Can't mess with an imprinting. Honestly Bella just needs to do what Jake did in the books and shake off all the shackles. I get that it's because she pledged her alliance to the tribe/wolf pack, but she just needs to be her own wolf.

Also where was Paul that he smelled that she had sex with Edward?? 

I hope it's awhile before shit hits the fan. Right now I'd love to get to understand these characters a bit more, and maybe see some development. I love Bella's POV and her way of showing rather than telling. 

Def should've added a dun dun dun. It popped into my head. I wonder what's next, if we're going off of cannon Bella's ability everything should be set if not then Bells and Renee coveri g everyone should work right? Regardless I'm excited for the battle. Thsnks for another great chapter. Really needed this since hospitals are so boring.

What. A. Doozy. But also the not-fight fight scene from the movies? At least it mirrored it. Don't Stephanie Meyer me and this just turns out to be a nightmare because I love stories when the Volturi reign comes to an end. Particularly in ways that doesn't send the vampire world into a tizzy which this outcome could, but still totally worth it since Aro got a firball to the face. That's a good martini on a Sunday morning.

Thanks for another great chapter!

C-sections are the best sections. I'm so happy you won the awards you did, you deserve them. Excited for the end of this journey, it's been a great one. Thank you.

Idk why, but whenever people mention Chelsea breaking the bond of a mated pair my skin crawls. I thought she couldn't do that according to Marcus (or S.M. herelf stating it)? Anywho, That's cool, Bella should whip out a shield like magic. 

But like... you will be whole again Island Heart Spirit, you just gotta stop trying to kill the ones who will help you. Good foreshadowing stuff makes me feel confident in this assessment. Lots of good stuff in this story. This is like a super cool epic fantasy tale. Idk what that app is, but you should put more belief into your storytelling abilities. You have a real talent here.

Preview response: Alistair, my dude, y'all left your new friends and immediately almost died, I'd say Iris' tale was 100% part of a trap even if it turns out to be true. 

Three heads against my tiny army of brave babes doesn't seem fair. What if they just let him eat the other half? I mean it would accomplish the same thing and they wouldn't have to try to kill Cetus. Also I'm glad that the issues each individual has faced and kept with them all this time is working themselves out. Although I will say that I'm with Edward, Bella not being presemt in the courtroom makes me think that their future doesn't align, and I have a few theories as to why it wouldn't... As always, I'm looking forward to reading more of this crazy tale. 

Hm. Cool. Thanks, looking forward to the next update!

I knew it! Bella is so boss. I love it. Now we just need to set this weirdass timejump island straight.

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Nice. (:

Doesn't matter what verison of Victoria it is (though I believe it's an equally married mixture of them both in there) as long as it's Victoria! And she still has to be alive for the cave thing to have worked, so I'm betting on myself with this one.

Another great chapter, thank you!

The amount of cliffhangers is enough to cause cardiac arrest. Solid chapter, and I didn't think Rose was dead, I still remember the cave with old Bella. Is that who's walking towards us?

Damn

So what chapter was it when they braved the volcano catwalks? Yeah, they were launched into the future that they heard over the comm system. Hopefully they figure that out. It would make sense that this particular future happened due to the choices they've made so far considering that you derived this story from an app called choices and that future paths are based on choices hence the idols' power to display a future outcome. 

Nice chapter.

Interesting... 

And try imgur? 

Quick, simple, well plotted, and well timed suspense and mystery (even if one could figure it out). I enjoyed this, thank you. 

Being caught up is so disappointing haha, I was enjoying lots of chapters coming at me. I love how well you've planned out this story, along with the more realistic changes you've done. A lot of what Twilight was missing, for me, was a realistic aspect to the fantasy of it all. So I'm very excited to see where the story goes and how it unfolds! Also, when will school be in session? I'm ready for the petty, smartpantys, jocky, and absolutely awkwardness of some highschool scenes. Also the jealousy of tge entire student body... well just once or twice. 

Thanks for a great chapter! 

Bruuuuuuh. Okay, my poor sweet little lambs don't deserve this. Grace must be driving herself crazy with guilt, and Edward... he just doesn't deserve this. AND CHARLES SWAN IS A POOPYHEAD. I mean I gathered from the sneak peak, but omg how can saving your sons life three times (only two he knows of) not matter?? I mean Grace stopped a couple of deranged vampires from feasting on the town, stopped a bullet, and then stood between Edward and the only thing that could rip her apart to make sure not another cell of his body was damaged... like... OBVIOUSLY THE ONLY IMPULSIVE AND LIFE THREATENING PEOPLE IN THIS STORY ARE THE WOLVES. Gah! 

This story is almost over? Nooooo. The lady doth protest (the right amount!)

Predictions: Edward drives off and finds himself somewhere peaceful and quiet where he can continue to doubt the truth but also come to terms with it thanks to the help of either Tanya or maybe Carlisle since these are the only two other than Grace who hasn't intimidated him, and I'd imagine Esme is helping Grace work through the guilt she's feeling over the bruise or the event, or both. I think after that whether he meets a Cullen/Denali or not he'll go back home to where Jake and Billy are still there, or Jake and another pack member. If Edwards meets with a vamp then anger ensues, if not still mild anger ensues. Lol. There's obviously a more Twilight-esque route too but meh, you've been going beautifully off script so far so why would you change that? 

I'm looking forward to whatever is next!

"YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAS!"

So my favorite thing is that this isn't going to be like the books, and wasn't. I'm happy to have taken a chance on this amazing and well planned story. You're very talented, and I hope to keep reading for as long as you're publishing. 

I'm so happy for THIS Bella and Edward. While Bella has the self loathing and doubts she doesn't seem to let it be the driving force or focus of their relationship. I'm glad her love for Edward is PURE and not backed by this weird obsession with humanity twisted with a form of love. That always pissed me off about the books. For something that was supposed to read as true, undying love and devotion it never did, but what you've written does. Her words are less flowery and her love rings true in her actions more than anything else. So I absolutely adore this. 

I know you won't break my heart by splitting them up over something stupid, or blame my one true fictional prince Jasper for it either, so I'm placing my trust in you and getting excited for the sequel! If you need anything throughout the process of writing the sequel, even if it's just encouragement, don't hesitate to let me know. Gosh, I'm so excited. 

Thank you for writing this beauty of a story! (: 

xo, 

T

First: Congrats!!! 

Second: AHHHHHHHHHHHHH CHARLIE X TANYA! ALL ABOARD MY VERY OWM HANDCRAFTED SHIP. WE'RE SETTING SAIL! Omg I'm so happy. CxT is the new best ship. So pure, so gruff, so... raw. I can't wait to see more! 

No worries about not replying, you're a busy person and things slip the mind. Better late than never. 

So finally some scenes in the sweet sweet hormonal cage of high school. I'm so excited for all the various scenes of teenagers being teenagers that has just been unlocked. I'm very happy about this chapter overall. There's so much going on here while all at once it's ordinary. 

Can't wait to read more!

I could kill the pack right now omfg. Of all the things they could've done... 

Well Charlie should be firmly Team Sparkle now right? Regardless of the treaty and events sparked by Grace's appearance, they had his son - who almost died - on the same death trap that killed a man he had to scrape off the road. And here's Grace again protecting Edward from harm. I mean that's huge! Also his second love is there too! Bonus points!! 

Now that the cat is out of the bag, and the treaty has technically been broken by the pack twice, outright once and circumstantially a second time, we can call it even when Edward is eventually changed. Right? 

Gosh, I'm so excited for the next chapter!

C'mon Charles, lay it to rest. Your grudge is dumb since it's not even your own. Sure if someone told me that a person who just entered my life was a real deal vampire I'd be scared too.. but character (nurture) is often far more important than nature. Besides if they don't want my blood then there's no problems. 

How many times does she have to do good before he cuts her some slack? 

Enjoyable chapter!

Yay more story! You're spoiling me and I love it. It's nice to know that everyone is happy and well, and to have a glimpse instead of imagining. 

xo

Ooo twin girls. That's fun. I wonder if they'll both want the ranch life, or if one or both will want the urban dreamscape. It would be interesting if they both desired the latter, not because of the property (since once you own it, it's yours) moreso because of who would return to it be it to work or just to pass it along to the next of kin. 

This story has a way of making me think up more than you've given which is a mark of true talent. Fanfiction is the birth of the desire readers have for more, for additional gratification. If you're able to do that with just one person through a fanfic... well who knows what you'd spark in your own stories. 

I'm excited for more futuretakes. If you write it, I'll read it. 

xo

I know what the ending is, but will we get a futuretake as well? I just really hoped for one, or that the story would continue on to another natural ending.

Oh wait. I just read the recipe. That makes much more sense than uh... actual frogs.

Aw (:

Also because of practical needs, I hope he buys at least one pickup truck, and maybe some other smaller equipment necessary. I don't think this Bella would argue, and it's not really a gift ya know? I'm so happy she has a lil business starting and that it's really taking off. 

Good chapter. I really like this story. I'm hoping that Carlisle comes around for more than just being impressed. But it's funny that he would say she doesn't know anything about Edward when I'd garner to bet he'd actually know less.

Awww, sweet. Also yay for wedding Bells. Get it? Bells' Wedding? No? :P

I really have enjoyed this story, and you've put together a story that flows so beautifully. Thank you.

Edward needs to learn how to temporarily set aside his emotions in the moment so he can hear/see the information around him, it's an important skill for any leader to gain. 

Here's to the next chapter, and hopefully Edward keeping his head firmly on his shoulders.

Awww, I love that moment between Bella and Tanya. 

I never read The Selection Series, but I'm looking forward to this. Seems interesting and hopefully full of big f-you's from Bella! 

I mean... I understand why Bella is insecure the past with Jake, Edward Jr. being unreasonable at times, and Edward Sr. dismissing her so wholly that even insiders can see it and tell the public... but damn Edward Jr. has grown and has declared himself time and time again from the very beginning. If she doesn't get over herself and stop making things out to be worse than they are I'm going to have to sneak into your dreams as a character so I can slap her into the right frame of mind. Edward loves her, and the country has seen her in a warm and loving light. All she needs to do is continue to be herself and focus on her future as princess and eventually queen. Someone shake her! 

Another great update, and as always looking forward to the next chapter. I hope you are well, as a creator myself I understand the various pressures and blocks that come with creativity and are often compounded by real life responsibilities. So here's to wishing you warm and relaxing baths with your favorite drink! 

xo

:D

Poor Bella, this isn't starting off great for her... I don't usually think of Jake characters in a bad light until made to do so, and everything just points to Jake being an ass in this story ): I'm firmly Team Bella, I just hope the Bellas are strong women ya know? 

What's the update schedule for this story? Looking forward to more!

Nice. This is definitely the kind of Bella I was hoping for.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Team Bella ftw!

I hope you're okay and safe during this crazy time! I was wondering when, or if, this story will update. I know writer's block and life in general happens, so no worries if not. Just curious!

I'm still annoyed with them both, I really hope they work on their communication issues.

Great chapter, looking forward to what's next and hoping that with the report and the attack that the king realizes that sending her home would cause more problems.

Psychopaths are great manipulators, even of themselves, but if and big IF he didn't beat his wife idk why he couldn't accept the facts. Why he wouldn't ask for a full investigation, and like anyone who beat someone else half to death would have raw hands or cuts and bruising from the person defending themselves even if it were minor. F Cheney either way. I want him gone from this story he's too much and my heart cannot deal 

Sweet (:

What a shitty person this man is. Also to think that way means that he's waiting to use anything he can against Edward. Someone helps your wife, or a child goes missing and the first response is calculating or anger. I hope he has to get a taste of his own medicine someday.

Bruh 😫😩 why this particular cliffy? Are you TRYING to kill us all? 

Also, I like the use of a secondary character to advance the plot. It seems natural and refreshing to use that POV to do it. 

Great chapter!

I just started this yesterday and I'm sad that I'm all caught up already. I'm enjoying this story, I hope that updates are frequent! If I remember correctly a violation of parole isn't viewed hatshly if it's done to protect those at large. So while Edward won't get off easy he also won't be sent back to prison. Poor Bella, I hope that this doesn't shake her faith. 

I'm liking the steady pace of this story it moves at a gentle pace rather than a 1x fast forward or more. Feels good. 

Daaaamn, Edward they make multiples my guy.

Can Cheney just be kicked out and banned from being apart of schooling at all?

Seriously? Wtf. Can you stop punching me and this sweet, kind, and innocent Edward in the heart? 

Oh, unless this is one of those stories where our main character has some sort of psychosis where he's two different people and he, our Edward, never remembers the awful one? Technically there's enough there for it to be possible like certain things that have been mentioned that happened while he was imprisoned, and he made someone else take the fall each time. Always thrown back to a state of innocence in which he forgets actions taken by the not-him him. 

Dark theory, but rotund if accurate. 

I hope it isn't.