Reviews by sarah38
Summary:

Living Amongst Vampires Banner

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238914
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
Reviewer: sarah38 Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I am so pleased you have come back to writing this story, I really like it, in fact I have read it twice, and I recently read the last chapter again, and when I saw that you had updated it I was very happy.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan's intrigued by vampires. Edward Cullen's bored and alone. What happens when they meet? AU, vampire. Inspired by Katy Perry's ET.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 72381 Read Count: 14583
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 27 May 2013
Reviewer: sarah38 Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow I have just finished reading sideline, and I loved it, I have read other stories of yours you are a fantastic writer, I saw this story and had to read it so I hope you do expand on I can't wait to see what talents Bella may have.



Author's Response:

Expanded!  I'm so glad you want more :)

Summary:

I am a vampire. He is a human. I am designed to kill. He is my ultimate prey. But can I make him mine?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Fantasy, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, Stories Read by CNYBella, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 163034 Read Count: 48916
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 31 Jan 2015
Reviewer: sarah38 Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I love this story, I love all your stories, I do think that both Bella's and Alice's sire is the same and I think it is james, I also think that maybe James and Victoria will team up.  But anyway I can't wait to read more.

Summary:

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Very mature subjects matter - AU- Canon pairing – Edward kidnaps Bella to use as a toy. The Cullen's attitudes different from canon – lots of lemony goodness, or badness depending upon your mindset. Some bondage, ok lots of bondage...


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43257 Read Count: 36496
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2012 Updated: 20 Jul 2012
Reviewer: sarah38 Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I have just started reading this story, and I love it already

Summary: Past Featured Story

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In 1843, Queen Victoria reined alongside etiquette and protocol. Everything was judged from who you were to what you owned and how much status you had.

 

Can a small farm girl from Lord Cullen's estate bring life and happiness back to his son? Will Master Edward see her for what she is as a person, or who she is by birth? And what does Lady Cullen have up her sleeve?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Historical, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89224 Read Count: 248442
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2012 Updated: 04 May 2013
Reviewer: sarah38 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 1: September 1st 1843

I have only just started to read this story, but I love it so far, I absolutly love the era of the 1800s I love how they dressed, that era has always fascinated me.

Summary:

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After eleven complete stories for Twilight, this is my final one, as well as the last of my rewrite of the saga. It has been an incredible, roller coaster, blessing of a time, and this fan fiction is for every reader, from I'm His Lobster to now, who has ever clicked on my stories. Thank you for the amazing support. Now go read, review, and enjoy.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Mysteries & Thrillers
Series: Rewrite of the Saga
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81431 Read Count: 10643
[Report This] Published: 07 Sep 2012 Updated: 31 Dec 2012
Reviewer: sarah38 Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23- Mama

OMG that has to be the hardest chapete I have read so far, poor bella having to kill her own mother, I knew that she would come out of it in the end but ti still has to be hard for, I know now that bella will fight even harder now to keep her family, the volturi will not win now.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading Sarah! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story :) JB

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Where Breaking Dawn end, this is where Leaving Forks picks up. It has been four years since the Volturi attacked the Cullen's and everything is going well. Or, is it? Aro has something up his sleeve to lure the Cullen's where he wants them, with the introduction of a new vampire. See what happens now, and will they survive?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Angst, Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Historical, Hurt/Comfort,, Mpreg, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94062 Read Count: 19830
[Report This] Published: 04 Nov 2012 Updated: 06 Dec 2012
Reviewer: sarah38 Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Photos

I love the story and I am pleased you have continued on sort of from where BD finished but how come you have the chapter repeated again in the same chapter.  once again I love the story.



Author's Response:

There are two? I will look into it. I have been doing some editing to the story. I figured out that some of the chapters has double. I will look and fix. Thank you so much for telling me. Thanks for reviewing too.

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Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read, Read, Read, Read, to read, to read, to read, to read, to read, Tufano79 Stories, Tufano79 Stories, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01 Jan 1970 Updated: 01 Jan 1970
Reviewer: sarah38 Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Is that the end or are we going to see her changed into a vampire, and what she goes through.

Capture by Dinia Steel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 91]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Alice, Bella, and Rosalie have been picked up in a scoop of humans by the Volturi to be used as slaves and for various businesses they have in their dealings with humans. Bella and Rose are chosen as sex slaves, while Alice is chosen to be eventually changed for the bureaucracy due to her potential for see the future. What will happen to them?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward, Emmett/Rose, Jasper/Alice
Genre: Drama, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29581 Read Count: 26677
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2013 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: sarah38 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like it so far, I would like to als hear what the back stories are of our boys, also are the girls their mates and will they be changed.

The Selkie Wife by Lissa Bryan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 37]
Summary: Past Featured Story


 


 


Set during the reign of "Bloody Mary" Tudor. Bella is captured by Edward to raise his daughter. He promises to release her one day, but will he? Court intrigues and danger around every corner. Can they, and their new-found love, survive? Rated M/OOC/AU


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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Historical, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Selkie
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 190594 Read Count: 29592
[Report This] Published: 30 Nov 2011 Updated: 07 Apr 2016
Reviewer: sarah38 Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this story, I have to admit when I first started I wasn't sure I would,  but I love period stories, especially ones this far back, I am impressed on the research you have obviously done to write this story, with as much historical accuracy as you have, some of the things you have in the story I looked up, to see how accurate it was and you have got it as accurate as you can, even down to the selkie part, I love the history of the Royals especially the tutors,  so thank you for this amazing story.

 

Broken Immortal by Sephrenia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 270]
Summary: Past Featured Story

When Edward leaves Bella she gets changed when she visits the meadow. when she wakes she hides in the Cullen mansion. Will she be reunited with her mate? 1st story ... constructive criticism welcome

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55208 Read Count: 60603
[Report This] Published: 28 Aug 2013 Updated: 04 Nov 2013
Reviewer: sarah38 Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I have to say I have just started reading this story and i already love it, can't wait to read more

 



Author's Response:

Great!!!    welcome and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story .... thanks for the review

Seph

Summary:

One time, no matter how hot or sexy was not enough. We both knew it. So he made me an offer I couldn't refuse. For the next year my body would belong to Edward R Cullen; the billionaire, the genius, the sex addict and the married man.  How did I get here and why don't I want to leave? 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 104383 Read Count: 281021
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2013 Updated: 29 May 2014
Reviewer: sarah38 Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

I loved this story and I loved the way you portrayed Edward and bella I loved how they both grew  I would also love to see a sequel I think that would be awesome

 

Summary:

Future-take to Facing the Inevitable. Come see how Cheri and Assward have been doing... 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: The Inevitable, Stories I've Already read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6198 Read Count: 3033
[Report This] Published: 26 Dec 2013 Updated: 26 Dec 2013
Reviewer: sarah38 Signed
Date: 26 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chasing the Inevitable

I would love it if you could write more it could be a sequel, there are some things that have been started in this part, like the horrible agent janice and also the new show bella has going also the fact she is pregnant, there are endless possibilities for you to write more.

Silence is Golden by Dishie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 809]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward wanted her from the moment he saw her. Bella doesn't have time for a man. What happens when Edward takes a risk? The answer is he will possess her body, but she'll possess his heart. Will Bella learn who Edward really is? Silence is not always Golden, but the Sex sure is Divine! 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137389 Read Count: 94710
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2014 Updated: 04 Oct 2014
Reviewer: sarah38 Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this story, and i like where it is going, obviously things will hit the fan when all is revealed, but as always with HEA it will come right, I love your stories this is the third one I have read of yours, keep it going and dont listen to all the people with negative comments about the story it is great.

Summary:

Charlie Swan made a deal with the devil. Owing a debt he couldn't repay, he took the cowardly way out and offered his daughter's services to pay off his tab. The rich and powerful Carlisle Cullen greedily accepts, and Bella finds herself at the mercy of a dark and violent man. Will she survive? Or will he beat the life out of her? Dark themes. NC-17 for violence and language. AU.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39293 Read Count: 72875
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2014 Updated: 19 May 2015
Reviewer: sarah38 Signed
Date: 12 May 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Well that was interedting I was certainly not expecting that, I truly hope bella can survive this with he sanity intact.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Heavy is the head that wears the crown, noble the ill-prepared to turn it down. Bella is no one, a lady's maid at a girl's school until the princess she serves changes her life with a choice she would never make herself. Now she sets off into a world she doesn't know, betrothed to a man who will never know her.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 123897 Read Count: 109561
[Report This] Published: 21 Mar 2015 Updated: 26 Dec 2016
Reviewer: sarah38 Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

I have to say I read most of this story along time ago and I enjoyed it then but I had never read the whole story till now I think because it was not finished I think I read up till just after the birth of her first baby   I have now read the whole story from beginning to end and after watching game of thrones I understand the genre you were portraying and I can understand the story more. I loved it 

 

Renovations by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 312]
Summary:

Renovations

Banner by Mina! 

 

Isabella Swan, thirty-six, is reeling from her recent divorce from the man she thought she would be spending her forever. Her mind and heart shattered, Bella purchases a home, but in need of repair near Seattle. Bella hires two men, Edward and Garrett to complete the repairs of her new home. Will these men renovate Bella's new home or is more in store? AU/AH Full Summary inside.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Garrett
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Renovation Series, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28282 Read Count: 72827
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2015 Updated: 30 Aug 2015
Reviewer: sarah38 Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sounds good so far I cant wait to read more.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 Bella is a good, Christian girl with a dark secret. She wants the pierced, tattooed, and foul-mouthed tattoo artist who lives across the hall from her. Will she ever get him to notice her without compromising her beliefs?

 

Thanks to the LOVELY heartfortwilight for my banner!  I LOVE it!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dangerous Liasons
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74153 Read Count: 99337
[Report This] Published: 08 Jul 2015 Updated: 24 Nov 2017
Reviewer: sarah38 Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I love the story so far and cant wait to read more, I love an edward Bella story where he is tattooed and pierced, and for any of those people that have a go at you for changing the characters from their original character, they obviously have not read many Bella and Edward Stories, I have read alot and they are always different in every story, so keep writing the way you are as it is an awesome story already.  Plus I love the pics you put in especially of Edward



Author's Response:

Thank you SO much!  Makes me feel a lot better after a somewhat bad day of teaching!

Reviewer: sarah38 Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I just thought I would say I had started reading this story a while ago and have only just come back to it I do love it but as you know real life takes over, I just got to this chapter and am sorry to hear about your father, my son who is 18 now and a platelet disorder when he was 4 at one stage he had no platelets and had to have a transfusion so I can sympathise on that side of his illness it was a long year but of course he is fine now and studying to be a nurse.

 

Summary:

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Sequel to THE SELKIE WIFE "I will find you again, my love." As one life ends, another begins. True love never dies. For twenty years, Bella has searched for Edward. She finally discovers him again, in the New Plymouth Colony. Will Edward's soul remember hers? Will he fall in love with his selkie wife again as they build another life together in this new world? Rated M/OOC


Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Selkie
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 111153 Read Count: 7360
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2013 Updated: 11 Jul 2016
Reviewer: sarah38 Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love your stories, and I would love to read more of these two, maybe with Edward as a vampire, and she finds him again, and how the cope with him being a vampire.

The Undecided by MarieCarro Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 190]
Summary:

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Bella thought she knew what her life looked like. It was normal teenage angst and high school boredom. However, one night proves her very wrong and she realizes everyone has been lying through their teeth. Bella isn't normal. Bella is a Witch. And she has a very important choice to make. B/E, Mature Content, AU/A(H)


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Supernatural, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107893 Read Count: 27072
[Report This] Published: 07 May 2017 Updated: 28 Nov 2019
Reviewer: sarah38 Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Oh wow  at the beginning of this story I wasn't sure about it but I kept reading and I love it it's such a great story, I got to the end of chapter eleven and realised there was no next chapter I was upset I love it

 



Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! You can find the teaser for ch. 12 on my blog at mariecarro dot wixsite dot com slash author slash blog dash 1 Have a good one! ;-)