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The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3521]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1598926
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: bmary Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

this made me angry made me cry buckets and in the end made me sigh in relieve with a smile its well wriiten and are a brave woman for writing it and fighting for it hope to read more from you



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your kind words. I'm grateful you were willing to give my first try at writing a shot and stuck with it to the end. I have a couple of other fanfic's I'm working on, but nothing as controversial as TPW. I've also published two novels through TWCS Publishing House if you'd like to check out my original work: Blind Faith and The Darkness of My Perfection (which will have a sequel). Neither book is a pulled fanfic,though DOP does have a similar premise in that the family is involved in the underworld and deal in white slavery. Beyond that, though the storyline is completely different, so assume nothing.

Thanks again and I hope to hear from you if you check out any of my other work. Take care! Mic

Summary:

A three part songfic inspired by the song by Lady Antebellum. Edward and Bella naturally. Can Bella forgive Edward for what he "did"?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Historical, Horror, Humor, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6724 Read Count: 2879
[Report This] Published: 13 Mar 2011 Updated: 11 Jul 2012
Reviewer: bmary Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Coming Together

love the story and the song love how you put the two together



Author's Response:

Thank you :) means a lot

Master May I by smmiskimen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 456]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Drabble fic. Edward is Bella's Master and is very particular in the playroom. But his sweet pet knows how to make him happy. E&B, AH, OOC. Banner by Soapy Mayhem

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 93 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9757 Read Count: 222657
[Report This] Published: 07 Dec 2011 Updated: 06 Jan 2012
Reviewer: bmary Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

i enjoyed the story but id wish someone would write one where bella doesnt agree or like everything it would be a bit more realistic

Reviewer: bmary Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

enjoyed this alot one of the best ive read others ive read were just plain awful but yours is well thought out and well written you have talent hope you keep using it

Summary:

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This is a collection of outtakes from Hot Commodity. You've been forewarned: there will be lemons!

Banner by vbfb19!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Stories I've read
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10895 Read Count: 2354
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2012 Updated: 06 Sep 2012
Reviewer: bmary Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Please Pass the Flogger

he is an asshole for Not giving mike a choice

The Western by kts Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 92]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward's a hit-man with one rule; he doesn't do women.  When he learns his next target is Bella, he makes a decision that changes his life - and hers.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, To Read (Geddy), G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 84930 Read Count: 22189
[Report This] Published: 27 Mar 2012 Updated: 03 Jun 2012
Reviewer: bmary Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

good story but the spacing makes it very difficult to read but i am enjoying it

Wisp by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 871]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward wins more than he bargained for at what was supposed to be a friendly poker game. AH.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304154 Read Count: 219437
[Report This] Published: 06 Jun 2012 Updated: 23 Nov 2014
Reviewer: bmary Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

im definitly sticking with you this story has me hooked

Reviewer: bmary Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

hi are you coming back soon missing wisp read your interview really good sometime my cat sits on the edge of the tub while Im in but I dont think shed like to get in it you have sweet kitties hope your back soon Love@Light

Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 2997969
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: bmary Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96

get to the part where they meet please I was litltle scared at first that he meant to harm her but now I think he cares for her a little bit I also hope at some point shes allowed to voice her concerns or questions

Reviewer: bmary Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

not a bad story but is this all its going to be



Author's Response:

this is a drabble of the one shot Midnight Caller. It's complete on my ff account. You whould read that and see if you want to read the rest of this. I do love new readers though, so I hope you like it.

Reviewer: bmary Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

im actually enjoying this tho it creeped me out at first Eward is starting to feel something for Bella cant wait to see where it goes I just reall hope he doesnt call her a slut again cause she not

Reviewer: bmary Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

im really into this tho at first it creeped me out a bit cant wait to see where it goes now that hes got some feelings for Bella I sure hope he doesnt call her a slut again shes his butterfly



Author's Response:

I am my Master's butterfly and he calls me a slut sometimes. Its a good thing :)

Reviewer: bmary Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

jeez sir shes human poor Bella;

Reviewer: bmary Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103

smooth and sore i hope she gets a massage after that

Reviewer: bmary Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

hes never said shes beautiful she deserves to hear that 

Reviewer: bmary Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112

i hope bella becomes a bit more vocal about what she wants and needs how she feels sir is feeling love but is she

Reviewer: bmary Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 113

awww edwards in love  hope we dont see skanky tanya again

Reviewer: bmary Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 114

i have you favorited but ive never had a problem 

Reviewer: bmary Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 116: Chapter 116

hurray finally face to face gets exciting now cant wait

Reviewer: bmary Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 118: Chapter 118

im sooo hooked after i get coffee in the morning i check to see if there is anew post qestion maybe i missed something but what does Bella do for a living

Reviewer: bmary Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 119: Chapter 119

hope they are going to talk first maybe go on a date!

Reviewer: bmary Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 124: Chapter 124

no panties just thanks  

Reviewer: bmary Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 128: Chapter 128

no I dont think shes her own person shes just his puppet 

Reviewer: bmary Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Midnight Caller

bye

Summary:

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Bella has been lusting after Edward Cullen, VP at Providence Medical Center in Portland, for years. Too bad he's married, and her boss. Rated for language and lemons. Entry for the Taste of the Forbidden Contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10656 Read Count: 3306
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 08 Sep 2012
Reviewer: bmary Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: The Break Room

please more!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review! I'm working on the continuation as we speak.  I hope to begin posting it in the next few weeks.

Summary:

nostalgia

Shortly after Edward's proposal to Bella during Eclipse, Bella inquires about the origin of her engagement ring. Hence begins the tale of Edward's human mother through the use of her journals. ExB fluff. One-shot!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Historical, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3473 Read Count: 262
[Report This] Published: 27 Sep 2012 Updated: 27 Sep 2012
Reviewer: bmary Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

you did a great job! its fresh and different i like it 



Author's Response:

Thank you :)