorce took 3 months, but how long has it been from there? A few weeks? I'm looking forward to more!

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I'm enjoying this story, I'm just confused about the timing of everything and the pacing throws me for a loop sometimes. I know that the divorce took 3 months, but how long has it been from there? A few weeks? I'm looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

Yes it has been a little over 2 weeks since she met Edward. Thanks for reading and reviewing. 

The Undecided by MarieCarro Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 190]
Summary:

 

Bella thought she knew what her life looked like. It was normal teenage angst and high school boredom. However, one night proves her very wrong and she realizes everyone has been lying through their teeth. Bella isn't normal. Bella is a Witch. And she has a very important choice to make. B/E, Mature Content, AU/A(H)


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Supernatural, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107893 Read Count: 25378
[Report This] Published: 07 May 2017 Updated: 28 Nov 2019
Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 29: Epilogue

Nice, nice, nice. It was a fun ride, thank you for sharing this story. 

 

Also also, an alternative ending means an alternative epilogue right?



Author's Response:

Basically, yeah. The alt. ending will melt together with the alt. epilogue :)

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Bruh. Stop. I'm trying to have a wholesome romance here! 

Can't wait to see what's to come!

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2019 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned. While I'd never intentionally curse my own bloodline, had I been in her shoes my thoughts would be to curse the bloodline of the men that harmed me. In this case it would unfortunately curse me, and my descendants. As such, I can understand Sarah. 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2019 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Bruh. 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 10 May 2019 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Thank you.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 10 May 2019 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Thank you.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Sep 2019 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Okay well that reveal better come next chapter! And early! 

I'm looking forward to whatever comes next, hard pill to swallow knowing that the end is nigh.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Oh okay. That's a lot more responsibility than I thought she'd have. What an oddly stacked society, no wonder they try to kill each other. Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Yes, Bella. Rip your enemies to pieces in ways they can't recover from. I'm here for you strong, decisive Bella A. Bloom and grow sweet huntress, bloom and grow. 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

At least part of all this could've been prevented if they were being responsible. The whole "Oh hey we aren't your parents and you're a witch" part could've been done years ago. 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

"That's what you get when you let your heart win. Woah." Was my first thought. 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Renee and Charles are both fools, and Bella should do more independent study. Who was her spirit guide?

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Just be the ultimate neutral Bella.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh goodie, my true neutral is here.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

No one saw neutrality as a possibility? If she was prophesied then... someone along the line should've thought "Oh maybe!", and especially as it became clearer what her family ties were. I'm still shocked about that because as soon as it was like 'pick a side' I thought evil then I was like no, neutral, lead both sides. Anyway enough of that, that's an interesting spin on Marcus you've done and I'm really into it. Last thing, the whole huge coven thing doesn't really make sense to me. It makes more sense for it to be a smaller affair. (Even the normal V in the books just throw me for a loop) but again I like your uss of elements from the original story. Things are so pleasantly cannon. 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

#Goddess Bella slays all day.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

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Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2019 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Nice. We're going to uncover the mystery Scoobs. 

As always, I am enjoying this story and impatiently await the next update. I hope life as hectic as it is, is also fulfilling. See you next time!

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2019 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Let's kick Chelsea's arse and mop the floor with her tears! I'm excited for the end while I'll miss the story I'm just looking for the characters to have peace and also see Badass Bella take her rightful place as leader of all witches. 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 30: Alternative Ending - ANGST

A Royal Duty by MarieCarro Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 279]
Summary:

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If you were born into royalty, is there anything you wouldn't do for your kingdom and its people? Even when you got no choice in the matter, do you stand with a straight back and accept your fate? What if you're just children? DRABBLE FIC M for future content!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 177 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 47548 Read Count: 169324
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2018 Updated: 20 Apr 2018
Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 177: Chapter 176

I started this and couldn't stop til I reached the end, I'll pay for it tomorrow when I head into work, but this was great! Thank you for such a nice and realistic story. 

Summary:

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Earthquakes so rarely occur in the Pacific Northwest that the phenomenon causes the members of the Quileute tribe to investigate. They never would have expected to find her. She is stubborn, wild, and fiercely independent, and she willfully goes against everything they try to teach her. Especially when it comes to staying away from vampires. AU/Supernatural


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 84901 Read Count: 37145
[Report This] Published: 29 Jun 2017 Updated: 30 Aug 2019
Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Hm.. welp. Should've listened to Charlie! 



Author's Response:

Maybe they should have!

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2017 Title: Seismic Shift

Sue is the bombdotcom.

Also thanks for putting up with my reviews lol. I just get so *slams fist onto the table* fired up.



Author's Response:

Lol. I don't mind at all, it means you're invested. Thank you.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Sweet



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2017 Title: Seismic Shift

Oh Leah.



Author's Response:

She's got some issues.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2017 Title: Seismic Shift

Aww, I love it. And this Jessica. 



Author's Response:

I tried to make herr a bit more likeable, so I'm glad she is!

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 41: Epilogue

I'm glad to have been on this journey with you. I've enjoyed this story, as I knew I would given other stories I've read by you. I look forward to what's coming next! Before then, I'm waiting happily for the rest of the future take. This truly is a beautifully written story. Thank you for following this particular plot bunny down the rabbit hole. (:



Author's Response:

Thank you! It's been the best decision to follow this plot bunny. I appreciate you always reviewing!

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2017 Title: Seismic Shift

Born to be wiiiiiild~



Author's Response:

 Lol,  she is!

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2017 Title: Seismic Shift

Sweet.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2017 Title: Seismic Shift

Shouldn't she be allergic or have an averse reaction to chocolate as part wolf?



Author's Response:

I can't say that I remember anything about that in the series. 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2017 Title: Seismic Shift

I'm back. Looking forward to seeing where this goes now.



Author's Response:

Hi! That's excellent. 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That poor bumble bee. I actually cried. 



Author's Response:

Lol, you made me laugh.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh good he decided not to kill the butterfly. I'm liking this story. I enjoy this kind of Bella way more than a Mrs Meyer's Bella. 



Author's Response:

Well, thank you!

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

No pests other than Sam's lack of chill this chapter. Edward must be sad. I'm sad that Bella didn't just phase after backing up. Just poof there it is. Haha. This story is giving me what I need right now. 



Author's Response:

Sam has an incredible lack of chill. I'm glad you like it!

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

When Bella thought to herself about the right fit I thought "You don't know if the glock can even fit in your glove compartment!", and then she felt the weight of it haha. Also bless that he's not a prude. 



Author's Response:

I've never heard that reference before, holy crap! He''s definitely not prudish.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

So we're classifying her someone with tribe lineage even though that's not the case? Or just that she's of a similar enough cloth that it must ne true for her too?



Author's Response:

It's her only frame of reference, as a shapeshifting wolf. But she honestly doesn't know what/who she is.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Edward broke the treaty over something he could've told her via a phone call? 



Author's Response:

Lol, he could have, but it would be way less dramatic.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I've been thinking the same thing. 5 years is enough to createnuclear loyalty but npt really more than that and so she should just leave.



Author's Response:

I'd say she's very torn. She certainly wants to just go, but she's afraid.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

She took him to the cliffs of La Push? He carried her home? They keep breaking the Treaty! Do they think they're in a Jane Austen novel?? C'moooon. They're trying to get someone killed.



Author's Response:

It was not their finest moment, no. They assumed the rain would cover their tracks.