Penname: Westie80 [Contact] Real name: Jane
Member Since: 21 Jun 2012
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I love all Criminal Minds Sg1 NCIS fanfiction I have written some but havent got the nerve to post lol  all are Sg1 storys i did post on another site under a another penname


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Summary: Past Featured Story

If history was different for one of the team, how would it effect the present? (Season 1 spoilers)

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Categories: Stargate SG1, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites E
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 79478 Read Count: 5218
[Report This] Published: 13 Apr 2012 Updated: 12 Jan 2013
Reviewer: JanPan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Oh I love this story when you originally posted it fantastic. Please post more of yours 



Author's Response: Thanks so much! Most of my fics (the less mature) ones are of ff.net and the others on Adult Heliopolis if you wish to read them again. Same user name.

Reviewer: Westie80 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hi I just went on the Heliopolis site and it closed down I can't find your other stories anywhere😧 Is there anyway you can post the rest of your adult rated stories here? 

Anna Poppins by Jekkah Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Hotch hires an old friend as a new nanny for Jack, who has an interesting affect on the team. JJ/Hotch slow build romance and Morgan/OC not a strong focus. AU after 5X13 - Risky Business.

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Categories: Criminal Minds
Characters: Hotch/JJ
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134434 Read Count: 8909
[Report This] Published: 05 Jun 2012 Updated: 16 Feb 2014
Reviewer: JanPan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Of Soft Lips and Valentine's Dates

Oh thank you I love this story. I found that you updated on ff but not here. Please update soon 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: JanPan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Of Sunshine and Fights

Please add additional chapters here pretty please ???



Author's Response:

I've updated with the additional chapters that are written.  Thanks for the interest!

One Night by Flames101 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 24]
Summary: Past Featured Story

No one would ever believe he'd agree to this. But, when Hailey suggests an annual day of freedom from their marital vows he does. The first couple of years, he spends the day alone, at a bar; but, that all changed after Jennifer Jareau walked into his office and into his life. Now, nearly eight years later, one day a year is no longer enough for either of them. JJ/Hotch. Rating M.

* *2-time 2012 Profiler's Choice Award winner for Best JJ/Hotch and Best M-rated fic.


Categories: Criminal Minds
Characters: Hotch/JJ
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 82005 Read Count: 9797
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2012 Updated: 22 Apr 2015
Reviewer: JanPan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: 2006

Please update soon.

Reviewer: JanPan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: 2003

Oh please please update I love this story already 

Reviewer: JanPan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 4: 2007

I had a feeling he would turn up I didn't like Will either lol poor Aaron and his jealously lol 

Reviewer: JanPan Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 5: 2008, Part 1

Oh my that was very hot looking forward to part 2 I hope she dumps Will now 

Summary:

JJ's sexual self-esteem is in the dumps, her friends conspire to help.  Will feature JJ/Morgan, JJ/Rossi, and JJ/Hotch.  Morgan, Rossi and both Hotch chapters are now up, will probably be one more chapter for closure.  Thanks for reading everyone!


Categories: Criminal Minds
Characters: Derek/JJ, Hotch/JJ, Rossi/JJ
Genre: Erotica, Friendship
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12924 Read Count: 7915
[Report This] Published: 28 Jun 2012 Updated: 15 Jul 2012
Reviewer: JanPan Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Hotch

why did you stop there? i hope you update soon



Author's Response:

The next chapter is apt to be a long one also. like to keep my chaps under 5,000 words, lol.  Will probably update later today.  Thx for reviewing

Reviewer: JanPan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Hotch continued

oh i hope there is a part 3 with Hotch. Or is it you that likes to torture us readers lol   Update soon please or just post the next chapter now pretty please

 



Author's Response:

Any torture is inadvertant I assure you... sorry for delay - I hadn't intended to go for a round 3 but the characters seemed to insist. :)

Reviewer: JanPan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Girls Night

Please update I love this story



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you like it

Reviewer: JanPan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Happily ever after

Brilliant ending loved it. And hot too hehehehe



Author's Response:

Thanks - yeah I'm now wondering just how I'm going to tone that last chap down for ff.net, it will probably be about half as long.

Summary: Past Featured Story

When you've lost everything in your life that matters most to you, what do you do? Hotch struggles with this question as he tries to cope with death and the absurd concept of happiness. Warning:Character Death. Eventual JJ/Hotch. Chapter 25 is new. Now complete!

** 2013 Profiler Choice Award Winner for Best Angst fic on fanfiction.net. 


Categories: Criminal Minds
Characters: Hotch/JJ
Genre: Angst, Family, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 45337 Read Count: 4495
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2012 Updated: 21 Mar 2015
Reviewer: JanPan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Mending

Oh poor Aaron more soon please 

Summary:

Haley is not oblivious to her husbands attraction to JJ and decides to take matters into her own hands and have at least some control of the situation.  Touch of femslash in the beginning, brief mention of mff, then mostly straight m/f.  Timeline begins before the boys, before Will - while Hotch/Haley are still together.  Smut alert, notice the rating


Categories: Criminal Minds
Characters: Hotch/JJ, OC/JJ
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25464 Read Count: 11035
[Report This] Published: 13 Jul 2012 Updated: 23 Nov 2012
Reviewer: JanPan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Lol more please



Author's Response:

I'm probably going to have them all dead from exhaustion by the time they finish :).  Thanks

Reviewer: JanPan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh my!!!! Hehehe looking forward to Hotch joining them hehe. Oh don't forget your other story:) 



Author's Response:

updating it as we speak :)

 

Reviewer: JanPan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Haley is up to something that is for sure more please i love this story



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: JanPan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Please update soon that was sooooo hot but you ended it as it was getting good so please post next chapter soon like now :):):):):)



Author's Response:

Thanks, hope to update soon

Reviewer: JanPan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

More soon please. Kind of glad he ignored his wife and continued at his pace but she is definitely up to something 



Author's Response:

Of course she is :) - thanks

Reviewer: JanPan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

In a way I hope JJ gets pregnant just to throw back at Haley. I knew she was up to something and I hope Aaron chooses JJ now hehehe

Reviewer: JanPan Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Menage a trois

I hate Haley... I hope she doesn't get pregnant after this chapter. 

Reviewer: JanPan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Yes!!!! Update pleasseeeeesee

Reviewer: JanPan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Oh when is he going to confront Haley I really want her to get what's coming to her. I wonder what's going through JJ's mind ?!? More please and I was really hoping they had separate rooms too :);):);):);) lol

Reviewer: JanPan Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Wow that wasn't what I expected lol looking forward to Haley getting what she deserves....  a divorce 

Reviewer: JanPan Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Yes I agree with Jekkah a sequel is needed for this one where these must get back together!!!!!!! Please?????????

Summary:

New mother JJ is having a problem that is interfering with her ability to do a press conference and Hotch thinks he has the answer as they improvise for lack of better resources.  Chapter 2 is non-dairy so pretty much squick free.

WARNING:  Potential squick fic and I'm also labeling it as a crack fic b/c I'm thinking a least one person will wonder what I was smoking when I wrote this.  More info inside.


Categories: Criminal Minds
Characters: Hotch/JJ
Genre: Erotica, Parody/Crackfic
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5234 Read Count: 1826
[Report This] Published: 24 Jul 2012 Updated: 28 Jul 2012
Reviewer: JanPan Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OMG!!! I haven't had any children of my own yet but I have read somewhere that men do like the taste of breast milk. Is that a fetish?. I am actually intrigued to find out what happens next because Hotch liked doing that a bit to much. 



Author's Response:

LOL, from what I read it could be anything from a weird fetish to a more natural event of some leaking out during marital relations.  Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: JanPan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh wow wonder what's going to happen next hehehe. Very hot chapter update soon



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Summary: Past Featured Story

It's JJ's birthday and Will tries for the perfect gift, does he succeed?  Only M/F, M/M/F with no M/M.  Update 8.21.16 - definitely smutty which shouldn't be a surprise at this point.


Categories: Criminal Minds
Characters: Hotch/JJ/Will
Genre: Erotica, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8706 Read Count: 5687
[Report This] Published: 18 Nov 2012 Updated: 21 Aug 2016
Reviewer: JanPan Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

More please love any with JJ and Hotch 

Reviewer: JanPan Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh wow more please 

Reviewer: JanPan Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

It's been a year since you last updated this story please please update and finish this story 



Author's Response:

And now over two years, working on update now in case you're still around.

Reviewer: Westie80 Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hi I was going under janpan thank you for answering and yes I am still around lol