Membership status: Member
Bio:
Hi! I'm Piyali.
I'm 22 years-old. I'm a student.
I love reading stories.
I love Darkward and Olderward. XD
I'm Team Jacob but if Edward is evil, then I'm Team Edward. :D
I am not really a writer but I have some ideas in my mind and I might try my hand in writing.
That's all I have to say about myself. :)
xoxo
He manipulated and tainted everything he touched and I wouldn't allow him to touch me so I ran. "You can run Isabella but you can't hide, do you hear me? You're mine Isabella, you're mine!" He's found me... Warning: extreme Darkward. Read at your own risk.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Horror, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 42123 Read Count: 61612
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Confidant
please tell us, what Edward is doing.
another great chapter.
Author's Response:
I tried responding to your review but the site is still trippy so it didn't work, it annoys the hell out of me. I tried responding again but since I had already responded (even tho the text didn't show) I had to choose a different review.
Thank you for reviewing, I actually updated a few days before June 6 but the site still has the error even though you update it doesn't change the update date on the story. I forgot to email TWCS to update the date and when I did it was two days later, I don't know if you guys still get the update email notification or not and if you don't you should always check for a new chapter even though it may still have the old update date. I'm so happy u like my story so much, I couldn't quite find a story with a dark enough edward/darkward so I wrote my own :) As for why I chose to name the character, it's just I've read too many fics with James or Laurent as the bad guys, I get sick of it. Fics like that become redundant and predictable to me. I'm not a Jacob lover and I doubt I will ever write a fic with him in it unless requested lol. In my fic 555-Talk, there is also no James, Jacob, Jessica etc.... The only main Characters I keep in my story are Edward & Bella (of course), her parents Charlie and Renee, Esme, Carlisle, Emmet, Jasper, Rosalie and Alice. Besides the Cullen crew (I do change the last name and haven't used the name Cullen in my fics either because that too becomes tideous) I tend to make up my own Characters. Shawn looks exactly like how Bella described him when she met him. Thanks for being so patient and updates will come faster. Also, you say Shawn is working for Edward? I doubt he was ever working for Edward because of that gruesome thing that happens to him, I hope he recovers and that his daughter stays safe.... Also, if Shawn isn't working for Edward then who's the person that's really stalking Bella? Well, we'll see ;)
Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Devil in the Flesh
OOOOOOOOOH! PLEASE UPDAAAAAATE! LOVED IT!
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
Date: 15 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chance Encounter?
Hey, first of all, belated happy birthday. I am glad you continued this story, I thought you had abandoned it because of school or work. It is a great story. I love how dark and evil Edward is. please update soon.
Date: 05 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Edward's evil plan
OH-MY-GOD! OH MY GOD! OHMYGOD! NOOOOO! God, please help Bella!
WOW! That was a great chapter. I checked everyday to see a new update notification. It was worth waiting for. Please don't take so long to post a new chapter. *puppy eyes*
Date: 30 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Happiness
It must be some glitch. Glad you can update w/o any problem now. :-)
Oh my God! I'm so excited! and a lil bit scared! Edward is gonna make her pay for running away from her. OMG!
Date: 08 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Truth
(CHAPTER 24 REVIEW. HAD TO POST HERE BECAUSE OF SOME TECH ERRORS)
EDWAAAAAAAAAAAARD! OH MY GOOOOOOD! *shudders* :-/
Eeeeep! I missed my guy so much! Here comes Madward!
At laaasst! I was missing your update! Been waiting for so long. But I knew you might be having trouble posting in. Glad you could now. :-)
Malevolent is one of my favorite. It has My kind of Edward. :-)
I have a question. Why did you choose Shawn to name Shawn's character? I can't visualize his face as there is no character named Shawn in Twilight. Been wondering from the time you introduced him. He seems like a good guy (like Jacob). I know he's working for Edward. But I think his loyalties have changed now. :-)
Nice chapter. Ending was scary(I mean positive). Love love loved it!
Can't wait for the next update.
OMG EDWARD! *runs to hide myself*
Author's Response:
Date: 12 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Edward's Evil Plan Fulfilled Part 1
AH-MAZING! Was waiting for this Evil Edward to return. Looooooved this chapter. :-) Next update please.
Author's Response:
I updated.
Date: 09 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Flee & Pursue
desperately awaiting update after reading Ch. 28.
Author's Response:
I'll be updating soon :)
Date: 06 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Benevolent vs Malevolent: Final Showdown
Oh my God! I loooooooved the end!! This story was really unique. loved it. waiting for sequel.
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Serial Drabble
Rated: NC-17 for gore, violence and graphic hardcore horror
Genre: Extreme Horror
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Horror
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14160 Read Count: 10422
Date: 05 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Twenty Seven
I didn't get the ending! Fay said she was gonna make them a star. What did she do? Made them join the circus for eternity? 0_o
The Quileute legends were not entirely accurate in their depiction of imprinting. Who was to know that the pack imperative was so strong? Bella is just about to find out how strong. A/U. Warning: menage, mature themes, domestic discipline.
Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Brady, Bella/Colin, Bella/Embry, Bella/Jacob, Bella/Jared, Bella/Paul, Bella/Quil, Bella/Sam, Bella/Seth
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 277262 Read Count: 388285
Date: 22 Dec 2012 Title: The Pack Imperative
Wonderful chapter. Thanks for updating. Been waiting for a long while.
please update soon.
Date: 22 Jan 2013 Title: The Pack Imperative
yaaaaay! another update! As always, great chapter
Isabella had to deal with her overbearing mother all her life. What happens when Isabella meets Renee's new mysterious boyfriend? Will he change everything? What will happen to her relationship with her mother?
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 61364 Read Count: 19806
Date: 18 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
Oh I think Edward is innocent. ok, not totally, but he hasn't murdered anyone.
My guess is, Esme killed Elisabeth, Carlisle killed Esme.
Date: 18 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
oh my Gosh! You're one hell of a mystery writer! Great job! Great job!
I believe, the murderer is Carlisle.
Edward Platt's genitals were cut, Edward is afraid of him... I wonder if Edward Platt was a pedo. :-/
Date: 18 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Thank you for updating. I was dying to know what happens next. This story is my favorite of all. I was so shocked and happy to see that there wasn't just one but three updates! You really made my day today!
Date: 18 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD! Been waiting for this update! God! Edward has scared the hell out of me! I re-read the Platt and Edward's conversation, but I didn't get a clue. eeeep! Can't wait for the next update!
Brilliant chapter!
This is the only story where I have given 10/10 rating on every chapter. Mind blowing! Keep up the excellent work.
Date: 02 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Oh my! Something is off. Eeeep! Can't wait to read the next chapter! I found this story just yesterday. I am still a few chapters behind but I don't wanna lose the surprise in just one night. I'll take it slow.
ONE OF THE BEST SUSPENSE STORIES!
Date: 02 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Oh my God! Siobhan is Dr Darnell's daughter? Hmmm...I think Siobhan was the other woman in Elizabeth and Edward Sr's life. I guess this is why Elizabeth killed herself.
Hey Velley, you're doing a great job writing this story. Please don't underestimate your story just because you aren't getting much reviews. You should see the Read Count, see how many people are reading this. 12k+ count is not so bad. Sometimes people are too lazy to write reviews. Please don't be disappointed, it broke my heart when I read that Author's note where you said you were disappointed because of lack of reviews. I've noticed people mostly comment on those stories that have a lot of sex, details...you know. But many readers like me want a good story and not just hardcore description of sex.
Like I said earlier, you are doing a great job. This is the best mystery story of ExB I have ever read. There are so many twists and turns, it gets you hooked. I found this story last night, read half of the chapters and thought of continuing later and went to study, but I couldn't concentrate for more than half an hour as I was dying to read what happened next. See! You got me hooked! lol! I'm pretty sure everyone here is enjoying this story and waiting for the next update. :-D Please stop being disappointed. This story ROCKS!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your kind words and the review.
When I wrote that note I was mostly referring my readers over at fanfiction. net. I've since decided that I am going to continue with my story regardless of the lack of reviews. I enjoy writing this story and I am happy to share it with others. Your words were very touching and I am glad you're enjoying my story.
There are going to be some interesting revelations in the next chapter. I'm looking forward to posting very soon.
Date: 12 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
*screams at the top of my lungs* I LOVE THIS STORYYYYY!
Damn Edward! You psycho! lol! I knew something was off about him but after reading the revelations about him in this chapter has left me with fear and chills. This guy is a total psycho! oh my!
God, please save our Bella. She's been through a lot already! :-S
Fantastic chapter! Dying to read the new chapter!
Date: 06 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
waiting for chapter 25. please update
Edward was 19. Bella was 13. They were next door neighbors. Charlie was the chief of police. Carlisle was a doctor at the local hospital.
Edward’s little sister Alice was also 13 and Bella’s best friend.
While home from college for the summer, Edward spent time with his little sister and her best friend so their parents could all go out for dinner.
Over the next several years, Edward and Bella became good friends, until the summer she turned 16 when she transformed before his eyes.
AH, ExB, Mostly EPOV, sort of coming-of-age, hopefully a little poignant, with a splash of angst until Bella's at least seventeen. Mature for language, eventual lemons and a very spunky Bella.
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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77808 Read Count: 67190
Date: 22 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Pain Killers
It makes me sad to see Bella had to go through this feeling. It really hurts to see someone you like is with someone else. :-(
Author's Response:
Yeah, this is never an easy feeling to experience for anyone.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 12 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Patience, My Grasshopper
awww poor Bella... I think to make Edward aware of his real or you can say hidden feelings you should throw in Jacob. lol can't wait to see a jealous Edward.
Author's Response:
Well, Jacob won't come into the picture for a while, but someone will make him see that he's feeling something for her. Just wait and see.
Thanks for reading!
Date: 24 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 21: New Problems
Such a sweet chapter. :-)
Waiting for the next update!
Merry Christmas!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I really love writing chapters like this one, especially since a few difficult ones are on the way.
I hope you have a good Christmas!
Date: 21 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 22: The Flight
What's going on? :-(
Author's Response:
Don't be too discouraged! We'll get there. I promise.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 16 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Warm, Golden, Perfect
Loved it. :-)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
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Bella is in her senior year of high school. She hated all science until she met Mr. Cullen, her biology teacher. He is older, she is just 18. Will their chemistry last past the doors of the classroom?
This a B/E story line
I should have been patient and waited for my Beta she is great !!
This has been Beta'd by RAH07890
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14159 Read Count: 54576
Everyone in town views Bella as the perfect teenager. She never gets into trouble and always seems to do the right thing. What happens when she starts falling for the towns visually challenged recluse? How will her strict parents react?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 51475 Read Count: 24098
Date: 11 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9
James! hahahha! That was a surprise.
I don't believe James at all. I think he is lying. If it's not Victoria, it's no one but Bella. I'm pretty sure Victoria and him are friends with benefits. He wants Bella.
Date: 04 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11
:-) Quite a serious chapter. I'm glad Edward is opening up. But it was so hard to see him go silent when Bella mentioned about college. :-( He is already in love with her but he isn't saying it because of him being blind. :-(
Date: 14 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7
great chapter. :-)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing!
Teaser:
“You’re a beautiful person.”
Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6
OH MY GOD! EDWARD! !!! :-D
Hey, I found your story just today and I read all the chapters in one go. Now I'm hooked to it! Please update soon!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it.
Chapter 7 preview:
“Oh…um…I’ll meet you outside.” She said standing up. “I have to use the ladies room.”
“Okay.” He shrugged. “I’ll see you outside.”
Date: 12 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8
Is it Edward? Or... I guess it must be him. Jasper must have put some brain in him for acting mad at Bella.
Great chapter. waiting for the next update. :-)
Date: 30 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10
Yaaay! Thanks for the update! :-)
Date: 01 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13
Renee is having an affair?
Oooh what is Bella's surprise?
Date: 08 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14
:-0 Oh no! How will she meet Edward now?
Six years ago he tore her apart, broke her. Bella's a new, take charge woman now. What will happen when Edward walks into her conference room, and back into her life, as her new client? Drabble fic, short chapter.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 72 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12906 Read Count: 146077
Date: 09 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72
I've never cried while reading any story. But this story made me cry my heart out. I had no idea about how it felt when you lose your baby. I had to cover my mouth to muffle my sobs. lol! My parents would have caught me. lol!
It was a wonderful story. Thanks for writing it.
Date: 09 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59
I literally cried while reading this chapter.
Edward is a jealous husband who will stop at nothing to make sure his wife, Bella, stays on the straight and narrow…even if it means reading her texts, following her, and spying on her. As he learns more and more about Bella's 'secret life,' he gets the surprise of his life
Categories: Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10282 Read Count: 5317
Date: 18 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: The Ramblings Of A Possessive Man
loved it
Author's Response:
Thanks there should be more to come. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Dark desires and deep-seated fantasies. Edward watches the one he covets the most…with another man. Anger rages and plans are acted out. Will Bella survive the night he has in store for her? GRAPHIC SCENES DEPICTED
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Horror, One-Shot, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3479 Read Count: 7975
Date: 05 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: My Darkest Desire - Black as Night
WOOOOOOOOW! I have always wanted Edward to be like this. 10/10 rating
Scarred since childhood, Isabella Cullen decides it's her turn to be beautiful. Her sweet husband's response is unexpected...In his mind, she's HIS. Nothing or No One will take her away from him. Short Chapters. Sweetward to Darkward.
Categories: Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2958 Read Count: 3897
Date: 28 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1
The prologue was explosive! Oh my Edward! He sounds scary. LOVE IT! I love Darkward, Possessiveward, Violentward! lol! OH YESSSSSS! It's really been a loooong while where Edward is evil and possessive like hell.
Oh I can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response:
OMG Your review got me really excited XD Thank you so much! I hope I won't disappoint you with my Darkward ;)
Date: 03 May 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2
Liked it. :-)
Waiting for the next update. I am waiting for Darkward to appear. :-)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review!
Date: 17 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3
It was a nice chapter. So sweet of Edward. :-)
I'm waiting for the part where he starts to go dark.
Please update. :-)
Date: 24 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4
I just want Edward's pov. :-)
Author's Response:
Aaawww but Bella won this time xD I'll put some Edward up soon!