Reviews by opeltigra
Summary:

Living Amongst Vampires Banner

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

Inspire Fanfic winning banner


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238929
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
Reviewer: opeltigra Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Yeey!!! We waited a long time for u to continue. I hope everything is well with you. Please continue the story its awesome!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by the wonderful and talented DeeBelle1.

Some so called friends invite Bella out for her birthday, and send her to a BDSM club as a prank. What happens when the owner of the club sees her? Will he be able to set aside his Dom nature? Will she ever believe she deserves to have her needs met? Will he be able to set aside his wants and desires to meet those needs, or will she find her true desire is to submit to him? AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204571 Read Count: 334478
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2013 Updated: 31 Dec 2013
Reviewer: opeltigra Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I,m finding myself looking forward to monday mornings!!

( never happenend before lol )

Eager to find out what appens next loving the story!

Thank you for helping my week start off good ; )



Author's Response:

Well a lot of you still want Renee to die a slow and painful death, but many of you are just glad she is gone.  Renee will be heard from again in future chapters, however we don’t want to give away too much by telling you how, when or why.  We think the next chapter will be the second most popular chapter to date when it posts.  Christmas and preparations for it, is a very fun time for Edward and Bella and will hopefully be well received by our readers. 
On a side note, please check out the wonderful little story that Nikky, Jess2002 and I are writing for Savannavansmutsmut.  It is called If I Die Young and it is posting under the author name: WeeJessAndTAT. 
Nikky and I would love to thank whoever the people were that nominated us in so many catagories for the Twi-Fic Awards.  We are nominated on four different stories: His Cimmerian View, Meeting Her Needs, Diamond Dolls Kitty Cave and Crabs And Cream.  We were also nominated in the veteran author section.  The link to vote can be found on our profile, and if you don’t vote for us, vote for someone.  There are some AMAZING writers, stories, banner makers and readers all nominated for awards. 
Be sure to check out our spook-tackular — Halloween 2013 One-Shot (This is our 3rd year in a row doing a one-shot for Halloween,) it is called: Crushes, Canines & Clowns. 
Can’t wait to see what you all think of the two stories listed above, and please go vote.   
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky & Kasi~

 

Teaser: 

I lead her back to my car and we drive to another place where I can pick up the things that I need. I watch as Bella blushes and chuckles at the joke gifts the store has. I frown when I see that she has a bag, having bought something without showing me.

“What’s in the bag, Little Girl?” I ask trying to get the bag from her. But she’s quicker and hides it behind her back.

“It’s one of your Christmas gifts, Sir, and you can’t see it until Christmas morning.”

I chuckle shaking my head at her, knowing this will be fun for both of us in the long run.  “Oh, is that a fact, Little Girl? I could order you to show me, you know?”

Bella shakes her head at me. “Then your girl will tell tales to her Sir’s mom.”

My mouth drops open and I look at her, smiling internally, because she is willing to stroke the lion and play. “Is that so, Little Girl?”

Bella nods at me, but bites her lip.

“Well then, Little Girl, I may need to give you a spanking,” I say playfully to her.

“Your girl will take the spanking, Sir. Your girl really wants this present to be a surprise for her Sir.”

“Fair enough, let’s finish shopping.” I shake my head, watching her walk away from me. She looks over her shoulder and flicks her skirt a little showing her ass.  “Spanking it is then,” I say to myself before walking after her.

Reviewer: opeltigra Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter: One

love where this story is going!!!                                                             

can't wait!!



Author's Response:

Well so far everyone seems to be loving the story and we are so happy about that.  Not a lot of questions asked this go around, but there will probably be some more by the next chapter.  This story will be somewhere between twenty and thirty chapters when complete.  We mentioned this will post once a week on Mondays.  If for some reason Kasi can’t post Monday morning, it may post late Sunday night.  The Cullen’s are very accepting of Edward’s choices in life and his lifestyle, therefore yes the Cullen’s would be good to Bella if she were to be around them.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, we look forward to hearing more of your thoughts as the story goes.  (Nikky) & Kasi~

Reviewer: opeltigra Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four

I`m realy lovingthis story!!!!!

So please  write FASTER!!!!! Lol



Author's Response:

Well that is pretty much verbatim the reaction we were expecting.  We did have a reviewer or two who feels that Bella has been abused to limits of overkill and that Edward shouldn’t want to be with a kid.  I want to address this a little before things get blown out of proportion on this train of thought.  Showing the things Bella lives with and has lived with, is how we are showing her ways of adapting.  Bella has been severely neglected all her life.  She knows no other way.  Speaking from some experience on the matter, when you grow up in a household without both parents and you pretty much raise yourself, and get pushed aside for your parents needs can either make you or break you.  When you solely depend on yourself, you tend to learn to not react the way people normally would.  Bella’s childhood in this story is a lot like mine, in the place where I had no contact with my father at all from age of 6 to 16, who I then saw twice at age 16 and never again until I was 21.  My mom started dating when I was young, but when I was 9 she met a man who she chose to place before me.  By the time I was 12 I lived alone, she gave me the money to pay the bills.  So yes this stuff does happen.  I am by far not a perfect parent myself and I may be a single parent, but I am always here for my children.  I turned out okay, and with the exception of not being able to be in a healthy relationship I am not screwed up.  Edward in this story sees the good in Bella, and sees that she is more than she’s been made to believe she is.  Bella was made to grow up fast as a child.  She parented her mother for years.  She pushed away by the same mother she raised to go live with a father who resents her for choosing her mother over him.  Now we had some questions about waiting until Thanksgiving, and it will be Thanksgiving soon in the story.  Just a few more things have to happen first.  Be patient, everything in this story will happen for a reason.  We have had a great number of followers and reviewers for this story, so we do write one major reply and send to all, but we do try to answer all questions asked ... of course we don’t want to give away too much.  I do hope that this helped you understand a bit more about how and why Bella just lets things roll and adapts to what goes on.  You can always join us on Facebook at the group called TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction.  On behalf of Nikky and I, thank you for reading and reviewing.  It means a lot to us.  Kasi (&Nikky)

 

TEASER: I quickly snap a picture, before speaking to her.  “No, just a normal picture, but you can pose for me anytime you’d like.” I wiggle my eyebrows at her as I snap another picture of her.

I keep snapping pictures as we talk in my office.  I know I have a few that I can use, but I can’t seem to stop taking her picture.  

“I think that’s enough pictures of just me.  Come on, Edward. Why don’t you take one with the both of us?”

I take the camera away from my face, before grinning at her.  I walk over to the oversized comfy chair then sit.  Off to my left is the large stone fireplace, and the flames are casting their warmth on my feet.  Once I’m sitting, I pat my leg in motion for her to join me.  “Come on, Beautiful.”

Bella looks at me, then to my leg as she slowly stands and makes her way to me.  She glances at the arm of the chair and I shake my head at her.

“Please, Beautiful, just to take your picture. I swear I don’t bite.”

“Liar,” Bella chuckles, looking at me. 

I look at her and frown.

“Don’t give me that look Edward, I’ve seen your club and read the first two books you loaned me.  Plus, you look like the type of guy that likes to bite, at least a little.”

I chuckle nodding, because she’s right, I am a biter. “You’ve got me, dead to rights on that one, but I swear I won’t bite you ... today.”

Bella sits on my knee and I pull her back so she is flush with my front.  I raise my hand with the camera in front of us and snap away.  Slowly, I feel Bella relax in my arm and she drops her head to the side of my neck.  I take a few more, before kissing the side of her head.

Reviewer: opeltigra Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Wow!!

I,m not shure i would have reacted so calm and cool.

I,m shure edward has his reasons :-) 

I can only imagine the kind of payback he is plotting...

Counting the hours til your next post!!!!



Author's Response:

We knew the reactions to chapter eight would be intense and strong.  We were shocked that some of you actually attacked Bella for being weak, but at the same time it’s not surprising.  Sometimes people who are mentally abused and neglected for years strive only for some sort of love.  I can’t imagine any child not wanting their parent to love them.  We all see love in differing ways, and when you’re raised not feeling that unconditional parental love, it makes you strive to have it—at least it did for me.  Bella will come into her own strength soon, and with the help of Edward and his family she will get better.  We are stoked for you to see the interaction with Bella viewing Esme and the way that Esme treats her children, so a portion of that is your teaser.
Many of you asked why Edward did not just beat Charlie down, or how he could have not stopped the situation, or known Jake was in the kitchen.  Edward is one person, and he was trying to watch out for Leah, Jake, Charlie, Brady and didn’t know if he could trust any of the other five people there as well.  As for when Charlie smacked Bella, he had his attention focused on Leah and Jacob.  As for why he did not punch or beat down anyone, imagine this:  Edward defends Bella by striking someone or several someone’s.  He gets arrested his word against several, one of whom is the police chief.  Meanwhile Bella is unprotected and left with the wolves.  It was best for him to do as he did get her out and safe.  And trust that he will be dealing with this.  The ball has already been rolling on a few things, but this just upped the ante.
I’m sad to say that we have lost some readers, but again we cannot and will not apologize or rose color a story about an abused girl, when a good lot of the abuse she withstands is things that are personal to one of the writers and or other people the writers know.  Abuse happens and the largest form of abuse out there is mental abuse and neglect.  Awareness is a key to making things better.  Bullying is a problem, and awareness is a key.  We are however thankful that we have readers who trust in us to bring things full circle.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky & Kasi~

 

Teaser:  “This is very nice, Esme,” Bella says after taking a bite.

Esme smiles broadly at Bella.  “Thank you, dear.  Edward tells me you're quite a wonderful cook yourself.”

Bella’s blush appears on her face.  “I’m nowhere near as good of a cook as this.”

I shake my head at her.  “Trust me, Bella’s cooking is to die for,” I say as Emmett passes me the wine. I pour some for Esme, Bella, and then lastly for myself.

“What are you going to college for?” Rose asks as she looks at Bella.

“I’m getting a law degree,” Bella answers, but I know the whole table can hear the sadness in her voice.

“And Edward tells us that you’re a dancer, a quite wonderful one at that.”  I look to Alice, smiling that she brought up something that makes my girl happy.

Bella nods at Alice.  “Yes, I love dancing, but I only do it for fun.”

“You’re in the Christmas dance program for the college though, right?” Esme asks as she looks at Bella.

“Yes,” she replies with another blush.

“Carlisle and I have tickets for three of the performances. I’m so looking forward to the show, and seeing you dance, of course.  The dance department director has been bragging to the board of directors about the dances that you have choreographed.” Again Bella blushes more at hearing about the commendations she’s being given.

“That’s got to be the cutest blush ever,” Emmett says in a childish voice, which is followed by a slap from Rose. 

“I love dancing, and the people I’ve been dancing with are all great.  I just hope that no one’s disappointed at the end of the night.”

Esme frowns a little. “I’m sure no one will be disappointed, dear.” My mom smiles at Bella in a way that I can see the mother in her trying to break out and pull Bella in.

The rest of the dinner seems to fly by with everyone talking about what’s been happening.  The more the night goes on, the more Esme became motherly to Bella, but I’ve also noticed Bella becoming uncomfortable with it.  At so many times, she’s looked like she isn’t sure how to react at something Esme has said or done.  She’s remained respectful, but I’ve seen her slowly distancing herself from Esme.

I walk Bella to the car and open the door for her. “I’ll just be a few seconds.” I give her a wink and walk back to house.

As soon as I do, I can hear Esme’s upset voice.  “We really need to do something.  I won’t accept that nothing can be done.”

I hear my father sigh.  “It takes time, dear.”

“No, first those little punks ... I’ll let you and Edward deal with them, but Charlie is mine!”

I chuckle, but feel a little nervous, because I can hear the anger in my mom’s voice. 

 

Summary:

A tattooed loner moves to a small town to appease his deceased mentor. He stumbles across a modest Isabella at church. He wants her but balks at the age difference, and there’s nothing respectable about him. Is she as proper as he thinks, or does she just hide things well?

 

smy

BANNER BY: DEEBELLE1


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9085 Read Count: 7390
[Report This] Published: 18 Oct 2013 Updated: 18 Oct 2013
Reviewer: opeltigra Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Show Me Yours, and I’ll Show You Mine

AND THE WINNER IS!!!!!!!   

Loved it.



Author's Response:

WOW!  To say that we are blown away by the response this one-shot has gotten would be an understatement.  Over 130 reviews in a week between FFN and TWCS, is pretty amazing to us for a one-shot.  We do intend to add a bit more to this, however we are going to be wrapping up a few more lose ends first.  We have the Halloween story already posted, it is called Crushes, Canines & Clowns, it’s the third year we have written a Halloween story and we hope you like it.  Also Jess2002 has joined forces with us and we formed WeeJessAndTAT and our first story together is, If I Die Young.  We started the story in honor of our great fan-dom friend and pre-reader/beta, Savannavansmutsmut’s birthday and it started posting on her birthday Oct. 24th.  We also have a Christmas story coming out.  It will post either as a one-shot or two-shot, but I will say this, it is BIG.  Right now we are thinking it will be around 30K word count.  Ropin’ A Sitter, Epilogue will be posting on December 1st, as well as a Future take of, Bases Loaded by JessAndTAT and an all-new Novella by TeamAllTwilight, called, The Things That Make You Click.  We hope to see some of you checking out those titles and more to come in the future.  Lots of things to come, but have faith we will be adding to this.  I doubt it will be a full blown WIP, but it does have some more storyline within us that needs to come out.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky & Kasi~

PS.  Be sure to check out and vote in the Twi-Fic Awards, where WeeKittyAndTAT are nominated for several awards.  Here is our nominations: Fav - All Time Fic: His Cimmerian View is nominated.  Fav - Tiny Fic: Crabs And Cream is nominated.  Fav - LMAO Fic: Diamond Dolls Kitty Cave is nominated.  Fav - Drop Everything Fic: Meeting Her Needs is nominated.  Fav - Boomerang Fic: His Cimmerian View is nominated.  You can find the link to the website on our profile and voting ends November 3rd.  Thanks in advance, and even if you don’t vote for us, vote for someone there are some really amazing people nominated and we are proud to be pooled into categories with people who we ourselves look up to and read.  So thank you to whomever it was that nominated us in these different awards.

Unexpected things by sjdavis84 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 168]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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The accident prone waitress runs in to a jerk. Little does she realize how her life will end up changing, hopefully for the better. The jerk she runs into isn’t so much of as a jerk as he is arrogant and dominant… But Bella doesn’t know that.

 

Thanks AstridGreenEyes for the Awesome banner!!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 49952 Read Count: 41537
[Report This] Published: 13 Nov 2013 Updated: 23 Jun 2015
Reviewer: opeltigra Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Please keep the longer chapters!!!!

I am already addicted to your story ; )

Pllease keep writing and posting.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I am going to try with the longer chapters. I am glad you are addicted. ;) I will keep writing and posting. I should have a new chapter posted by tomorrow night.

Summary:

  FORMERLY TITLED: A Grandiose Idea.

THE NEW TITLE IS AS YOU HAVE READ WHEN SEARCHING FOR ONE OF MY STORIES:

"Majorrr, come out to playay."

Major soon meets the real Isabella, and he plays a game with her before then claiming her as his, the only way the major knows how.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama, Femme Slash, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15286 Read Count: 10172
[Report This] Published: 14 Dec 2013 Updated: 17 Dec 2013
Reviewer: opeltigra Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Jay! A new story....

Please keep writing!!!!



Author's Response:

I will put the rest of it up, but it is only a short story type thing. 7 Chapters i think it is all up.

thank you for reading it

Summary:

 

Banner TWCS TST

 

My name is Bella Swan and this is the most awkward moment in my life, so far. Actually, skip the 'so far': I don't think things can be more awkward than the way things are now. I'm lying in bed with Edward Cullen. I know a lot of girls would kill to be in my place, but me? Not so excited. We can hear LOUD sex noises, problem is: It's not us.. - AU/AH E/B J/A


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 635 Read Count: 429
[Report This] Published: 15 Jan 2014 Updated: 15 Jan 2014
Reviewer: opeltigra Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Loved the first chapter!!!!

Nu heel snel nieuwe hoofdstukken plaatsen please ; )

Claiming by Lilith Blood Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 67]
Summary:

She could love me. She could even hate me. She could loathe my guts but she was not allowed to forget me. Love and hate, both can pave the path to obsession, especially when the thin line that separates them begins to blur. Warning: Dark!


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 122715 Read Count: 44798
[Report This] Published: 07 Aug 2014 Updated: 14 Jan 2017
Reviewer: opeltigra Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am loving it !! keep those updates coming!!!! LOL.

Summary:

What happens when you find out you only have a year left to live?  What if you are the only remaining male of your family, to what length would you go to to keep your name alive?


This is Jacob Black & Bella Swan's story.


Categories: All Human, Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4358 Read Count: 766
[Report This] Published: 30 Aug 2015 Updated: 30 Aug 2015
Reviewer: opeltigra Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

3 chapter2

Reviewer: opeltigra Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Intro

So  sorry . i put the wrong words in the box Lol.

I can,t wait for the next chapter.

An orriginal storyline. Looking forward for more.



Author's Response:

Thanks, love!!

I'll be getting back to sleep his story soon; RL has been tough and I'll be going on a much need vacation next week so I'm hoping to write more this fall!  Thanks for your support; it's very much appreciated.

Fate by theadosia57 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 42]
Summary:

fate

Tired and weary, Major Jasper Whitlock slips into a diner in Philadelphia, called 'Fate!'   Various P.O.V AU.   J/B


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 42298 Read Count: 5770
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2018 Updated: 03 Nov 2018
Reviewer: opeltigra Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Learning Curve

Wow what  a great story so far!!! Please keep going!!



Author's Response:

Thanks & Hi,

Glad you like it so far xx

Alexis

Summary:

ISBLIK

Summary:  I didn't mean to look; I didn't mean to watch him. But I can't tear my eyes away! Jasper/Bella

 

DISCLAIMER: Twilight and its characters belong to S. Meyer. Otherwise, the rest is my musings on an AU.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 47021 Read Count: 6313
[Report This] Published: 18 Dec 2021 Updated: 05 Mar 2022
Reviewer: opeltigra Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 1: This Day Just Got Better & Better

Wow a super original story!! I can,t wait for the next chapter!! Please write quickly!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Trying to come at it from another angle, to make it fresh and newish lol xx

Alexis

Summary:

She is the shy, laid-back kind of girl who has many inhibitions when it comes to the opposite sex. He is the confident and very Dominant alpha male. Can he bring her out of her shell and make her lose those inhibitions?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission, Happily Ever After, Love and Faith, Pure Romance, Risqué, Romantic Comedy, Spicy
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1508 Read Count: 1283
[Report This] Published: 02 Jan 2022 Updated: 10 Jan 2022
Reviewer: opeltigra Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very interesting start. Like to see where it takes us!

Summary:

ILJACL

Who do you turn to when you find your whole life was a lie? Who can heal your soul and mend your heart? Can one small human be Eleazar's salvation? B/EL

 

DISCLAIMER: Twilight and its characters belong to S. Meyer. Otherwise, the rest is my musings on an AU.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Eleazar
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55709 Read Count: 4859
[Report This] Published: 19 Mar 2022 Updated: 02 Jul 2022
Reviewer: opeltigra Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Can You See, What I See?

Oh my god!!! Loving it already.

Great cliffhanger.  Go esmee!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks,

I'm really glad you like it so far xx

Alexis