Reviews by Sunshine72
Summary: Past Featured Story

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'The story of us', was 'Bon Secours'. And 'Instructions Not Included', was 'Bon Secours the sequel'. Sorry to throw you off, but a name change was a must. 

Sequel to 'The Story of Us', if you didn't read that, please do so before you read this. The title says it all, since children do not come with an instruction manual. This picks up right where the original leaves off, 'The Story of us' epilogue. If you liked that, you will LOVE this. How will Edward and Bella deal with a house full of teenagers? There's flashbacks, more drama, more lemons, much more humor, and a whole lot of story. 

Doctorward is there too, just like the first story. 

It's incredibly long because we have the (A) story, which is Edward and Bella. Then we have the (B) story, which is EJ and CC, their two oldest children. 

Points of view will fluctuate. Chapters will be split, since there's essentially two stories in one. 

Rated NC-17 just in case for Lemons and Language galore

Edward, Bella, the whole gang, their kids, plus a few original characters.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 706984 Read Count: 467116
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Alex Outtake

I just reread both the Story of Us and Instructions Not Included.  I think I even liked them better another round through.  At the end of the epilogue you said that you had a CC outtake.  I noticed that your story is finished is there anywhere we can read CC outtake?  I would love to see what developes for CC.  Thanks!

Summary:

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When Bella is hired last minute to photograph a wedding for the Cullen family, she's grateful for the experience and the money.  But upon her arrival, she begins to suspect there's another assignment on Esme Cullen's mind – one involving her handsome son, Edward...

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5982 Read Count: 5576
[Report This] Published: 04 Jul 2011 Updated: 25 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: The Wedding Photographer

I liked it. 



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you so much. I see you reviewed the continuation as well, I really appreciate it.

Best Laid Plans by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

Bella had the job she’d always wanted, teaching kindergarten in the neighborhood she grew up in, until layoffs left her without a job.  Edward had a job he loved, and a perfect family, until he learned it was a lie.  When both return to their hometown of Forks, Washington to regroup, they learn that the best things in life can happen while you’re busy making plans.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4732 Read Count: 1088
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2012 Updated: 19 Feb 2012
Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

 I really liked it.  I can't wait to see Edward and Bella meet.  Thanks!

Hear Me by smmiskimen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1926]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Twilight AU. After a horrific car accident leaves Bella in a catatonic state, she's transferred to Forks Hospital under the care of Carlisle. What happens when Edward is faced with the lifeless girl in the bed and an undeniable pull begins? Can he bring her back from the hold her mind has on her, or will she be forever lost to the abyss? E&B, AU, Canon pairings.

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 131 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65741 Read Count: 411738
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2012 Updated: 03 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

I liked it!  Ihope your son gets feeling betterr soon.

Summary:

Follow along as Sexy Geek Boy and Nerdella continue to grow as lovers and parents. Be aware, there is danger around the corner. What, you ask? Read and find out! ExB, AU/AH

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Twix's List, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, My favs past present and future , A Nerd Story of Love Series
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 161783 Read Count: 114423
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 01 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Forgive Me Brother, For I Have Sinned...

Emmett got what he deserved.  I don't blame his family for not being there.  I'm glad that Emmett is out of their lives.  Thanks!

Classroom Secrets by Cinaxoxo99 Rated: NC-17 starstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Bella is fresh out of college and is coming back to Fork's high to replace her favourite teacher. Now she's all grown up they can give into the forbidden desires they denied themselves when she was his favourite student.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: YA - High School
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2997 Read Count: 1653
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2012 Updated: 04 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Classroom Secrets

I liked it.  Looks like Alice is going to be right.

Summary:

"It seems neither of us could keep our promise." Edward smiled sitting cross legged in front of me. He was dressed in his uniform looking as handsome as they day I last saw him.

 

"I tried, Edward." I whispered looking up into his green eyes. "I've missed you."

 

He smiled reaching his hand out for mine. "I've missed you to my love."

 

"Are you here to take me to heaven?" I asked knowing that was the only option if he was here.

 

He nodded his head sadness in his eyes. "Yes."

 

"Will I get to stay with you?"

 

He smiled and squeezed my hand gently as he pulled me to my feet. "Yes."

 

For the first time I felt something other than emptiness. It had been awhile but I knew the things I was feeling were joy, love and hope. Thing's I had avoided my whole life. I looked down at myself and saw I had the body of a 19 year old, I was wearing the clothes I'd worn the day I said goodbye to my soldier and my hair was no longer grey, it was a rich chocolate brown.

 

I looked back at the old lady sleeping peacefully in her 9 thousand dollar bed, and knew she had had enough of this world. She wanted to go home to her soldier, she wanted to know real love and hope for a future that could have them together always.

 

"I'm ready." I said looking back at Edward. "Take me home, soldier."


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Love and Faith
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2958 Read Count: 404
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2012 Updated: 04 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Take Me Home Soldier.

I like it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Emmett, Jasper and Edward have been in the Army for the last 9 years together. Bella is Em's little sister. One package to Em changes everything. AH. HEA

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44063 Read Count: 93554
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 13 Jun 2013
Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I LOVED it!  It was great!



Author's Response:

THanks!

Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I love Bella's revenge.  It serves Jasper right.



Author's Response:

LOL no shit!

Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Are you going to continue to post on this site?  I am having a real hard time with my account on Fanfiction.  I noticed that this story is finished on fanfiction, I LOVED it,  and you said to keep alerts on for the sequel.  Thank you!

A Slow Boil by kts Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 190]
Summary: Past Featured Story

a slow boil

Bella's an exchange student hoping to find a job to keep herself employed for the summer, so that she can stay on at an exclusive University. Her best job prospect is a part-time housekeeping position with one Mr. Cullen.


Categories: All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78922 Read Count: 59549
[Report This] Published: 08 Jun 2012 Updated: 01 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I like it.

Amazed by TrueEnglishRose Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 570]
Summary:

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They come from two different backgrounds and lifestyles, one simple, one fabulous, yet both know what it means to suffer.

Can they face the future together and learn to let go of their demons?

Can they find what it is to be Amazed?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 122 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29805 Read Count: 206042
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2012 Updated: 19 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 122: Chapter 122

I loved it!  Edward sure changed.  I'm glad that he was really close to Ali.  Thank you so much.  I really enjoyed it!

Lucky Shot by TrueEnglishRose Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 314]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Have you ever imagined something so beautiful, so enchanting that it must be a dream or a mirage?"

Take a gaggle of small town gossips, the doctor's son, the mysterious new single mom, add in a lucky shot with a BB gun and watch what unfolds.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, To Read (Geddy), G8or Favor8s Read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 48 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9986 Read Count: 120086
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2012 Updated: 19 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

I loved it!  I would have killed Edwardfor throwing away my birth control pills.

A Mother´s Advice by maymay74 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 249]
Summary:

Bella met Edward. Then, after a few dates, she got pregnant and married him. But now they re fighting against their family and more people who just don't want them together. Bella feels she's repeating her parents story. Would a package from the past be the help she needs?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 116319 Read Count: 38317
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2012 Updated: 15 Mar 2016
Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I hope Eleazar is going to be okay.  Tanya is one screwed up woman.  I liked it!



Author's Response:

ELEAZAR IS GONNA BE OK, TANYA IN TIME WILL GET HRR JUST DESSERTS

Unlock Your Heart by momma2fan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 443]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is head of the Cullen Family and has loved Bella from afar.When her fiance is caught cheating with his, can he get her to unlock her heart to him, or will the families enemy's keep them apart. AH/M for language and lemons. Canon couples.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Completed Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43531 Read Count: 107087
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2012 Updated: 22 Oct 2012
Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

I'm glad that Mike is gone.  I liked it.  Thanks!

Heroes by naughtydreamz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 98]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A struggling single mom, a fatherless boy with big dreams, and a man on his way to fame and fortune.  All of them could use a hero.....

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23148 Read Count: 37148
[Report This] Published: 14 Jun 2012 Updated: 26 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Noooo.   I wish she would have let him explain.  Maybe CJ can talk some sense into her.

Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I loved it!  thanks!

Love Life Family by Carliec Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 59]
Summary:

Bella has her hands full being a single mom, her career, her son's deadbeat father and interfering parents. How will she cope when her high school crush reappears in her life?

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, To Read (Geddy), Stories I've Already read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83389 Read Count: 64107
[Report This] Published: 20 Jun 2012 Updated: 27 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I loved it!

Summary:

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Did you find it odd that Charlie and Edward never had a good decent talk before Charlie gave Bella away at the wedding in Breaking Dawn? Any dad I know would've wanted to know more than just the guy's name.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Charlie/None, Edward/None
Genre: Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10390 Read Count: 586
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2012 Updated: 23 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Ah That's Why

I loved it!  Thanks!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan works as a nurse at Cook County Hospital in the ER. She's older and desperate for love. It's hindered by her shy personality and plump body. Her father, whom she lives with, teases her relentlessly for being fat and single.

Edward Cullen, thirty-three, is hired as a doctor in the ER. He's getting over a divorce. He moved to Chicago to be closer to his family: sister, Rosalie, and brother, Jasper. Rosalie is younger than Edward by ten years and is struggling with an eating disorder brought on by a heinous rape of her ex-boyfriend. Jasper, twenty-seven, is finishing up his doctorate in history.

Bella is charmed by this new doctor in the ER. He's kind and thinks about his patients and maintains a friendly rapport with the nurses and orderlies. Edward is intrigued by the sad nurse who does her job efficiently but doesn't have a sparkle in her eyes.

Will she allow Dr. Cullen into her life or will she let her insecurities get in the way of her happiness. Perhaps, Dr. Feelgood can write her a prescription. A prescription for love...

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Banner created by Canan ~ Thank you!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 331720 Read Count: 418909
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Aug 2013
Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Yeah Bella is standing up for herself.

Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Charlie is a jerk.  I just love Edward!

Summary: Past Featured Story

hard

 

No one ever said parenting was easy. But, when you have a spoiled brat of a teenage daughter,  a little boy who thrives for attention, and immature parents, you could say that there family is a little more chaotic than some families, and in need of some help. It doesn't help that the town likes to gossip about them, and Mrs. Weber  is out to get Bella and little Masen.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64080 Read Count: 11746
[Report This] Published: 09 Jul 2012 Updated: 04 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I loved it!  I'm glad to find out why Tayna was such a B****.  It looks like she learned her lesson though.  Thanks for the story.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing

High Seas by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary: Past Featured Story

High Seas

 

It’s the eve of Isabella Swan’s wedding to Lord Aro Volturi, a close ‘friend’ of her father, Charles Swan, the governor of Isle Esme. Her marriage is arranged and she’s not happy about it. In swoops Captain Edward Cullen, the mistaken pirate, to kidnap Isabella in retribution for taking his ship and crew from him. Will she fight against Captain Cullen or join him eagerly to escape her arranged marriage? Will love blossom on the high seas?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9134 Read Count: 3308
[Report This] Published: 03 Aug 2012 Updated: 03 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I liked it!  Thanks!

All Alone by robsessed73 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 785]
Summary: Past Featured Story

All Alone

I am a 16 Year old girl from a small town in Forks. I have a loving family and the greatest twin brother. My life changed forever the day I won a radio contest to attend a film premiere and meet my actor crush, Edward Masen. After spending one night with him my life will never be the same again. Rated M for language and lemons.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145027 Read Count: 167374
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2012 Updated: 14 Jun 2014
Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

I would want to kill Edward. For his attitude alone.  I liked it!  Thanks!



Author's Response: thank you for the review. I really enjoy reading them all and I love writing this story. Here is a teaser for chapter 7 of All Alone. If all goes well then I should have it up before I leave for australia. I suddenly felt tears come to my eyes. I don't know what to do. I know that Edward has a right to know that he is going to be a father but I also think that what he doesn't know won't hurt him. I was about to say this to Alice when I heard someone coming in the front door. Alice put her finger to her lips telling us to be quiet and then left the room to see who it was. She came back a few minutes later with Esme. Esme looked at us with a worried look in her eyes. "Is someone going to tell me what is going on or do I have to contact both Angela and Bella's parents and tell them they are ditching school," she said with a worried tone in her voice. I looked at Alice silently asking her what I should do. "Bella, I think that we should tell my mother what is going on. She will know what to do," she whispered with a weak smile on her face. Big fat tears started falling from my eyes. Esme came over to me and pulled me in for a hug. "Whatever you have to say Bella, it can't be all bad," she said. I nodded against her shoulder and pulled back. "Esme, I'm pregnant and I don't know what to do. Please help me," I cried as she pulled me in for another hug.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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In 1843, Queen Victoria reined alongside etiquette and protocol. Everything was judged from who you were to what you owned and how much status you had.

 

Can a small farm girl from Lord Cullen's estate bring life and happiness back to his son? Will Master Edward see her for what she is as a person, or who she is by birth? And what does Lady Cullen have up her sleeve?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Historical, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89224 Read Count: 248352
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2012 Updated: 04 May 2013
Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I like the idea of Edward when he walked in on Isabella in the guest room.  I like it, thanks.

Bases Loaded by JessAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 327]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Spending summer vacation traveling with the St. Louis Cardinals isn’t every teen girls idea of fun.  What happens when the teen daughter of the team doc falls for one of the players?  Can they find love or will life get in the way?  AH/Cannon and Non-Cannon Pairings/Rated NC-17

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115192 Read Count: 87326
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2012 Updated: 01 Dec 2013
Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Japer is a major ass.  I liked the chapter.  I just love Edward.  I was so proud of Bella for making Bella's mom and Jim's day.  Thanks!



Author's Response:

Wow, what another outstanding bunch of reviews we have gotten for this chapter.  Want to address some things to cover a lot of comments and questions.  Yes jasper is a *INSERT YOUR OWN CHOICE WORD HERE*, and as much as Jess and I both really like Jasper as a character as a whole we wanted to make him not a nice guy for once.  As for non-cannon pairings, we have Elizabeth and James, we have Jake as a gay man, and we have a surprise upcoming, but we want to be very clear this is an EDWARD AND BELLA story, therefore they will be together and cannon, well as cannon as they can be, with our changes of age, humanity, and attitudes.  Alice really is pregnant, and Jasper really is the father.  Bella and Edward were keeping their relationship low key and not out in the spotlight, because they are not sure if Liz does or doesn’t remember, and they don’t want to ruin her wedding day.  (Besides, we had Jasper and Alice to make a scene... LOL.)  There will be more time jumps and drama ahead, but fear not we are working on keeping this story a nice mix between drama and hilarity.  Hope you continue to enjoy it.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (& Jess)~

TEASER:   “Whoa, we aren’t thinking about having a baby right now,” Edward says as I cling to him. I feel like he is going to leave and never come back.

“You shut the fuck up,” Mom says pointing her finger in Edward’s face.

“Mom, stop being so mean! You weren’t this freaked out when I was with Ben,” I say trying to get her to calm down.

“Yeah, well, you weren’t having sex with him! I know the two of you are having sex!” she yells.

“First of all, it is none of your business!” I yell at her. “Second of all I put myself on birth control long ago.  And thirdly I did have sex with Ben, he was unfortunately my first.  Even though I was stupid enough to make him my first, I was smart enough to take care of my own birth control.  Oh and for the record, I always made Ben wear a condom and pull out. I do not want a child right now and as for Edward, he respects that.”

“What the... I’m so mad I can’t even think straight.” Mom stands there and she looks like she is going to cry.

“Mom…”

“No, don’t say a word to me,” she says as my eyes fills with tears.

“Liz, she’s eighteen there is really nothing we can do. Besides, he’s better than Ben,” Dad says as Edward tries to console me.

“He’s older than you are Carlisle!” Mom yells.

Offbeat by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 323]
Summary:

He's a cop. She's a student. A missed connection during a traumatic time leaves them both longing, until fate brings them back together again. Romance, humor, slight drama. Canon couples. OOC. AU. This is my version of Copward, and this is a working summary.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92614 Read Count: 42622
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2012 Updated: 19 Oct 2012
Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Edward Part One

I liked it. 

Summary:

After finding Charlie in bed with another woman she moves in with her daughter, Bella. After several weeks of witnessing her mother drink herself into a coma Bella calls in reinforcements: Alice and Rose. Together the girls will get Nay back on her feet, after all what better way to get over a man then to find another. But just who will end up finding another man? Mother or Daughter.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Renee (nonslash)
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Spicy
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3925 Read Count: 341
[Report This] Published: 25 Sep 2012 Updated: 25 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved it!!!  Go Bella!

Summary:

A story about a young girl alone in an ally with her newborn baby and the kind woman and family who took her in and gave her a family. A sweet yet heart breaking story with an oh so beautiful happy ending. I had posted this under a different name but got no luck, so I hope you all enjoy this one shot because it really is a beautiful story about family, love, and accepting the past.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6720 Read Count: 515
[Report This] Published: 25 Sep 2012 Updated: 25 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am so glad that Bella is the type of person she is.  It took a big person to give her daughter up for a better life.  I loved Esme.  Carlisle and Esme were sure surprised about Bella's request.  Thank you for the great story.



Author's Response:

No, thank you for taking the time to review. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. It was an emotional yet gratifying story to write, I'm glad i was able to share it with you guys. So again thanks a lot for reviewing. If your interested in any of my other stories just go to my profile and you'll see some of my other one-shots and a link to my FF.Net account where some of my other stories are that I haven't transferred over just yet.

Once again thank you, and i hope to hear from you again soon.

Much Love cina.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Esme Cullen's matchmaking leads to her son Edward dating fledging wedding photographer, Bella Swan. Falling for each other is effortless and soon Bella's career begins to take off. However, not everyone is quite so thrilled about Bella's happiness and success. A continuation of "The Wedding Photographer".


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139889 Read Count: 63246
[Report This] Published: 25 Sep 2012 Updated: 21 Apr 2013
Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - The Wedding Photographer

I liked it.  I'm excited to see where this goes.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm glad to have you on board!

Summary:

According to recent studies, people are most likely to meet their soul mate in the supermarket. I, Bella Swan, can attest to that.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10694 Read Count: 4860
[Report This] Published: 26 Oct 2012 Updated: 20 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I loved it!  It was short and sweet.  Thanks so much!



Author's Response:

No, thank you :) :)

Summary:

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“To say I was obsessed with Isabella Swan was an understatement. I dreamed of her, fantasized about her, would have gladly torn off my limbs to get the chance to kiss the hem of her apron.”

Eighteen-year-old Edward Cullen moves to London to attend culinary school, and get a taste of his long-time crush.  The mouth-watering, much older BBC star chef, Isabella Swan, is known for her string of romantic entanglements with younger men. Can Edward convince her to stop sampling and sink her teeth into him?

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12964 Read Count: 1756
[Report This] Published: 03 Nov 2012 Updated: 03 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I liked it!  Thanks!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I am so glad to hear you enjoyed it!  :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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At 30, Edward realizes that he made five monumental mistakes in his life, but what he didn't realize was that those mistakes would be profoundly life altering; leading him to her. A romantic drabble in EPOV.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), To Read , J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18116 Read Count: 68511
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2012 Updated: 24 Dec 2012
Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed
Date: 26 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls

I loved it!  I hope you had a Merry Christmas.  Thanks!

Summary:

Jasper Hale was deployed to Iraq two weeks before Christmas. His wife, Alice, and daughter, Paige, are hoping for a Christmas miracle when they find out Jasper won't be spending Christmas at home. Alice and Paige will do anything to make their wish of spending Christmas together as a family come true.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Jasper/Alice
Genre: Family, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Holiday, Men & Women in Uniform
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1906 Read Count: 13194
[Report This] Published: 13 Dec 2012 Updated: 13 Dec 2012
Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: A Christmas Wish

I was crying to much to notice any mistakes.  I loved it!

Summary:

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Bella is a teacher whose students win a Go Green contest with the Houston Astros. Their prize: star player, Edward Cullen will present them with the award at home plate during a game. But will Bella win more than what the team is offering?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 40769 Read Count: 4863
[Report This] Published: 25 Dec 2012 Updated: 27 Jan 2014
Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

If I was Bella I would die of humilation.  Thanks for the chapter, I liked it!



Author's Response:

I'm right there with you on dying of humiliation. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Jasper are twins who just moved from England to Beverly Hills and are new to Mason high school. The second that Bella and football Quarterback Edward Cullen meet, it is love at first sight for both of them. They decided there and then that they would be together no matter what. There is only one person who stands in their way. Edward’s girlfriend Tanya. Lemons and language AH


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: YA - High School
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77045 Read Count: 34672
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2013 Updated: 10 Apr 2015
Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I love it!  I can't wait for Edward to break up with Tanya.

Summary:

Summary: Bella and Rosalie Swan are twins who run Hooves and Paws Veterinary Clinic with their best friend Alice Brandon.  Edward, Emmett and Jasper Cullen run their family ranch just outside of town.  What happens when the girls run into the boys at a bar?  Especially when their friend Kate recognizes Edward as the boy who broke her heart in college.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9004 Read Count: 874
[Report This] Published: 11 Mar 2013 Updated: 11 Mar 2013
Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Cowboy Casanova

I liked it!  Thanks!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it. Keep it on your alerts so if I decide to continue it, you'll get the updates. It will be a while though. Thanks for the review. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullen is an A-list actor with horrific taste in clothing. Bella Swan is his long-suffering stylist who wants to strangle him one minute and kiss him the next. When Edward crashes her date, Bella has to choose between dressing her client and undressing the man she loves. 2nd Place Public Winner for the Happily Ever After Twific Contest!

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11285 Read Count: 3542
[Report This] Published: 22 Apr 2013 Updated: 22 Apr 2013
Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 1: (Un)Dressing Edward Cullen

I loved it!  Thanks!



Author's Response:

Thank you! So glad to hear you enjoyed it.  Thanks for the nice review.

Kidnap101 by TrueEnglishRose Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 626]
Summary: Past Featured Story

k101

 

Bella Swan has just one mission; to save her childhood best friend from the clutches of Hollywood. She's got her work cut out for her, but she'll do it, even if she has to do things that she really doesn't want to. Written purely for laughs.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 64 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11080 Read Count: 119765
[Report This] Published: 26 Apr 2013 Updated: 04 May 2013
Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed
Date: 13 May 2013 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

I loved it!!!