Reviews by Lori 94
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward over hears a very juicy secret regarding his younger sister, Alice.  The plot to blackmail Alice in order to get closer to her best friend, Bella, forms in his mind, but doesn't exactly pan out the way he wants it to.  Rated for Edward's foul mouth and the sprinkles of lemonade with the eventual lemon.

 

Big fat thanks to Selita for making me this AWESOME banner!!

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michelleab09 from ff.net made me this fantastic banner!!! 

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michelleab09 is at it again with another lovely banner for the waterfall!!

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The lovely Selita made this for me!! I'm so proud of it!! :D :D

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119049 Read Count: 57009
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 22 Jan 2010
Reviewer: Lori 94 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Ch3 - How could you ask me to do something like that?

OMG! I totally love your story!!! Just the second chapter and I'm yours!!! Edward is soooooo sweet  and i love him!!!

Reviewer: Lori 94 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Ch4 - He's got a knife in his hand!

You have no idea how funny i found this chapter!!! Love this!

Reviewer: Lori 94 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Ch5 - Remember your window, Juliet.

Love it! I can't wait to continue reading this later! I have to work or I'd be here all day!!!

Reviewer: Lori 94 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Ch7 - Oh no... no, no, no... not good.

Her dad is such an ASS!!! I hate him! Jake had better be on her side soon!

Reviewer: Lori 94 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Ch8 - For the better or for worse?

Holy HELL!!!!!

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Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Ch11 - Okay, that's not sexy.

OMG! Love it!

Reviewer: Lori 94 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Ch12 - I... blow your mind?

LOL! Your ANs are funny! Love it!

Reviewer: Lori 94 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Ch13 - For the love of God!

I don't know if that's legal...17 year old moving in with 21 year old... and going to High School...? I thought the legal age was 18...everywhere?

Reviewer: Lori 94 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Ch14 - That's why I need you.

ARE YOU F-ING KIDDING ME?????? I can't believe Charlie is still trying to make trouble! What a jerk! I can't believe you left us on a cliff!?!?!?!?!??!

Reviewer: Lori 94 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Ch15 - Look at what sleep got me last time.

I'm so happy she woke up!!!!!

Reviewer: Lori 94 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Ch16 - Wakey, wakey, Belly.

OMG! I love it! It's the perfect plan!?!?!?!

Summary: Past Featured Story

***SEQUEL TO THE VIRGIN SWAN AND THE CULLEN INTUITION***

 

 

The not-so-virgin Bella Swan is moving out of Forks and into Seattle with her beautiful tattooed fiance, Edward. When their perfect bubble pops, how will the maiden Swan fair in the Cullen's domain? Rated for Language and Lemons.



Isn't Selita grand?  Another big fat thanks to her for making this wonderful banner.

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This is my first fan-made banner!  SamasaurusRex did a great job!!  Thank you!!!

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This is my SECOND fan made banner! I feel so special!!  michelleab09 from ff.net made this for me!  Thank you, lovely! Motorcycleward and Bikerella anyone?

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michelleab09 did it again!!  Edward and Bella wedding photo!! :D

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Stories Read by CNYBella, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 168493 Read Count: 44028
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2010
Reviewer: Lori 94 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Ch1 - The Wedding

LOVE it!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Lori 94 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Ch2 - The Day After

I have a feeling that Jane's going to be a problem...

Reviewer: Lori 94 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Ch3 - The Big News

I've lost track of the amount of stories that hook Charlie up with Sue! I think it works!

Reviewer: Lori 94 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Ch4 - Party Time

Loving this story! Can't wait to get to the next chapter! I have to sleep now so i can work in the morning!

Reviewer: Lori 94 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Ch6 - The Birthday Gift

It was a good D/s scene between vanilla's. I liked it alot!

Reviewer: Lori 94 Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Ch9 - Step Daddy Dearest

I don't like Phil at all!

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Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Ch10 - The Screaming Epiphany

Love the Biker Bella!

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Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Ch11 - Provoking the Groom

I want to help Edward beat the ever loving SHIT out of Phil!!!

Reviewer: Lori 94 Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Ch12 - The Proposition

Love it! But I'm scared for Bella!

Reviewer: Lori 94 Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Ch13 - The Truth

Phil needs more of a beating!!! The rest is great though!!!

Reviewer: Lori 94 Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Ch14 - Forgiveness

This was a great chapter!!! I wonder what 'the mothers' had to talk about????

Reviewer: Lori 94 Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Ch15 - The Big Day

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was abso-fucking-lutely PERFECT!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Lori 94 Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Ch16 - Fighting with the In-laws

I love the way you wrote this!?!?!?!!? OMG This whole thing went so perfectly!!!!!

Reviewer: Lori 94 Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Ch18 - First Time for Everything

Love it! Fab chapter!!! Mrs Hale is a pain in the ass!!!

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Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Ch 19 - Boxer Cullen

Mrs. Tyson! LOL! Priceless!!!!

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Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Ch20 - Repercussions

YAY! I'm glad she's leaving!!!

Reviewer: Lori 94 Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Ch21 - Closure

YAY! I reached this chapter!!! I can't wait for the next one!!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 153105
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 May 2020
Reviewer: Lori 94 Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Hospital Admissions

Siobhan is gorgeous! I really got into your story! I'm so glad Edward's family is taking such an interest in Bella!

Reviewer: Lori 94 Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Revelations Before The Fire

WOW! This chapter was crazy! Love it! Can't wait to see what Rosalie says!

Reviewer: Lori 94 Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Flashback

Gasp! He said that! Wow! I wonder what will happen next!!!

Reviewer: Lori 94 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Suppression

Huh... I hope Rosalie really got what she needed from that. I look forward to seeing the rest of this.

Reviewer: Lori 94 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Emotions Involved

WOW!

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Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 7: A Woman's Perception

Wow...That is a harsh life that she was born into. I feel so bad for her and I'm glad Edward saved her!

Reviewer: Lori 94 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Money Problems

Wow! That was harsh but he had warned her! 12 thousand dollars is also an excessive amount of money!

Reviewer: Lori 94 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: What Happens Behind Closed Doors

huh... Very interesting... Nice lemon and I continue to be intrigued.

Reviewer: Lori 94 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning Of The Truth

Very interesting! I think I'll enjoy seeing where this goes.

Reviewer: Lori 94 Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Home Away From Home

So Bella and Rose think alike on some subjects. Good!

Summary:

Sex is just...awkward. One Shot written for the AwkWard Contest. Rated M. **Third Place Peoples' Choice Winner**

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4299 Read Count: 987
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2010 Updated: 12 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Lori 94 Signed starstarstar
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Definitely awkward! LOL! Loved it!



Author's Response:

thank you! =)

Carried Away by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

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Bella developed feelings for Pixie Slippers new VP of Marketing, Edward Cullen, from the moment he entered the office.  But he seems to be keeping her at arms length.  Will she break down his walls, or is she simply letting herself get 'carried away.'

 

Winner of the Office Romance Challenge

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3354 Read Count: 3078
[Report This] Published: 09 May 2010 Updated: 09 May 2010
Reviewer: Lori 94 Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Carried Away

This was very cute!

The Third Wife by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 229]
Summary:

 

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New Banner By Ima Twi Tard and I love her for it!

In my world when a man says "I do," he says it a lot. In my world it is not uncommon for a man to have more than one wife. We are not your everyday poly family, we are new breed. Or should I say a very old breed?

AH/AU Slash and multiples. Don't like it, don't read it. NC-17 (short story contest)


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25995 Read Count: 55728
[Report This] Published: 19 Dec 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Lori 94 Signed
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This sounds like a good story! I look forward to seeing more!

Reviewer: Lori 94 Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Stone the bitch! LOL! No, I'm not that mean. I guess the Scarlett Letter treatment is good enough.

Reviewer: Lori 94 Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Loved it!

Reviewer: Lori 94 Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Uhmmm...did you lag behind in your updates here? I'd swear i read this one already and it was great both times.

Reviewer: Lori 94 Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I'm sorry but I feel like I've read this before...did you re-write it?



Author's Response:

no but if you read on FFN its one ahead, i discovered i missed updating this last time. so i have another chapter to up load this week. So sorry! i dont know how i missed putting it up here too

 

Reviewer: Lori 94 Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

*Pouts* You know, when I update my stories, I post them at BOTH sites within hours of each other... *Smiles Sweetly*

Control Freak by vampiremama Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

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My enrty for Fans Vs DV.

 

Edward has been looking for the perfect partner. A story of relinquishing control.

 

BDSM Themes ahead.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6706 Read Count: 3725
[Report This] Published: 18 Mar 2011 Updated: 18 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Lori 94 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I have a few comments.

1) I enjoyed the story very much and there were no misspellings or gramatical errors that I'd have to read around.

2) The one problem I have is that part of the reason she sent him the package was to address the reason he left without saying anything to her that first night and she didn't address that at all. She just said that it will never happen again. If he didn't explain himself, she would never understand.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your comment. I understand what you mean and I sort of wished you had been my pre reader now. LOL. There should have been a bit more discussion about why he left, you are right.

 

Thanks for reading.