Reviews by Sweetie7smiled
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is a humble young girl determined to prove she's serious about making art. Edward Cullen is the pragmatic debonair foreigner, focused on his career and duties. On the surface, Bella and Edward may have nothing in common, until a chance encounter in a hotel hallway sparks a mysterious attraction and a deep need to keep the connection alive. Will true love prove strong enough to overcome the secrets and challenges that lay ahead? Or will they succumb to the pressure and expectations of the people that think they know best? 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 78741 Read Count: 29950
[Report This] Published: 04 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Nov 2015
Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 3: The First Meeting

Fascinating story!  I'm liking it so far.  Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 4: The Impulsive Chase

Wonderful and innocent.  This is very sweet!  Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 5: The Unforeseen Consequences

Wow.  Neat!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing! Hope you keep enjoying the story a86; xo Mina

Catharsis by TwiliteAddict Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Carlisle speaks to a panicked Bella and Edward on their honeymoon at Isle Esme. He believes Bella is pregnant, but it's definately not a normal pregnancy. Follow Bella's pregnancy through Carlisle's eyes and mind. Contains medical terminology and graphic descriptions.  Banner by Fuzzylittlewingedthing.

Part of the Carlisle and Esme:  Through Their Eyes Series

Stephenie Meyer owns all of Twilight.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Carlisle/Esme, Edward/None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Carlisle and Esme: Through Their Eyes
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7549 Read Count: 428
[Report This] Published: 17 Oct 2010 Updated: 17 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was neat!  Thanks for writing!

An Eternity to Love by mizzdee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 282]
Summary:

Best friends at 5, in love at 15, ready to marry at 17. Edward and Bella were destined for forever. In 1918, tragedy fell upon the couple, ripping them apart. A very different Edward and Bella meet again years later and this time…eternity can be theirs.

This is an AU fic, loosely following the book with my own personal flair.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 150252 Read Count: 45787
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2011 Updated: 01 Jan 2014
Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

A difficult story, but interesting!  Thanks for writing!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A personal ad for a fake fiancée leads to something they never expected. Two lonely souls discover that faking it might be the best thing that ever  happened to them. ExB AH 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Stories to read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, Bella's Must Reads!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125397 Read Count: 141571
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: A Little Help from My Friends

Lol!  What an interesting beginning!  This is neat; thanks for writing!

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 10 May 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Positivity

Neat story!  Thanks for writing!

I remain, Yours by momatu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 469]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After unexpectedly being given an antique desk and finding a letter written by Edward to his cousin over nine decades earlier in a hidden compartment, Bella, on a whim, decides to respond and starts them on a journey neither could have ever imagined. 

Perhaps there are some things we aren't meant to understand, just accept....

This story will eventually contain character death.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Humor, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Can't wait for an update, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 419567 Read Count: 77530
[Report This] Published: 26 May 2012 Updated: 09 Mar 2013
Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Wonderful chapter!  I like seeing how realistically awkward certain normal human activities turn out to be for vampires to pursue.  Cute!

I'm glad Bella is 'awake' now.  I'm guessing that she's going to stay that way?  Maybe she's going to move up to Forks with Charlie soon (or at least, after Renee is married)?  I wonder if it will be in Phoenix (less likely) or Forks (more likely) that Edward really sees the desk for the first time.

Great responses and desperation on his part.  I'm really looking forward to your favorite chapters!  Thanks for writing!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it! 

Something to look forward to - the next chapters are set in Forks and *someone* starts connecting dots!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

The review for this chapter on FFn was just my *first* impression, so you know.  This is the rest.  :)

I'm guessing that Alice saw Bella get injured... something bloody and life-threatening... and she thinks Edward has snapped in response to her blood.
Of course, Edward can't stand the life-threatening aspect of whatever she saw... and so they'll end up finding him having rescued her from it.
She wouldn't be cliff-diving, would she?  I don't think she is camping with Charlie.  So does that put her at home?  I don't think she's prone to suicide, as painful as her life is... so maybe he'll end up saving her from unwanted visitors?

Very wonderful chapter!  You're writing them so well!  :)  Looking forward to more!  Thank you!



Author's Response:

No, no cliff diving.  You're not the first person to suggest that.  And yes, she is camping with her father, Billy, and Jacob.  As for the rest - I'm afraid you'll just have to wait till Saturday!

I've been nominated for Fic of the Week on The Lemonade Stand!  There are only hours left to vote, and currently I'm in second place!  Please vote for IrY!

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Wonderful chapter!  I'm so glad to see Edward knows who she is to him without a doubt, and that Bella's sorrow has been a little patched for the time being.

Great question to end on for Carslisle!

And I wonder what Jacob will think of Edward's trace.  Will he have enough focus of mind to track out the bear and realize what motives may have been behind the vampire's obnoxious presence?  Combined with Bella's safety, of course.  Somehow, I doubt he'd get that far.

Thanks again for writing such a wonderful story!



Author's Response:

That was one of my favorite lines, when Edward asks Carlisle who 'Edward' is.  If you like that, wait till you see the next chapter!

Edward is always so restrained, I wanted to have him react the way any other 17-year-old boy would react when he's really 91-year-old vampire and an adolescent werewolf is crushing on his mate.  In the past, I've refered to Edward (as a human) being mad enough to spit venom, now he actually can, so I wanted him to go ahead and do it. I don't think Jacob would pick up much of the bear though, because just like Bella scent being masked in Eclipse by Jacob's scent, I think Edward's scent would mask the bear, especially with how thickly he laid it on. 

I'm so glad you like it!  Thanks for reviewing!

 

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Neat chapter!  Poor Edward; it's wonderful for him to know, but so painful to feel he has to deny it.

I don't quite see how he can imagine that Bella will get better with a goodbye letter, though.  He's already seen what his death has done to her; why would this be any different?  He's thinking *too* wishfully, that she could move on.  Even Alice has seen better.  Why isn't he comprehending this?  Because he is afraid to, I suppose.  Sigh.

He needs to give her a chance to reply.

Anyway, great chapter!  Thanks for writing!



Author's Response:

Edward knows exactly what Bella needs to hear.  He doesn't want to make her forget him or make her think he doesn't love her anymore like in New Moon, he wants her to remember him but be able to let him go, which she really does need to do.  Edward is too different from the man she fell in love with for her to be able to move from one to the other.  She needs to mourn the Edward who really did die before she can love the one who was born.

I know it seems like it, but I really won't wait til chapter 49 to bring them together.  I think its in chapter 46.  (Joking, just joking!  It's coming up soon, really!)

Thanks for reviewing!

Summary:

Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.

Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923116
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2015
Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 73

It's neat to see Edward and Bella happy again!

Wisp by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 871]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward wins more than he bargained for at what was supposed to be a friendly poker game. AH.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304154 Read Count: 221078
[Report This] Published: 06 Jun 2012 Updated: 23 Nov 2014
Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

It looks like they've found a name for the kitten... :)

Good story.

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Neat story!  Sweet interactions.  Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Very interesting!  When they were talking about how to encourage Wisp to draw Gerandy, I couldn't help but think about connecting the idea with the pair of James' pictures she's already seen:  one of just him, then one of him behind bars (which has that sense of finality and justice suggested in it).  If they showed her that, then right under the first put the picture she drew of Gerandy... and perhaps a fourth picture of an empty cell (or no picture at all) showing her what they wanted to do with him, would that help her understand?

Of course, this bible discovery is a lot more impressive.  It's really fascinating!  I bet they'll be able to communicate with her very effectively this way...  Really neat!

Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Oh- poor Wisp!  I think that last verse reminded her of the 'purpose' she's been inundated with, and can't but feel is hers.  That's an awful reality to feel. 

I'm glad they're understanding better, slowly but surely.  :)  Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Wow.  Good chapter.  I like Rose.  :)  Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I almost wonder if it could be a good thing for Edward to seek the grant Dr. Lawton is striving for... simply because, if done right, it could allow him the support of professionals while keeping the power of her care in his hands... and negate any effort on her part to do the same.

Of course, maybe it wouldn't really work that way... I shudder to think about how her sexual conditioning would appeal to any marginally questionable characters who learned of it.  She could too easily be taken advantage of.  That, in and of itself, suggests her story is better kept from public knowledge.

Difficult situation, good story.  :)  Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Oh, that's a sweet 'mother' moment!  It really would help Wisp's case a lot, I imagine, if Carlisle & Esme could officially adopt her.

What a nasty sickness... but enlightening in its own way.  I wonder if Wisp could/would draw a picture of 'Daddy', now that they know what to ask for?

Neat chapter!

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Neat progress for Wisp!  And so sweet that so many were willing to help her.  Neat chapters!  Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Wow!  Good stuff.  I'm glad Edward is 'My Edward' now!  :)  Thanks for writing!

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 324349
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Our New Beginning

:)  Neat!

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas

Nice reunion.  :)  I'm glad they both understand each other better now... enough to truly be a team, I think.  More power to them! 

:)  Thanks for writing!

Summary:

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A/U Edward is an ancient vampire searching for the love of his life that was ripped from him over 3 thousand years ago. Reincarnation theme. Canon pairing.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25866 Read Count: 18012
[Report This] Published: 20 Jul 2012 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This looks neat!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Based on X-Men movies, a bit of the 90s cartoon. Jean Grey/Phoenix returns after saving everyone at Alkali Lake...changed.  Scott is dead and Logan attempts to connect with her. Logan and Jean have one night, Jean disappears and joins the Brotherhood and gives birth to a baby girl. Logan’s child.

The mutant war forces Jean to sacrifice herself. With Professor X presumed dead, there is no one leading and holding the X-Men together, Storm can only do so much. Logan has disappeared, grief stricken at the loss of Jean, at his hands and wanders the globe.

Jean’s baby is found, presumed abandoned and turned over to foster care. The child was nearly two years old when she was discovered deep in a forest hideaway with no identification, she barely spoke, but she was strong and her eyes showed that she was wise, intelligent, seeing. The authorities posted signs and made TV appearances pleading for someone to come forward and claim the little beauty that had been dubbed Bella. Her deep, soulful brown eyes seemed to peer into your very core. There was nothing that those who care for her would not do.

This is her story - learning, growing, understanding who and what she is.

Pure Perfection Banner

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Categories: Twilight, X-Men, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Sci-Fi
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 101999 Read Count: 22112
[Report This] Published: 24 Aug 2012 Updated: 22 Oct 2012
Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Wow- very interesting meeting!  :)

Thanks for writing!



Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I appreciate the feedback.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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In 1843, Queen Victoria reined alongside etiquette and protocol. Everything was judged from who you were to what you owned and how much status you had.

 

Can a small farm girl from Lord Cullen's estate bring life and happiness back to his son? Will Master Edward see her for what she is as a person, or who she is by birth? And what does Lady Cullen have up her sleeve?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Historical, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89224 Read Count: 248473
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2012 Updated: 04 May 2013
Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Lol about your hints... and to answer your question:  I think not.  :)  It's not as if Bella won't be going into *town* for a whole year, after all... (no matter the propriety of the action; it's just the way it must work for her.)  Very interesting!  Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Lol; good for you, Bella! (about the governess)  :)  Neat story; thanks for writing!

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 9: September 28th 1843

Neat meeting!  Sweet story; thanks for writing!

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Lol- this teaser is fascinating!  :)

Neat story you've got going here!  Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Wow- that was unexpected!  And so very kind of them. 

What a shock it will be for her to wake up to!  :)

Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Neat and sweet interactions!  I like that.  :)

Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Neat chapter!  Thanks for writing! 

Summary:

Bella the teen mom. Edward the sexy olderman. How do they meet and can they have more? Lets stalk them and see...

Very little angst and as sweet as i can write!

 

thanks to christagbanners for the banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35295 Read Count: 95347
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2012 Updated: 15 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Neat story!  Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This is cute.  :)

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Congratulations, Jacob!  That's maturity speaking.  :)

Summary:

Edward spends his nights struggling to fall asleep, but when he does, he’s haunted by a beautiful woman who’s scared of something he can’t see. One night reality and his dreams intersect and the results will change both of their lives forever, because the only chance they have at being whole, is being together. This is a charity fic at the moment, with the first chapter having been posted in Fandom 4 TwiFanG and the second chapter going into the Hurricane Sandy compilation. Stay tuned for more information.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15587 Read Count: 759
[Report This] Published: 03 Nov 2012 Updated: 06 Feb 2013
Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Neat story!  I'm looking forward to more.  :)  Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

:)  Neat!  Congratulations on the proposal!  Hopefully his family will accept her better once they make it official. 

Unchained by Joce_Cullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Bella and Edward met under dire circumstances, coming together to fight for their lives. In the process, will they be able to find something more? AU/AH BxE

If you're interested in making a banner for this, let me know. I need one for this story!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure, Romantic Comedy
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8363 Read Count: 479
[Report This] Published: 06 Dec 2012 Updated: 06 Dec 2012
Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was neat!  A little vague at the end, perhaps, but I liked your story!  Thanks for writing!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A letter to Santa prompts an intervention Dickens’ style to step in.  After being visited by ghosts separately, both Bella and Edward go on journeys through the other’s past, present and future.

 

They will not make the journey alone. Edward will be joined by the females of his family. While Bella is joined by the Cullen men.

 

Will Edward learn anything? Bella? What about Miss Rose?

 

Charles Dickens’s  A Christmas Carol with a Twilight twist.

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Posted orginally on Fanfiction


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37436 Read Count: 5179
[Report This] Published: 13 Dec 2012 Updated: 21 Dec 2012
Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I'm guessing Emmett.  :) 

This looks neat; thanks for writing!

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

This is fascinating!  I'm very curious to see how you treat this! 

And, I'm guessing Bella's Grandma Marie might have been who visited Edward.

Neat chapter; Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Neat chapter!  Nice insight into Bella's past.  Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Wonderful chapter!  I'm really enjoying this.  Thanks for writing!

Summary:

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Once a week we spend time together, showing with music and dance everything we can't say with words. How many lessons will it take us to say the only three little words that matter the most? AH, ExB.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17100 Read Count: 1659
[Report This] Published: 17 Mar 2013 Updated: 31 Mar 2013
Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Lesson Three: Loving

Neat story!



Author's Response: Hi there: Thanks for reading and I hope you like the last chapter of this little tale. :-) Have a great week. Love, CL82

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Lesson Four: Forever

Neat story!  Thanks for writing!



Author's Response:

Aww, glad you liked it and thank you for reading. :-)

Have a great Sunday.

Love, CL82

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A homeless boy, hitch-hiking in the snow, a woman on her own, running from an abusive relationship. Is she crazy to stop, or are their paths destined to cross? Can this mismatched pair find succour and salvation together, or will their pasts intrude and drive them apart?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119972 Read Count: 27843
[Report This] Published: 27 Mar 2013 Updated: 20 Apr 2013
Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Samaritan

Neat!  :)

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Epilogue

This has been a wonderful story.  Thanks for writing!

Summary:


NOTE::: CROSSOVER~~ TWILIGHT/PSYCH


When Shawn and Gus are trying to get a simple invitation to go to a National Police Convention a murder happens that effects the Psych gang. They want to use Shawns psychic abilities to find out who or what done it. While the Cullens are trying to keep the killings contained so that the Volturi doesn't find out. It is all over the news and Shawn starts seeing things in a whole new way. But so does Bella


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Edward/OC, Bella/OC
Genre: Action, Adventure, Drama, Humor, Mystery, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Romantic Comedy
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15717 Read Count: 397
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2013 Updated: 04 Jul 2018
Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Lol, this looks fun!  Thanks for writing!



Author's Response:

Thank you sooo much for reading me!

I hope you continue to enjoy the story. I have finally finished it and will post until complete.

xoxo

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Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella works at an ice cream parlour and lives a life that constantly leaves her in problematic situations. Edward Masen, fireman and regular customer at Bella's work, seems like the perfect candidate to help out.


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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7691 Read Count: 992
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2013 Updated: 10 Jun 2013
Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Butterscotch and Butterflies

Sweet!  :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

What happens when dysfunction meets dysfunction? Neither Edward nor Bella are prepared when fate brings them together. Will they be able to overcome the odds and find happiness? Or will the ghosts of their past keep them apart? Canon coupling, but non-canon families. Dark themes, high emotion, and standing tissue alert. AH

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed, to read
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 142814 Read Count: 100027
[Report This] Published: 12 Jun 2013 Updated: 04 May 2015
Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

I think Charlie will be coherent; I certainly hope so.  But I don't think his agitation was only about the cancer.  Certainly, that set it off, but he'll still be 3 years in the past.  Edward's 'sudden' relationship with her has to be a big surprise.  Not that the effects of cancer treatment 3 years later weren't enough to begin with.

Neat story!  I really do hope they find their HEA.  :)  Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Thanks for writing.  :)

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Neat Emmett.  :)  Nice story!

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Oh wow.  What a painful story.  I'm glad they're sharing!  :)

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Wow.  Thanks for the understanding!  They really are not so different after all.  :)

Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Wow.  So much going on for them, and in an easily scary way.  But it was so wonderful that Edward asked to marry her... and that she wants to marry him.  That part of it all is so very sweet!  Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Wonderful with Charlie!  Perhaps things are going to start looking up.  Great story; thanks for writing!

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Neat chapter!  So glad for the great news.  Hoping for Charlie to be safe.  Thanks for writing!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by the wonderful and talented DeeBelle1.

Some so called friends invite Bella out for her birthday, and send her to a BDSM club as a prank. What happens when the owner of the club sees her? Will he be able to set aside his Dom nature? Will she ever believe she deserves to have her needs met? Will he be able to set aside his wants and desires to meet those needs, or will she find her true desire is to submit to him? AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204571 Read Count: 334478
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2013 Updated: 31 Dec 2013
Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Ugh!  I am surprised (and almost appalled) that the Cullens were as polite to her as they have been - Renee is so far in the wrong it is evil.  Sigh.  Best wishes for what's upcoming!  Thanks for writing!



Author's Response:

Well without a doubt I think it is a clean sweep, everyone wants to either: kill, beat or maim Renee.  Nikky and I both want to thank you all for telling us all of this.  To us it means more knowing we were able to evoke those kinds of feelings in our readers, than any of you can know. 
There have been a few people laying threats about bring charges or else I will walk from the story.  I want to address that by saying, Bella is not as weak as she used to be, and trust that the cards will fall exactly as they should.  Renee’s story is set in stone for us, and we will not deviate from how we planned it.  Neither of us wants to say, Renee will go to jail and Renee will suffer this and that way ... What we want is for this story to unfold as it was and is intended to do so.  All we can say is trust in us enough to know that we will not let a story go with things unfinished. 
Now we do need to address the several comments about how Edward needed to step up and be the Dom and take control at the hospital and how Renee wouldn’t have been allowed to do what she did.  Sadly if a person is an adult and is unmarried and doesn’t have a power of attorney signed over to someone else, medical choices fall to your nearest blood relative.  Edward trying to control things would’ve most likely gotten him removed from the premises, and we’re sure you’ll appreciate how well he brings out the Dom soon.  Some questioned if the hospital would’ve kept Renee out being it was her fault, but unless the police were involved the hospital is in a hard situation. 
Finally we want to say again that we will continue to post every Sunday night/Monday morning, until the story is fully written.  Once the story is fully finished we will post twice a week until it is completely posted.  Thank you so very much for reading our story, reviewing our story and loving our story so much.
Nikky & Kasi~

Teaser: 
“I love you Mom, and want you in my life,” Bella says.

I feel my heart start to race, but I hold back the yelp that wants to come out. I’ll beg her if I have to; I need her in my life. I can’t live without this girl. She may’ve only been in my life over a short period of time, but she has quickly become everything to me.

“And I hope one day you can forgive me,” Bella says looking to me as she speaks. “But I need Edward more, a lot more. I know that I will never be enough for you or for him, no matter what I do. I know that Edward deserves so much more than what I can give him.” 

I shake my head and walk in. “Not true,” I say with a smile.

“But, here’s the thing, he’s a good man, Mom. He has such a big heart and he would never hurt me physically in any way. When—and I know it will be when—he leaves me, he will make sure that I am still okay. He makes me happy. He makes me want to live.  He’s the reason I’m still alive.” Bella’s eyes fall to my feet.

“Don’t start that silliness again, Isabella.” Renee starts chastising my girl. 

I walk right up to Renee and glare at her. “Quit treating her like a pet; she’s your daughter.”

“Say your goodbyes, Isabella. You’re coming home with Phil and me.”

Bella shakes her head. “No! I can’t and won’t leave with you. I love you Mom and I will be here when you forgive me, but I’m staying with Edward, if he’ll still have me.”

I move quickly to Bella and look into her eyes. “You’re more than enough for me. You’re so much more than I ever dreamed of. I’ll always have a place for you in my life.” I lean my forehead against Bella's.

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

This is a neat story.  I like your presentation of the D/s ideology, by way of key characters who actually make a sincere effort at it.  This helps me to be able to appreciate the intent of the underlying doctrine better than I could before, even while I don't necessarily agree with it. 

I'm definitely looking forward to all the horrendous creeps of the story getting their rightful comeuppance.  Thanks for writing!



Author's Response:

Well now seems like the major majority of you are all kinds of happy with Bella and Edward and how their progressing together.  We love it, Bella is finding her strength in Edward, but Edward is gaining and coming into a deeper strength too.  Many of you want redemption right away against Charlie and Jacob and the rest of the bad apples, and it will come, it’s still simmering and the dish of revenge is not quite ready to be served.  Next two chapters we will be given the honor of meeting Renee.  The way the story is going on our side there will be no more than 25 chapters total.  We have 18 written, and working on 19 and 20 now.  As soon as we are done, we will start posting faster.  I assure you that wrapping this story is one of our top priorities.   Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky & Kasi~

 

Teaser:  Vicky smiles at me and then looks at Bella. “If you get tired of his old ass, call me,” she says as she hands her number to my girl.

I glare at Vicky.

“Oh, don’t pout, Edward. I will see your girl every Thursday from now on.”

I shake my head at Vicky, who is grinning widely.

I guide Bella out of the office, but then hear Vicky calling out for me. I turn and look at her.

“Tell James I’m ready for my second shot.”

I tilt my head and Vicky wiggles her eyebrows at me.

I smirk, shaking my head. “Will do, Vicky. Have good day.” I walk Bella out and see she’s still holding in her laughter.  “It’s okay, Little Girl, you can laugh. What did you think of Vicky, Little Girl?”

Bella smiles at me. “Sir, your girl thinks she is nice, but she seems like she walks to the beat of her own drum.”

I chuckle. “Little girl, Vicky has her own orchestra.  Let’s go to lunch.”

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I worry a little about the fact that hospitals would still respect Renee's or Charlie's claim over Edward's were Bella not able to speak for herself.  Maybe some would think it's too early for marriage, but I really hope they consider it very soon.

In such a sexual context as this story presents, I am impressed that Edward has been so patient and unpressuring with her.  It's a credit to him.

Thanks for writing!



Author's Response:

Hey, thanks for reading and review Meeting Her Needs.  Nikky and I are very happy with the amount of pleasure most of you are finding in this story, so THANK YOU SO MUCH.  There haven’t been very many questions or things to touch base on this week, so I’ll try to do it all here.  Someone wanted to know why the lemon wasn’t longer and more detailed.  The lemon was written the way it was because we want this story to be more about the story and less about the lemons themselves.  We had questions and comments regarding the BDSM in this fic too.  The BDSM in this fic and the actions within this fic of the lifestyle in and of itself have come from many conversations with people from the lifestyle.  Not everything is intense tie you up, spank you, kneel and crawl.  It is a matter of respect, choices and trust.  Please don’t ever think that we would want to write a story just for the sole purpose of making someone another person’s punching bag or pet (in the term of treating someone as if they are not human.)  We will continue to post once a week until the story is completely written.  Nikky is currently working on chapter 20 and there are five more after that to write.  If you ever have additional questions, you can find us on FACEBOOK look for the group called TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction.  You can also email us at our screen name all lower case at gmail.  Thanks and see you Sunday with the update.

Nikky & Kasi~

Teaser:  “I–I need ... I can’t sit here. I just need time ...” Bella gets up quickly and almost runs out of the room. 

I sigh looking at Phil. “She’ll be fine—she has to be—we just need to be there for her when she needs us.”

I nod and get up to start looking around for her. I looked throughout the house first, which takes me almost a half hour to do. I was starting to panic that she actually left our home. I open the back patio door and I see her, and instantly I feel myself calm.

“Beautiful,” I say when I approach her, as she works in the dirt of the flower bed she started with my mother. She stops and turns to me and I give her time, knowing she is going to talk to me now.

“Dr. Banner thinks I have been suppressing and curtailing my anger. I’m starting to think that he’s right. I’m just so angry right now, but mainly I’m mad at myself.”

I frown and tilt my head in question at her.

“Edward, I let them—I let them treat me that way. I was always trying to please them. I never asked for anything other than their time. I would always say it was fine, when they forgot my birthday, or anything that was connected to me. I let Charlie push me out of his life. I would always sit back and pretend that didn’t kill me to see him call Leah his princess, or listen to him tell her he was proud of her and loved her. I would say it was me that was to blame for that. I was the broken one. That there must be something wrong with me, and I wasn’t worthy of their love. It’s kind of pathetic when you think about it, huh?”

I shake my head and move to her. “It’s not pathetic to want and desire to be loved.”

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Neat story.  :)  Thanks for writing!

Summary: Past Featured Story

A change in the past makes an early intervention necessary for the Cullens. This story is complete and I will upload one or two chapters each week.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 59 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 253021 Read Count: 132213
[Report This] Published: 12 Oct 2013 Updated: 06 Oct 2014
Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Interesting first meeting!  I'm glad they're all together now.  Looking forward to what comes next!  Thanks for writing!



Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Congratulations, Edward and Bella!  I'm so glad they're married!  It solves a lot of problems.

Thanks for writing!

Speechless by aiami Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

Speechless ban by aiami

I had always been the nerdy one: big glasses, bag full of books and an overstated passion for drawing.

My sister has always sustained that if I would have ridden of the glasses and lowered a bit my “nerdy percentage”, as she used to call it, I would have had all the women at my feet.

“Ok you can leave your glasses on, it’s fashion nowadays” she once said to me.

but I was simply like this and, for this reason, I was single for a long time. I used to look at the girls by afar never doing the first step: they used to get closer, we talked a bit but then, the famous nerdy percentage came into action and they flew away. Always the same scheme. More or less.

Until I met her.

She never made the first move.

So, in the end, I did it.

 

Simply I wasn’t prepared to how that move would have changed my world; leaving me…speechless.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7039 Read Count: 1455
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2014 Updated: 27 Jan 2014
Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - encounters

Sweet story!  I take it she must have gotten completely the wrong impression of him somehow.  I like his character.  Thanks for writing!

Summary: Past Featured Story

banner

Sometimes the bad things that happen in our lives put us directly in the path of the best things that will ever happen to us. ExB AH

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2110 Read Count: 123249
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2015 Updated: 29 Oct 2015
Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

This is such a wonderful, sweet story!  I am really enjoying it.  Thanks for writing!



Author's Response:

Hi there!  Thanks for saying hello!  I'm so glad you're enjoying the story!  :)

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Wow, this is really well done.  What really strikes me is how much you've captured so many of the emotions I recognize from my own experience... tending to my sweetheart/husband nonstop through a couple of weeks in the hospital on through a full two months in rehabilitation... following the frightening reality of waking up from back surgery to find himself paralyzed from the chest down.  There were a lot of very intense times, on a day by day basis... and even now, almost a year post-surgery, far too often the realities remain painfully difficult.  Kudos to your effort at presenting them so tenderly as this.

Thank you; it is enjoyable to read.  :)  Thanks for writing!



Author's Response:

Hi there!  Thanks for saying hello.  Wow, what a lovely and heartfelt review!  I'm so sorry you've had a similar experience with your husband--I hope he continues to improve.  Thank you for saying how well I captured the experience--that truly is the highest compliment I can receive on this story.  I'm so glad you took this journey with me!  :)