Penname: almondgirl3 [Contact] Real name: Meredith Blake
Member Since: 16 Jul 2012
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I like the freedom that fanfiction can give you as a writer. It's like a stepping stone: all the characters are already there, so you don't need to worry about character development so much, you can just get stuck into the story. Letting yourself take inspiration from another writer's world can help build your own confidence as a writer, which can only ever be a good thing.


My email is meredith[dot]blake3[at]gmail[dot]com


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Reviews by almondgirl3
Summary:

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Bella Swan is kidnapped from her monotonous life by the rich and reclusive Edward Cullen who has fallen in love wirh her from afar. Can she overcome her anger and fall in love & can they both learn from their mistakes? 

Rated: M (18 and over)

AH, AU, Contains: Violence, Foul Language, Lemons


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 95443 Read Count: 83049
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2010 Updated: 03 Apr 2013
Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I like how crafty and aware Bella is. Although I do sense that by the time she can actually get away from Edward, she won't want to.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Ooh, is she faking?? She's a smart one. That's if she's faking of course.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A silent war came that changed everything. Humans are chosen at birth to be a vampires mate. What happens when Bella is given to the God of War on her 16th Birthday? Will she survive the darkness and her mate? Or will she beg for her own death.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69505 Read Count: 107390
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2010 Updated: 28 Oct 2011
Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This sounds like my kind of story. I love the dark stuff. And I'm loving your style already.

Entity by birobird93 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

Three friends. Three guys. In the same body. Blood-thirsty murderers, prowling the streets of Chicago, one at a time. "Evil prowls the shadows in this city at night Miss Swan. You will be wise to avoid it...not ask to see it again.” Edward's quest to find the perfect victim. One-shot. Darkward/Mentalward/Sexual content and extreme violence.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Crackfic
Characters: Edward/OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8840 Read Count: 541
[Report This] Published: 07 Apr 2010 Updated: 07 Apr 2010
Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, this was so good. I didn't expect that she was like him in everyway possible. Amazing.

Summary:

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The newest Malfoy may not be in Slytherin but he still hates Ron Weasley. Scorpius is nothing like his father, however. When he finds something he wants, he takes it. He's got his sights set on Hermione Weasley and she won't escape!


Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Hermione/Scorpius Malfoy
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 46467 Read Count: 18104
[Report This] Published: 21 May 2010 Updated: 05 Jan 2013
Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Creepy. Why is it that I find reading creeperfics so interesting?

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I wonder if he knows and condones what Scorpius is doing.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I was not expecting that. At all. Completely and utterly shocked. I like how you've woven it in though, with the male veelas and all. But, if veela are naturally possessive creatures, what happens now that Hermione is mated to both Draco and Scorpius. Do they have like a time share or something? Weird.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Loved it. I didn't find it slow or anything, either. I thought it was needed. Just one little thing I thought you should know, because I'm finicky like that, is that it's 'per se' not 'per say'. It's Latin.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

"So, there’s nothing that we can do. We have to just stand back and let him win...I never realized what she meant to me and now she’s gone"

Ron is such a douche in this. Seriously? He never realised what she meant until now? After knowing her more than half his life? If that's the case, then he truly doesn't deserve her.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

More, please.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I started reading Blood Ties when you first posted it, but I think it dragged on too long and lost itself. I think I stopped reading it when he turned her? I can't really remember. But I'm glad you posted on this one; I like this story. But I agree with you about shorter stories. They seem to be more focused with a short, self-contained story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

FBI psychologist Bella Swan is being stalked by one of criminals she helped put behind bars. When she is forced to leave her home town to lay low for a while, she meets the most gorgeous man she has ever seen. Is he really who he says he is, or is he working for the stalker?

Thank you NoelleSeven for the banner!!!!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 277257 Read Count: 40333
[Report This] Published: 13 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 May 2011
Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Haunted

I really enjoy reading your writing. I've been looking for something that just captures your interest for a while, and nothing did until this. All that time trolling the library did me good.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 So Far Away

Edward's role in this was completely unexpected. I'm loving this.

Summary:

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In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 378869 Read Count: 229618
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2018
Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I liked that Edward slowed the car down of his own accord when he noticed that Bella was uncomfortable with the speed. It's a small gesture but I think a really big one.

Also, about the blood donation, do females give less than males because of their monthly cycle? Odd question and you're probably never going to read this review, but I was just curious as to what your answer would be.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Hmm, I think that the second blood donation is definitely suspect, as are the pills. Maybe they're a ploy used by Aro to get Edward to join his guard?

Summary:

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Edward Cullen is a hematologist by day and a serial killer by night. Because of mysterious circumstances surrounding the death of his mother, Edward is raised by Carlisle Cullen, legendary former F.B.I. agent. Sensing his dark tendencies at an early age, Carlisle molds Edward into a weapon for justice. Edward believes he is unfeeling and emotionless, so he hides behind the facade of a happy-go-lucky family man. Bella, a recovering alcoholic with a dark past, wants to know the real Edward. Can she ever face the monster within in him without being devoured herself? Will a new serial killer in town give Edward the most exciting game of his life?

 


 

Thanks to my beta Twimarti for her superb help in getting this fic ready! This story is a slight Dexter crossover, in storyline and character behaviors. No characters from Dexter will appear. All pairings are canon. Story genre is Horror/Romance/Mystery  Warning This story is going to be very violent, and in a later chapter will have a non-sensational depiction of rape. NC-17 for a reason, but will have a HEA.

Banner by me and the awesome blinkie is by Betti Gefecht

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Horror, Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 42561 Read Count: 6904
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 18 Apr 2011
Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

So good. Really, really interesting.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.

Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.

L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie

Tkegl...Thank you!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 128436
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: A New Beginning

Whoa, so good. Just...wow.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Hate

This is crazy but so fucking good. I'm loving it.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Pull

Whoa, how did she end up there?

And I actually read darkfics for the dark stuff. Weird, right? I like my vampires scary and sexy.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 11: The Gauntlet Pt 2

I like Tanya. It's refreshing not to see her as a jealous slut who only has eyes for Edward. And I like Jasper too. He's interesting, although I'm nervous as to what he has planned.

Ruthless and Ivory by MujerN Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 169]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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He is infamous. Everyone knows about the terrorizing murderer who leaves behind bloody scenes and corpses at night while the city sleeps. Bella, a journalist, investigates and finds her fear turning dangerously into love.

–Ruthless and Ivory
The full story to the Red Ribbon assassin. Finalist to Tattward and Inkella Contest




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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 251248 Read Count: 39987
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2011 Updated: 16 Dec 2012
Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

The prologue didn't capture me, but I'm going to read the next chapter before I leave this story. I like the premise, I think it could be interesting, but the prologue could've been written better. It felt like this information was just being thrown at me, getting it out of the way. I can't really explain it properly, but I found myself skipping a lot of it.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: Fourteen

Bella's in shock and the writing it too articulate to properly convey it. If it was in third person, it could've worked, but it's in first person so Bella's thoughts/words should reflect her capacity---or incapacity in this case.

Summary:

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"Mom sleeping?" I asked.

He nodded. "All pilled up and passed out."

"You drugged her." I assessed, rising to my knees.

"Only suggested she take a sleeping pill." He too kneeled on the bed. "So what can I do for you this evening?"

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

This is dark. Characters: Bella, Edward, and Carlisle


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, G8or Favor8s Read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11281 Read Count: 25852
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2011 Updated: 25 Mar 2011
Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: The Conclusion

What I don't see is how Bella couldn't have foreseen the whole cliffdive thing. As soon as I read that he'd parked in front of a cliff I was like, 'Yep, gonna die.' Seriously...

This was cool though, so fucked up. I liked it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Ex-Senator Edward Cullen has denied himself the pleasure of living the BDSM lifestyle for years now. Shortly after deciding to seek a new sub, he meets artist Isabella Swan in the most unexpected place - her high-school graduation!

 

 

Fabulous blinkie by RoseArcadia

 

Lemons/DirtyWords/BDSM

 

Join the AToH Facebook Group for exclusive teasers and x-rated content!

 

Big thanks to Twimarti my beta!

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 114439 Read Count: 418674
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 30 May 2012
Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 **History**

I didn't think Tanya was a bitch at all. Her and Edward were just too different and she wasn't able to understand, I think her reaction was completely normal and to be expected from someone who doesn't have those needs or wants. And she didn't just give up on him either, she tried to make it work by giving him what he needed until it was borrowing too much from her. Just because Tanya isn't Bella and Edward's true love, doesn't make her a bitch.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Coitus

I really like how their first time happened. I liked that it was natural and there wasn't a big build up to it.

Say Goodbye by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 151]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan loved, until that love was thrown away. She hoped, until it died inside of her. She cried, until the tears dried up, and in their place, darkness fell. She wasn't afraid of it, she embraced it, clung to it. It made her feel alive. Then she got even.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69505 Read Count: 26825
[Report This] Published: 23 Oct 2011 Updated: 03 Nov 2013
Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Cleaning House

I loved this line: "it's just really hard for some people to know how to deal with that kind of sadness"  You put it so well, it was like a major clarification of it somehow. Very succint, and I just loved it. It's so true.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Famous Last Words

Whoa, I actually let out an evil laugh. I'm not even joking.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Warm

Whoaa, well fuck! I was not expecting that. This should prove most interesting.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Territory

Really enjoyable chapter. I'm glad I kept at this story; I found the first few chapters a little hard to get in to. But now, the pace is good, the plot is thickening and I even like the short style of writing you take when she goes into kill mode. Anyway, I'm going to add this to my favourites now :)

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Glory

Really enjoyable chapter. I love the banter between Edward and Bella. It's awesome to read; I found myself smiling the whole time which kind of hurt my face.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Pandora's Box

Fuck, that was an awesome chapter. I would be so pissed if I were Bella.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: In the Light of Day

Interesting chapter. The dream chapter before was good too. I was reading it, and was like 'wtf?' doesn't he need a warrant for that? But alas, it was all a dream.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Watch and See

Dun, dun, duuhhhn. Well, I foresee a killing spree in the not too distant future. Hmm, wonder what will happen when Eddie boy returns...

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Consumed

Interesting chapter. I wonder how her relationship with Jasper and Alice is going to develop in later chapters.

Summary:

Carlisle wants to be happy. With the holiday season approaching, he's left in a bitter and somber mood. His only source of enjoyment comes in the form of fantasizing about his son's girlfriend, Bella. Canon Coup. AH. MelissaMargaret/Me collab o/s


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7326 Read Count: 3923
[Report This] Published: 18 Nov 2011 Updated: 18 Nov 2011
Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was really lovely and sad to read. I feel so sorry for Carlisle, and I can see why he doesn't leave Esme. And I liked that it was a one-shot. Normally I don't read them, but this better fit a one-shot. I think if you were to extend it and write more chapters, you'd ruin the simplicity of it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for.  She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given.  Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him.  Can an uneducated Bella teach him something?  What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325411 Read Count: 255943
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Through His Eyes

Edward's tainted view is completely justified. Yeah, he should get therapy but his reluctance to any basic interaction, apart from sexual, with females is totally understandable. 

God, I wanted Alice to die - actually, I wanted all the girls at the table to just keel over. So frustrating! 



Author's Response:

Loved your review, there is a lot of reading ahead for you, chapter 29 will post on Thursday.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Kasi (&Nikky)

ps...review again at chapter 28 when you get done reading for a teaser of chapter 29..  :)

Savior by Lissa Bryan Rated: M starstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

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"I'm not Bella Swan any more. That girl died alone, in the woods, shortly after my eighteenth birthday.I am Death, and Death wears Christian Louboutins." Entry for "Bella's Insane" Contest. OOC/AU/m

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Horror
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6716 Read Count: 615
[Report This] Published: 13 Apr 2012 Updated: 13 Apr 2012
Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was awesome! I love crazy Bella.

My Perfect Match by HappyMess Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 140]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan never considered online dating. After all, she was only twenty-one. But after too many glasses of wine, her best friend convinces her otherwise. AH. Olderward.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 58757 Read Count: 62611
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 08 Nov 2012
Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I reread this when I got the chapter update. Gah! I need more please :) I really like this. It's got its drama but it hasn't felt melodramatic, even with the car crash. And when Bella ran out after Rosalie's ambush it was completely in tune with her age. I'm worried about this next chapter though. I don't like Jacob! But hopefully it won't be too bad...please? 

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm liking this :) Except I would've loved to have read Bella and Edward's messages to each other from the first night.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

How old did Bella think he was? He wouldn't have looked young, but she obviously didn't know he was nearly 40. Although, considering she used her own birth date as part of her name--a pretty common thing for people to do--it seems pretty stupid that she didn't work out his age in the beginning.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I'm glad Bella didn't take Alice's shit. Age is irrelevant when both parties are able to consent.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I really liked the scene with Edward comforting Bella and making sure she knew none of it was her fault. I felt that was really important and you did a good job.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I liked that Bella didn't come; it's a lot more realistic than always having amazing, mind-blowing orgasms. They make me feel bad.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Yeah, I really just couldn't stop reading this. I love it and want more, please :D

Hot Bubblegum by SoapyMayhem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 655]
Summary:

Bella Swan rose to fame starring in the hit Disney Channel series 'Girl Next Door'. Now that she's finally legal, she's ready to lose the sweetheart image. What better way to start than to get a tattoo? E/B Olderward/Tattward - Drabblish 

 

Now available on Blogger - http://hotbubblegumfic.blogspot.com/

 

 

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banner by SoapyMayhem


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 66 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45471 Read Count: 308300
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

That is just too funny.

Summary:

A new plague has infested the world. Over the course of a few hours two strangers forge together to survive the night in a building that may very well be their tomb. My entry for TillTheWorldEndsContest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Jasper/Alice
Genre: Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8143 Read Count: 105
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I think this could've been really interesting, but you need to keep your language simple. There's too much description and you've overused the thesaurus - even incorrectly at times. At one point you say that Jasper uses the 'oligarch' to hit one of the doctors. I think you mean the bat/club he has, because 'oligarch' is a leader in an oligarchy which is a system of government. I stopped reading after that.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Every political figure has their skeletons and this Senator just likes to play Daddy. Enter the call girl, a woman who gives men exactly what they want. "I would give him what he wanted and what he didn't even know he wanted; then, hook, line, sinker, he would be mine." Daddykink! Mature. ExB

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 215117 Read Count: 402678
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 25 Aug 2012
Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

the text is way too small. i've had too enlarge it in order to read this. that being said, i really liked the first chapter.

Summary: Past Featured Story

banner by IllictWriter

 

The things some people will do for love....

 

Serial Drabble

Rated: NC-17 for gore, violence and graphic hardcore horror 

Genre: Extreme Horror

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Horror
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14160 Read Count: 10346
[Report This] Published: 05 Jun 2012 Updated: 27 Aug 2012
Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Twenty Three

Mmm, really interesting chapter. I wonder who did it. It's making me think that the person who knocked him out in the previous chapter is the same person who killed them. 

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Twenty Two

I was actually just thinking about this story the other day, so I was pretty happy to see the update email in my inbox.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Twenty Four

Ahh! What's she going to do? A needle? All I can think of is that hunchback dude named Lud and I've already got scary thoughts running around my mind.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Twenty Five

Oooh! Wormwood! I love this story.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Twenty Seven

I liked this addition, but I'm freaking! What the hell is going to happen to them? I'm really enjoying this story. I just don't know how dark it's going to get. I've never been put off by dark stories before, so hopefully I can tough it out for you.

Cosmic Love by Joie Cullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward and Bella are soul mates, but she's stolen away and lost halfway to Italy.  Waking up after a fall she has no idea where she is, who these people are with Southern accents, or who she is.  Edward/Bella/Eric Crossover  Rated NC-17 for language, lemon, violence.

 

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Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, Twilight, Canon Pairings, Crossover
Characters: Edward/Bella/Eric
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Ageise02 To Read 2
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68268 Read Count: 9742
[Report This] Published: 06 Jun 2012 Updated: 07 Jun 2012
Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: End Of An Era OR Finally, I Get some

See, now that's exactly how the proposal should've gone in the book. Well, except for the Volturi gate crashing.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: I Love The Hoodoo That You Do!

I was wondering about her bite scar, and then it popped up. I liked that. And I like this.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: I Am Viking, You Are Bella

I liked the end to this chapter. All the triggers are really interesting. I wonder how she'll react if she sees Edward before she remembers everything.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Did They Ever Care After All?

I was uhm-ing and ahh-ing over who I wanted her to be with, but after this chapter I want her to pick Eric!

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Mash Up: Everyone Whines Sometimes...

I thought maybe Eric would continue was he was going to say last chapter. He was starting to say something about what Edward could be but then Pam interrupted him. It gets explained later on, right?

And as you can probably tell, what with me burning through the chapters; I'm loving this.

Wisp by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 871]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward wins more than he bargained for at what was supposed to be a friendly poker game. AH.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304154 Read Count: 219591
[Report This] Published: 06 Jun 2012 Updated: 23 Nov 2014
Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I understand that you needed to create conflict, but I found that psychologist completely unrealistic. Maybe if it was the case worker I'd be more likely to believe his take on the situation, but a psychologist? It didn't do it for me.

Don't worry though; that's not going to keep me from reading this.

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

Me and Mr Cullen Banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 317633
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Our Home

That house is so ugly! It looks like an old people's home.

A Fallen Angel by Ludo13 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 16]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Emmett said that he'd never be able to hit the ball to the heavens with a tree trunk instead of the baseball bat, he accepted the challenge. 

"Well," Emmett uncommonly drawled, "it looks like you've screwed up again big time today, Eddiekins! Apparently, you've just managed the impossible. You hit an angel!

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Winner of Energize W.I.P. awards 2011 for Most Promising Crossover fanfiction.


Categories: Harry Potter, Twilight, Alternate Universe, Crossover
Characters: Hermione/Edward Cullen
Genre: Drama, Family, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué, Romantic Comedy, Spicy, Supernatural
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 28663 Read Count: 5105
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2012
Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: A Fallen Angel

I wasn't sure about this; normally cross-overs don't really appeal to me, but this was really good. And the writing was void of mistakes from what I could tell, which always makes it more enjoyable. 

Onto chapter 2! :)

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: A Productive Mind

Whoa! That was awesome. Super interesting. I like Hermione; so fiesty.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: A Brotherly Nuisance

I'm really enjoying this.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: An Embarrassing Revelation

Loved it.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: An Impossible Possibility

Whoa, how the hell are you going to make that happen? I'm so intrigued.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: A Surprising Truth

Loved those pointers. 

Looking forward to the next chapter :)

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 7: A Profitable Day

I had completely forgotten about this, so I was pleasantly surprised when I got the update email. But, now I don't really know. Maybe it's just me or something? But after re-reading the previous two chapters, this one just seemed incongruous. I found it completely inappropriate that Edward take charge of taking care of Hermione when it had been Esme, Alice, and Rosalie before. Especially considering she's blind and a female. He didn't ask at all, he just assumed the role of caretaker.

And the whole shopping trip was just weird. I stopped reading when Carlisle started talking about how he didn't regret anything.

Sorry.

Let The Right One In by Ludo13 Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

"I'd invite you to come in for a cup of coffee but I know you don't like coffee," she asked him as she stood in front of her door. "It doesn't really matter right now because I'll still want to come in," he replied with a mischievous grin.

It started as a simple offer of coffee. Now it's up to Edward to make a choice between what is right and what is easy.

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Categories: Harry Potter, Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe, Crossover
Characters: Hermione/Edward Cullen
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dangerous Liasons, Mysteries & Thrillers, Pure Romance, Risqué, Romantic Comedy, Spicy, Supernatural
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9843 Read Count: 1287
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2012 Updated: 23 Jul 2014
Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Of Meetings and Coffees

You've skated over a lot of character and relationship development. I would've liked to have read about Hermione's preparation for the night, her thoughts etc. and the actual event and her interactions/dialogue with Edward. I think it could've been really interesting but not currently with the way you've done it.

Summary:

Revised April 2012: Bella Swan is a wallflower. Quiet and shy but with a secret lurking within her soul. Will her new professor and his TA be the ones to discover her secret and what will she think when she discovers theirs? Lemons galore. POLY B/E/J

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Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Stories Read by CNYBella, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 69591 Read Count: 155875
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2012 Updated: 14 Jul 2012
Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Research Proposal

Hot. And I like that Bella's initial response was to run away.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Biding Time

What I really like about this fic is the time jumps between perspectives. It's really interesting to see the story build through the chapters and find out what's been happening while you were seeing a different part of the story. I thought it was well done :)

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Rosalie's Story

I was annoyed with this chapter. I get that this is fanfic and short and everything, I just prefer to read more and get to know the characters better before knowing their backstory. And often, I don't really feel it's necessary--and it kinda felt this way with this. Mostly, I just find narrating stuff like this kinda lazy; it's way more interesting to have characters talk about stuff like this. I'm still going to keep on reading anyway.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Miss Innocent

I think my favourite part has got to be a gay Emmett. I really like that. I also really liked that (and this is a while back chapter-wise) that Edward acknowledges that he was raped. I think it would've been all too easy to just glaze over that and not even talk about it. I thought it was a brave and interesting thing to do with a male character.

This has got to be one of the more interesting fics I've found on here. And I really appreciate the revising (not that I read the original version) but it's nice to have the typos and grammatical errors corrected etc.

Good job :)

Oh, and I like the change you've made to Edward's demeanor. There's obviously still attraction between him and Bella, but I like that he's not really likeable. It'll be interesting to read the dynamics between them and Jasper together.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 36: Doubling Up

That would've been really intense for Bella, and I think that for Edward and Bella to just leave her like that is really irresponsible. If you want to have that kind of play then you have a responsibility to take care of the sub (I know it hasn't really been said, but that's what Bella is in this relationship). I've liked this so far, but this lack of care is offensive.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 40: Sticks and Stones

Wow. I'm so glad Jasper came. What Edward did was not okay; he needs to deal with his shit. You can't have secrets like that and be in a healthy D/s relationship.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Finally fed up Bella snaps from her Zombie State, she goes to the Volturi in seek of help to kill Victoria and to protect all those she loves... But she finds love in an unlikely person, a grandfather she has never met, littered with scars and a life with Immortality. Caius/Bella, Ra: M

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Caius
Genre: Family, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: The Unyielding Series, Cruel King and Clumsy Human
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38822 Read Count: 22768
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2012 Updated: 05 Jan 2013
Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I like Peter; I like what you've done with him and his relation to Bella and her family. And I think that the gift of 'knowing' or whatever is interesting, too. Can't wait for more! Oh, and I really appreciate the picture of Alexander in the banner instead of Jamie. He really just isn't right, and I don't think I could read a story thinking that Caius looked like him...

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I liked Caius and Bella getting to know each other, but I was disappointed when he revealed who he actually was. I was so excited, thinking of how you'd explain Julius Caesar's assassination; I thought it'd be really interesting, that maybe it was all a planned hoax or something. But then it ended up being Marcus biting him while he was in bed with two women. 

I also thought it could be interesting if you had had Marcus be Marc Antony. That would've been really interesting, but I don't think it could've worked since he ended up dying much later.

Anyway, looking forward to your next update.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Ahh! So, so good.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Ooh, what do you have planned? Please tell me it's not the end.



Author's Response:

There will be a sequel. :)

Summary:

 

 

Their music lifted you up, spun you around until you were out of breath and completely unhinged. The way it sank to your bones and tangled in your hair, yanking and tugging it, making you want to get down and dirty. It freed you to do the forbidden, the illicit, the dirtiest, most darkest fantasies. ExB UST Mature. Drug use


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8948 Read Count: 3061
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2012 Updated: 25 Jun 2012
Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I normally don't read OS, but this was awesome. And really hot. I'm going to check out your other ones now.

Wild Child by FluffyLiz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 756]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Just months away from inheriting a fortune and the family business, 17 year old orphan, Bella,  is out of control – a wild child with a platinum card and a killer bod.  Can Edward, as her legal guardian and CEO of Swan Publishing, rein her in and prevent her from ruining everything he’s worked for?  AH.  Rated M for a reason.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, G8or Favor8s Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 212285 Read Count: 151953
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Oct 2012
Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Edward really is an idiot. It was obvious that she was acting out after feeling neglected, yet it took him that long to figure it out.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

The things that Edward said to Bella were completely horrid. I was so disappointed in his behaviour. He's supposed to be the adult and yet he acted so malicious and juvenile towards her. I just hope that he doesn't stay so aggressive and dominant over her - it would be a very unhealthy relationship.

Summary:

Hermione, Ginny and Luna are discussing Superheros but unknown to them they are being spied on, what will our spies find out? Which Superheros do the Witches like and why? Read to find out.


Categories: Harry Potter, All Human
Characters: Other
Genre: Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13948 Read Count: 3554
[Report This] Published: 03 Jul 2012 Updated: 04 Sep 2012
Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

"you're about as dangerous as a blunt crayon" - wicked comment from Draco.

This looks like it's going to be funny :)



Author's Response:

It's one of my favourite lines from this story, I try to use a lot of humour in my stories I hope you keep enjoying it.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Really enjoying this. You don't find many comedic fanfics that are any good.



Author's Response:

Thank you Xx

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Who do you envision as Snape. Because as much as I'm enjoying this, I just can't stand to think of Alan Rickman as Snape, but I can't think of who or what I want him to look like.

Help, cause I think it might burst the bubble when something between them happens! 



Author's Response:

I'm a massive Alan Rickman fan but if it helps I don't mind who you envision, if it helps you to enjoy the story Xx

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Hmm, seems as those this party will no doubt be quite the event.



Author's Response:

It will be a much talked about event

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I forgive you. I think my favourite costumes of the night were the twins and Dracos. Nice choices.



Author's Response:

Thanks :D I spent a lot of time trying to match each person up to the right costume, my personal favourite after the obvious outfits has to be Sirius and Remus who came dressed as Gambit and Beast. Xx

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I never read lyrics when they're pasted into fics. I find it really annoying and it off-putting. And since there were two, it killed the chapter for me.



Author's Response:

I'm sorry that you feel that way, hopefully you'll like the rest of the story. Xx

Summary:

Can true love make the worst nightmare a beautiful dream? Bella is a troubled sixteen years old who is forced to marry her father's friend, thirty-five years old Edward Masen. Will he be her salvation? Will they find love in this odd situation? AH. Slightly OOC

mhnf


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75902 Read Count: 127028
[Report This] Published: 13 Jul 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2012
Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Professor Binns, huh? And teaching history no less.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I really don't like Alice.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Alice is weird and annoying. I don't see what Bella sees in her.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Bella couldn't get a tattoo on top of her scar after only a few days/weeks - I can't remember how long it's been. The ink would bleed and it'd look shit and hurt like a mother fucker. She'd have to wait a few months.



Author's Response:

Well, if the scar is superficial, I guess it wouldn't be that much of a problem. Besides, now they started to use local anesthesia for tattoos too sooo....and there's the fiction part as well. If something isn't always 100% the way it is in real life...take it with a grain of salt, would you? Thanks for reading and reviewing :D

Always on my Mind by jess2002 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 196]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Written with Siobhan! He said I had no life before him. He said that he was my past present and future. I couldn't remember life before him so he must be right. He promised that he would never leave me, but one day that all changed.

Thanks to Christag for the banner!

Thanks to Stepaine Mason for the other banner!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 159709 Read Count: 58818
[Report This] Published: 14 Jul 2012 Updated: 12 Nov 2012
Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Interesting; I'm liking this. I wonder how she'll react when Edward comes into the picture. Will his personality be caring but in an overly protective, domineering way? And because she's been neglected, will she actually like it? I don't know if I've worded my thoughts correctly. I wrote it in a bit of a hurry...I want to read the next chapter ;)

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow. I'm really interested to see how their relationship changes from this to the courtroom in the prologue. Worlds apart.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

That is seriously scary. Edward is seriously scary. It's insane to think of the prologue while reading this.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I don't like that Edward and Bella end up together, but I'm finding this story interesting so I'm going to keep reading it anyway.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Eek! Carlisle is such a creeper! I'm really interesting in reading Esme's POV now. What is her mind like??

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Esme's pov outtake

Poor Esme! I really enjoyed getting her perspective. I knew that from the previous chapter that she wasn't bad but I couldn't figure out why she blabbed anyway. It's so disturbing reading this, but disturbing in a really interesting way. Psychology always is.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Oh my god, what torture that was. Not the chapter, but what they did to her. It's fucking scary...I'm about to go to sleep and I hope I dont dream about creepy Edward or Carlisle.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

She really cannot do anything right in his eyes. And I fucking hate Carlisle! He can go die. Edward too, for that matter. I can't stop reading this though. Morbid fascination, I suppose.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

FINALLY! I hope Edward goes to jail -- same with Carlisle.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

The child psychologist was a poorly written character, I thought. She should've interacted with Bella differently.

I'm pleased we've finally reached the prologue. I really want to see Edward and Carlisle get fucked over. They deserve it, and then some. I don't want to tell you what to write, but I'll be a very disappointed reader if they don't, and I probably won't finish reading.