Reviews by lovingit3
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

PostSecret Used: My downstairs neighbor and I have screaming matches to see who’s the loudest during sex, I usually win.

Summary: Edward is a player and rising pornstar who abuses his peen on a daily basis, demanding performance and the utmost behavior from it. Well, now it’s time for the tale to be told.

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Humor
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74658 Read Count: 41532
[Report This] Published: 17 Jan 2011 Updated: 26 Nov 2011
Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Intervention

Yay!!!!!!!!!!

loved it!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Epilogue

So wonderful!

Summary:

PostSecret Prompt Used: Everyone who knew me before 9/11 thinks I'm dead. 3rd Place Winner PostSecret Prompt Contest! SENSITIVE MATERIAL INCLUDED! PLEASE BE WARNED!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4371 Read Count: 1564
[Report This] Published: 17 Jan 2011 Updated: 17 Jan 2011
Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow very sad!

Red Ribbon by MujerN Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

He is infamous. Everyone knows about the terrorizing murderer who leaves behind bloody scenes and corpses at night while the city sleeps. Bella, a journalist, investigates and finds her fear turning dangerously into love.

–Red Ribbon
One-shot, Finalist to Tattward and Inkella Contest




On Fanfiction.net: Red Ribbon | Ruthless and Ivory multi-chapter


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7499 Read Count: 726
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2011 Updated: 29 Jan 2011
Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

Wonderful!

Summary:

 

Summary: Bella Swan is in love with her best friend Edward, who has a girlfriend. Cliché? Yes. Can she wait around until he realizes whom he really loves? Maybe. Loosely based on the song “Inevitable” by Jessie James. 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3384 Read Count: 701
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2011 Updated: 12 Feb 2011
Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Inevitable

Wonderful!

The Car Wash by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 46]
Summary:

Picture inspired one shot for now. But how knows. An early morning naked car wash could brighten anyones day but can it change your future? Mature theme. M for a reason. Picture inside.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9000 Read Count: 8653
[Report This] Published: 04 Mar 2011 Updated: 19 Feb 2012
Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Good stuff!

Summary:

 

 

 

Summary:  Dr. Masen sits and has coffee in the commons of the university every day the weather is nice.  What happens when he meets the woman of his dreams in a most embarrassing way?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4135 Read Count: 2035
[Report This] Published: 21 Mar 2011 Updated: 21 Mar 2011
Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Same Time Tomorrow

Good stuff! Love the last entry!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it.  Thanks so much for the review!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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                                                                                   -thank you to mkystich for the beautiful banner-

There is only one person on this earth that Edward Cullen hates, and that's his boss...Bella Swan. She's cold. She's ruthless and incapable of human emotion, and to Edward's greatest frustration, the hottest woman walking the face of the planet. Will a proposition made change the course of their lives forever? Will they break the rules, or will all terms and conditions apply?

Lemon? Yes please!

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-thank you to evilnat for the beautiful banner-


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167815 Read Count: 84269
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2011 Updated: 01 Apr 2012
Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 May 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - The Parents Part Two

I would be irate if I found out my boss had done soemthing like that to me! I agree with Edward....revenge! LOL

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 May 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - The Paragon

Cannot wait to read on and see how that sleepover goes!

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Date: 31 May 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - The Prick

Great stuff!

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Date: 01 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - The Pretender

I love that he was awake that morning and that he wants payback!!!!!!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - The Play Date Part One

Cannot wait for your next update!



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Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - The Peepshow

Wonderful! Cannot wait to see what morning holds for them!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - The Pick-up line

Too funny! Loved it!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - OUTTAKE

Amazing! Love what Edward did for her!

Summary:

 

After five years of marriage, Edward knows all of Bella's deepest, darkest desires.  Now they find themselves alone in the first class cabin with the exception of the sexy stranger who is sleeping across the way.  Bella may finally get one of her most erotic wishes granted. 

 

WARNING: Rated NC-17 for lemons and a threesome.  If that is too much for you, then run along little ones.  You have been warned.

 

 

 

 

This gorgeous banner is brought to you by the artistic styling of one MissKinkAtYourService.  I bow to her greatness as she always gives me the most amazing banners.  Check out her blog at

misskingatyourservice.blogspot.com/

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4432 Read Count: 7783
[Report This] Published: 29 Mar 2011 Updated: 29 Mar 2011
Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Mid Flight Ménage-à-Trois

Loved it! I think you should continue it!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the rating and review.  I never intended this to be more than a one-shot, but you are all twisting my arm and I feel compelled to give these three a little more time.  Everyone will just need to be patient until I can devote time to them.

All my best

Nickey

Quiet Storm by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1708]
Summary: Past Featured Story

QS

"Two weeks. Two years. Who cares?" A lesson in love, crime, and passion. When two young lovers find themselves in the middle of the storm, can love conquer all? AH. OOC. Rated M Mafia fic. 

Humor/Romance/Violence/Drama...you name it, QS has it, or will. Canon couples. Not canon characters. (Mafia fic) MobWard

 

Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight. 

Beta'd by aeglow

Banner by the amazing RoseArcadia


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Shena's Storys to Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Storm Saga by SexiLexi, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618485 Read Count: 2669128
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2011 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 May 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Diplomatic Immunity

Amazing as always!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 34: This is it

You are amazing as always! Your characters are written so well. I can't even imagine living like that, having to watch your back at all times! Wonderful chapter!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 May 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Quick Like A Cat

Great stuff!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Round Two

Loved the tampon thing!!!! Loved the whole chapter! I am happy they are admitting their feelings for one another!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Round One

Hooked on this story.. cannot get enough!!!!!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 May 2011 Title: Chapter 5: The Wedding Part Two

Wonderful stuff! Love Edwards grandmother!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 May 2011 Title: Chapter 4: The Wedding Part One

Good stuff! I cannot wait for the next update!  Looking forward to what Carlisle reaction will be and what will happen next for Bella and Edward!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 May 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Lousy Day at the Slots

Amazing!

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Date: 14 May 2011 Title: Chapter 16: The Trouble in Little Odessa

Your writing style is incredible! You rock my world!

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Date: 15 May 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Wrapped Around my Finger

I would love to be on a road trip with these four!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 May 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Something in the Water

Great stuff! I am excited for them to get pregnant! Love that Aro tried to kick his ass!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 May 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Prove It

Great stuff!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 May 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Every Dog Has Its Day

I cannot believe Gail is dead! I always thought that Gail was possibly Heidi's daighter, I figured they were involved some how. Can't wait for your next update! Great stuff!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 33: SunSational Day

Amazing as always!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Par for the Course

WOW I can't believe Marcus was going to take care of her that soon! Cannot wait to see what Edwards plans are!

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Date: 01 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Checks and Balances

Great stuff! Poor Aro LOL!

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Date: 05 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Baby Blues

Wonderful!

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Date: 09 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Skip's Day Off

Super hot! Poor Edward finally got some!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Under Pressure

Wonderful stuff!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Epilogue

Looking forward to part two!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

BS Banner

 

Thanks to AcrosstheSkyinStars for the amazing banner.

 

After getting lost in the woods on a camping trip, Bella finds a man who is living a different life. Can two such different worlds mesh when communication is nearly impossible? 

(There are no werewolves or vampires in this fic)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68305 Read Count: 68213
[Report This] Published: 02 Apr 2011 Updated: 07 Jan 2012
Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

So sad to see this come to an end! It has been an amzing journey!



Author's Response:

Outtake sent

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I am curious how the press found out... My guess is Billy!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your support of my story.

Here is a teaser for the next chapter

She opened the door and narrowed her eyes. He was in uniform and while Bella had set the appointment, she hadn’t expected him to actually show up after he alerted the press. Bella knew he must have been in his fifties but he looked late thirties at the most. His dark skin and long braided hair told her that he was Native American. He was not unattractive but his eyes looked weathered, dim where they should have held a spark.  In his hand he held an old notebook, nothing fancy and it looked well used. There were papers popping out the sides and the edges of those were rolled and torn.

 

The police officer stood on her porch and Bella at the door with her hands on her hips.

 

“How could you?” she accused. “We have been beating off reporters since I talked to you. Why would you do that to him?”

 

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I can't wait to see if she will go back to the woods or if Edward will try to follow her!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review. I hope you had/are having a super awesome Easter!

 

Here is a teaser.

The buzzer on her intercom sounded and Bella grabbed her keys, opting to just meet Michael downstairs.  When she opened the door, she was surprised, she had expected him to be dumpy or balding or something, but he was in fact a very nice looking man. He had short, cropped blond hair and a charming smile. Surely an evening with this man wouldn’t be too bad, Bella mused.

“You look,” he paused, searching for the right word, “nice.”

Bella made an effort not to blanch at his lackluster compliment. Bella knew her dress wasn’t the most up to date style, but she was doing him a favor.  She tugged once more at the top of the dress and regretted it instantly because it brought Michael’s attention to her bust line. He looked away quickly but not before she noticed his disappointed face.

“Thanks,” she replied as she followed him into the car.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 May 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Love it!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review.

 

Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

Bella didn’t know what to expect when she opened the door to her apartment, but when everything seemed to be still intact, she let out the breath she had been holding.  Edward was still on the couch but he had managed to get out of his clothes again, clearly preferring them gone. Now he was perched on the edge of the cushion, staring intently at the television.

When Bella came around to see what was on, she nearly choked laughing. Edward was watching All My Children. The couple on screen was locked in a melodramatic embrace as he told her how much he loved her.

Edward stood up and came behind Bella while she chuckled at the screen. He grabbed her and spun her around, wrapping his arms around her like he had just seen.

“Yooou arrre ev-ery-thing tooo meee,” Edward repeated the same words the protagonist had recited, but this time, it didn’t sound so dumb to Bella. In fact her breath caught and she suddenly found herself very warm. Common sense told her he had no idea what he was saying, but it still sounded wonderful coming out of his mouth.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

 

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

It is wonderful how supportive the Mccartys have been!



Author's Response:

Thank you for all your support by reviewing.

Here is your teaser

A knock on their door stopped Edward from answering her. Bella looked surprised when she opened to find Emmett on the other side. He had a wide grin on his face.

 

“I’m here for Edward. He’s going to help me finish the fence.”

 

“Oh,” Bella said, and then turned to see if Edward was going to come out of the room naked. “He’s just…”

 

“Don’t worry about us,” Emmett’s voice boomed, “I got it taken care of.”

 

Bella pondered for a moment before she decided to just trust Edward and Emmett and go. On her way out though, she couldn’t help laughing when she heard Emmett yell, “What in the tarnation? Put some pants on boy!”

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wonderful begining!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing. Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

The ground around her was soft, softer than she remembered when she fell. Bella kept her eyes closed; if the animals that attacked were still around, she thought it was best if she played dead. After all, she had been passed out for who knows how long and she was still alive, lying still was her best bet.

She strained to listen, and when she didn't hear any noises, she opened her eyes. Bella gasped when it wasn't the open sky she saw but what appeared to be a roof of rock. Her surroundings were dark but not pitch black. It had been dusk when she ran from Ben, and the fact that it still was told her she hadn't been out long, or else it was days.  It hadn't felt like days.

She didn't have time to notice the small hole that was the only way in or out of the spacious cave or the fact that she was laying on a bed of moss, because a large snout came over her face and sniffed.

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

So good love it!



Author's Response:

Thanks

 

 Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

This time he woke from her voice. He loosened the slack of his arm but didn’t let her go. Instead, he nuzzled her neck with his chin. His breathing became very heavy very fast, and before she knew it, Bella was flat on her back and Edward was on all fours above her.

He looked down at her with a dark lust in his eyes. His chest rose and fell with his breath and Bella found herself between a rock and a hard place, literally. She dug out the painful pebble from behind her back and tossed it off to the side.

She looked up to the man hovering over her and acknowledged to herself that he was a good looking man. She waited to see what he might do, and when he did nothing, she decided to try and get out from underneath him. She could tell from the look in his eyes what he wanted, but he seemed unsure about how to get it.

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So wonderful! Looking forward to seeing what will happen next since she is thinking of leaving Edward and the wolves!



Author's Response:

Well she has to go home at some point. She can't just disapear, there would be search parties and stuff.

 

Thank you so much for your review, I appreciate every one. Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

“I won’t ever forget you,” she said to him, her eyes filling with tears. The words were strong and true, she knew that no matter where her life took her, there would never be anyone like Edward.

She turned to leave and felt him close behind. Wordlessly, she faced him and held up her hand. She took a few steps backwards, and once she was sure he would stay, she spun and walked into the woods. Needing to put a little distance between them, she broke into a light jog, and followed the path she knew led to the water.

Once she hit the bank, she slowed down, tears falling from her eyes. She reached up and smeared the wetness, and when she caught a movement out of the corner of her eye, she startled. The russet wolf walked up and sat down in front of her, looking at her sadly.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Love that she got a kiss goodbye! Cannot wait to read more!



Author's Response:

All your support is awesome. Thank you. Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

Bella tugged her sweater up around her shoulders, hugging the fabric to her. She walked across the street to the small park that was not much more than a few trees and a patch of grass, but it called to her. She loved nature and it was just the escape she needed from the noisy bar.

Forgoing the bench, Bella decided to sit down on the grass. She tucked her knees up and hugged them to her chest. And like most of her alone moments lately, she found her thoughts drifting to Edward and his wolves.

Bella stared hard at the tree line, wondering, if she hoped hard enough, if he would walk through those three trees and smile at her. It was silly, but it was a daydream, and she could have her reality any way she liked it there.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I cannot wait for your next update to see what will happen!



Author's Response:

I really appreciate you taking the time to review.

 

Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

Here is a teaser.

Bella sat in a tiny room with what she assumed was a two way mirror on one wall, and a coffee machine on the other. The table was wide enough that when the police officers sat down on the other side one wouldn’t be able to reach them unless they stood up and leaned over.

She hadn’t seen Edward since they had carted him away. He had shouted and struggled, and if there hadn’t have been three cops there to hold him down, he would have easily made his way over to the panicked girl.  Bella held the Styrofoam cup of water in her hands, making indents on it with her fingernails.

“We need you to fill out some paperwork,” Detective Banner said.

“Uh, what kind of paperwork?” she asked.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

 

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 May 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Loved it!



Author's Response:

 

I feel like a broken record, but you’ve all been so amazing, thank you!

 

Here is your teaser.

Bella nearly turned around but Edward’s anxiety seemed to drop a little once they reached the open grassy area.  They’d kept their hands locked together the entire walk, but once the open space was in front of him, he let go of it and took off running. A couple people took notice of him, not because it was that odd to see a man running through the opening, but because he had dropped down onto his hands to do it, galloping like a wild horse. Or in this case, a wolf.

Bella took off after him, not shouting out as to not draw any more attention to the odd situation.  She found it surprising that she couldn’t catch up to Edward on her feet, just assuming there was no way he could run faster than her that way.  He turned abruptly and Bella skidded to a stop as he approached her.

“You’re very fast,” she said, huffing.

Edward made a noise Bella could only classify as laughing, and she scowled at him. “Oh you think it’s funny to make me chase after you?”

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 May 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Great stuff!



Author's Response:

I can’t say thank you enough. So I’ll say it with a naughty teaser.

 

Once his hands were clean, Bella debated on what to do next; she made the mistake of looking up into his dark green eyes and found herself lost. She hadn’t known him long enough to feel such a pull to him and yet she found it harder to deny every minute they were together.  He was already the biggest part of her life and she felt more at home with him than she had ever felt with anyone.  And yet some part of her felt like she was taking advantage of this innocent man. How could he choose her when he didn’t even know there were choices?

Shaking her head, Bella brought the soap to Edward’s chest and went to work on his flawless physique.  She was so lost in her thoughts about what was right and what was wrong she hadn’t noticed how low the soap in her hand was dipping until Edward growled.  Or was that a moan? Either way, the sound was fantastic, and it shot right through Bella like a lightning bolt.  Bella dropped the soap just as Edward grabbed her hand; his grip was firm but not forceful.  He lowered her hand to him and she looked up to him to see his eyes pleading with her.

“Touch,” he said, but it was really more of a question. He was asking for relief.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Love the shower!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review, I think next chapter is the one everyone has been waiting for.

Here is your teaser

The library was one of the city’s oldest buildings and it was a sight to behold, with large bookcases that had been carved with lion heads on the side. The tallest shelves required the sliding ladders that moved throughout the library on a metal rack. The whole building had an almost mystical or magical feel to it, and Edward, with his fluid, animalistic way of moving, seemed to oddly fit in with the feel of the place.

They ventured to the back of the library, to set up station in the research area. There were computers as well as microfiches available for patrons and their research.  Bella let her hands run along some of the books on their way back, enjoying the feel of the spines along her fingertips.  Passing by the nature section, she stopped and grabbed a book, handing it to Edward as he sat down at a table.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Looking forward to them going camping!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review, I appreciate every one.

Here is your teaser

Bella sat on the stump and watched the wind blowing in the trees. She felt numb, but she preferred it because she knew as soon as she started to feel again, she would be bawling. It had been over an hour since Bella watched Edward take off into the trees, and as much as she didn’t want to admit it, she was pretty sure he wasn’t coming back.

They had arrived at the campsite, and Edward immediately began pacing it and sniffing each stone, tree, and bush in the area while Bella set up the campsite. She had thrown the sleeping bag and air mattress in the tent and brought the cooler from the car. She had been about to call out to him when he perked up as the wind blew across him, and he took off running into the woods.  Bella had dropped the cooler she’d been carrying and ran after him, but it was too late; by the time she had entered the woods, he was out of sight. She’d called out to him a couple times, but with no answer, she found herself back at camp, hoping he’d return.

That hope was fading fast.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

SO HOT!!!



Author's Response:

I heart all of your reviews so much, thank you so much!

Here is your teaser

The combination of the hot sun and her torrid fantasies playing in her head, Bella looked at the water as a welcome friend. While Edward lapped at the cool liquid, Bella quickly undressed and waded into the water. Her eyes darted back and forth to him until she was covered by the river.  Pushing her hands though the water, Bella felt better as the chill cooled her ache. She dropped her head back, letting her hair dip down.

 

Edward was stealthy on land; he could sneak up on anything. In the water, however, he became something akin to a bull in a china shop.  He sloshed through the water and Bella pulled her head up out of the water. She felt nervous to his approach, very aware that he was naked and even more aware that she was naked too.  Her nonchalant smile and stance wouldn’t have fooled anyone else but Edward.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Really love this story!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Wonderful stuff!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to review.

Here is your teaser

Putting her quarters in the machine, Bella pulled on the handle and grabbed a newspaper. She headed back up to her apartment and found Edward resting comfortably where she left him. Sitting in the chair next to him, she opened the paper and flipped right to the classified ads. Most of the jobs were easy to discount; not her profession, not in her area, and she certainly wasn’t about to be trained as a masseuse to work at a place called Sinderella’s.

 

Sighing at the apparent lack of suitable employment, Bella changed her focus and flipped to the real estate. She found the rural section and perused it, looking to see just how cheap a big chunk of land could get.  Unfortunately, even the plots without a building on them were too steep for Bella to afford. Bella felt overwhelmed, a feeling she was getting sick of. Things weren’t going to just work out magically for her and she was beginning to see just how long the road was ahead of her.

 

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Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Looking forward to finding out if she will end up taking the job on the farm!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review.

Here is your teaser

Sitting next to her, he wrapped his arm around her shoulder and pulled her to him. “Bella is sad?” he asked, and she folded her legs up onto the couch to get deeper into the cuddle.

“No, Bella is frustrated, I’m frustrated.” She had taught him ‘I’ and ‘you’ but after speaking in third person for so long, she had a hard time breaking the habit.

“What is frustrated?” he inquired in what Bella had dubbed his studious tone. He was interested in everything, and as soon as Bella had taught him enough to communicate his questions, he had become very serious in learning everything he could.

“It means I feel bad because things aren’t working out the way I want them to,” she replied.

 

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Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Love it! So excited Edward is communicating!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review.

Here is your teaser

When woman spoke about her husband and her eyes glowed with both mischief and love.  The look made Bella think of Edward again, causing Rosalie to give her a knowing look as she led her towards the pasture.  They past a small chicken coop along the way and Rosalie informed Bella that she would need to gather the eggs every morning around five so that breakfast would be ready by six for Mr. McCarty.

 

“The cows will go to the barn themselves at night. They are very particular.  They need to be milked twice a day. It’s something that I enjoy doing, but five is getting to be a bit much so I would have you help with that.”

 

“Uh,” Bella stuttered, “I’ve never actually milked a cow before.”

 

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Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

So great as always! Really looking forward to what Edward will think of the move!



Author's Response:

I really appreciate you reviewing.

Here is your teaser

Bella was feeling the after effects of Edward’s touching and so her step was quick as they headed back. As soon as they were in the building, Bella turned and reached up, pulling Edward down for a kiss. He returned the kiss eagerly but before he could make his move, she was gone again, running up the stairs.  He caught up to her quickly but just kept his hands on her hips as she unlocked the door.

 

When the door swung open, Edward tensed and Bella’s eyes scanned the room to see why.

 

“Bella, hi.” The landlord stood up from where he had been crouched down by her wall of boxes. “I just came to do the final walkthrough and you weren’t home, so I thought I’d just start.”

 

Bella looked at him skeptically but didn’t really know what to say. She was pretty sure he didn’t have permission to enter her apartment without telling her first but she was moving out, so what harm could it have done.

 

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Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Love their first day on the farm!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for being patient with this chapter, I really appreciate the review.

Here is your teaser

Bella had spent nearly the entire night after they returned home explaining to Edward what he could and couldn’t do on the farm. She knew she had been a bit stringent on the rules, but until she found something Edward could help with, it was best he stayed inside.  But as she stared at her front door she saw Edward had a different idea.

 

There was a bit of distance so Bella couldn’t make out exactly everything but she could see he was naked. Bella was horrified but she had no idea what she could do.  She was about to excuse herself when Rosalie gasped.

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Oh Cliffie! Loved the puppy play comment!



Author's Response:

I really appreciate your review!

Here is your teaser

With a vulnerability Bella had come to love he looked down, tucking his chin in against his shoulder. “I no help wolves. I no help Bella.”

 

Bella had never really considered how the pack dynamics had worked. While it was obvious the wolves had treated Edward as family she had never really thought about what his role was. He was no were near as fast and while he could take down small prey; she doubted he could take something as hefty as a deer down to help feed the pack.

 

And now that he was in her world, the world he was meant to be born into, there was a chance for him to be helpful but he didn’t know how. Bella felt horrible for rejecting his morning offering when she saw the reason behind it. Edward wanted to learn, but he also wanted to work, to contribute to his new pack…her.

 

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Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Great stuff! Love how Emmett wants to help Edward grow!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing, here is your teaser

 

Just when she thought she couldn’t take it anymore, Jake rose up and walked to Edward.  The movement was muted, each paw seemed to slowly rise and hover in the air before dropping back down to the ground. When he reached Edward, he lowered his head and met Edward’s cheek with his muzzle.

Jake’s giant furry face met Edward’s clean shaven one, his neck nearly wrapped around Edward’s and his head resting against the copper hair.  When the action broke, Edward turned his head toward Bella but his attention was short lived as Sam exited the cave. The snarl was instant and Jake immediately took a step back.

 

 

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Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Poor Edward! At least he still has Bella!



Author's Response:

I really appreciate you taking the time to review.

Here is a teaser for the next chapter

 

Later that day Bella was working in the garden, filling her baskets with the herbs Rosalie has asked for, when she heard a yell and the rev of an engine. She looked up and watched as Emmett’s truck came barreling down the driveway and through the fence of the pasture, scaring the cows and causing them to run toward the far side.

 

Bella panicked, wondering if Emmett had a heart attack or something while driving. She dropped her basket and started running toward the truck that was now coming to a stop.  She leapt over the fallen posts and just as she was approaching, the passenger side door flung open and out stepped a laughing Emmett.

 

He glanced back at Bella and shouted, “Your boy here likes speed.”

 

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Wonderful! So sad to see it end!



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Futuretake-Daddy Savage/The Wedding

Beautiful!



Author's Response:

Thanks

Summary:

 

 

 

Isabella and Edward Cullen have been married a little over four years, and been together as a couple since they were seventeen.

When Bella stumbles across some devastating evidence of Edward's infidelity on the night she is to announce her pregnancy hearts are broken,will the couple be able to move on and repair?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 60066 Read Count: 30231
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Jun 2012
Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Great start!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So good! Can't believe Edward would think that it would be ok now that he broke it off everything would go back to normal!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I really liked what his dad said to him, "Was your stress relief worth it?"

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Love it! Really looking forward to the next update!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

So great!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

Beautiful!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26 -Lemon Alert-

Good stuff!

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143205
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

So hapy you have moved your story here! Love the blinkie! SO HOT!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 May 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

So great they are back together! Really looking forward to your next update!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 May 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Wonderful chapter!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Great chapter!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Crazy! I had no idea she was still alive! Great chapter!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Looking forward to seeing what will happen next with Edward and Bella!

Summary:

 

 

 

A heartbreaking tail of Edward and Bella in foster care. How do you become a "normal" person after being abused in every way, brainwashed, and manipulated. can they make it life together or will it rip them apart?

This story contains physcial, mental, and sexual abuse. slight slash. this story may offend some, so don't read if you offend easily. very occ.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85652 Read Count: 19356
[Report This] Published: 08 May 2011 Updated: 04 Oct 2011
Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Looking forward to see what James is planning!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 May 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Holly shit!!!!!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

It is crazy how Aro twisted it to be about Edward, even though I know he is in the wrong as well. But it still is sad!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 May 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Sad that Edward is able to live his life, yet Bella still is in the same routine. Love this story!

Summary:

 

 

 

 

Late one night while house sitting for her dad's friend, Isabella gets caught

acting out one of her fantasies by none other then the star of them. Carlisle Cullen. OOC/ BxC

 

 

This story contains graphic sexual situations and is not suitable for those under the age of eighteen.

 

 

*UPDATE*story has be beta'd and I plan on writing another Chapter or two.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Drama, Erotica, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3384 Read Count: 6373
[Report This] Published: 10 May 2011 Updated: 10 May 2011
Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So hot! I would love for this to be more than a one shot!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is gifted Isabella Swan as a reward for a job well done.  The more time he spends with her, the more he becomes enamored of her.  Will he be able to make amends for his behavior and win the girl’s heart?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 50513 Read Count: 112136
[Report This] Published: 15 May 2011 Updated: 16 Oct 2013
Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Glad Edward is wising up! Good Stuff!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Loved it!

My Surrender by KareBear1965 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 223]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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ALERT: POLY & Bd/Sm  Carlisle/Bella/Jasper

18 year old Bella has always been at the top of her class even graduating early from high school and getting accepted to Dartmouth on a full scholarship. She enjoyed two years of great grades and loved college. For the first time during her junior year she starts to struggle not in one class but two. She makes a plan to go and confront the two professors who just happen to be cousin and share an office even though they are in separate departments. What she did not know was that they have been scheming to get what they want the innocent Miss Swan.

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Carlisle
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75116 Read Count: 57616
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2011 Updated: 13 Dec 2012
Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

HOT!



Author's Response:

Thank you

 

Hugs

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Love it! Love baby's name!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.

 

Hugs

Back to Boston by lmw Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 390]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella decided to leave her college life when she was twenty one to tend to her family and matters she was forced to deal with head on.  Four years later, she goes back to finish her degree.  She is a very serious student and wants to focus on her degree adn the mystery she is hiding.

Once back in Boston, she meets a kind stranger at her work who seems interested in her.  Her lousy teacher's assistant is hot, but seems to be a bit conceited.  What roll will each of these men play in her life?

Secrest are dealt with in Boston head on and feelings are explored.  Follow Bella as she finishes her degree and tries to learn how to with  living a life once her secrets are reveled.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 261540 Read Count: 63775
[Report This] Published: 05 Jun 2011 Updated: 24 Jun 2012
Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven

SO i am guessing Carslile is Edwards dad! Love the story!



Author's Response:

Hello and thanks for reading/commenting!

Things will get intersting in the next few chapters...promise!  I'm so glad you are enjoying the story!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Out Take One

Great outtake!!!!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it.  I don't know if there will be more, but I wanted to show Edward and carlisle's relationship.

Update soon!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three

Curious to find out if she will respond to Edward!



Author's Response:

Hello and thanks for reading/commenting.  Bella and Edward will be chatting in the nexxt chapter...just wait and see!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four

Looking forward to next update to find out what is going on!



Author's Response:

There will be answers in the next chapter (it should be posted this weekend).

Thanks for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five

WOW! Amazing chapter! I love how she thinks Dr. C is better than Prince Eric!



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to read and comment.  Dr. C will be around for a little bit..maybe longer.  I hope you are enjoying the story!  Next update should be in a few days.

-Lisa

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six

Great stuff!



Author's Response:

Glad you are enjoying it!  thanks for reading/writing!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven

I am a true Bella/Edward fan, but in this case I like carlisle! Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks and I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve

Great stuff! I can't wait for them all to go back to Boston and see what will happen next!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and leaving a comment.

The next chapter will open right when they get back (unless I change it...again).

I'm hoping ot have an update by mid week, but realisticly it might not be until next weekend.

Thanks agian!

-Lisa

 

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Fourteen

So wonderful!  Cannot wait to see how the dinner party will turn out with Edward and Carlisle being there!



Author's Response:

Working on the next chapter as we speak.  Thank you for reading/commenting.

-Lisa

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Outtake Three

Great stuff!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm hoping for an update this weekend!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter Nineteen

Wonderful!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! glad you liked it.  Thank you for reading.  Hopefully the next update will be soon.

-Lisa

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter Twenty Two

Amazing chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm skipping over the out take because I didn't have enough for it.  I don't know if I will post it later down the road.  Working on the next chapter now! :)

-Lisa

PS-Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter Twenty Five

So scary! Poor Bella! I am glad Edward is going with her so she is not alone. I can't wait to see what will happen next!



Author's Response:

Edward isn't a bad guy...he's just a little confused and compulsive.  I promise he won't be a creep in this story.  i don't like creepy Edward.  Edward is going to be key though in something that happens in the next chapter.  Cna't wait to get your reaction with that one!


Thanks for reading and reviewing!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter Twenty Six

I am thinking that Carlisle left his phone somewhere that Tanya could access it. I don't think he did anything with her. Amazing chapter!



Author's Response:

We'll find out a few chapters down the road what happens.  Edward isn't going to bring it up at this particular moment because Bella is too stressed out.  Carlisle isn't goign to say anything about it.  I promise, there will be a resolution to it.

Thank you so much for reading and leaving soem feedback.  It means a lot to me.

-Lisa

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter Twenty Seven

Oh cliffie. I think she stole Carlisle phone and made it look like he cheated!



Author's Response:

Did you liek the cliffie? 

Thank you for reading/ commenting.  I'm working on the next chapter now. Hopefully it won't take 2 weeks to post this time!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter Twenty Eight

Carlisle was amazing! So great!



Author's Response:

I love Carlisle and I love writing Molly.  He's a great guy.

Thank you fro reading and commenting!

-Lisa