Reviews by Delia Cerrano
Summary:

The lovely differences between several Military acronyms explained. What? Don't you know what FUBAR is?


Categories: NCIS, Canon
Characters: None
Genre: Humor, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1171 Read Count: 130
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 01 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Delia Cerrano Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh too good for further comment!!  Or rather can't you write a story about that - you know getting patched up, then recovery well any way Funny!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

JJ needs a date for Valentines Day and she only has a week to get the right guy, throwing caution to the wind she invites the Devil himself – David Rossi!


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Categories: Criminal Minds
Characters: Rossi/JJ
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8158 Read Count: 543
[Report This] Published: 08 Jun 2012 Updated: 08 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Delia Cerrano Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Wonderful Tonight

Very good.  Wish we could have seen more of the relationship & how it grew.

Like to see Henry with Dave.

 



Author's Response:

Delia,

Thank you for taking the time to read and review. This was a challenge story that I never expected to be so long. And I never expected it to go in the direction it went. I may expand it at a future date to show the progression of the relationship. Thanks again,

Sunny

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Severus remembers when he fell in love with Hermione and writes her a letter. Inspired by David Bowies song


Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Hermione/Severus Snape
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21967 Read Count: 2626
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2012 Updated: 26 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Delia Cerrano Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Nights in white satin

I have disliked Hermione for so long. Your story gave me back a Hermione I could grow to love.  She & Snape make a striking and great couple. Draco & Harry of course are the perfect pair especially as you portray them.  I wish you would do a sequel so we could see Ron miserable because he sees what he gave up & see Lavender get put in her place. Also I'd like to see everyone realizing how perfect Snape & Hermione are togeher & how well they are doing. While your writing I wish you would write some more stories about Draco & Harry. Your view of them is adorable and funny! Guess that's enough wishing...

Summary:

They had to find the perfect name for their baby.

MoReid mpreg slash.

500-word prompted Drabble challenge.


Categories: Criminal Minds
Characters: Derek/Spencer
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 439 Read Count: 133
[Report This] Published: 19 Jun 2012 Updated: 19 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Delia Cerrano Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Cute. Ruari? pronounced like Rory? Or with 3 sylables like Rue- ah-ree?

Summary:

One man has had enough of sitting, and waiting.


Categories: Harry Potter, Alternate Universe
Characters: Harry Potter/Severus Snape
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1012 Read Count: 104
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2012 Updated: 21 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Delia Cerrano Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What a lovely story.  Now you could give them a relationship. They are so lonely..even Snape in his pretty cottage needs someone.

Snape's Story by Tbird1965 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 144]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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The Dark Lord is dead and the magical world is struggling to return back to normal. Severus Snape's past has finally caught up to him and his life is in a downworld spiral. Can one caring woman save him before he destroys himself? This story contains adult themes, situations and language.


Categories: Harry Potter, After Hogwarts
Characters: Hermione/Severus Snape
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75584 Read Count: 28977
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2012 Updated: 08 Feb 2013
Reviewer: Delia Cerrano Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

What a unique plot! Wonderful idea and handled so well.  Can't wait for the next chapter!!! They are such an unexpected (at least by me) & good couple together.



Author's Response:

Thanks and thanks for taking the time to review.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Dr. Spencer Reid joins the BAU and learns a few practical lessons in life. Will he cope or will it be too much for him? What will he do?

 

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Categories: Criminal Minds
Characters: Derek/Spencer
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20934 Read Count: 2336
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2012 Updated: 17 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Delia Cerrano Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Will You Be Mine

Hot and thoughtful and hot and true to the characters and hot.  So well written also.  Very impressive 1st foray!



Author's Response:

Hi Delia

 

Glad you found it Hot and true to the characters. Thank you for the compliments, they are very much appreciated.

 

Take care

maryhell

 

Summary:

 

Garcia and Reid help JJ out by watching her house on Halloween night. In the process, Garcia finds out a little fact about Reid that she refuses to accept. Entry to the Candy Land Challenge (Round 5) at Chit Chat on Author's Corner Forum on fanfiction.net. Reid/Garcia Friendship/humor piece.

 


Categories: Criminal Minds
Characters: Spencer/Garcia
Genre: Friendship, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2127 Read Count: 6291
[Report This] Published: 20 Jul 2012 Updated: 20 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Delia Cerrano Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Candy Experiment

Good job - original, cute & weirdly in character even.

Summary:

Dave is happy when Penelope returns from France. However, Penelope has a surprise for him.


Categories: Criminal Minds
Characters: Rossi/Garcia
Genre: Angst, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 857 Read Count: 248
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2012 Updated: 21 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Delia Cerrano Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That's ok. I never liked Garcia with anyone but Kevin. Certainly not Morgan who is perfect with Reid. Rossi? Better with JJ or even Prentiss.

Summary: Past Featured Story

“Good heavens, boy.” Jack Sparrow drawled as he leaned back in his chair and looked at her, “Are you blushing?” he asked with narrowed eyes and Josette shifted in her chair while fixing the hat upon her head. “No.” she mumbled as she avoided looking at her captain and his latest conquest. Jack studied her face before he smirked, “You’re not a virgin, are you?” his eyes danced with mirth and she scowled.
No, I am. But what I certainly am not is a boy. She thought as she remained silent.

 

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Categories: Pirates of the Caribbean, Alternate Universe
Characters: Captain Jack Sparrow/Other Character
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113819 Read Count: 12215
[Report This] Published: 01 Aug 2012 Updated: 01 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Delia Cerrano Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

Read it all in one shot.  Terrific job on Jack Sparrow character!!  Great story but how can she be any where close to him with all those women he has!! I would have a hard time believing he would give them up.  I'm sitting here ready for the next chapters!! This the 1st story of yours I read but I will be watching for more of your stuff.

 



Author's Response:

Summary:

Jack explains the nature of their parents' jobs to Henry.

I do not own Criminal Minds or any of its characters.


Categories: Criminal Minds
Characters: None
Genre: Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 309 Read Count: 5298
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2012 Updated: 05 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Delia Cerrano Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Adorable! The kids are so sweet and serious.

Mated by Shay Riddle xxx Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

Jethro Finally Gives Into The Urge To Claim His Mate Tim. Shifter AU

 


Categories: NCIS, Alternate Universe
Characters: Gibbs/McGee
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2472 Read Count: 245
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2012 Updated: 05 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Delia Cerrano Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved it.  Probably because I think Tim and Gibbs are the perfect couple.

Summary:

This is a scene, written as a prose poem, from a larger work that I have only begun to write.  I am actually fairly new to Harry Potter fandom (I know, a late bloomer!), and I am completely new to fanfiction reading and writing, so any help/comments/reviews/love/etc. are appreciated!  (Frankly, I'm not even sure I'm posting this right...oof!) Thanks for your support. Hoping to find some like minds here.   XXOO ~moffetta

 

Warning!  This is a sex scene, written from one person's point of view.  It does contain graphic images and language.  Thanks!

 

 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Original Fiction, Harry Potter, Erotica
Characters: Severus Snape/None or OC
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 300 Read Count: 785
[Report This] Published: 13 Aug 2012 Updated: 13 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Delia Cerrano Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good job of describing emotion...angst but really sad & a downer what with the death of an innocent.



Author's Response:

Thanks Delia for your review!  This is my first attempt at posting anything like this, anywhere!  =)  I haven't even read much fanfiction of any sort at all.

Though it is depressing...I meant it to be, I always thought of Snape mostly as a deeply sorrowful man.   Powerful and vindictive yes, self-absorbed for sure, dedicated certainly, but mostly very, very sad.  Crappy childhood, and he lost almost everything the day Lily died.  This is supposed to happen after all that.  So yes, it is a downer, but his whole life is.  I'm glad actually that I pulled that off well!

Just to clarify...did you think the girl in the scene died? I didn't mean it to read that way.  I'll take any feedback you can give, please!  =)

The problem with me posting the actual story is I don't write things in order, so I'm not sure if I should just post chapters and scenes randomly, or wait until it's done...=P

Thanks again for responding.  I really appreciate it.

 

XXOO moffetta~