Reviews by Lady Shakespeare
Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

banner by mehek18 site http://mehek18.tumblr.com/

A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171310
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Good chapter.  Nice to know the back story.  Next one will be interesting. 

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Poor Rosalie.  I know she didn't mean it.

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Loving this!  Update soon!

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Aw!

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Sweet.  It's too bad she bit his tongue, but he'll recover.  :)

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Poor Bella!  Thank God she's out of that situation.

 

I know that movie she was talking about!  Love it!

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Great chapter!  So much is explained!  Can't wait for the next update. 

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Good chapter!  I like how Edward wanted to take it further but stopped. 

Can't wait for the update!

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Great chapter!  Glad to see Bella is so willing to go to therapy.

 

And I wonder if Edward will speak to Jacob?

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Uh-oh.  Is it Vicky?  Or some girl who's jealous of Bella?

Can't wait for the update.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review, we'll find out who it is next chapter :0)

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

OH...MY...GOD!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Yay!  Glad another chapter was up; I was worried about it.  Great job on this one!

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Great chapter!  And don't worry about the plagiarist.  She'll get what's coming to her.

Can't wait for the update....

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I hope that Bella DOES accept them in the future.  They seem to be okay.

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Another good chapter.  The prom dress shopping made me sad because I never went.  But I'm glad Bella found a dress.  :)

Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195462
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: I'll Always Come Home

Why do I get the sense of foreboding in this chapter?

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: I Trusted You

Good story!  Can't wait for the update. 

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Sin

Edward has issues!  :)



Author's Response:

LOL, by the bloody TRUCKLOAD..... LOL. thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: All My Daughters For a Son

Good cliffie!  Can't wait!

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: We Gonna Run This Town

Each chapter gets better and better.  Please don't be too hard on Jazz; I couldn't stand it if something happened.

Can't wait for the update!

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Good to be Home

What was that about Jasper?  He's a spy?!  Oh, God I hope not!

 

Can't wait for the update!

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Silent Night

Wow.  Amazing.  Great chapter and although I'll never try the hand around the neck thing, it seemed to work well. 

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Holy Night

Why do I get the feeling Edward will end it with Bella to try to protect her?  Not that it will....

And was it Jasper who tipped Felix and Demetri off?  I hope not.

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Blood is pumping

Thank God it's not Jasper.  You had me worried!

Can't wait for the update. 

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: My December

Oh, shit!

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: I Would Die for You

Somehow I missed reading this last week, so I had to catch up!

Glad to see Bella accepted.  I'm nervous as to where this story will go.

Waiting....

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Vacations and Nightmares

I hate seeing Charlie in pain.  I can't wait for Edward to get medieval on their asses!

Waiting for the update....

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo

The demon was funny in this chapter.  I like how he has humor.

Waiting....

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Finding Purpose

Wow.  A lot happened in this chapter.  I am glad that Edward finally accepts his son.

Can't wait for the next one!



Author's Response:

 LOL. I know. It was a mammoth chapter to write. Thanks for reviewing. :-)

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: The Difficult Choices We Make

Okay, you said there would be a happy ending...but for WHOM?



Author's Response:

HEA for Edward and Bella. LOL. My heart would break if there wasnt. LOL. Thanks for the review and I apologise for how late this response is

 

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Friends in Unlikely Places

Wow.  Each chapter gets more and more intense.  I just hope everything turns out alright for the Cullen clan.

Waiting for the update....

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: The Rescue - Part One: Farewells

I am sad that Edward killed the police officer.  I know why, but he could have let him go.  I almost stopped reading because I was so upset.

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 30: The Rescue: Part Two – Reunions

I hope Bella explains everything, then Edward will know why she left. And he needs to get a grip about the baby. Loving the Demon though; he's the one with sense!

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 31: – the Rescue: Part Three – Home is Where the Broken Hearts Lay

Edward's solution is simple: have Jasper train the boy.  It doesn't have to be as cruel as Carlisle, but that way the boy is protected.

I know you said HEA.  Because of that I am holding out hope.



Author's Response:

There will be an HEA and there will be a few happy chapters before the end too. Thanks for reading and reviewing

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Finding Purpose

I love the demon; his voice of reason.  This was a great chapter and I'm so happy it was updated.

Can't wait for the next one....



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. I'm happy I updated too. LOL. Next one wont be far away. :-)

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Happier Times

Great job!  Can't wait for the final chapter.

 

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Authors note

Looking forward to the end of the story!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner for TFICF

Bella finds herself in dire financial need and takes drastic action -- she offers her virginity up for auction.  Will this desperate plan to save her college education actually turn out to be a second chance at love? 

 

This story was  made possible by the generous contribution of CandraJade to the Support Stacie Auction and is based on her fabulous prompt.

 

**If you are not old enough to purchase Adult Material, you are not old enough to read this story.  Rated for content and sex in later chapters.**

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39762 Read Count: 45108
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Regrets

I am addicted!  Poor Edward, I hope he gets his chance.



Author's Response:

Wow, thanks! So thrilled to hear it! 

We'll find out soon.  :D 

Thanks for reading and responding!!!

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Whatever Could Go Wrong, Probably Will...

I really wish we women would let men explain themselves more.  Go Edward!

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Second Chances

I like how this is shaping up; can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Moment of Truth

Wow.  Seems like Bella's moving a little fast, but it works!

 

Waiting for the next update.



Author's Response:

Yeah, if we'd started it as a long fic (rather than a intending it as a  short auction piece) we wouldn't have let them move this fast, but then she'd be a masochinst to wait, wouldn't she?  ;D

Thanks for reading!!!

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Fairytales Really Can Come True

Aw!  They are so cute.  I wonder what Edward has in store....

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: The Morning After

Nice chapter.  And Edward shouldn't feel guilty; sometimes passion overrules sensibility. 

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: To Be or Not To Be

Aw, hell.  Here I thought it was HEA. 



Author's Response:

Aw, don't jump to conclusions -- it's not over yet -- the fat lady hasn't sung!  Be back soon with the next chapter -- promise!

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Best Laid Plans

It would be rather interesting to get Emmett & Alice together.  Giant bear with little pixie.  That could be the sequel!

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Charge of the Cavalry

Great chapter!  And I totally loved the idea of Alice and Emmett starting a relationship.  You should write a sequel about the two of them; they certainly are a pair!

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Epilogue

Good story.  :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Summary: Past Featured Story

amce

Bella struggles to survive on her own after Edward leaves her. A chance encounter with Jasper will alter life for both of them. BxJ. Rated NC-17 for language, adult situations, and eventual lemons.

  ***Thanks to christine30974 for the beautiful banner!***

 

FS


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 234838 Read Count: 38952
[Report This] Published: 10 May 2010 Updated: 05 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm liking this.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Hope you continue to enjoy!

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

It will be interesting to see if Edward reappears. 



Author's Response:

He will be along, but not for quite awhile.  The focus is almost entirely on Bella and Jasper for the beginning of their relationship.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Glad she has a friend in Andy.  I hope he doesn't die by Victoria.



Author's Response:

Glad you like him- he grew into a bigger character than I had planned!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wonder what Jasper's up to.....



Author's Response:

Lol, whatever he can get away with to make her life better!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Things are progressing....



Author's Response:

Lol, slowly but surely!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Wonder what's up with Andy and if Jasper needs to teach him a lesson.....



Author's Response: All will be revealed, keep reading :) Thanks for all the reviews!

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

What the hell is up with Andy?



Author's Response:

He's in a really bad situation.  Much more to come.

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Yay!  I loved your comment about Jasper getting some this decade.  Maybe then he wouldn't be so uptight!



Author's Response:

Lol, we'll have to wait and see I guess!

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Ooh, I want Jazz to visit me w/no napkins.  Preferably with nothing at all.  ;)



Author's Response:

You and me both :)

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Getting good....



Author's Response:

Thanks, hope you continue to enjoy!

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I loved how she got rid of Emmett; totally classic!



Author's Response:

Thanks!!  Glad you liked it!  Thanks for reviewing as you go- I love hearing what you think about the chapters!

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

A migraine headache?  What???



Author's Response:

Yep, migraine headache.  Now, to be fair, I have since re-worked my early chapters, and she was correct when she said that the dialog wasn't formatted right.  But I was hurt by the migraine comment, lol!  Mynxi went beta momma on her for me, but she still feels that it wasn't a harsh review.  Oh well, can't be loved by everyone, lol!  Hoping you disagree with her!

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Great lemon!  I feel like I do need a cigarette.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I was really nervous, lol!  Hope you continue to enjoy!

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I hope I eventually catch up to this story, but it's still as good as ever!

On to next chapter....



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

It was great reading about Jazz's control and how hard he fought to hold on.  Nice job!



Author's Response:

Thanks- this chapter is near and dear to my heart.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Another good chapter.  Wonder what's up with Alice?



Author's Response:

All will be revealed in time!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Ooh, good lemon.  I should try the whole not moving thing and see how far I get.  I'm guessing...not very.



Author's Response:

Lol, yeah great to read/write about, I don't know how it would work in real life! 

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

That was amazing.  I liked how you wrote that Jasper left himself while killing.  It's so much like what he would do.  And I'm glad that those fuckers are dead.

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks.  I wanted to show the different side of him without using the "Major" personality.  Glad you liked!

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Last chappie for today.  Great job; hope I can catch up at some point.  :)

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

m2te

After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297508
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Mrs. Cullen

Wow!  I'm addicted.  Can't wait for the update.

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Road trip

I'm glad he got that out.  Doesn't excuse his actions, but at least she knows now.  I'm curious as to who the other guy was...Jacob?



Author's Response:

You will find out who he is in about three to four chapters :)

Thank you for your review!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Husband and Wife

I caught the Pretty Woman reference; didn't know if that was intentional or not.  Can't wait for the next update.  :)



Author's Response:

It was definitely intentional, I'm surpised someone even cought up on that! ;)
I just loved it so I had to have it in here!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: The Wedding

Sorry, didn't catch it this time, but looking forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

It's okay, I'll tell you readers what it was in the next A/N!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Breakdown

You got me on the movie; I have NO idea.

 

Can't wait for the update!



Author's Response:

Oh, damn, I even said the genre of this one! Too bad.

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Time goes by

I like that Bella's reserve is wavering.  I can't wait until SHE kisses Edward on the mouth.  It'll throw him for a loop!



Author's Response:

The kiss is just areound the corner! I can't wait to show it to you! :D

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Goodbye

Love the chapter!  It's sad that Edward had to get Bella drunk to find out his answers, but at least he found them.

Why do I think Jessica will be a problem?



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Yes, it is. But she wasn't drunk on the first question ^^

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: The Past

I need to go back and re-read.  I don't remember Jessica dating Edward.

 

Rest is great!  Can't wait for the update!



Author's Response:

In the last chapter, Edward confessed he lost his virginity to Jessica. In case you didn't find it.

Thank you!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Birthday

Well, I got the New Moon reference; I don't know if there was another quote in there.  The Titanic one DID sound familiar, though.

 

Can't wait for the update!



Author's Response:

I'm sorry, it wasn't the New Moon quote I was looking for. Good guess, though. I didn't even realise I used it ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Unknown

No, haven't seen it, but I have my ticket for the midnight showing!  Can't wait!

Good chapter! 



Author's Response:

Sounds great. Enjoy the move. I will too! :)

Thank you!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Leaving on a jet plane

Quote's from Eclipse.

 

Loving it.  Little annoyed with Bella's hissy fit in the beginning, but she's growing on me.

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Goals

Poor Edward!  When she says it, he'll leap from the rooftops with joy.

 

Waiting for the update....



Author's Response:

I think so, too! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: I love you

I'm still here, Gelix!  Until the end.  :)

The Aunt Flow was great, I couldn't stop laughing.

Can't wait for the update!



Author's Response:

Thank you for that! :D

I'll see you on Sunday, then!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: The Date

Yea!  Great chapter.  Edward is so sweet and understanding.

I'm guessing that something will happen to muck it up; it wouldn't be as exciting otherwise.

Can't wait for the update!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Surprise

Dun...dun...dun!  Nice job.

Quote from Bridget Jones, the Edge of Reason.  :)

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Together

I thought everything was fine.  Sex isn't always enjoyable the first time.  I don't remember the pain, though.

Waiting for an update....



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Maybe you're one of the lucky ones who it isn't painful for.

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Secrets

I'm surprised that I didn't catch the Titanic quotes; I've seen the movie enough! 

I'm sorry to hear about your reviews droppin off; I have that w/one of my stories too.  But I will still be here, ready and eager to read about B & E's relationship.  :)

Can't wait for the update!



Author's Response:

It's easy to skip them when you read! ^^

Thank you so much for your support. It means a lot to me! :)

The update will be tomorrow sometime!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Thanksgiving

Okay, I caught that quote.  It's one of my favorites from Pretty Woman!

Will be waiting for the update.  :)

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: The Letter

I recognized the quote from Eclipse.

Bella was such a child in this chapter.  Very unbecoming of her.

Looking for the update!



Author's Response:

Yeah, but it wasn't the quote I was looking for. Sorry..

Thank you for your review!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Plans

I think it's too soon; it'll be negative.  There are other reasons she can be late.

Can't wait for the update!



Author's Response:

Okay, thank you for letting me know what you think! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Christmas

Given Bella's attitude at the beginning of the story, it's understandable that she would have wanted an annulment. 

But luckily, that's in the past.  :)



Author's Response:

It is, but she has some explaining to do, though! ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: New Year's Eve

I found Bella to be a bit pathetic in this chapter.  How can she be so upset over something she never had?  I've never been pregnant though, so I unfortunately can't sympathsize.  I hope that doesn't make me a hateful, cold-hearted person.

 

 



Author's Response:

You're not a hateful, cold-hearted person. At least not in my eyes. Bella just overreacted, that's all. Deep down, she was happy for them.

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Honeymoon

I'm betting she's pregnant this time.  That would explain the lack of appetite and the mood swings.  But her fainting might prove a problem.

And I know the quote!  It's from Bridget Jones's Diary (I love that line).

Waiting.....

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: A visit to the Hospital

I'm curious to know more about Bella's past.  Not that I don't love her and Edward now, but it doesn't seem like he was so bad to her in high school.  Just curious if anymore was going to be rehashed.

Waiting....



Author's Response:

One word: THERAPY. That's when things from the past will be resurfaced (?) :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Heartbeats

When you said heartbeats, I thought they were having twins.  Minor freak-out over here!

Waiting for the update!



Author's Response:

Oh, don't worry - no twins! ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: I forgive you

Quote from Remember Me!

I think Bella was right saying it, however I hope that there will be more about the past revealed.  I don't know why, but I'm really interesed in that.

Waiting.....

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Grandparents

Quote from Pretty Woman.

 

Waiting for the update....

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Blossoming Flower

As someone who's never been pregnant, I can't sympathize with Bella and her mood swings.  I agree w/Edward that she should tone it down a bit.  But I'm glad she's making progress w/her mom.

Waiting....



Author's Response:

Thank you for you review! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Boy or Girl?

I've seen Twilight a gazillion times, HOW did I miss that quote?

Totally missed this one too.

Godparents should be Jacob and his girl.



Author's Response:

Because it fitted so well? ;)

Thank you for your opinion!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 31: New Body

Loved the chapter.  Looking forward to the surprise.

Waiting.....



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx

Gelix

Summary: Past Featured Story

MFBR Banner

28 year old English teacher, Bella Swan is dreading being dragged to her 10 year reunion with Alice; until a certain social networking site offers her a very welcome blast from the past... BxE, AH. NC-17 for lemons in later chapters.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126861 Read Count: 61884
[Report This] Published: 06 Sep 2010 Updated: 13 Aug 2011
Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Liking so far...I'm guessing that the ugly duckling is turning into the beautiful swan...what a coincidence. :)

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Can't wait for the E/B reunion.  :)

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Lol, love the RPattz reference. 

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Hmmm...don't want to guess.  I'll wait and see.  :)