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Come Closer by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 437]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Come Closer... Isabella. The one woman Edward can't have. The one woman he doesn't dare claim. Does he? Is he strong enough to resist the forbidden?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 169215 Read Count: 103460
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2011 Updated: 21 Apr 2013
Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36: Letting Go

It's a great story, but a little long winded. Sometimes I didn't get what the heck was going on. Maybe shorten up on the stuff going on in their heads. It's sweet, but too long and sometimes hard to follow. But I can't wait to read what happens in the sequel .

Summary:

 

Winner of the Mine to Mark Judges Vote, 2nd Place Public Vote, two Judge Favorites and Most Original Public Vote. l Fueled by desperation, a queen turns to a king known by the world as an uncivilized barbarian. Will he be able to save her from a fate that seems unavoidable by taking her as his own or will he turn his back on her like everyone else? ExB

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Adventure, Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11094 Read Count: 3102
[Report This] Published: 26 Jan 2013 Updated: 26 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Just wanted to say that I loved you story and would love it if you could continue. Not a big, long story, just a little more to see how the battle goes, if Jacob does something stupid, and if they get married and/or she's pregnant. I do hope you continue.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A homeless boy, hitch-hiking in the snow, a woman on her own, running from an abusive relationship. Is she crazy to stop, or are their paths destined to cross? Can this mismatched pair find succour and salvation together, or will their pasts intrude and drive them apart?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119972 Read Count: 27843
[Report This] Published: 27 Mar 2013 Updated: 20 Apr 2013
Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 04 May 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Explanation

I love this story! I hope you decide to surprise us with an extra chapter this week (hint, hint). I'm glad this misunderstanding was fixed so quickly. I hate long, drawn out angst over stupid things. You are a great writer and I can't wait for what happens next.

Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 19 May 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Job

I love that Carlisle owns the restaurant. I soon as I saw his name, I knew Edward would get the job. Now I really hope they go home and celebrate exactly the way he wants to. And with no interruptions!! Great chapter.

Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 11 May 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Possibilities

It seems like things could be looking up for them. It sounds like that catering job would be perfect for him and could lead to bigger and better things. Now, if they could only get into town for certain supplies *wink*, things would be perfect. Then I'm sure Jacob will show up to cause trouble, but I'm positive they can deal with him.

Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 01 May 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Horny

I'm guessing he doesn't want to do anything until he gets tested, I'm just hoping she gives him the chance to explain. I love these two together and I hope it gets fixed in the next chapter. Thanks for the extra chapter. It's always appreciated!

Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Snow

This story is great so far. There's still quite a few English words and sayings but I guess that since this story takes place in England it's okay. I'm a New Yorker, but I can pretty much figure out what you mean. I hope you keep writing this. I can't wait to see what happens next and I can't even imagine Jakes reaction to her leaving. It should be good.



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Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Escape

No actual responses came up next to authors response. I really would like to know what you tried to say because somehow it got screwed up.

Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Neighbours

Great chapter. Please keep them coming!

Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Nightmares

I love this story! Please keep it coming! I hope it's not too long before they give in to each other. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Confessions

Great chapter. They really need each other. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Tragedy

I love your story and so look forward to your updates. Now they have to not only worry about Jacob finding them, they have to watch out for this Paul guy, too. Can't wait for them to get together. I'm hoping its only a matter of time.

Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Joined

Great chapter. I have to admit, though, it makes me nervous that she's going back to London. You know Jake is going to pull something. He's not going to let her go without a fight. I just hope she gets through it unscathed. 

Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Interruption

I don't like the way that ended off. I hope nothing breaks them apart.

Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Triumph

I reaaallly hope Jacob ends up looking like a total jackass and this doesn't cause problems for E/B. Toss him out on his butt!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by the wonderful and talented DeeBelle1.

Some so called friends invite Bella out for her birthday, and send her to a BDSM club as a prank. What happens when the owner of the club sees her? Will he be able to set aside his Dom nature? Will she ever believe she deserves to have her needs met? Will he be able to set aside his wants and desires to meet those needs, or will she find her true desire is to submit to him? AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204571 Read Count: 334476
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2013 Updated: 31 Dec 2013
Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Great chapter! I was so afraid that someone, like Jessica or Jacob, was going to sabotage her performance. I was holding my breath while reading it. I hope she finally comes to realize that her family is total garbage and she doesn't need them anymore. She deserves to find happiness for herself first, the hell with everyone else. I just hope Edward is able to derail any plans these evil people are trying to come up with. Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

The overwhelming response to the chapters so far have far exceeded what Nikky and I thought this story would generate.  We are both very proud of this story and humbled by your responses.  In lieu of the ‘boycott’ at FFN everyone will be getting Meeting Her Needs in their inbox later today.  We hope that you all will still take the time to leave us your thoughts, especially since this coming chapter is super wonderful, (Well we think so anyway!)  Thanks for trusting in us, and no worries things are really shaping up at the end we’re working on that will leave you all satisfied—we hope.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and Kasi~

TEASER:
I put on my tuxedo trying hard not to turn and watch Bella get dressed or look in the mirror.

“Edward ...” comes Bella’s voice as I tie my laces and answer her.

“Yes, Beautiful?”

“Two things, is it wrong to go to these balls ... things without under garments on, and could you zip me up, please?” I run through what Bella has said again and turn to her.

“Wh ...” I try to talk, but I’m unable to complete what I’m saying as I look at Bella, whose sheer beauty takes my breath away. The dress only adds to her natural beauty and I feel stupefied as I stare at my beautiful girl.

I look Bella up and down, taking in every part of her body. I slowly look her up, starting at her feet. My eyes trail up how the dress sits on her body like a second skin. I look at how it makes her already large breasts look fuller. I look at her neck that still displays my mark. My eyes go to her lips and I see that they are moving.

I close my eyes and shake my head. “Sorry, I spaced out there, can you say that again, Beautiful?”

Bella chuckles shaking her head at me. “You look really hot, like my own secret agent man. I was asking, because this dress shows every line, so I should I take off my panties, right? I couldn’t squeeze my bra into the bust area; the girls can hardly breathe as it is.”

I look back down her body and see that she's right, she has a panty line. “Remove your panties, Beautiful, no one will know,” I say. I watch intently as Bella wiggles out of her panties and comes over to me and turns around. My eyes trail down her body again and I start to kiss her back. I feel Bella shake and laugh and I look to her.

“I need you to zip me up. I mean, you can carry on doing that, but I think we’ll be late if you do.” I smile giving her one last kiss, open mouthed, at the base of her lovely neck, before pulling the zipper up. With the zipper up it makes the tight dress even more molded to her curves. It fits her like a glove, and I make a mental note to thank my mom.

“Come on, Beautiful, let’s get this over and done with so I can bring you back here and kiss you some more,” I say holding my arm out for her to take.

Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter: Two

First off, I want to say I love all your stories. They're always so much fun to read. Secondly, I notice you mention Silverblossom a lot. All her stories and her blog have disappeared. I was following at least six stories that I will now never know the endings to. I know it's not your problem, I just needed to vent when I saw her name. Anyway, keep up the great work. I hope your stuff doesn't start to disappear.



Author's Response:

Casey565, Nikky and I have 20 plus stories now under our belt, we are currently writing another 10, we are not going anywhere.  We will be here for a long time to come.  Even if it is just for a few contests now and again.  You're stuck with us.  As for Silverblossom and her pulling of her stories, it was done on her own wishes and for her own reasons.  I love her stories and I love and respect her for all of the things she does, and has done over the time I have known her.  She is caring, giving, and completely does everything without a condition for those she does things for.  Sadly a lot of people have hurt her, with words and actions, and we all have paid the price.  I am and have always been an avid supporter of being against those who start stories and do not finish them, however in her case I get it.  There is only so much hatred and nastiness a person can take and sadly she has had her fill.  Kasi~

Here is the review reply for chapter 14: 

Well a lot of you still want Renee to die a slow and painful death, but many of you are just glad she is gone.  Renee will be heard from again in future chapters, however we don’t want to give away too much by telling you how, when or why.  We think the next chapter will be the second most popular chapter to date when it posts.  Christmas and preparations for it, is a very fun time for Edward and Bella and will hopefully be well received by our readers. 
On a side note, please check out the wonderful little story that Nikky, Jess2002 and I are writing for Savannavansmutsmut.  It is called If I Die Young and it is posting under the author name: WeeJessAndTAT. 
Nikky and I would love to thank whoever the people were that nominated us in so many catagories for the Twi-Fic Awards.  We are nominated on four different stories: His Cimmerian View, Meeting Her Needs, Diamond Dolls Kitty Cave and Crabs And Cream.  We were also nominated in the veteran author section.  The link to vote can be found on our profile, and if you don’t vote for us, vote for someone.  There are some AMAZING writers, stories, banner makers and readers all nominated for awards. 
Be sure to check out our spook-tackular — Halloween 2013 One-Shot (This is our 3rd year in a row doing a one-shot for Halloween,) it is called: Crushes, Canines & Clowns. 
Can’t wait to see what you all think of the two stories listed above, and please go vote.   
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky & Kasi~

 

Teaser: 

I lead her back to my car and we drive to another place where I can pick up the things that I need. I watch as Bella blushes and chuckles at the joke gifts the store has. I frown when I see that she has a bag, having bought something without showing me.

“What’s in the bag, Little Girl?” I ask trying to get the bag from her. But she’s quicker and hides it behind her back.

“It’s one of your Christmas gifts, Sir, and you can’t see it until Christmas morning.”

I chuckle shaking my head at her, knowing this will be fun for both of us in the long run.  “Oh, is that a fact, Little Girl? I could order you to show me, you know?”

Bella shakes her head at me. “Then your girl will tell tales to her Sir’s mom.”

My mouth drops open and I look at her, smiling internally, because she is willing to stroke the lion and play. “Is that so, Little Girl?”

Bella nods at me, but bites her lip.

“Well then, Little Girl, I may need to give you a spanking,” I say playfully to her.

“Your girl will take the spanking, Sir. Your girl really wants this present to be a surprise for her Sir.”

“Fair enough, let’s finish shopping.” I shake my head, watching her walk away from me. She looks over her shoulder and flicks her skirt a little showing her ass.  “Spanking it is then,” I say to myself before walking after her.

Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I have a feeling Renee is going to blame Bella for everything, but yet still show up on her doorstep demanding to be allowed to move in. And Charlie has some nerve, asking Bella for rent money for when she was a minor but giving Leah, Seth and Jacob five hundred dollars a month plus paying for Jacob going to college. Thank God she has Edward for support. I'm happy they finally had their first time, but it seemed too quick. A few sentences and it was over. After all the waiting, I guess I was hoping for a bit more. Anyway, great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens when Renee gets the divorce papers.



Author's Response:

Hey, thanks for reading and review Meeting Her Needs.  Nikky and I are very happy with the amount of pleasure most of you are finding in this story, so THANK YOU SO MUCH.  There haven’t been very many questions or things to touch base on this week, so I’ll try to do it all here.  Someone wanted to know why the lemon wasn’t longer and more detailed.  The lemon was written the way it was because we want this story to be more about the story and less about the lemons themselves.  We had questions and comments regarding the BDSM in this fic too.  The BDSM in this fic and the actions within this fic of the lifestyle in and of itself have come from many conversations with people from the lifestyle.  Not everything is intense tie you up, spank you, kneel and crawl.  It is a matter of respect, choices and trust.  Please don’t ever think that we would want to write a story just for the sole purpose of making someone another person’s punching bag or pet (in the term of treating someone as if they are not human.)  We will continue to post once a week until the story is completely written.  Nikky is currently working on chapter 20 and there are five more after that to write.  If you ever have additional questions, you can find us on FACEBOOK look for the group called TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction.  You can also email us at our screen name all lower case at gmail.  Thanks and see you Sunday with the update.

Nikky & Kasi~

Teaser:  “I–I need ... I can’t sit here. I just need time ...” Bella gets up quickly and almost runs out of the room. 

I sigh looking at Phil. “She’ll be fine—she has to be—we just need to be there for her when she needs us.”

I nod and get up to start looking around for her. I looked throughout the house first, which takes me almost a half hour to do. I was starting to panic that she actually left our home. I open the back patio door and I see her, and instantly I feel myself calm.

“Beautiful,” I say when I approach her, as she works in the dirt of the flower bed she started with my mother. She stops and turns to me and I give her time, knowing she is going to talk to me now.

“Dr. Banner thinks I have been suppressing and curtailing my anger. I’m starting to think that he’s right. I’m just so angry right now, but mainly I’m mad at myself.”

I frown and tilt my head in question at her.

“Edward, I let them—I let them treat me that way. I was always trying to please them. I never asked for anything other than their time. I would always say it was fine, when they forgot my birthday, or anything that was connected to me. I let Charlie push me out of his life. I would always sit back and pretend that didn’t kill me to see him call Leah his princess, or listen to him tell her he was proud of her and loved her. I would say it was me that was to blame for that. I was the broken one. That there must be something wrong with me, and I wasn’t worthy of their love. It’s kind of pathetic when you think about it, huh?”

I shake my head and move to her. “It’s not pathetic to want and desire to be loved.”

Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Great chapter! Sometimes I'm surprised when you skim over stuff, like Renee's reaction and what idiotic stuff she was spouting and Bella putting her in her place. I would have liked to have heard more of that. As far as Jacob and Paul go, Tanya the nutcase must have gotten them in the club. How stupid are they to go after Bella in Edwards club? I'm so looking forward to what Edward is going to do to them. With Jane, I'm guessing a batch of defective birth control shots. Is she or isn't she? If she is, I'm sensing a proposal and wedding in the near future. And then when both her parents realize how well off she is going to be, they'll try to weasel their way back into her life. I hope she never forgives them. Thank you for this great story and I absolutely love this Edward and Bella.



Author's Response:

Well no big surprise that a lot of you were not happy with the cliffhanger, yeah, expected that.  Some of you are very perceptive on future things to come as well.  There will be some BIG shockers in the next chapter, and we are super stoked to hear your thoughts on those.  Few questions we got from a scan over the reviews were: posting schedule? We post on Sundays.  What are rose and the other Cullen’s up to?  Revenge served Cullen style.  Can parents really be that asinine?  Yeah, actually they can, sad but true.  Is Tanya really that stupid?  Well, yeah, clearly she can be.  Is someone messing with Bella’s medical records? No.  Why is Charlie such a asshole to his daughter?  The answer to that will be in chapter 19.  Who let Jacob and Paul into the club and how?  Tanya, and since she worked there she knew how to get in, without being out in the open.  Wasn’t Tanya kicked out of the club?  Tanya was on a warning, but because at the time Tanya was still under Sir Stephan, her entrance card would still work.  You’re only writing around 25 chapters, can’t you write like a 100 instead?  Um, well we have other stories killing our minds, so yeah without sounding harsh, we’d rather write something new then run this into the ground and make people hate it.  I think that covers most of the questions; there are a couple questions asked that will be answered in the next chapter.  We cannot wait to read your coming comments on chapter 18!  Nikky & Kasi~

Coming up with a teaser for this next chapter was not easy because there is a lot packed into it.  So we hope that you like this: 

“You asshole,” I hear Bella scream. I turn in time to see Bella flying at Paul.  Moving quickly, I try to pull her off him and she shakes me off and keeps hitting Paul as hard as she can. As she hits him, she continues to scream calling him names and chastising him. “I fucking hate you. I really fucking hate you. I hope you rot in hell, but even that’s too good for you!”

I pull her to me again.  “Enough,” I say into her ear, but I know by the look on her face she hasn’t heard me.

“What the fuck are you laughing at, Jacob? Eh, you’re a sad pathetic loser who’ll more than likely die from a sexually transmitted disease.” Turning her head between the two of them she continues on. “Neither of you are anything or will be anything. You’ll both always be nothings! Go fuck yourself, because I really don’t think anyone else will, not willingly anyway. I won’t back down this time. I will take both of you to court. I will tell the world what you’ve done.” Jacob runs toward her and I turn us so Jacob starts hitting my back. It takes all my strength to hold on to Bella as she’s still trying to get loose. Only a few seconds pass and Jacob is pulled off of me.

Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Great chapter! I was somewhat disappointed that Jacob and Paul didn't get a beating at the club, but something tells me you have something better planned for them. I'm kind of hoping they can't be located because James got his hands on them. As for Charlie, I can't wait to get some answers about why he treats Bella the way he does. Maybe she's not his? Renee is a cheater, so that wouldn't be too shocking. But I'm thinking he's really just a jerk. There's just no excuse for his behavior and words towards her. It's amazing that nobody from her family can stand to see her happy. Her mother is a miserable cow and Charlie doesn't deserve to be called a man, nevermind a father. So happy about the engagement and baby. Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Well Nikky and I both want to thank you for reading and reviewing.  All of the questions, compliments, anger (at the characters), love and kindness in the reviews is what keeps us going so strong.  SO, thank you, for reading, reviewing, sharing your stories and most of all for loving the characters—the characters who may not belong to us in name, but who we’ve taken and made into something completely different.  It is very cool to take a loved character, change them and make them different and still have people love them so much or fall in love with them all over again.   There were lots of reviews filled with questions about the newspapers and what Charlie told them.  First in regards to the newspapers, just like when Renee went all press goddess on them, the news already knows Edward.  Edward has made no secret of his lifestyle, how else would Charlie so easily have found out about Edward.  Therefore there was really nothing to put in the press, Charlie could try but it would not be front page news anyway.  Also if you remember right, Edward doesn’t really put a lot of stock into the media reports.  There are a lot of great things to come yet, so have patience and trust.  No stones will be left unturned.   Thanks again for reading and reviewing, Nikky and Kasi~

TEASER: Phil and I walk into Jenks’ office. I decided that I no longer want any of this shit spoken about at the club. Bella loves the club and I didn’t want any additional bad feelings in it for her.

“Jenks, Benjamin,” I say taking a seat; Phil nods at them.

“We’ve found the last of the girls and even another case that was not dropped.” I look at them and they hand me a picture of a girl I have actually met and I’m in shock. 

“They have DNA from a brutal attack and rape of her,” Jenks says as I look over the paperwork behind the picture.

“You’ve got to be kidding me?” I say and they both shake their heads.

“Now you really need to look at this,” Jenks says handing me another stack of paperwork.

I read the papers and frown. “How the hell did he make Chief of Police?” I ask rhetorically, not really asking anyone.

“I’m really not sure on that one, but he will lose his job with all of this.”

I sigh rubbing my face. “Make it happen,” I say and stand up, walking out the door.

“Edward?” Phil yells after me.

“Phil, just let me calm myself. I’m really close to losing all of my control. The more I find out about Charlie Swan, the angrier I become with him.”

Phil nods in understanding. “There’s a boxing ring a few blocks from here, how about we get padded up and go for a few rounds?”

I sigh and look at him, but I stop myself from speaking. I can see he’s clearly as angry as I am. “Sounds good, just watch my face,” I say and I hear him chuckle.

“Yeah, Bella will kick my ass if I hurt your pretty face. Do you think she’s ready for Saturday?”

I shrug my shoulders. “We’ll work together to get her ready, and then we’ll all be there for her on the other side. No matter what, I know she needs to do this, even if I hate the idea of it.”

Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I have to say I was very disappointed in Bella's confrontation with Charlie. She spoke more to Sue, Leah and Seth then she did with Charlie. What happened to all the things she was preparing to say to him? She listened to his sick story, then just said goodbye, Charlie and left. No big F*CK YOU, no nothing. I figured she had years of pent up anger that she would unleash on him, or at least tell him off a little. But nothing. She didn't even confront him about Jacob. I just was very disappointed. One good thing, though. I love Seth and I'm glad he's staying with them. They seem to have built a nice family around them now. Just waiting for Jacob, Paul and Tanya to get what's coming to them. Something tells me everything will not remain quiet with them, especially Tanya. She seems really unhinged. I'd worry about her if I were them. Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Wow, you all just blow us away with the response for each and every chapter, so on behalf of Nikky and I, THANK YOU ALL so very much.  There are a lot of questions about what all happened to the evil witches at the college, well that is coming to you soon.  There really weren’t any questions asked that we could answer without giving away the ending of what they all have coming.  We are currently working on chapter 22, but it’s going well and there should be no waiting for it to post, it should post on time.  Most of the story wraps up in 21 and 22, but there will still be chapter 23 and for sure chapter 24 and maybe a chapter 25.  The ending is almost writing its self and it all is going really smoothly.  We hope you enjoy the way this wraps up.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Hope you all like this teaser ... Nikky & Kasi~

 

TEASER: 

I get out of my car and walk toward the club. I can’t help but walk with a skip in my step, knowing very soon my girl will be meeting me here.

“Edward,” someone calls from behind me. I turn around and my mouth drops open.  Standing there is a much disheveled-looking Tanya. I look down at her as she rambles on, but I don’t listen. She’s wearing dingy, yellow slacks that are at least two sizes too big. The gray t-shirt she is wearing has what looks like coffee stains all over it. Partially covering her crusty, dirty looking shirt is a rather ugly purple, ripped-up, fake leather jacket. Her hair is very frizzy and looks like a huge afro on top of her head. To top it all off, she has no makeup on and looks ghastly pale. I hold back my laugh and just look at her.

“Are you listening to me? I said, ‘Do you see this?’ Look at me, please, you need to let me have my life back,” she whines out at me. “I need proper clothes, and a salon.  Alistair would freak if he saw how horrid this is. Please help before I have to have it all cut off,” Tanya says as she pulls at her hair.

Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Karma is sweet. It's nice to see those jerks getting what they deserve. This is one of the only stories where I really like James and Vicky, and you just gotta love Seth. As for who was punching the hell out of Paul, I think I have to go with Phil. He loves Bella and wanted revenge, too, so that's my guess. As for who he's bringing to the wedding, something tells me Tanya wormed her way into his life somehow, playing a sweet and innocent role. There's no way he'd take back Renee after all the horrible things she did to him. Phil doesn't know about Tanya, so I could see her using him to get closer to Edward. If it is her, I can't wait to see who is the lucky one to remove her from the church. One question, though. How did Jacob know Bella is pregnant? You never mentioned if she told her so-called family and I would actually be very surprised if she did. Great chapter and I'm so looking forward to the wedding.



Author's Response:

WOW ... what great reviews we got.  There is still redemption to come, and Karma is a dish best served cold and wet in some cases.  To settle all bad thoughts, Phil would never invite Renee or Tanya to Bella and Edward’s wedding.  Some suggested Vicky, but Vicky and James sort of have a love/hate/power-struggle of their own.  He hasn’t quite told us yet, but Vicky is more of the Domme, than submissive and James just doesn’t come across like a switch to me.  Nikky and I will give James and Vicky both closure before the end, we promise.   Some of our favorite reviews made comments about not wanting to ever piss us off, because our thoughts scare them—have to say this had us both laughing.  I’ve always said that Nikky is one of the most diabolical minded people ever, and I was once told that I am good at writing three things: crazy/dysfunctional, fighting and f*ck*ng.  With that said, there wasn’t a lot of questions we could touch on too much, but we hope after reading the next couple of chapters you’ll understand why.  Thank you as always for being such a loyal reader and for taking the time to leave us a message/review/comment—they all mean the world to us.
Nikky & Kasi~

TEASER:  “Do you think we should ask what we are having?” Bella asks looking at me.

I kiss her head.  “Do you want to know?”

“Why are you answering my question with a question?”

“You think I’m answering your question with a question, but yet you do it, too.”

I chuckle and Bella frowns rolling her eyes. I quickly flick her leg and shake my finger, no, to her.

“I am happy either way, so you can choose if we know or not,” Bella huffs and then smirks at me. “Master, your girl would like you to take control and tell your girl what you want to do.”

I tilt my head at her. “Firstly, don’t switch into Dom and Sub time without my approval.  Second of all, I think we should wait, I like being surprised.”

Bella nods at me. “Thank you,” she says while kissing my cheek.

Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Great chapter. Great wedding. Leave it to Renee to almost ruin everything. That was so funny that they were all looking at the door, waiting for her to burst through. She really has no redeeming qualities at all. Nice to see Bella's new mother getting rid of her old mother. I guess once the trials wind down, things should finally slow down for them, but I still don't trust Tanya. I know she's still out there. Thanks for all your great work.



Author's Response:

Wow, I dropped the ball, normally I have the review reply all written out before now.  So all Nikky has to do is send it to all the reviewers at FFN, and I do TWCS and I post one in the comments FicPad.  I dropped the ball this week.  Between personal stuff and the holidays and other drama things, I just flat out missed the bus.  I am so sorry for the delay in you getting this from us.  There were not a lot of questions at all, but you all seem to LOVE Esme, and how could we blame you.  I FLOVE her myself.  This is short but sweet, but hey you’re going to get an extra long teaser …   Thanks everyone for reading and reviewing.  Nikky and Kasi~

TEASER:  As Bella’s face pales, I look to see who she’s looking at.  I see Sue walking in with a crying Leah clutching her arm.  When I turn my head I catch James rolling his eyes at the display that Leah is putting on.

“I will go back and take my seat, I hope you like my last surprise,” James says getting up and walking away.  I watch him trying to work out what he’s talking about, but chatting brings my eyes to the dock. I watch as two officers bring in Paul and Jacob.  I frown at them seeing that their heads seem to have been shaved and they both have those scalp molding scarfs on their heads.

“Please rise for the Honorable Judge Varner,” the court bailiff speaks out loud before anyone can say anything. 

The judge enters the room and sits in his chair, and tells us to be seated as he calls the court to order.  The judge reads over some paperwork and looks up at the defendant's table. 

“This is a court room, remove those head scarves,” the judge says bluntly.

I kiss Bella’s head, but the loud gasps make me turn my head.  I look around the room seeing everyone’s looking at Paul and Jacob.  As they move around at the reactions, I can see they have ‘rapist’ tattooed across their foreheads.

I turn to look at James who is smirking away.

“What did you do to him?” Leah screams as she stands up making her way toward Bella and I.

“Young woman, sit down!  No, in fact get out of my court room and don’t come back until you put some clothing on.  Bailiff remove this person, and do not let her back in here unless she’s dressed more appropriately.”

Leah’s mouth drops open as she looks at the judge with rage in her eyes. Two of the eight bailiffs in the room escort her out of the room with Sue running out of the room behind them.

I smile a little and turn back to pay attention to the judge.

“Are the defendants, still pleading not guilty?” the judge asks.

“Ernest Berty, for the defense, your honor,” the defense attorney stands and says.  “I’m representing both Mr. Lahote and Mr. Black and they both plead not guilty.  At this time, your honor, we are petitioning the court to have the trial moved due to bias and news coverage in this matter.”

“Well Mr. Berty, since both your clients are facing charges in four states including the great state of Washington, I doubt you’ll find anyone who hasn’t currently heard something of the case.  You have had your chance to question and discredit members of the jury, so therefore your request is not applicable.  Your request to move the hearing is denied, and further more future stalling tactics such as this will not happen in this court.”

I chuckle silently as the defense attorney tucks his tail and sits down.  The judge has the bailiff bring in the jury and they are seated.  We listen as both sides give their opening arguments.  I’m glad that as soon as the opening arguments are done, the judge breaks for lunch.

“How are you feeling, Love?” I ask Bella, as I lean close to her ear so our conversation is private.

“I’m all right, but I think I may head home soon, if that’s okay?”

I kiss her head.  “Of course it is, my love.”

Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Is it too obvious to say that Charlie and Leah killed Harry so that Sue would get together with Charlie and they could be one, big happy family? No matter what, I think one of them killed him and the other helped cover it up. Great chapter. Lots of stuff happening and Leah really is off her rocker. The charges from the office incident alone should get her life in prison. Can't wait to see what happens with Renee. I hope she gets everything she deserves and then some. Tanya's still out there, though. Is she the last of the troublemakers to go down or am I giving her too much importance? Really looking forward to the next chapter. Great job.



Author's Response:

We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply.  I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it.  Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta.  Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time.  Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours.  Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out.  Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate.  There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete.  Kasi~

TEASER:  Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth.  Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.

Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.

Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.  

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"Young women can act silly, but men... Men make bold gestures." I opened the trunk for Bella. The man inside ended up on the pavement. Bella's eyes widened, and she covered her mouth.

 

* Period fic. Takes place in 1958/GangsterWard. 

 

*Not so canon couples, but a few are. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Read
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115343 Read Count: 76851
[Report This] Published: 18 Sep 2013 Updated: 20 Sep 2013
Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I hate that he's still sleeping with Rosalie. I can tell he doesn't want to, but he sees it as his duty. As a huge E/B fan, it's painful to read. One or two chapters, maybe, but it's eleven chapters in and he's still going back to her even though he's miserable. I hope Bella gets pregnant and it forces him to wake up.

 

Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Rosalie keeps talking about "I bet we just made a baby". I'm wondering if she's already pregnant and going to try to pass the baby off as Edwards. She's brought it up way too many times. I'm always suspicious. It would be even worse if it was Carlo's baby. Anyway, I'm looking forward to them breaking up. I just hope he can stop being a manwhore. I hate when he's like that in stories. 

Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

It always makes me incredibly nervous when an author warns you that you're going to hate the main character and that the angst hasn't even started yet. It makes me not want to read it until its complete so I can skip through the bad parts. I was enjoying this story, but now I'm waiting for the other shoe to drop. That's why Edward from Quiet Storm is my all time favorite. Mob guy who never thought of cheating from the first time he saw Bella. This Edward is a bit scummy, so it's not as fun. But I can't wait to see what happens. 

Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I really want to like this story but you're making it awfully difficult. I hope we don't have to wait for the last chapter for them to find some happiness. Some angst is good, but this story has too much. I don't think anyone's been happy for more than two sentences. Even though Edward deserves it, it would probably make me stop reading if she sleeps with Aro. This is the first story of yours that I'm actually not enjoying. 



Author's Response:

Maybe you should stop reading. I know there are plenty of other stories you will enjoy. It's labeled angst for a reason because there's a lot of it. It's not your cup of tea, and I thank you for giving it a try, but there's no reason for you to read something you dislike. 

Lexi

Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

This chapter was easy to read because I skipped through the whole thing. 

Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

They made you nuts? At least you knew the outcome, the rest of us had to suffer. It took long enough, but at least they're together, although I have a feeling her parents are going to try to cause problems. Thanks for the great chapter.

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Summary: Bella has a stalker who is seemingly harmless. Hired to housesit over Halloween, odd things begin happening. She takes care of the dogs, but is annoyed by Dr. Cullen’s younger brother. Is Edward playing tricks on her, is her stalker’s actions not so innocent or is the clown just a wax statue after all?

Banner By: DeeBelle1

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16319 Read Count: 2071
[Report This] Published: 25 Oct 2013 Updated: 25 Oct 2013
Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Third Annual Halloween One-Shot

Great story! I absolutely hate clowns, too, so it made this extra creepy. You guys really are the best.

Mismatched Love by WeeAndJess Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 234]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Zany Bella is the maid of honor of her sister’s wedding. She has to deal with Charlie, her soon to be brother in law and his uptight rich family who don't like her. To top it all off, Charlie's brother Edward is back and they seemed to be pushed together in everything they do. They are a mismatched pair that can't seem to tell each other how they feel.

BANNER BY Deebelle1


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 67590 Read Count: 40439
[Report This] Published: 13 Nov 2013 Updated: 21 Jan 2014
Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I think Edward is going to be livid when he finds out what his family has put her through. Not only not letting her in, but now causing her so much stress that she collapsed. You know a story is good when you want to jump into it to personally beat up some of the characters. I hope Edward's up and about soon and kicking some major ass.

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Summary: Edward’s grandfather’s business has been closed because of his investment partner died and his daughter, who he calls the viper, wants more than just money to reopen. The viper makes life hard for the Cullens when Edward refuses her ‘offer.’ When an angry Edward meets another poor little rich girl that needs some tutoring, will she be the one to teach him a thing or two?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69931 Read Count: 84922
[Report This] Published: 20 Jul 2014 Updated: 25 Aug 2014
Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm sure he's going to come around, but he was a big jerk in this chapter. He didn't even ask her any questions about herself and she's obviously very stressed. He just really pissed me off. Also, nobody in his family thinks this whole thing is strange? Paying him that much money?  Can't wait for the next chapter. 

Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I really hope he doesn't give in to the viper. I hope Edward and Bella are the ones to bring her down. Two women who have money, yet are completely different. Innocent Bella, evil viper. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Was that gas leak an accident or is someone trying to take her out? Maybe Tanya is trouble for both of them. 

Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Well, she keeps complaining that her house is too big, and it seems the Cullen's may be kicked out of theirs, so we know where they could go if that happens. This was a huge step for them. I hope things don't get weird between them because they kind of just jumped into it. I love them together, though. Also, the Viper is a bitch.

Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Wow, this poor girl can't catch a break. They really just need to talk. He did a lot of damage but she seems to be slightly willing to listen to him.

Summary:

 

BANNER BY: FemmeCullen

SUMMARY:  Little Lucy Swan is turning five and her birthday wish is to sing with hot country star Edward Cullen. When her momma wins tickets to see him in concert, will little Lucy's birthday wish come true?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26153 Read Count: 28870
[Report This] Published: 14 Jun 2015 Updated: 27 Jun 2015
Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

If I had to guess, I would say Carlisle or Esme fixed the contest so she would win. They knew her and thought she'd be good for Edward, so they played matchmaker. I hope the five weeks go by fast.

Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Loved it! So sweet. You guys never disappoint.

Summary:

Bound and Dangerous

 

 

 

Sequel to Bound to Family.  A continuing story of Don Edward Cullen and Donna Isabella Volutri-Cullen as they begin their new adventures in combining two power crime families together, while exploring their Dominant/submissive relationship in Master Edward's playroom.  Can they keep their families safe, their relationship safe, or will outside forces tear it apart?

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Action, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure, Dominance and submission
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Bound
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90815 Read Count: 229297
[Report This] Published: 09 Aug 2015 Updated: 19 Mar 2016
Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Great chapter. Now we just have to worry about that Roberto Cortez. He seemed awfully anxious to get his hands on Bella. I hope he's the next to go down.

Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Even though I'm very much looking forward to Aro's torture, I gotta say, I'm not loving Eliabeth right now. I know it's a tough time for her but she's being way too mean to Sean. It also seems to be hijacking the story a bit. I'm starting to have a hard time keeping up with all these new couples. Still love this story, though.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review.  Elizabeth has been really hurt by her father and is having a hard time allowing her heart to open up, but lets just say the smooth talking Irish Lad is going to break down those walls.  The next chapter is the torture and death of Aro.  Several members of the family gets their revenge for all the hurt that he has caused. 

Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Was looking forward to this coming to a conclusion. Kind of disappointed to see it end this way. I hope this 'kidnapping" doesn't last long. Long separations kill a story.

Summary:

Bound and United

 

Bound and United is the third installment of the Bound Series.  It continues the story of Don Edward and Donna Bella as they fight with their most evil villian yet.  Will they be able to fight death and be joined once more or will they be forever torn apart from each other?

 

Part 3 in the Bound Series

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Bound
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76085 Read Count: 184074
[Report This] Published: 09 Apr 2016 Updated: 28 Jan 2017
Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I'm guessing it's Charlie.

Summary:

 

Summary: Parenting can be a hard job to tackle, but it can be harder when you are parallel parenting between twins. Whatever will these two do with the girls they love corrupting their lives?
Banner by: HeartForTwilight Productions 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 212062 Read Count: 63526
[Report This] Published: 17 Jul 2017 Updated: 31 May 2018
Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I love this story, but it's been almost a month between updates☹️. I remember when a week was hard enough to wait.

Summary:

Trust & Obey

 

Bella is a twenty-two-year-old college graduate and submissive whose trust in the community has been broken by a cruel Dominant. Her best friend Rose is getting married and she is coerced into attending the two weeks of pre-wedding activities. 

 

Edward is a thirty-eight-year-old billionaire Dominant. Since his younger brother, by sixteen years, is getting married, he is opening his home at the Cullen compound to the bride’s maid of honor. 

 

What happens when he learns her name and he secretly knows it? Can Bella’s trust be restored? Will she ever be able to obey a Dominant again? B/E R/E HEA


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 105111 Read Count: 118674
[Report This] Published: 28 May 2021 Updated: 21 Jan 2022
Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2021 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter Twenty-Three

Absolutely terrific story, I just wish the chapters were a little longer. That's not a complaint, it's just after waiting all week for the next update, it goes by too quick.

Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two

Very good so far. I want to thank you for the pictures that you put in. It adds so much to the story to visualize what you're talking about. It makes your stories even more enjoyable. It really is appreciated.

Summary:

Blood Demons

Edward “Viper” Masen is the president of the Blood Demons MC taking over after a rival club murdered his father. His life is busy with running the legal and illegal businesses of the club. No time or heart for a steady Old Lady, instead he took what the Blood Succubus offered. No one would take the place of his Little Isa in his heart. The girl who he fell in love with one summer, sharing all their firsts with each other until she disappeared without a trace. 

 

Bella “Isa” Stewart, daughter of Charlie “Crusher” Swan and Renee Stewart is in exile in New York when her father catches her with a boy. Not telling why she wasn’t allowed to be with him, she is commanded to stay as far away from Phoenix as possible. Over the years her father comes to visit a few times, bringing his VP Demetri, who looks at her like she is something to eat. 

What happens when she receives a phone call from someone in her father’s club to tell her that her father is dead and Demetri did it? Then Demetri shows up at her apartment building with several other members. Hopping on her bike she heads cross country to hide out with a high school friend. Arriving in Phoenix, memories of the boy she fell in love swirl in her mind. Pulling into the parking lot to meet her friend, she comes face to face with a sexy man, covered in tattoos and wearing a leather motorcycle club vest with a president patch. He is a stranger, but there was something about his eyes. 

Can Viper protect her from Demetri and take revenge for him killing her father? How will he react when he finds out who she really is? Will they be able to wipe years away and pick back up where they left off?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 31201 Read Count: 20871
[Report This] Published: 03 Nov 2021 Updated: 26 Nov 2022
Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2022 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Ten

Going on six months since an update. Is this another one that isn't going to get finished?

Summary:

Although Edward and Bella were destined to be together, there may be obstacles. But their love for each other was never questioned, as evidenced with the letters of love.

Letters of Love


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13279 Read Count: 5704
[Report This] Published: 06 Feb 2022 Updated: 14 Feb 2022
Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three

I hope there's not gonna be a picture of Edward with his hand up Tanya's skirt. I wouldn't put it past her to set that up. Loving it so far.

Summary:

Cullen Enterprises takes over Newton Holdings in a hostile takeover. Breaking up the company and selling the pieces for profit, much like hundreds of companies before. Except this takeover is far from the ordinary. Almost forty-year-old Edward Cullen has plans for the building and the intelligent, curvy twenty-five-year-old woman who fascinates him. Olderward/Curveyella HEA

Dangerous Curves


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 53621 Read Count: 26253
[Report This] Published: 25 Nov 2022 Updated: 10 Dec 2023
Reviewer: Casey565 Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2022 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Edward is an idiot in this story. Not liking it very much. It started out great, but all he had to do was say one word to Bella, one simple word or an apology and things would be different. I hope things change soon.