Loved your story. Took me maybe 3 days to read it. Totally slacking with school and house cleaning. But it was a good story to read after a long day filled with 3 kids and school work like crazy. I can't believe it was your first fanfic; that is crazy. Are you planning anymore?

Okay, this was just BS! No way in the world would they just jump right into sex again, TRUST ME! My best friend of 18 years and I never thought that we would cross the line besides just cuddeling in bed; kisses here and there as well as 'I love you's'. Well, guess what, we actually crossed the line. I stopped him EVERY single time, but that one time last year that I stopped him, after 4 trys I just gave in. I knew it was because I just lost the love of my life 6 months before but anyways, that line was crossed after I pushed him away 4 times. We ended up crossing that line and now we don't even talk. He still sees my 12 yr old daughter that he has treated like his since day one, but he refuses to let me see his 6 yr old son that I have raised since early on since his mom has always been in and out. Anyways, we haven't spoken and he refuses to talk to me. I understand that things in real life are different from a story but come on a little more reasonable.

They wouldn't of just had sex and then work through everything. It would have taken some time, taken awhile to work through it first. I have liked your story so far but, this was way to far fetched. And not because I have lived through it. Even if I haden't, I still would of believed that they would have had to give themselves time to work everything out. I'm not saying throw 20 years of freindship away like my bff did with our 18 years, but still; a little time to get thorugh everything. And just if you are wondering, I would do ANYTHING to go back and change that fucked up night, because you have NO idea what it feels like to lose the love of your life, your bff, and your son all in a 6 month period. Yes, it is HIS son and NOT mine biologically but he might as well been. I am the only constant he has ever had. He saw me at the store yesterday and ran up to me and jumped in my arms telling me he loved me and missed me and wished he could see me all the time like he use to. His dads gf; well now fiance (if you ask me they are jumping into this, they havenen't even been together long) was standing right there when he told me and she heard the whole thing. And it just broke my heart. But yes, I would give up EVERYTHING that I have to just have my baby and my bff back. Nothing hurts worse then feeling like you lost a child. 

Holidays are very interesting now to tell you the least. He waits till I leave and birthday parties, they arranged them so that only one of us can attend while the other is working. They switch off with each kid. It sucks and none of them know what is going on except that we got into a HUGE fight and are no longer talking.

Well, I just spit out some fun facts about my life *snort*!

Don't worry, I will continue to read, I still love the story, but I had to say something. Glad, they are working though.

I'm just a little confused with this chapter and something doesn't make sense. How can Emmett be Edwards BIG brother? Carlisle & Esme had Edward when Carlisle was younger, younger than Esme even knew. So how can Edward have a big brother when Carlisle barley told Esme his true age when she found out she was pregnant with Edward? 

Just thought that I might point that out. 

Other than that, I'm enjoying your story. Which is not the only one I have read and commented on.

I have been reading this story every nite for a couple days now, after my kids go to sleep and I have got to tell you it is a good story. I just can't get over the fact that I think Claire is a home-wreaking bitch. I'm sorry, I know that I read about her in the summary of the story but I just can't help that she pisses me off. And then of course Edward picked up on that shit.

Great story though, keep up the good work. I am also reading your other stories, I have read ALL the one-shots and now am reading this one, 'The Life of a Wedding Photographer' and 'Beyond the Break Room'.

You really know how to put it on paper, I have story ideas I just don't have the disapline to do a story except one-shots and I can't even get those lately. I use to write a lot of short stories in school and got one published when I was in like 6th grade called 'If I was 6 in tall'. We had to do it for school and my teacher ended up getting it published for school books. That was 15 yrs ago. LOL

Well, keep up the good work, and I can't wait to finish reading it.

That's it!? This is the first non-Twilight story I have read. I liked it but... Why did she have to lose the baby? That was sad and unbelievable. I had my first baby right before I turned 18, my whole family had kids young and none of us has ever had a problem. At least they worked it out thought, but still.

It just seems like this story isn't done. What happened after that?

I love this story. I have been reading it for only four days now and am already this far even being sick for two of those days. I was looking for that story by myyedward, where Bells steps in to take Tanya's place but it isn't avaliable. It seems like it was deleted. Any ideas? It sounds like it would be a good story to read. Well after I read yours of course.

I had to review to this chapter because I already reviewed to the last chapter. And the contact button was disabled because of abuse it says, so this was the only way to get ahold of you.

When is your next update? Your killing me here. I check for an update EVERYDAY, and get depressed because there is no update. I really really want to know what happens next. They have to talk, don't keep us hanging again. I really want to know what happens. For him to NOT know she was pregnant this whole time to find out she is and for them to see eachother for the first time in MONTHS. I mean, really how can you leave us hanging this long. I know I am not the only one that is waiting and looking for an update. I don't even check my e-mail to see if you have updated. I log on to my online classes at the same time I look for an update on your story.

I was just wondering if you were planning on continuing your story. You haven't updated it in over 2 weeks. I have been keeping up and that is awhile since your last update and your usually good about updates. Hope everything is RL is going okay, just really waiting for an update.

And another cliffy it is. I'm glad James got what he deserved but then for him to escape and get Bella. I thought we were going to see what happens with E&B. Hopefully next chapter? Hopefully Friday like you said. Thank you for adding me to the wreck room and showing me some stuff yesterday. Looking forward to your next chapter.

As always, I love your stories. I have read all of them except 'Secret Letters'.

Really, just the epilogue and its over? But what about the weddings, Bella and Edwards and Alice and Jaspers? What's gunna happen with Rose and Emmett, Tanya and Garrett, what about baby Bree, Aro and James? There just seems like there is to much undsaid for just an epilogue left.

Yep, loved ths story. Sad, to see it end but it ended in a good spot.

I was just wondering if you can make this one-shit into a story, maybe? Like what happened before this night and after. Just a suggestion maybe if your up for it.

I just started this story this afternoon and caught up with everyone. I think you have yourself a good story, right here.

I was just wondering if you were going to finish your lovely story you have going on right here. You haven't updated in awhile.

Thanks for the update. I was just wondering though how the last chapter ended. What was Bella's and everyone's reaction to the watch that Bella got Edward that he wore on Christmas morning at the breakfast table. Everyone had to have seen that and at least said something. At least, Bella's reaction if nothing else.

I really enjoy this story. I was wondering if you planned on updating or finishing it.

You know that is a really MEAN way to leave this story. Really, mean. I look for toward the update.

What about Bella's bank account? Tanya couldn't cancel that as well.

I loved this story. It had me crying.

Um, NOOO, she can't tell him! He over reacts to everything! Shit is not looking good. I would understand if they knew each other, trusted each other with their lives and loved one another, with a THICK, SOLID FOUNDATION, but not like this! She needs to wait! I have a secret that I have only told one person and that is the love of my life! He didn't overreact, yell, scream or anything. Just asked questions, which I answered. We never brought it up again. He also told me something that he never told his best friend about which surprised me cuz they are worse then old ladies. I brought it up to his best friend one time and he was confused so I changed the subject. I asked him about it later and he told me I was the only one that knew. We have a solid foundation though and have been together for 6 wonderful (not all, all couples have their little issues) years that I would not change for the world. But again, Bella and Sdwaed need that foundation before she tells him.