Reviews by Fefe
Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary - Bella is kidnapped by a beautiful stranger that cannot kill her, but hates that a human can have power over him. Which road will he choose? When Jacob wants her, will that make his decision? Both men want to own Bella, however her heart only belongs to one. Which will have her in the end? Can Edward protect her from Jacob and his past, or will she eventually be consumed? 

 

 

 

Banner Created by the wonderful MsAmbrosia 

 

Vampires and Werewolves. OOC. Darkward. And every so often there shall be a sprinkle of the fluffy stuff. But mostly dark.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122877 Read Count: 76213
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 May 2011
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Date: 26 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Beautiful Stranger

Yes I enjoyed the first chapter and looking forward to the rest of the story.

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Date: 26 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Ultimatum

Poor Charlie will be frantic with worry wondering where Bella is and if she's okay.

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Date: 27 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Leaping into the Rabbit Hole

Love it, great chapter.

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Date: 28 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Cruelty & Kindness

I'm glad Edward has been letting his guard down with Bella its good for the both of them.

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Date: 29 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Manipulations

Yes I liked the not today comment indeed its quite promising.

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Date: 30 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Unleashing the Monster

Yum yum.

Love at 1st Bite by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 64]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is instantly drawn to the new girl, Bella Swan. From their first meeting he is overtaken by a desire for her body as well as her blood. After a week in Denali he returns to Forks and visits the object of his obsession. What happens in her room that night will change both of their lives forever. First chapter was written for the "In the Dark" Contest.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wanna read
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50865 Read Count: 17343
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 03 Jan 2017
Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Rash Actions

 I really feel badly for poor Charlie he will be devastated. I really enjoyed the first chapter and look forward to the reading more.

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Date: 02 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 2: She's a Survivor

Great chapter, so glad they found a solution for Bella. I like Tanya in this story it's the first time I've read a story and wanted to punch her lights out. Speaking of punches Bella punching Edward was unexpected and funny.

Summary:

Written for the Summer of Smut '09 one-shot contest. Has been rec'd and featured by the Perv Pack's Smut Shack.

On vacation, a beautiful woman is taken captive by a sexy bartender. They become consumed in a night of...ahem...fun. Rated NC-17 for mature themes, profanity, lemons, etc.

[created by me]

I ignored the cat calls that were flowing around me, leaving Rose to deal with them as I leant on my right hand, using my left to coax the bartender forward. He stalked towards me and swung my legs to his side of the bar, grabbing my hips to close the gap between us.

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[created by me]


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6473 Read Count: 1587
[Report This] Published: 19 Mar 2010 Updated: 19 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Captive

Super sexy and naughty, loved every minute of it.Great story.

Summary:

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bella is a naive girl. she thinks nothing can happen to her, she thinks she will find the perfect man, have an okay job, struggle alittle, than have kids and settle down.

how wrong she was. she meets this boy who is perfect, or so she thinks. one thing leads to another and bella is stuck in a world she can not nor ever get out of. she tries but in the end she is always for ever his.

nc-17 for rape, lemons, killing, drugs,etc.

warning: dark edward and sexual abuse

Hey everyone so my story has been reported for all the lemons sexual abuse drugs and rape. Even though it states these things in the warning and is in the nc-17 category. I have not violated any rules and my stories are not as graphic as many are on this website. So if this story is deleted you know why.  Sorry to all those enjoying it and wanting more, I apologize for this one persons actions in advance. If you want to know who reported this story just look in the reviews and you will see! 

-Love Sinister :D

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 49477 Read Count: 49642
[Report This] Published: 07 Jul 2010 Updated: 14 Mar 2018
Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Excellent chapter, I'm looking forward to the wedding. Thank you for the update:)

Amazing Grace by Cullensgirl90 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 429]
Summary:

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Bella is given to Edward as a birthday present. He promises her that he will love her and never hurt her. Will he be able to keep his promise or will a dark secret tear them apart before their relationship can develop?

 Dark Edward.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185811 Read Count: 80456
[Report This] Published: 03 Sep 2010 Updated: 23 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow great start so much going on, love all the detail.

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Date: 23 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

This is such an amazing story, so many possibilities They may or may not have hurt Jessica someone else could have caused her harm or she could be alive and perfectly fine. I cannot wait to find out what happened.

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Date: 24 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Bella had a long hard painful road it's nice seeing her working through it and healing.

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Date: 24 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Thank you for a wonderful story. I had originally in the begining thought Edward would turn things around and there would be a happy ending for him and Bella. I love the happy ending the way you wrote it between Matt and Bella as he was the only person in her life besides her Dad to have never mistreated her and loved her unselfishly. Great job.

Summary:

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Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389496
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING

Recently found this story wow is all that can be said it's fantastic.

Summary:

A bride-to-be runs away in a moment of panic. What do the stormy woods hold for her? A collab with celesticbliss, written for the Showers to Flowers contest. E/B

Placed 2nd in the public vote, and won best lemon.

[credit to FrozenSoldier for the amazing banner]

I stood up, and slid the ring off my finger. Looking down at the empty space on my hand, then toying around with the petite diamond for a few seconds, I set it down on the table in front of him.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11656 Read Count: 1101
[Report This] Published: 14 Jun 2011 Updated: 14 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Speak Now

Thank you for the great story.

Summary:

After getting caught disobeying her Master, Bella must suffer the consequences of her actions. Rated M for adult content and BDSM material. My entry for the Edwardgetsfic'd contes


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bdsm stories only
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2999 Read Count: 5099
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2011 Updated: 14 Aug 2011
Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Excellent story!

Summary:

Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.

Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923047
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2015
Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Beautiful :)

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Date: 24 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Whew they're married now and Bella will be safer with James having less access to her, although I'm sure he will be scheming and ploting ways to cause them pain.

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Date: 24 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Poor Tanya, I'm terrified what she may encounter when more wedding guest arrived. 

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Date: 24 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Of course Aro's friends are just as creepy as he his. It was a bit nerve wrecking when Aro offered to get James for the virginity inspection, super thrilled that portion was skipped. I think Vladimir's gift is a tattoo which would explain the buzzing airplane sound Bella heard. I'm nervous and excited for the next chapter :)

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Date: 24 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Thanks for the deliciously lemontastic yummy chapter :)

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Date: 22 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Excellent Edward job very well done, not only did he really give it to Victoria but he really stuck it to James. I only hope James doesn't take out his anger in Bella.

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Date: 25 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

I was positive Alice was Edwards missing sister, I'm glad he found her. 

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Date: 24 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

I love the new nap time routine :)

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Date: 24 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

I love Jasper and Alice together. I really hope they will all be able to make it off of freak Island. Great chapter :)

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Date: 23 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Beautiful chapter, I love that they have revealed their true feelings to one another <3

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Date: 19 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start, loving what I've read so far and excited to dive on in. Off to the next chapter :)

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Date: 19 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

It appears they've all been drugged and are being kidnapped, but by whom and why bites nails off to read more. Great chapter :)

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Date: 19 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Aro is batshit crazy and James is an opportunist prick that needs his on spanking. I hope Bella and Edward are reunited soon I'm sure just seeing one another will bring a small amount of comfort to them in their situation.

Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Sad and beautiful chapter.

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Date: 26 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Wow I'm thrilled they all actually made it off psycho island. I'm glad there's no more Aro and I hope James doesn't make off the Island either. Hopefully Edward and Bella will continue to love and support one another. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 64

Why Edward why, I know he thinks he's doing right by Bella by staying away from her but he should trust her to make her own choices. Rose and Emmett are so great together it's a good they can now be together without the guilt. 

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Date: 26 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 67

Yay :)

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Date: 05 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 71

I'm so afraid for Bella and the babies. Please let Edward reach her before Psycho James harms her. Thank you for the update.

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Date: 28 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 73

Thank you so much for the wonderful update. Beautiful chapter :)

Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 74

Perfection, I could not stop smiling while reading this chapter, the love and bond between Edward and Bella is very touching. I'm glad they're able to now just experience joy without fear after everything they've survived. Thank you for the beautiful update NJ :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

What does Jason Taylor think when he meets 23 year old Christian Grey? After four years of working for him, what does Taylor think when he meets little Miss Steele?

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: 50 Shades - Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 166683 Read Count: 57738
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2012 Updated: 30 Dec 2012
Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Thank you for continuing on with this story is one of my favorites. It's nice to get Taylor & Gail's POV on our favorite couple.



Author's Response:

It's not bad waking up to Taylor, is it?!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Fifty Shades...More

Book I

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

Ana and Christian have been together for 7 years. They have built a good life together and have 2 beautiful children. But, in spite of Ana's love, will Christian ever gain insight into his past and be able to deal with his pain? Will Ana be able to continue if he can't? After reading the trilogy I discovered that I needed ….More.

This story was originally published on FanFiction.net, however it had to be altered to meet their rating requirements. It continues to be updated there. This is the original. ENJOY.

NC-17: Content is only suitable for mature adults, ages 18 & up. May contain explicit language and adult themes.

If you have difficulty contacting me on this site, feel free to PM me on the FF site.

 

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: 50 Shades - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107982 Read Count: 145605
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 10 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Fefe Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Another great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks again.

E,

Reviewer: Fefe Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Another great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and leaving a comment.

E.

Reviewer: Fefe Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

This was a fantastic chapter, thoroughly enjoyed the kinky fuckery.



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Reviewer: Fefe Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

This was gut wrenching you could feel the emotions they were experiencing.  Very well written.



Author's Response:

Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it.

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment.

E.

Dinner with Elena by sunandsurf Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

How did Elena persuade Christian to visit Anastasia in Savannah? What was her motivation? How ‘happy’ did she want Christian to be? Read on…


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Christian Grey/Other Character
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3352 Read Count: 910
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2012 Updated: 25 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Fefe Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I Love love love I cannot stand Elena and you did a great job of capturing her manipulative motives. Please keep the stories coming.



Author's Response:

I was going to write some of the relationship between Elena and Christian from the start but that is very tricky without sounding like I'm condoning what she did. But yes, more stories on their way!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028744
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 234: Chapter 234

Excited to see what the surprise is. Thank you for the update.

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Date: 15 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 278: Chapter 278

Yay, finally butterfly tells her sir the truth now hopefully he will do the same.

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Date: 16 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 279: Chapter 279

Yay, clapping hands jumping up and down cannot wait for him to reveal himself.

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Date: 18 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 281: Chapter 281

Beautiful, I cannot wait for him to give her the collar.

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Date: 23 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 286: Chapter 286

Finally Butterfly will get to meet het Sir, I'm thrillied.

Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 288: Chapter 288

Excellent chapter, as always thank you for the update

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Date: 08 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 300: Chapter 300

Thank you for the update.

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Date: 21 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 309: Chapter 309

Thank you for the update.

Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 310: Chapter 310

Thank you for all the hard work you've put into this story it's greatly appreciated.

Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 311: Chapter 311

Yes beautiful indeed, I look forward to the sequel to this excellent story.

Summary:

What happens when Kate finds the BDSM contract the Christian gave to Ana at the start of their relationship. How does she feel at her failure to protect her friend?


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey, Elliot Grey/Kate Kavanagh
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1756 Read Count: 558
[Report This] Published: 07 Jul 2012 Updated: 07 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed Kate's pov, you should continue.



Author's Response:

Thanks! She is one feisty gal. There'll probably be some more Kate one-shots ;)

Summary:

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Fifty Shades...Clarity

Book II

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

 

 

You will probably want to read Fifty Shades More before starting this one.

"I look  into his beautiful gray eyes and my heart melts. I still love this man. He taught me how to love. He gave me my precious children.  He tried to  lay the world at my feet and he gave me his love and his trust."  Christian has confronted his demons. Ana has accepted his past. But will Christian's past intrude on the future? Can Ana live with it, if it does?  This is Book II.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139308 Read Count: 138644
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Dearest Nuwriter, I was stunned silent and still after I read the last few chapters I felt so many emotions with Anna falling down the stairs and the loss of the baby shocked, sad disbelief. My point is while reading your story I'm always on the edge of my seat because one never knows what to expect reading your story as you are far from predictable and have taken us all on a very thrilling roller coster ride which has ups/downs, hurt/comfort and of course lots of love which is true to life sad things happen there are good and bad times. I support and love your work and your dedication it's AMAZING. You have to write as you see fit and be true to yourself. Please disregard hatefulness as its uncalled for unwarranted and you my friend deserve better:)

Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Aug 2012 Title: Fifty Shades...Clarity

The last chapter was so hard to read poor Sam's death Christian and Anna's loss it was devastating. I love this story and your writing so much you are so very talented amazing in my opinion and I'm happy to go on this ride with you.

Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

So sad and touching the love the two of them share is so special she tries to be strong for him and at the same time he's putting on a brave face and trying to lift her up it's what marriage and love are about. Well written

Author's Response:

Yes that's what it's all about. It takes work and a lot of love to keep a marriage together. These two have it.

Thanks.

E.

Reviewer: Fefe Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Excellent please keep it up, cannot wait for more!



Author's Response:

Coming soon. Just hold on.

Thanks.

E.

Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Oh my thank you for bringing Teddy home safely and fir beating the shit out of Elena. I cannot wait for chapter 12



Author's Response:

I love Teddy to death. I could never let him get hurt.

Thanks. E.

Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Elena is crazy with a Capitol K, she kidnapped Teddy in order to get Christian back in her playroom. Elena has also stressed to Christian and Anna that he needs the Dom/Sub lifestyle & this was her sick way of trying to push him back into it.



Author's Response:

I guess this round goes to the bitch troll.

Thanks for reading and leaving a review.

E.

Reviewer: Fefe Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I was so nervous when Anna received the flowers right after the mysterious hung up. I agree the new housekeeper should be good at her job too, but not a pretty brown haired submissive type lol & she should be pushing about 75. Could spell drama for the Grey's.



Author's Response:

Jusr what they need more drama.

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment.

E.

Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Thank you for adding another great chapter & continuing the love story, we can never get enough of our favorite couple. I was totally bitting my nails when Anna had to retrieve her car from the dress shop (would the man in the coat ambush her) & then when the door bell rang at dinner I thought it might possibly also have something to do with the man in the brown coat. Does Anna have a stalker? Thanks for keeping us guessing & please keep up the great work.


 



Author's Response:

I think Christian is her only stalker. We should all be so lucky. There's a reason for the man in the coat.

Thanks for leaving a comment.

E.

Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Oh please bring Christian & Taylor home safe, on pins and needles waiting for chapter 17.



Author's Response:

Thanks for leaving a note. More today probably.

Thanks.

E,

Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Columbia Oh the suspense heart pounding nail bitting wow I thinking held my breath whilst reading. Thank you for the fantastic update I cannot wait for the next chapter:)



Author's Response:

Next one on the way.

Thanks.

E.

Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

 

Thank you so much for another great chapter you did a phenomenal job. I hope you will continue this story beyond the Grey's having Gray hair and beyond. I really feel as though you captured Anna's strength and her compassion for others. I will check my email on a regular bases for the next chapter. Please update chapter 20 as soon as you are able, sorry I'm being greedy but you make us want more.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you. I appreciate that you took time to leave a comment. More on the way.

E.

Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Woah Please please can we have the chapter 21 now my heart is pounding who was sitting at the end of the bed pins and needles.



Author's Response:

On the way.

E.

Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Outstanding as always, thank you for the update I'm always so happy to get the email notification for Clarity.

Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

This was such an emotional chapter my heart was still pounding away several minutes after I read it.  Please let the baby and Anna make it and put a stop to *icth troll. Your talent is so amazing I'm just blown away by your writing.  Thank you for all the thought, detail, and effort you put into this again you are amazing.



Author's Response:

Thank you.

E.

Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

What a beautiful ending to the chapter Christian and Anna will always make it through.

Author's Response:

Yes they will.

Thanks.

e.

Summary:

This is my take on Ana and Christian as they prepare for their wedding. Wedding Fun, 50 Shades style...


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29972 Read Count: 19103
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2012 Updated: 30 Jul 2012
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Date: 10 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: A Lost Cause

I'm glad I found your story great writing looking forward to reading the rest.

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Date: 10 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 4: The Great Christian Grey Sulkfest of 2011

I love how you've elaborated going deeper on topics that were significant moments that were only briefly mentioned in the book. 

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Date: 10 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 15: I love you forever

Thank you Liz that was beautiful I absolutely loved the entire story, the fight over obeying, contract discussion, bachelorette club hopping, prenup discussion, and most of all the wedding planing and wedding day.



Author's Response:

I am glad you enjoyed it!

Summary:

A one shot about what I think happened when Ethan and Christian fished by themselves


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Christian Grey/Other Character
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1927 Read Count: 869
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2012 Updated: 30 Jul 2012
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Date: 05 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Fishing with Mr. Uncomfortable

Thanks for giving Ethan a voice it's about time he and Christian clear the air.

Summary: Past Featured Story


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Fifty Shades...Full Circle

Book III

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

*A Writer's Coffee Shop Featured Story May 2013*

Thank You.

This story  continues where Fifty Shades...Clarity left off. Ana and Christian have endured a hard year, scandal, heartache and Christian finally recognizing and  accepting his past  have plagued them. Yet they remain strong with their love for each other and  their family. Will new revelations tear them apart? Will the coming changes divide them or make them stronger?       This is Book III. You will probably want to read 'Fifty Shades More', Book I and 'Fifty Shade Clarity', Book II first. They are both posted here.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 162 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 660157 Read Count: 591625
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 06 Dec 2015
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Date: 24 May 2013 Title: Fifty Shades...Full Circle

Christian and Tommy at the piano was a sweet touch. Thank you for the update.

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Date: 01 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

I so love your version of the Greys, this was an amazing chapter and as always thank you for the update.

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Date: 28 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

Thank you for continuing with this story I love it and looking forward to the next update.

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Date: 05 May 2013 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

Thank you for the wonderful update I really liked the heart to heart conversation Christian and Anna had with the kids regarding Tommy. Have a safe trip:)

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Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Thank you for the update it was spectacular as usual.

Author's Response:

Thanks. I appreciate it. Glad you enjoyed it.

E.

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Date: 19 May 2013 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

It appears Lorna ran off with her pimp, are they going to try and use Tommy get money from Christian and Ana? The birthday gift was such a loving jester on his part and I agree with Ana on not needing it signed simply knowing how much he values her is way more important. I love the update and look forward to the next one thank you:)

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Date: 16 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

That was naughty and hot.

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Date: 22 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I love the desk sex. How cute is Teddy damn gotta love the Grey men. I'm so anticipating Texas. Thank you for the update.

Author's Response:

Yeah, desk sex. Land in Texas today.

E.

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Date: 01 May 2013 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

Excellent chapter raw emotions for everyone involved, thank you so much for the update. I've been anxiously waiting for it, I always look forward to the journey you're going to take us on:)

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Date: 20 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 141: Chapter 141

Thank you for the update <3

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Date: 11 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 99

I love the idea of Virginia staying with there permanently with the Grey's. Thank you for the update :)

 

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Date: 24 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

Thank you for another great chapter:)

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Date: 10 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

I hope Christian allows Tommy to stay I know the situation brings up painful memories for him but it can also be healing for him as well. Thank you for the update.

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Date: 21 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95

He called her mama, that was a truly touching moment and definitely brought tears to my eyes. Thank you for the update :)

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Date: 21 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94

I love Grandma Virginia, it's nice to see her interacting with the family.  I'm glad Teddy is okay with adopting Tommy. This is one of the best stories on TWC and FFN. I apologize for being behind on my reviews, I have enjoyed and greatly appreciate every chapter you've written. Thank you E for continuing on with this bueautiful story.

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Date: 05 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Whoa Christian is beyond livid, I do understand why he feels Anna betrayed him she kept the letter she received from his Grandmother to herself and then planned a secret meeting with her knowing more than likely Christian would not approve as he'd already made it clear he knew about Virginia and wanted nothing to do with her. Christian should understand that Anna only had his best interest at heart and was only motivated by her love and concern for him. Christian may be upset with Anna but he needs to get over it after all it wasn't that long ago Anna was forgiving him for having a D/s relationship with another women behind her back and she was beyond understanding when he beat Elena in her playroom instead of calling the police on her when she took Teddy. I hope our favorite couple works it out and continues to love and support one another. I don't think poor Sawyer has a chance at keeping his job.  Thank you for the update.

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Date: 07 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 154: Chapter 154

Awe , perfect :) 

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Date: 25 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

Will Lorna be reasonable and think of Tommy's well-being or flip out upon being asked to sign the papers. "So you're Mrs. Grey?" Hmm ? I cannot wait for the next chapter there's a lot going on with the Grey's.

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Date: 25 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

Lemony goodness! I love this Anna and Christian they feel so much like a continuation of the trilogy. Thanks for the update.

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Date: 18 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 124: Chapter 124

Thank you for the beautiful update :)

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Date: 25 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

Thank you, love the restaurant lunchtime lemon.

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Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Excellent chapter thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading  and reviewing.

E.

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Date: 12 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

Excellent chapter thank you for the update.

 

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Date: 08 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103

Thanks for the update and the yummy lemon :)

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Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

And so it begins, so thrilled for the first chapter of full circle. I checked my email all day yesterday and was pleasantly surprised with the alert. I'm looking forward to this journey.

Author's Response:

Me too. This will be happier times for them and they deserve a break.

thanks

E.

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Date: 24 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 101

If she doesn't tell him he will make it a point to find out on his own. Thank you for the update :)

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Lemony goodness!

Author's Response:

Trip to Houston coming up. It will be especially tart.

E.