Reviews by franmasen
Summary:

Bella is a senior in college looking for a realtionship. Edward is a firefighter who wants someone to care for. They are set up together by none other than Alice. See where the road of life takes them and why you have to 'Just Have Faith'. AH

Epilogue was been reposted after many questions


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 112119 Read Count: 48033
[Report This] Published: 13 Mar 2011 Updated: 24 Dec 2011
Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Bella

I'm identifying me with Bella ¬¬'!!! 



Author's Response:

Thats grea! I put myself in Bella. :) Thanks for the revewi. 

Summary:

 

A/N: This is my entry from the Beautiful Bellies Contest. The prompt and picture I used were surrogacy & #7 (milkshakes).
To Read all the other entries, visit www . fanfiction . net / u / 2791564 / Beautiful_Bellies

Huge thanks to saritadreaming for holding my hand on this one and pushing me in the right direction and working her beta magic with my abuse of the comma. If you haven't read any of her stories, run now.

I admire those who chose to be a surrogate and those that decide to use that method to bring a child into their lives. I've thought about being one myself, having enjoyed both of my pregnancies (I know, not everyone has the same pregnancy experience), but now that I'm older, it's no longer an option. Hope you enjoy this one shot.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10005 Read Count: 765
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2011 Updated: 10 Jun 2011
Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story, even though Bella was a super emocional!!!



Author's Response:

thanks!

The Inheritance by iambeagle Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 169]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Three stipulations are keeping Edward from receiving his inheritance money, one of them being he must obtain a serious relationship. His solution? Pay Bella to pretend to date him. There's absolutely no way this plan can backfire. AH, EPOV

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64211 Read Count: 36644
[Report This] Published: 27 Jul 2011 Updated: 12 Oct 2011
Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 21

Great story, this one goes to my favorites!!!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

When The Twilight Never Comes

Could it be that some things are just meant to be?

Without Edward to save her, Bella is hit by Tyler's van and is taken to the hospital, barely alive. She is lucky enough to cross paths with Carlisle Cullen, a vampire doctor who saves her life.

Bella is in danger once again during a simple trip to Port Angeles and once again, there is no Edward in sight, but Jacob Black is all too happy to step in his place.

Carlisle is dangerously outnumbered when facing the three nomads, until a certain pair of golden-eyed vampires show up to help.

So where is Carlisle's family? Who is haunting his house? Is Jacob Black really gay? Is Sam a drug-dealer? And who is responsible for turning everything upside down—The Volturi? The Quileute Elders? Or maybe the source is much closer to home than everyone thinks.

Some things even Alice can't predict.

WINNER Best Mystery/Adventure in the Emerging Swan Awards 2012.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, Mystery, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 181770 Read Count: 30772
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2011 Updated: 17 Apr 2012
Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Where Is Everybody?

I'm crying here, poor Carlisle...

Compromise by Alley Cat Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Twilight Post Script Challenge entry.

New Moon AU. Edward leaves Bella in the woods after breaking up with her, but even as he tries to stay away, his heart is telling him that which his mind is refusing to accept. Finally, he gives in to his heart's desire and turns back. This is a wish my inner fangirl had made when I first read through the Saga.

Winner of 3rd place in public vote and 2nd place in judges' vote.

Sequel is up! It's called "A Perfect Match" and can be foudn on my profile.

Compromise


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Supernatural, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5414 Read Count: 1094
[Report This] Published: 20 Dec 2011 Updated: 20 Dec 2011
Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Compromise

OMG, that's definitely the perfect change in the story and what I'd hoped Edward would do in the book, I cried with his declaration to Bella, some parts I remember from New Moon, but the rest was incridible, it was like really reading Edward's mind!!!!

 

BEAUTIFUL, BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!! PERFECT

Summary: Past Featured Story

Anything You Wish For

Bella has a love/hate relationship with Edward, the new Finance VP of Cullen Communications. Well, mostly, it's a hate relationship, so when he spills his drink on her dress on the company's Christmas party, she tells him exactly what she thinks of him.

His reaction? He kisses her!

"My finger was still placed firmly in his chest; apparently I was still poking him. "You think you're some kind of God's gift to womankind!" Is that even a word? Oh, who cares! "You walk around like a bloody, er, rooster." Now's definitely not the time to mention that, Bella."

A birthday preset written for shpwhitney.

Sweet, funny, and fluffy. All Human.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15405 Read Count: 13383
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2012 Updated: 05 Jan 2012
Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Epilogue – Be Mine

Great story and perfect ending!!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Home

Ohhhh, so beautiful, I almost cried when Edward appeared so sad at Bella's house!!!

Summary:

Sequel to Compromise. NM and Eclipse AU.

Alice predicted a summer wedding, but she did not say that getting there was going to be easy. There is a newborn army coming to attack the Cullens, and a surprising alley is standing with them for the fight.

In the meantime, Bella and Edward make an effort to change the way things were between them and start exploring their boundaries...

A Perfect Match

Bella looked at him with eyes still veiled with lust and smiled. "You liked that." She marveled at the discovery. "You like me biting you."

"Yes, love." He smiled at her, slowly unhooking her leg and bringing them both to a sitting position. "I do."

"Then why...?"

He gently caressed the frown on her forehead. "I like that a little too much," he explained. "To humans, the neck is a very sensitive area as it is, but as a vampire, having you bite me there..."


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8610 Read Count: 973
[Report This] Published: 14 Apr 2012 Updated: 14 Apr 2012
Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: A Perfect Match

Perfect and without Jacob it was better yet!!!!!

[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 31 May 2012
Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Edward: A Brief History

That's why I'm not a really big fan of kids, they're mean and even when I was kid I hated when they were making fan of the others!!!! Stupidy kids

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Bella's Life

OMG, kids are worse than adults most of the time, I don't who said that children are sweet and innocent  ¬¬'!!!! Sweet and inoccent my ass...

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Dinner for Five

OMG, I hate Carlisle and Emmett, Esme and Rosalie must give them some punishments (I know that Rosalie don't know Emmett, but she will, make him suffer Rose)..

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Plans and Preparations and Planes

Ohhh, go Rose, Emmett deserves anything that you'll do to him!!! kkkk

Uhhhhhhhh, Edward's so sweet, I've to find a man like him for me!!

Summary:

I am a vampire. He is a human. I am designed to kill. He is my ultimate prey. But can I make him mine?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Fantasy, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, Stories Read by CNYBella, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 163034 Read Count: 48916
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 31 Jan 2015
Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

At least the other vampire is dead, but the sad part is that Alice and Bella's sireis with Victoria, the crazy bitch...

 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Apparently Irina and Laurent can never be trusted!!!

 

Why the hell Bella doesn't rip Emmett's arm off??  It would make him learn something!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

James has to suffer, he needs a vampire capable of making him feel every torture, every abuse, that he made his victims feel, and it needs to be the pain from all his victim!!!!! sick bastard

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Poor Esme, she should have drinked the blood from her parents too, but her husband sure as hell deserved worse!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan works as a nurse at Cook County Hospital in the ER. She's older and desperate for love. It's hindered by her shy personality and plump body. Her father, whom she lives with, teases her relentlessly for being fat and single.

Edward Cullen, thirty-three, is hired as a doctor in the ER. He's getting over a divorce. He moved to Chicago to be closer to his family: sister, Rosalie, and brother, Jasper. Rosalie is younger than Edward by ten years and is struggling with an eating disorder brought on by a heinous rape of her ex-boyfriend. Jasper, twenty-seven, is finishing up his doctorate in history.

Bella is charmed by this new doctor in the ER. He's kind and thinks about his patients and maintains a friendly rapport with the nurses and orderlies. Edward is intrigued by the sad nurse who does her job efficiently but doesn't have a sparkle in her eyes.

Will she allow Dr. Cullen into her life or will she let her insecurities get in the way of her happiness. Perhaps, Dr. Feelgood can write her a prescription. A prescription for love...

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 331720 Read Count: 419077
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Aug 2013
Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

 

Professionalism aparently doesn't exist anymore, so sad, a lost art aparently. What the hell is wrong with this people? Behave yourself while doing an interview.

OMG, the world is lost.

Edward's such a sweetheart, letting Bella talk about children without making her feel like she's steps ahead of him, gotta love this man even more. o/ Bella's finally letting go of her fears and is seeing that Edward really loves her and wants to have a life with her.

So Jasper's going away, hum, serves him right after everything that he did, and the worse thing is that he didn't even had a reason... stupid man.

 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

OMG, I didn't think it was possible to hate Jasper more, but how I'm surprised that it is!!!! Die alone, Jasper, no Alice for you ever again, hope you get bold and ugly, because the ugly soul you already have, jerk!!!!

 

 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

So much to talk about this chapter that's a little hard to put everything in words, but I'll try: 

1- Jasper deserves to be alone until he grows up.  The bastard!!!

2- Jacob's jerk that deserves to go down, terrible doctor, he loves the money and the power, but is horrible at taking care of pacients!!

3- How the hell Charlie found U$250.000, who gave it to him???

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

It's difficult to change when you don't love yourself, everything is hard and impossible!! I understand how Bella feels.

 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

At least Bella realises that she still has some problems to trust people, but hoppefully she'll get help from the therapy and from her friends...

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I understand Bella, no one did to me what they did to her, but I think it's in my nature to not trust very easily, in a way it's good, but at the same time it's very lonely.

I hope that Bella's able to change, but not give all her trust to anyone, she needs to guard her heart a little bit... 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

What the hell is wrong with those jerks?? Bella never never did anything to any of those people but they still treat her horribly... They need to grow up!!!

 

I want a Edward for me, because Jasper is on my black list with what he said about Bella!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I don't even know what to say about Charlie, but if not even losing his leg AND his daugther made him change, nothing will, so maybe he needs a little time in jail!!!  

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

OMG, Jacob's the new surgeon, now that's a problem , ¬¬  we can only hope that Bella'll be ok...

Uhrrrrrr, this Jasper is an ass, I almost wishing for Alice to break up with him!!! 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Yay, this chapter only proves that Bella's changing and becaming the woman that she was always supposed to be!!!! 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I knew it, Jasper didn't deserve to be forgiven, jackass, but now Bella has another idiot hating her without motives.

Poor Bella, with some much hate coming her way, she absolutelly deserves Edward and a lot more!!!! 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Loved this chapter, Edward's just so cute and "perfect", gotta love him!!!!

And is better Jacob tell who really gave him the key and not accuse anyone else!!! I think it was Jessica!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Even I am afraid of the way Jacob looked at Edward, and I found strange Jacob taking about someone named Sam, we know one, but would so strange for him to be giving/selling medication to Charlie... 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Poor Edward, he didn't have an easy time since he started working in the hospital, his work load only increases every time... 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

So Jacob had something to do with Charlie, weird association there!!!

Mike'll not be missed, and neither Jessica or Tyler. I don't need to say anything about Jacob, that one should never have existed. 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I could live without knowing what kind of smell Edward lets in the bathroom, that's not good for my image of him!!! Disgusting, ewww...

 

I still can't understand why Jasper hated Bella so much, in the end he didn't even had a reason for it!!! 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I loved everything that Edward said to the fly attended, her lack of professionalism made me want to beat the hell out of her, why this kind people don't respect others??? 

I've to go to Hawaii someday *sigh*

Summary:

 

I was given 3.5 days to come up with a story for the Drabble War 'DYAC' prompt.

 

 

 

JA Mash and Texasbella said 'You have to use this one' and showed me the picture.

 

 

 

Of course, never one to turn down a challenge, I agreed.

 

 

 

They gave me a maximum word count of 9k and a couple of extra words to use, can you guess what they are?

 

 

 

This is an Edward and Bella story, with a sweet Esme thrown in :)

 

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4666 Read Count: 54767
[Report This] Published: 28 Jul 2012 Updated: 28 Jul 2012
Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

She's so right, kkkk if he proposed than she sould get a ring!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

kkkkkk, better yet, stop having sex with 10 different people every week...

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Men are always children on the heart and in mind too!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

OMG, that one was to die for, kkkkkkkk

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

kkkkk, poor innocent Esme, kkkkkk

 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

What is the meaning of the thing that Edward put in the end of his message??? @>--;-- 



Author's Response:

It's a Rose hun x

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

The worse is that the first and the second I undertood, kkkkkk, the rose was the problem, kkkkkk

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

kkkkkk, I can't believe that he went to her house to take over her bed!!!!, kkkkk

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Even I understood, kkkkk

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Esme has a problem with privacy!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

That's way I prefer tradicional food, kkkk

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Ohh the joy of being a daughter-in-law!!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

kkkk, you could easilly get lost in Bella's mind, kkkkk

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

kkkk, Bella's never going to learn the lesson, kkkkk

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

kkk, thanks for the subtatle in the last chapter, kkkk

 

Poor Esme, they took her from her esperimental cooking, to had to find a way to distract herself, kkk 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

She should be happy that with their own house Esme'll not have the chance to see the messages that she sends to Edward!!!! kkkkk

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Aparently Edward didn't learn to not let his phone anywhere, kkkkk!!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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In 1843, Queen Victoria reined alongside etiquette and protocol. Everything was judged from who you were to what you owned and how much status you had.

 

Can a small farm girl from Lord Cullen's estate bring life and happiness back to his son? Will Master Edward see her for what she is as a person, or who she is by birth? And what does Lady Cullen have up her sleeve?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Historical, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89224 Read Count: 248473
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2012 Updated: 04 May 2013
Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Charles is so cute, smart little boy!!

 

Poor Bella, it's not the company that she doesn't like, is the enviroment, damn town people!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Is she pregnant already???? Yay, Edward'll go insane!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Ohhh, stop talking nonsense Edward!!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 12: October 7th 1843

Ohhhhh, come on, I'm too falling in love with Edward, he's already different from the bitter man that he was in the beginning of the story!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Ha, Bella had to take matters in her on hands!!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Charlotte's so going to marry Charles, kkkkkk...

 

Yay, I love the baby making stage!!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 4: September 17th 1843

Okay, Edward has his motives to be so "nice", but he didn't love his wife so he's just felling remorse!!!  I can't wait for him to meet Bella, the girl that doesn't want to get married!!! 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

OMG, I almost die everytime that the chapters end in parts like this one.....

 

I can't wait to see Bella in Esme house and Edward drolling all over her!!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

That's what I'm counting on, that this will have a HEA and that you promissed that, otherwise you will have to run!!! kkkkkkkkk just kidding, I would get tired really fast from running, kkkkk 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I love this story and Lord Edward and Bella are making a permanent residence in my heart too!!! Charles is so cute!!!

 

 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: September 1st 1843

I can't imagine Edward being so different from his mother, but the black sheaps are always out there!!! 

 



Author's Response:

lol, you just never know. :)

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 5: September 22nd 1843

I know that Esme's trying to help Bella, but Bella has so many things to do and going to a dance is not her prioriry and looks like Esme doesn't care about that...

 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 2: September 11th 1843

Ohh, I like when Bella is strong and don't mind what other people think...

 

I can't imagine what Esme wants from Edward, because seeing Carlisle and what he's like with Esme I don't think is possible for their son to be a black sheap!!!

 

I need more about Edward, more, more....

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 3: September 13th 1843

So Edward is a widower, and probably was merried with a beautiful woman, I'll just hope that he's not the ass that I think he is...

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 6: September 24th 1843

I agree with Timothy, but I think Isabella will have kittens if they try to take charge if the farm!!!!

 

 

I can wait for Edward and Bella to meet, but I have a suspicion that their personalities will not match or maybe it will!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 7: September 29th 1843

I can't wait for Edward to meet Bella,o/

 

 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 8: September 28th 1843

Edward is irritating me, he needs to stop being so harsh about everything and everyone!!! 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 9: September 28th 1843

Uhullllllll, yay, they've finally met, and now Edward'll find any excuse to see Bella!!!!  

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 10: September 30th 1843

Just watching that movie "The others" was a little creppy, I can't imagine how it was a long time before that!!!

Poor Bella, having to grow up at such a young age... 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Edward fell fast for Bella, now he just have to convince her, hehehe, that will be a problem for Master Edward, hehehe, maybe milking some cows will help!!!

 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I have to confess that I'm always loking on my email to see if it has a new chapter of this story posted, I'm loving everything about it and can't wait for the moment Edward start to court Bella!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

OMG, don't think that Bella, Edward's probably blaming himself!! At least I hope.

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Edward must write this letter letting her know his felling and not trying to be a friend!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Edward will go insane, and Bella probably didn't respond to his letters because she didn't had paper!!! Bella is lucky to have Esme wanting to take care of her!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Bella's having to many emotional moments, Edward's being so adorable to her that will be difficult for her to resist.

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Ohhhh, this Edward doesn't look like the one in the beggining, so sweet!!! Finally Isabella admited that she likes him!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I can't wait for them to be together, Isabella is so strong, confident and that was possibly what made Edward fill atracted to her after the ball. 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

This two are so cute together, gotta find a Edward for me... *dream*

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Ohhh, o/ Edward will be so happy that Bella doesn't have to be in mourning for so long, and so am I!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Periods are horrible doesn't matter the time, but chocolate always make things better!!! 

Edward is so sweet!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Awwww, Charles is such a cute little boy!!!

O.o We will finally see that talk between Edward and the cousin!! 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Alexandrina doesn't look like a bad person, so I think Bella can calm down!!! 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Alexandrina is very sweet, I'm so happy that she liked Bella!!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Whaaaat???? Edward is sick??? That's so not fair!!! 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

o/ Edward's getting better, I'm so happy, and ohhh,they said I love you...

Who's Edward writing a letter to??? The queen??? A priest (or other kind...)???

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Ohhhh, Edward has to get fast... 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I'm happy to see that everyone accepts Bella, even the queen!!!  

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Yay, their're finally married!!! 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 21 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Edward may not be a virgem, but he sure acts like one...

 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Feliz Natal...

 

OMG, I have no idea how much is 10 pouds at that time, lol, but aparently was a lot, good for Bella, finally she doesn't need to think how she'll pass the month with so little money!!! 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

At least Edward gave her pleasure, he's better than other men that thought the women shouldn't have pleasure in bed!!! 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

I was very happy to see a post of this story today, and I love the way Edward and Bella are with each other!!!

Second Chance by TammyDevil666 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Second Chance

Eric Northman is a marriage counselor, determined to help people in their failed relationships after witnessing the horrible divorce of his parents, but saving Sookie's marriage to Bill Compton is the last thing he has in mind.

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Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, All Human
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TB
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17368 Read Count: 3794
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2012 Updated: 23 Oct 2012
Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

What a son of a bitch!!! Now I would like Eric to have vampire strength. 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow, Eric is good, he only took three sessions to make Sookie see that Bill was a bastard!!!! lol

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OMG, she caught Bill in HER bed with Lorena and she still wants to try fixing her marriage??

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Isabella is a magazine writer, whose life is thrown into disarray when her husband leaves her for another woman. To escape her routine life, she accepts an assignment to interview a Parisian Madame, whom she believes is running a brothel. But Isabella will soon discover that there are more facets to love and romance, especially when Madame Esme selects her as her next project.

WRITTEN FOR THE 2013 JANUARY DRABBLE WARS

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 64 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83682 Read Count: 124964
[Report This] Published: 26 Jan 2013 Updated: 26 Sep 2013
Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 25: The Offer

I knew it, Peter was the boring one, Bella was always doing something different with Rose, but he never changed, and even if Bella think otherwise (only because Peter said that), she's fun woman that was stuck with a man that didn't know how to do anything new!!!!

Did the stupid man had the courage and the lack of originality to propose to two different women at the same place??? Really?? For god sake, Bella, you're better without him.

I'm almost seeing Charlotte leaving his sorry ass, and than he'll come crawling after Bella, but she'll be to happy with Edward to miss anything about that excuse of a man. 

I hate the bastard...

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

My Edward's closer to Henry Cavill, for the Edward in your story and almost every other...

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Midnight Surprise

Ahhhh Frenchward, always giving us the best views... *sigh*

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 26: New Angle

I agree with Esme, Bella should had found something extremely hard and throw at him!!!

 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 28: The Spa

Wow, I just saw the picture of Esme that you've in your mind for this story, and I gotta say, I would love to reach her age looking like that!!! And I just sorry that my Edward never matches Robert Pattinson ¬¬

 

Finally Bella's starting to fight against the lies that Peter said to her!!! The bastard!!



Author's Response:

I sometimes imagine Henry Cavill for Edward, but I went with Rob because I just love him, LOL. Thank you for reading and reviewing. xoxo Mina