Reviews by bmthespian
Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195557
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 34: Happier Times

Great story, sad to see its not finished. 

The Devil In Me by cristina Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 376]
Summary:

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Banner made by Fallingsnow Winter 

 

The devil is charming, sweet and manipulative and he always get's what he wants no matter the cost. A dark story of love. ON HOLD UNTIL AUG 2016.

 

And StillDreaming85

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Horror, Romance
Language: English, French
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58663 Read Count: 52216
[Report This] Published: 08 Jan 2014 Updated: 19 Apr 2015
Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting so far.  I look forward to reading more  

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Good chapter

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Good chapter. 

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Good chapter

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Interesting so far.

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Good chapter

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Great chapter

 

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Good chapter

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Great chapter

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Good chapter

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 17 May 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Good chapter

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

great chapter  

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Good chapter. 

Dark Lies by cristina Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 603]
Summary:

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Now that all the lies have been exposed will Bella and Edward be able to survive?

Sequel to Dark Velvet

Banner by AnaRodFranco 

Beta'd by Kim Ginsberg & Sjdavis84.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88581 Read Count: 97745
[Report This] Published: 14 Jan 2014 Updated: 30 Apr 2015
Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Good chapter

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Great chapter

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Good chapter. 

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good start

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Great chapter.  I'm glad The both let Esme have it at least. 

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

good chapter  

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

great chapter

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

good chapter

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

great chapter

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Great chapter. 

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

great chapter  

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Good chapter

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Good chapter

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Great chapter.  Love his soft side when it comes to children  

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Great chapter.  Glad they take her concern seriously

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Great chapter. 

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Great cbapter.  Glad Eddie finally knows the truth  

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Great chapter..but again with the evil cliffhanger. 

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Great chapter.  Love Edward with the baby. 

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Great chapter  

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Great ending 

Summary:

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A ruthless criminal detached from all emotions brought to Las Vegas on a job. A young woman trying to move on after escaping an abusive relationship.

 

One drunken night brings them together. Can they survive in a world filled with lies and deception? Mobward/Mafia.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 136341 Read Count: 126061
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2014 Updated: 04 Feb 2016
Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 19 May 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Great chapter

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Great chapter  

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 31 May 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Great chapter. 

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Great chapter. 

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Good chapter. 

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 14 May 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Great  chapter

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Great chapter. 

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 20 May 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Great chapter

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Great chapter. 

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Great chapter

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Great chapter. 

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Greag chapter   

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 12 May 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Great chapter. 

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 26 May 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Great chapter

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 28 May 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Great chapter  

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Great chapter.  Glad she told him what happened  

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 27 May 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Great chapter. I love that his instinct is to protect her from the violence. 

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting do far. 

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Good chapter

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Great chapter  

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Good chapter. 

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Good chapter

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Good chapter. 

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Great chapter....good to see she did something that seemed to hit home at least a little. 

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Great chapter 

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Great chapter. 

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Great chapter. 

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

great chapter  

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Great chapter.  Good for Bella 

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Good chapter

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella moves into a new apartment and meets a sweet, talkative little girl named Natalie.  As they get to know each other Bella notices things that worry her.  One night changes everything for Natalie and Bella meets handsome police officer Edward, they set out together to give Natalie a better life.

 

Written for Fandom Against Domestic Violence. Bella, Edward and the rest of the gang are Stephanie Meyers' but Natalie and the story are all mine. This is not finished and right now I am not able to really work on it, so bear with me and just enjoy the story as it is.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 52897 Read Count: 38943
[Report This] Published: 09 Jul 2014 Updated: 02 Jun 2017
Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 07 May 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Great story, I look forward to reading more. 

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Great chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A/U AH - Three Witch sisters move from Salem, MA to Houston TX where they rent to own the ancestral home of one Edward Cullen. For some reason Edward has a dream about a dark haired beauty that he has yet to meet. Does Bella already have Edward under her spell? What mayhem will the Witch Sisters bring into the lives of Edward, his family and his friends?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 47434 Read Count: 30293
[Report This] Published: 24 Oct 2014 Updated: 22 Oct 2015
Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Hawaiian Dream

Good chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

See you next chapter.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Planning

Great chapter 



Author's Response:

Great Reader!

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - YES!

Great chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  <3

See you next time.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - A Heritage House

Great chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Almost done with this one too!

See you next chapter.

Hard Hugs 

Dinia

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Alice and Jasper's Day

Good chapter  



Author's Response:

Thank you!

See you next chapter.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Truth Be Told

Great chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thank You!!!

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Weather Warnings

Great chapter  



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Rosalie and Emmett's Day

Great chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Just A Matter Of Time

Good chapter



Author's Response:

thank you so much!

See you next chapter?

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Realizations

Great chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

See you next chapter.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Four Weeks Later

Good chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thank you.  :D

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 -To Write or Not To Write

Good chapter 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - New House - New Friend

Great chapter  



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Great ending  



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I love HEAs!  

Hope you'll follow my next story.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan hates Valentine's Day, and everything about it. Her past experiences in love have left her with a jaded view on relationships. After quitting college, she gets a job at a diner, where she makes friends and finds herself in a new job. What happens when the CEO gets under her skin, will she open up to what she really wants from him, or run off and hide?  all human/olderward - w/a smidge of daddykink. 

Banner by the talented Christag Banners.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 47353 Read Count: 109803
[Report This] Published: 07 Feb 2015 Updated: 18 Feb 2015
Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Great story. 

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Great chapter. 

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Great chapter. 

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Great ending 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan, newly divorced (again) finds that life has changed since she was younger. A/H B+E   Contest entry for: The May to December Romance Contest

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26369 Read Count: 13394
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2015 Updated: 27 Jul 2016
Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Reunion

Missex this chapter because I forgot tovadd the story to favorites  (forgot twcs doesnt send updates for each chapter of you fav an author)  great chapter , glad Conner managed to get his head oug of his rear and glad Bella finally called him on his bull.  Im with your beta I'd love to see this continued  



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I told her I had said all I wanted to say, but she wants more, and to get that she has to help me.  LOL.

Are you sure you can't notified for each update?  I think I do.  Ask Kelly on the Facebook TWCS page.  She can do anything.  :D

Thanks again

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Sunshine

Great chapter. 

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - I now pronounce...

Great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner for this story was made by: Mina


Summary: Between deployments and deaths, will Bella and Edward find their happy place together? When they find their love, will it survive the war they're surrounded by? Tissue warnings are given, but a happy ending is promised. All Human.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26925 Read Count: 34733
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2015 Updated: 16 Mar 2015
Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Great chapter. 

Summary:

 

BANNER BY: FemmeCullen

SUMMARY:  Little Lucy Swan is turning five and her birthday wish is to sing with hot country star Edward Cullen. When her momma wins tickets to see him in concert, will little Lucy's birthday wish come true?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26153 Read Count: 28879
[Report This] Published: 14 Jun 2015 Updated: 27 Jun 2015
Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start...love this Emmett. 

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Great chaptrr.  Love him witb Lucy

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Great chapter. 

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Great chapter I hope we get to see what Rose does to Tanya

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Great chapter...I think it's time for Ms Barrie to retire she clearly no longer has any business around kids. 

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Great ending to a great story. 

Summary:

 

Banner by: Caiteexx Graphics

Summary: Emmett Cullen messes up and has to repeat his senior year of high school. What will happen when he starts bringing home Bella, and how will his father Edward react? Things get intense when Edward starts to think of Bella in more ways than just his son's girlfriend.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85896 Read Count: 126007
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2015 Updated: 05 Oct 2015
Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Great chapter....I like Tia for not being a b about Bella, but she's not a good match for Edward if she thinks someone acting like a gentleman is demeaning to her. 

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Great chapter. 

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Great chapter. 

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Great chapter. 

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Hmm I have the feeling Emmett is going to be the Cullen Alice sees Rose with.  (All his gf look like her). I'm also guessing Bella is by herself and Emmett knows it and is trying to give her a safe place to be and she isn't his gf just a very good friend.