Reviews by sherylbaby
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Sometimes the bad things that happen in our lives put us directly in the path of the best things that will ever happen to us. ExB AH

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2110 Read Count: 123249
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2015 Updated: 29 Oct 2015
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Date: 09 Jul 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

I hope his fever breaks soon.

Glad that Elizabeth is facing reality and is going to take a stand against her bastard husband.



Author's Response:

A good thing to hope for--I'm sure Bella agrees with you.  Yes, Elizabeth has finally made the right choice--let's hope she sticks to it!  :)

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Date: 02 Jul 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

I hope things really start looking up for him now.



Author's Response:

They will.  It may be slow, but everything is easier when you're not facing it alone.  :)

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Date: 25 Aug 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

That was an emotional roller coaster ride!

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Date: 23 Jun 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Sobbing



Author's Response:

:(  I'm sorry!  But at least Edward lifted his DNR and Bella is really going to tell him this time!  We have hope!  :)

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Date: 15 Jun 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

This is breaking my heart. There is a reason that I've never worked in Oncology or Peds(I'm a nurse)

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Date: 01 Sep 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

I'M SO HAPPY!



Author's Response:

:)  Yay!!

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Date: 22 Jun 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

I'm so upset.

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Date: 25 May 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

i hope she tells him she loves him soon.

I am scared to find out what Edward's father did to him!



Author's Response:

Bella wants to tell him, but she's so afraid it will do more harm than good.  Edward is very vulnerable right now, and she doesn't want to add weight to what he's carrying.  We'll see.  Edward seems willing to tell Bella about what happened to him.  This is defnitely a good thing.

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Date: 14 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm crying already



Author's Response:

Hi there!  Thanks for joining us!  I really hope that's in a "hurts so good" kinda way!  :)

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Date: 14 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm sobbing



Author's Response:

:(  Yeah, this one is a bit rougher than the first one, as we see Edward's true state of mind.

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Date: 14 Apr 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

I feel so sad for him



Author's Response:

I know.  But at least now he has Bella coming to see him every day, so he's not completely alone.  :)

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Date: 14 Apr 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Glad he is letting her in. Can't imagine going through that alone



Author's Response:

I know.  It must have been so difficult for him before.  As least now he has some distraction.

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Date: 14 Apr 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

So worried about him!



Author's Response:

This cancer is a rough one, that's for certain.  :(

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Date: 14 Apr 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Heartbreaking!



Author's Response:

I know this one was hard to get through, but she was there for him when he really needed her, and he won't forget that.  :)

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Date: 14 Apr 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

So happy that she is taking Sebastian home.



Author's Response:

She'd do just about anything to see Edward smile at this point, and if she can ease his mind even the littlest bit by doing this, it's enough.

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Date: 15 Apr 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

I'm crying so hard right now



Author's Response:

:(  He has been through a lot, hasn't he?

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Date: 15 Apr 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

He is such a sweetheart



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This is my favorite chapter.  They are SO sweet together!  :)

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Date: 15 Apr 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

I keep hoping that he will miraculously be cured.



Author's Response:

That's a good hope to have.  ;)

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Date: 21 Aug 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Soooooo hard to read! 



Author's Response:

I know.  I'm sorry!  If it's any consolation, it was just as hard, if not harder, to write!  But I wanted it to be real, so I went as deep into it as I felt was needed.  :)

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Date: 20 Apr 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

SO HAPPY THEY KISSED!

I'm hoping that he will find the will to really fight his illness.I hope he tears up the DNR. He is too young to give up.

Can't he get a bone marrow transplant?



Author's Response:

Yay!  Me too!  Edward can't deny his feelings for her, and he doesn't really want to try. He's so conflicted right now, but he's decided to allow himself, and her, a little happiness. Maybe he'll let it continue. :)

Have you been reading about treatment options?  Hmm?

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Date: 27 Apr 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

I so want an HEA for thee two, somehow



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you care about them that much.  Hang on--I believe there's always hope when people love and support one another.  :)

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Date: 07 May 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

I'm completely freaked out! He's getting worse :(

I find myself wishing that he sees his mom, who will become a bone marrow donor for him and save his life - cure him.

 



Author's Response:

Yes, his cancer is relentless, and he has so much else he's dealing with right now too!  Poor Edward! 

That's a good wish to have.  We shall see.  ;)

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Date: 08 Jun 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

OMG! So good, but hard to rerad.

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Date: 08 Jun 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

PLEASE CURE HIM!



Author's Response:

Please revisit the author's note on Chapter two.  :)

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Date: 21 Sep 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Yes! So glad he's home! Like the way she "handled" things, LOL!

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Date: 21 Sep 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Bella is fierce!

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Date: 28 Sep 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

I love the paper flowers! They are so special and will never wilt.

So happy about the mural and his friends :)



Author's Response:

Yes, she can keep them forever, and they're more than just a purchase, they're art!  What a sweet thing for him to do for her!  Edward has quite a bit of support now, doesn't he?

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Date: 20 Oct 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

So scary!

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Date: 20 Oct 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Great that things are slowly getting better.

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Date: 20 Oct 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Yes, Things are heating up!

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Date: 20 Oct 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

BEAUTIFUL! PERFECT!

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Date: 20 Oct 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

DAMN! THAT WAS SOOOOOO SEXY!

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Date: 26 Oct 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Soooo sad about her mom :(



Author's Response:

It was a horrible situation, and an even worse loss, but maybe fate did work to bring her Edward that way.  I hope she can truly believe that, and find peace.  :)

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Date: 10 Nov 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Sooooo happy! I'm sad this story is over, but so glad for the beautiful ending! :)



Author's Response:

Yay!  I'm so happy you loved the ending!  Thank you for taking this journey with me!  :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113790
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
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Date: 07 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 8 part 5

Tanya can suck eggs.

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Date: 17 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 13 part 3

Oh my! Things are heating up!

These things can happen in real life-Robin Williams married his kids' nanny.

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Date: 12 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 17 Part 10

So glad little Charlie is OK!

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Date: 15 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112

FU Tanya!

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Date: 13 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 17 Part 11

AWESOME!

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Date: 11 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 15 Part 2

Nice that Alice is mentioned.

A break up with Tanya is obviously in the future. I am worried that little Charlie is going to suffer. Truly hope that Edward gets sole custody, but I think Tanya will fight it, even if it is only for appearances.

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Date: 28 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 8 Part 1

She is so sweet and kind to little Charlie!

I'm really hoping that Edward asks Bella to be Charlie's nanny, and for Elizabeth and her to live there full time. Maybe Alice, too?

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Date: 18 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 13 part 8

LOL!

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Date: 10 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 5 (part 6)

Uh Oh!

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Date: 11 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 5 (part 7)

Wow, I am hating Tanya even more! Buying herself a ring and teling everyone they're engaged? Pretty sure that "engagement" will be off soon. I really hope that Edward refuses to go to the Oscars with baby abandoning Tanya. Would be cool if Edward publicly breaks up with her before the Oscars. I think it's time to get his attorney working on custody papers for little Charlie.

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Date: 12 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 5 (part 8)

OMG! Men and boobs...LOL!

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Date: 15 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 5 (Part 10)

I think the paparazzi must be the worst part of fame.

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Date: 17 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 6 (part 2)

Oh No!

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Date: 19 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 6 (Part 4)

Love it! That clip looks like it's from "The Graham Norton Show"

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Date: 22 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 7 part 3

Glad they cleared that up

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Date: 23 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 7 (Part 4)

Love it!

I see a trip to the Oscars in Alice's future!

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Date: 02 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 8 Part 2

So cute!

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Date: 08 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 8 part 6

That photo is so cute!

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Date: 16 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 8 part 10

Oh man, both guys want those Swan women! I am totally worried about that bitch, Tanya's,' arrival!

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Date: 06 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 10 part 2

no way is he getting that image out of his mind. He's a goner :)

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Date: 11 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 10 Part 4

I think he saw some boob!

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Date: 13 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 10 Part 6

I'm guessing it is Tanya, in full bitch mode

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Date: 18 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 10 part 7

Oh shit!

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Date: 27 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 11 Part 2

Tanya is going to lose her shit!

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Date: 07 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 17 Part 6

So glad he's there!

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Date: 05 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 17 Part 4

I'll bet it's Emmett at the door. Or a hotel employee that received an urgent message for him.

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Date: 06 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 17 Part 5

So worried about little Charlie!

Good riddance, Tanya!

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Date: 29 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 16 Part 5

OMG! Poor little Charlie!  Letting a sick baby get cold? That bitch needs to die!

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Date: 01 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 16 Part 8

Will Edward ever find out what Tanya just did?

Poor little Charlie, with a "mother" who doesn't seem to care if he lives or dies :(

So glad that Charlie has Bella, and others, who love him.

 

 

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Date: 03 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102

Tanya is a cruel, selfish, Ho!

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Date: 04 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 17 Part 3

He is going to lose his mind when he finds out she shut off his phone and LIED big time! And that poor little Charlie is in the hospital, most likely in NICU :(

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Date: 16 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 17 Part 13

I really hope that Charlie is Edward's!

 

Tanya and James deserve something REALLY BAD to happen to them. "Tragic" accident?

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Date: 17 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 18 Part 1

Please make Charlie be Edward's!

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Date: 21 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 117: Chapter 18 Part 4

Yes!

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Date: 23 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 118: Chapter 18 Part 5

YES!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan hates Valentine's Day, and everything about it. Her past experiences in love have left her with a jaded view on relationships. After quitting college, she gets a job at a diner, where she makes friends and finds herself in a new job. What happens when the CEO gets under her skin, will she open up to what she really wants from him, or run off and hide?  all human/olderward - w/a smidge of daddykink. 

Banner by the talented Christag Banners.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 47353 Read Count: 109780
[Report This] Published: 07 Feb 2015 Updated: 18 Feb 2015
Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

More please!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan, newly divorced (again) finds that life has changed since she was younger. A/H B+E   Contest entry for: The May to December Romance Contest

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26369 Read Count: 13394
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2015 Updated: 27 Jul 2016
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Date: 20 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Sunshine

So glad Conner grew up and tried to make things right.

So excited about the update!

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Date: 12 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am glad she talked you into continuing. I love this story and will be happy to read more whenever you're ready :)

Love your sign off! I watched Batman faithfully.



Author's Response:

LOL.  Ok.  Just stand by.  

See you soon, I hope.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

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Date: 12 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Reunion

Well, I wish that the little  jerk had thought of his mom long before this. She has been heartbroken for a long time.  Of corse, he didn't come around until he had planned his exit.



Author's Response:

Better late than never, right?

You did see the Beta's note, right.  Not sure when more of this will be posted.  I had 13 chapters all together, with 13 being the end, but my Beta, Jyl, loves this story so much she begged me to wait and give my mind a rest.  So, stay tuned, same bat channel, same bat time.  :)

Hard Hugs

Dinia

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Date: 02 May 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Divisions

F*ck you, Connor! He is worried about himself and what his friends will think! So selfish! Please tell me that this won't ruin things for E & B.



Author's Response:

I knew this chapter would get at least one response like yours.  I probably would have thought it also, if I'd lived it.  My child wasn't as old as Conner, but we had similiar problems.  It was very hard being a single woman trying to have a life and to raise a child on my own.

I've said this before, and I'll continue to say it about all of my stories, I'm just the typist.  The characters dictate what they say and interact with each other.  I have no control once I start typing.  *smiles*

I hope you continue to enjy the story.  

See you next chapter.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

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Date: 08 May 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Poor Bella has had such terrible luck with men!

SO HAPPY that Edward isn't giving up!

 



Author's Response:

Yep like so many of the friends I've had in the past also.  We can just keep our fingers crossed and hope that Edward will hang in there.

Thank you for your support in reading and reviewing.

I hope I can made this story come out with the HEA everyone wants.  I don't know what the characters are gonna do, actually I'm just the typtist.  :D

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner for this story was made by: Mina


Summary: Between deployments and deaths, will Bella and Edward find their happy place together? When they find their love, will it survive the war they're surrounded by? Tissue warnings are given, but a happy ending is promised. All Human.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26925 Read Count: 34733
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2015 Updated: 16 Mar 2015
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Date: 15 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

That was so beautiful and so sexy!

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Date: 16 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Love it :)

I miss you by louanne61 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 198]
Summary: Past Featured Story

When geek medical student Edward meets geek student/librarian Bella. They fall in love in the library. Lies are told and secrets are kept soon rip them apart. Can they endure the events that follow to find each other again.

This story has a happy ever after.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 174321 Read Count: 53443
[Report This] Published: 10 Mar 2015 Updated: 14 Oct 2017
Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Is Renata drugging him and deleting the texts? If Edward has any sense, he will cut that bitch out of his life NOW!



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to review. Edward has been very naive, but he will explain himself in the next chapter.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Isabella is an English woman, trying to escape a marriage she doesn't want. Edward is a Scottish Laird, with a soft spot for a damsel in distress and a hate for the English Redcoats that pursue her, but what does he do with her now that he has saved her? He has no choice, other than to bring her home, but he wasn't counting on falling for the lass on the journey to Castle Menzies.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32098 Read Count: 136771
[Report This] Published: 15 Mar 2015 Updated: 07 Jun 2015
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Date: 03 May 2015 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

I hope she can get him to listen! Tiffany has been so kind to her.

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Date: 18 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh my! I see a lot of arguements in their future.

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Date: 31 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I wonder what Isabella is going to say to that?

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Date: 15 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh Baby! A sexy, shirtless, Scotsman Edward? Be still my heart! Can't wait to read more!

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Date: 28 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

It's pretty crappy that thoses bitches wouldn't give her any food.And took her through the dungeons. She has a tough road ahead.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for all of your reviews. I love reading them xx

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Date: 14 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I hope that Edward and his men will be safe!

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Date: 16 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

She is too cavaier about her own safety

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Date: 29 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

YES!

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Date: 06 May 2015 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

So glad ne listened to her.



Author's Response:

Hello! I just wanted to say a huge thank you for all your wonderful reviews on my story. I  read and treasure every single one of them. x x

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Heavy is the head that wears the crown, noble the ill-prepared to turn it down. Bella is no one, a lady's maid at a girl's school until the princess she serves changes her life with a choice she would never make herself. Now she sets off into a world she doesn't know, betrothed to a man who will never know her.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 123897 Read Count: 109561
[Report This] Published: 21 Mar 2015 Updated: 26 Dec 2016
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Date: 10 May 2016 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Great chapter! So much going on!

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Date: 12 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I can't believe she sneaked away like that...no more! Glad she is expecting.

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Date: 25 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I didn't see that coming!

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Date: 25 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Do King Carlisle and Edward think that Isabella is dead? 

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Date: 20 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

So glad that she and the prince are getting along so well.

I do hope they don't make Tanya one of her ladies" maids, but if they do, I hope she tells the prince of her objections and suspicions ASAP. She doesn't need that snake close to her.

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Date: 09 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Glad that Edward is back.

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Date: 29 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Glad they got through the consummation and are on their honeymoon.

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Date: 11 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oh, I love the portrait idea!

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Date: 07 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I feel so very sad for her.

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Date: 07 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I am glad Tanya is gone, but VERY upset that Edward f*cked her in the past :(  Why in the hell did he think it was OK for Tanya to be a ladie's maid? Is he stupid? Edward talking shit about Isabella behind her back is awful, too. Edward had better up his game. I don't like him at all now!

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Date: 21 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

It's about time that Tanya and her parents are outed!

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Date: 04 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

NO!!!!! DON"T DO IT!

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Date: 10 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I AM SOOOOO RELIEVED!