Nothing is better than a busload of Robporn (with the exeption of Rob being the driver of the bus), but this story was damned hot!!!  Very well written.  I felt like I was sitting in the corner watching the whole thing happen.

I don't know how I feel about this chapter.  Things were going well until Bella wanted to leave and Edward wouldn't let her.  I felt he kinda overstepped and was on the tightrope over the difference between rape and consentual (all age differences aside).

Bella needs to make up her mind.  Either she likes possesive overbearing Edward or she doesn't.  He doesn't seem like he can switch off the intensity.

Edward needs to find a hobby rather than possesining every free minute that Bella has.

That was damned hot!!!  I love the thought of Edward handcuffed to the bed.  That is some serious mental candy!

I love how the girls didn't let the guys bully them into changing.  Chaperones?  Seriously?  Can you say stalkers???

No, I did not see the accident coming.  I can only imagine how the guys will use this as an I told you so moment.

Whoa, I thought Edward was going to skin Seth alive when he found out that he lied to Bella.  Emmett and Edward are devious SOBs for suggesting the punishment to Charlie.  That may come back to bite Edward in the ass if he is not careful.

I'm glad to see that Bella's parents are being more reasonable.  But that must kill Bella that she can't be with her best guy friend.

Oh man, seriously?  He is still friends with Tanya after that whole restaurant shit?  That boy needs to get his priorities straight and Bella needs to stop being a floor mat.

So, I am betting that the girls hit the nail on the head with Tanya trying to get back with Edward.  And I am betting that she wanted a few extra weeks to try and get knocked up by someone else and claim it was Edward's...am I right?

Whoa!  Emmett needs some bi-polar meds and anger management classes.  I don't think that could have gone any worse.  And now they are heading into the lion's den.  Good luck Edward!  Hope you got that life insurance paid up.  You didn't really want your balls anymore, right?

Congrats on the new (albeit temporary) addition to the family.  Best of luck!

Excellent chapter!  I can't believe Edward hit him!  As much as he deserved it, Edward needs to watch his ass before he lands it in jail.  Damon is probably a minor and Edward is most definately not.  I hope he and Emmett come up with an evil way to get back at the little ass munch!

So, little Bella is getting married?  I hope she comes up with some seriously extravagant plans because Charlie so deserves to get hit in the bank account for pulling that stunt.  If I were Bella, I would make them pay for it and then ban them from the wedding.  I know, I am evil like that. ;)

What about Renee and Charlie?  Couldn't they have been bitching to one of their friends who has a child who is also a student in Bella's school?

Well, it just wouldn't be right if I didn't review this chapter since I did all the others.

I thought it was an excellent ending to an incredible story.  I am usually a strict E&B fan, but there was something about your Jasper that really touched my heart.  I have laughed and cried and said 'ahhh' so many times throughout this story that I have lost track.  I have loved it all.

Thanks for sharing it with us!

Nickey

PS.  If you like a little dirty vampire action, check out my one-shot 'A Family Affair'.  It is dirty citrus galore. ;)

That was one hell of an emotional beginning.  I could totally picture the whole scene play out the way you described Bella.  I hope Jasper can fix her, somehow.

I am glad that Jasper made her go out.  Left to her own devices, she would probably stay in that house until she willed herself to die.

I wonder of she sees the sign for Bella Italiana and that is what has her nearly freaking out.

That sucks that Em and Rose coming has made Bella backslide in her recovery.  I really hope when she sees them it will be better.

Oh shit!  Please tell me it isn't Edward.  She isn't strong enough for that yet.  I know you said in a previous note that Edward would show up, but I hope it is after she is much better and her and Jasper are together.

Okay, the last part about the guys calling Charlie Dad was really funny.  It had me giggling.

I am glad that Jasper warned Emmett and Rose about Bella's cutting.  That is so sad that she just wants to let herself die.  I am glad you are taking her recovery slow because it is more believable.

I really hope Jasper does something evil to Mike.  I can not wait to see.

Oh, and I like the idea of Jasper needing a gym credit.  Very creative.

I liked the impropmtu vampire sleepover.  Very cute idea. ;)

I am so glad they are finally having real conversations.  And Jasper didn't have to eat anything at lunch!  Yea!!!

Their first kiss, I can not wait, but I suspect it will be at least five more chapters before we get there. ;)

I'm glad she is getting some of her fire back.

That was not how I saw their first kiss happeing.  Ugh, I really hope this story starts taking a happier turn soon cause it is starting to bum me out. :(

I loved the exchange between Bella and Emmett.  It was very sweet and natural.

LMAO!  I love that snarky Bella is starting to breathe again!  I can not wait to see therapy with Emmett.  He has got to be a therapist's worst nightmare!!!

Ahhh, he got her a puppy!  That is so sweet.  I love that he was the only puppy not afraid of him and Emmett.  I bet that Bella is having this reaction to Alice's name because she was supposed to be Bella's best friend, but she left without a word which in a way is almost worse than the way Edward left.

When Bella freaked out it almost seems like she has been supressing her emotions for so long that now that she is letting them out, there is no filter.  So, any emotion can be blown out of proportion.

I'm glad that Bella figured out about the wolves.  I think it was important for her to figure that out without Jasper telling her.

Oh my!  She finally initiated some real action with him.  Woo hoo!!!

I also loved when she was tracing his scars.  It was a sweet and intimate moment.  Well done!

Holy shit!!!!  What is Bella asking for?!?  I don't think she is ready for sex yet.  She has just started to really open up and find herself again.

The date was fan freakin tastic!!!  It was absolutely perfect!!!  Loved it from start to finish.

The semi-sex talk with Charlie was funny.  Poor Charlie! ;)

Whoa, I expected Bella's reaction to E&C returning, but not Jasper's.  But in a way, I am proud of him for standing up for himself.  He really did get pushed around alot in SM's books.  It is almost like seeing a caged tiger finally being allowed to stretch his legs and show off his stripes. ;)

She loves him?!?  I am so glad.  I wasn't sure if she was going to be able to allow herself to love him. 

I like Peter and Charlotte.  They seem like a lot of fun.  I hope we get to keep them around for a while.

OMJ!!!  That was fucking hot!  He bit her and she likes it?!?  Jasper needs to be careful that she isn't using his bites as a substitute for cutting.

Poor Victoria (two words I never thought I would say together).  I really hope she is being honest with them.

Ugh!  You are trying to kill us with sexual tension, aren't you?

Holy crap!  Bella has some kick ass power there!  I can't imagine what it will be like when she is changed.

That has got to be Peter in the door.  OMG!!!  That was kinky and dirty and hot as fuck!!!

OMG!  I love the visual of the guys and their target shooting game...too funny!  I wonder if Edward is going to survive his trip back to Forks?  I can't imagine he is going to take the news well that Bella is with Jasper now.

Esme is dillusional if she thinks that Bella is just going to run back to Edward after all this.  WTF is she thinking. 

I love how Bella played with Edward.  That was classic!

With this whole dysfunctional family under one roof it reminds me of a soap opera.  It is 'Days of our Lives' vampire style.  LOL.

I don't see Bella giving a death sentence for Edward.  She would have every right to, but I just don't see it.  Like Jasper said, it almost seems anticlimatic.  I would rather see him have to stand on the side lines and watch Bella and Jasper be happy together.

Oh shit!  They pushed Bella too far.  She is going to crush Edward into teeny tiny pieces isn't she?

Funniest scene...Peter chasing Edward around the yeard.  That had me giggling.

I couldn't have said it better, fucking men!  Thanks for Edward's POV.  It is nice to know what he is thinking when his head is up his ass.

Wow!  I didn't think Edward had it in him to be that honest with Bella.  By the way, closet club sex is fucking hot!

Loved it!  I love how they spent the night together without having sex.  Don't get me wrong, I love the lemons!!!  But that was very sweet and tender and I thought it was perfect that the two people who make everything about sex spent the night making out instead.

Poor Bella.  She is such a typical teenage girl.  Once she gets what she thinks she wants she has no choice but to question herself and then set out to destroy her own happiness.

So, Edward finally tracked her down.  I can not wait for that conversation.  How can Bella possibly defend her choice to lie and leave Edward the way she did?

I love how of all the people Esme could have found to fix her car, she picks Jacob.  Talk about ironic.

I love hearing them talk about their relationship, especially Edward.  He often takes a quiet role in the relationship.  Too funny that Sam blew them in for having sex on the beach!

Awww, that was sweet of Edward to take her to the new exhibit and then procedd to fuck her against the wall out back.  Nothing says 'I love you' like a back alley romp. LOL

Another hot chapter!!!  Lovin' the mile high club.  I am sure they were all bummed that you can't fit four in those airplane bathrooms.

I was thinking about the wedding the other day (yes your story has filtered into my RL) and I was wondering how you were going to write the vows.  Are you going to do it in a way that they are all committing to each other even though technically they are married as two couples?

This whole family is nothing but a bunch of nymphos and I love every last one of them!!!  This promises to be one hell of a honeymoon.  They might as well just go home since I doubt they will see daylight once the "I do's" are said.