Penname: TeamAllTwilight [Contact] Real name: Kasi Maakestad
Member Since: 21 Feb 2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

 


Hello everyone I am a 43 as of 11/13/12. Mother of 3 children at home but 7 children total. I have 3 children in college, no grandchildren...YET!


I love reading fan fiction, and I am currently reading more stories then I care to admit. I tend to read more all human form. I love reading The Twilight Series, and have read it completely more times then I am comfortable mentioning, and I've listened to it as well. The Harry Potter Series books read them and loved them as well. I however have no desire to read or write Harry Potter fan fiction. My favorite author besides SM & JKR is Jackie Collins, and I have read everyone of her books to date, my favorite character of hers is Lucky, because that woman has bigger balls then most men I know.


I enjoy spending time with my kids when they are quiet (KIDDING!) I enjoy laughing (if you can not tell), bowling, movies, playing cards, going for drives, spending time with friends, and surfing the net. I tend to transpose letters when I type, and I am grammatically challenged, tense useage being my biggest issue. I am however writing, if I can do it so can you! I have a wonderful pre-reader her name is JESS2002 A HUGE THANK YOU to her she's a great friend and pre-reader! I also write with Jess2002 under the author name JessAndTAT. I also need to say a big thank you to Nikky (WeeKitty) she has become such a huge part of my life and I am grateful for our friendship. Nikky and I write together under the name WeeKittyAndTAT.


I hope that you enjoy reading my/our stories and please take the time to review and let me know what you think. Have a great day!


Kasi


My Sisters 3 Banner made for the fandom for flood relief out-take Entry: http://i910.photobucket.com/albums/ac309/TeamAllTwilight/My%20Sisters%203/out-takeforms3banner.jpg


The out-take is centered at Edward and Bella's 27th wedding anniversary...find out about them and all their children.


Here is the link to see the banner! http://i910.photobucket.com/albums/ac309/TeamAllTwilight/My%20Sisters%203/mysisterthree.jpg


The out-take is available through: Fandom fights Flood and is also now available here and TWCS.


Here is the links to see the celtic symbols engraved into the cuffs, from My Sisters 3:


http://i910.photobucket.com/albums/ac309/TeamAllTwilight/trinitysymbol.jpg


http://i910.photobucket.com/albums/ac309/TeamAllTwilight/tri-goddesssymbol.jpg (might have to copy paste this one.)


Follow me on twitter if you like, but I am here to tell you I am BORING: http://twitter.com/TeamAllTwilight


On Facebook you can add me as well if you like: maakrace@hotmail.com or Kasi Teamalltwilight


A Sub Search won first place one shot in the Dommell's Dungeon Contest fans vote here is the banner/award for that: http://i910.photobucket.com/albums/ac309/TeamAllTwilight/A%20Sub%20Search/firstplacebanner.jpg


Banner for A Sub Search. Made by Christagbanners ... You can see her wonderful work by checking her out at christagbanners.blogspot.com http://i910.photobucket.com/albums/ac309/TeamAllTwilight/A%20Sub%20Search/TeamAllTwilightASubSearch.png


Please read and review. If you have the ability to receive messages back turned on, I will reply to your reviews.


Be sure to check out the profiles where I co-write with others. JessAndTAT and WeeKittyAndTAT


I also have a Facebook Group as well, feel free to check it out. http://www.facebook.com/groups/211321218983884/


 


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Summary: Past Featured Story

today


 


Edward is a foster child who is constantly being shipped from home to home. He attempts suicide daily. One night Charlie is sent to arrest him during a break in. What happens when Charlie finds out his real story? AH, OOC, Rated M for language/themes.


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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36910 Read Count: 10060
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Aug 2010
Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

This was a very well written touching story and I thank you for sharing it with us all!  I look forward to checking out your other writings in the future.



Author's Response:

Thank you SO much! I'm thinking of adding some out takes since this story was so short and I really miss writing this Edward.

Summary:

Bella is the local bad girl.  Edward is the new kid.  What happens when they meet while she is serving out her latest punishment at church?  Rated NC-17 for lemon and language.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5466 Read Count: 1480
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 Jan 2010
Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Sinner and the Saint One Shot

 

LOL I love it!  How hot!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked what I call my dirty little secret ;)

Thanks so much for reading and reveiwing!

~Jenn

My Sacrifice by Jennmc75 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 76]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan is starting her freshman year in college. How will her new life change when her past comes back to haunt her?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 60492 Read Count: 15617
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 22 Jan 2010
Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 14 - EPOV

I really enjoyed this story thank you for sahring it with all of us!  Well done I think, the only thing I would have liked to see is some sort of resolution of what happened to Victoria, or could you be planning a sequel?????



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed My Sacrifice.  It was my first full story I posted.  The sequel is posted and complete.  Check out Knowing That You Love Me.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)

~Jenn

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1486108
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

This was a awesome story thank you so much for sharing it with us all!  I absolutely loved this story a lot.  It was well written and not once did I feel shorted by the story or did I feel as if the story line was fading.  You did a remarkable job, and you should be very proud of your work!  I look forward to reading other stories you post.  Thank you again for the sharing of your story.

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3521]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1598626
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 42

I have to tell you I never go read the ending of a story EVER and I had to with this because I knew deep down if it was a horrid ending I could not finish this story!  I have been squicked out by the things and abuse in this story but I have read it all thus far.  I just had to get some peace because it was startign to drown me.  But I mean it when I say KUDOS to you on this because there are nto many who would jump up and take on a story line liek this and make a good story of it.  I am sad but I am goign to read the rest now that I have some peace to get me through.  Thank you!

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

Thank you again for a happy ending!  This story really touched me deeply Thank you again!

Summary:

Sequel to My Sacrifice. Bella and Edward have made it through the confrontation with James alive and together. How did all of the hell he put them through affect their lives? This is Edward's story of coping, loving, and learning to live again.

Knowing That You Love Me Book Cover

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63715 Read Count: 7683
[Report This] Published: 24 Jan 2010 Updated: 24 Jan 2010
Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue

WOW!  awesome story that you wrote here.  I am fully plannign to read a few of your other stories now too.  I have so many on my favorites list I need to catch up on a few of them before I start more though.  I think I have over 30 active stories going and my brain is starting to go to mush!  LOL  Anyway I think that oyu are a very talented writer and I am very glad I found and read this.  Thank you again for sharing!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it.  My only other multi-chapter stories are Lips of an Angel and Murder at Cullen Manor.  Everything else are one shots.  You wouldn't believe the number of active stories I have.  Way too many.  Thanks so much for your kinds words.  Knowing that people enjoy what I write makes me want to write more.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)

~Jenn

Stripped by punkfarie Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 63]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward and Bella both nearly lose their lives when they lose their first loves. Can they find a reason to live in each other or will their relationship send one of them over the edge? OOC, ExB, AH. Rated M. COMPLETE

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 245482 Read Count: 20494
[Report This] Published: 26 Jan 2010 Updated: 06 Feb 2010
Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Epilogue

very nice story thank you for sharing it.



Author's Response:

thank you for reading it. =)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a fractured girl with a life-threatening eating disorder. Her whole life changes when she meets Edward Masen. Warning- child abuse and dark themes.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 99625 Read Count: 41845
[Report This] Published: 26 Jan 2010 Updated: 29 Jan 2010
Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue: Two Years Later...

I realy enjoyed this story thank you so much for sharing it!

The Letter by changedbyEdward Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 245]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is superstar EC Velvet.  Bella Swan, professor of English Lit in Seattle, hears his velvety voice one day and it changes her life. She leaves her abusive fiance, Mike Newton, and writes a fan letter to EC Velvet.  Little did she know that fate was going to intervene and bring her together with this uber-famous hip-hop/rap star and turn her life upside down... or maybe it's right side up.  

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Disclaimer:  Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight.  I'm simply taking the universe she created and turning it inside out.  :)  All references to real people, real songs, or real anything else are for entertainment purposes only and only because if I mention it, it means I love it.  I'm not making any money off this story or any of the characters, names, songs, or anything else I might mention.  I'll leave the money making to the experts.  I'm only here to play.

AH/AU/VERY OOC - Rated for excessive language, mature themes, and lemons.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 148606 Read Count: 46477
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2010 Updated: 25 May 2010
Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Epilogue

I really enjoyed reading this story thank you so much for writing it and sharing it with us all!  I am sorry I did not leave more reviews but I did not start readign til it was finished.  I tend to forget to to review and plug on a read read read til it is finished.  I think you did very well and I love the story that you told.  Thank you again for sharing it!

Summary: Past Featured Story

sos

 

Bella and the gang are the popular rich kids of Forks high, new teacher Mr. Cullen starts, B wants him right away. What starts out as a passionate affair ends up as a cataylyst for the obsession of a dangerous drug lord to take action. Lemons.

Be warned- this is not your average teacher/student story

Now completed- Thanks to all my readers and reviewers.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88667 Read Count: 54640
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 Mar 2010
Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26-Epilogue

Loved this story thank you for sharing it!



Author's Response:

Your very welcome, glad you enjoyed it.:)

Summary:

Bella can no long hide behind her intellect when she has a stroke. She can't hide from her childhood love when he shows up back in Forks, either.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Sparkledamnu's Must Reads
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26330 Read Count: 9761
[Report This] Published: 02 Feb 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2010
Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Epilogue

Very nice story thank you for sharing it!

Love Bite by maimu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Bella is a young starting tattoo artist, Edward is her first 'canvas'. One-shot.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4285 Read Count: 412
[Report This] Published: 06 Feb 2010 Updated: 06 Feb 2010
Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

Well for not knowing tattooing very well you did one thing right that i have viewed many do wrong and that is you refered to the tattooing obect as a machine not a gun and that is huge most call it a gun and it is not a gun!  I loved this one shot it was certainally hot well written and I enoyed reading it so much that i have read it more then once.  You did really well and I look forward to reading more of your stuff!  WTG!



Author's Response:

Well all I have to say thank God for 'LA Ink' and 'Miami Ink' (and mom thinks watching television aint making people smart) XD and for the few lonely tattoos I have :)

 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 115549
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I like the dom side of Edward too!  Can not wait to read more!

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

PLEASE PLEASE do the Em POV.  I really LOVE this story!  I can not wait to read more!

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I think I need a shower too!  Holy fuck!  WOW!  hmmmm that was HAWT!

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I really like this story and I am enjoying it a lot.  I will say this.  I prefer to read stories that are already done that way I do not have to wait but I chose to read your story as it is being written and I am dealing with it just fine.  I am sorry you are battling writers block, and I hope that you are able to work through this.  I love this story and hate parts of it too, but that is usually what makes a story worth reading.  So I will gladly wait for you to have the time to post more, and I will enjoy it.  Thanks for sharing your story with all of us!  Like always hope to see more soon, and have a great day!

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

thanks for the update, still loving this story.

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Ohhhh Noooo Bella is going to go Bitchella on him and he deserves it if he is having his ex over!  More soon please and thank you!



Author's Response:

I love a strong Bella...its the only kind that could stand caveward :)

Thx for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I hope that you can post the new chapter soon!  I am really loving this story but this drama has me on the edge.  ARGHHHH!!!!!!! 

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I am excited to see where this goes from here!



Author's Response:

All kinds of fuckery on the way in the next few chapters ;) Thx for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Ohh I hate cliff hangers but I think I may know where you are going!  I am so excited to see the next chapter!!!  post soon PLEASE!!!!!!  pretty please!!!!  With a big ass cherry on top?????

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I guessed right and I am excited to see where you take this from here!  I love this story and I am loving it more and more so please write more and psot soon!  Thank you for sharing this....thank you thank you thank you!

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

LOL Helmet and Jock Strap!  LOL  Seriously LMAO.....My kids are staring at me!  Ohh how funny!  I can nto wait to read renee and charlies reactions!!!!! 

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I have patience and I am sorry to hear about your father.  I will be sitting on the edge of my seat awaiting the next update though as I seem to check for an update on this story more often then any other story I read currently!  I really love this story and I am so interested to see where it is that you are going to go with this.

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

YAY your back!  Glad your Dad is doing better.  Gosh I missed this story so much I re-read the whoel thing thus far the other night.  I am excited to see where this is going from here.  :) I <3 Ripple Effect.

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I am so glad to see you back!  I have missed your writing.  I loved this chapter. 

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

wow speachless

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Well I will add to the total here!  Love the story as always adn look forward to seeing where this is going to go from here.

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I have missed you a lot not only with this story. I am glad to see you posting again.  I really love this story a lot and I am really happy to see you intend to finish it.  Thank you so much for sharing with us all your wonderful writing.  Hope that RL calms for you some.  Thanks again!

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Shadowcat2009/Lisa,

My name is Kasi and I am and have alwyas been since I started reading Fan Fiction a huge fan of Ripple Effect.  I talked to Dplash almost 2 years ago and she said you had talked ot her about finishing this story.  I know she has left the fandom, as her profile is now gone.  I am not sure messaging you will even get to you, but I have to try.  I am curious if you would allow me and my partner in crime to finish Ripple Effect?  We would love to finish it, and give it the ending it deserves.  It is seriously one of my all tiem FAVORITES.  My writing partner Nikky and I have several fics under our belt.  We love writing and tellign a story.  We have written some great stories such as His Cimmerian View, Diamond Doll's Kitty Cave, Underground Fight For Love and The Soulmate Medallion just to name a few.  If you would please consider allowing us this honor, we promise to do our best in giving it the best ending possible.  You can contact us at weekittyandtat@gmail.com.  Thanks for your time.  Kasi & Nikky~

Fourth Quarter by MBella Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 24]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Fourth Quarter

Edward is the star quarterback, Bella is the coach's daughter.  Falling in love can be bittersweet, but what happens when tragedy tears them apart and fate throws them back together years later?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 146742 Read Count: 17163
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 10 Feb 2010
Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Epi

Ok well thank you first of all for sharing this story I loved it completely!  I HATED Charlie, loved Edwards and Bellas off the cuff comments.  I have got to say this story is well written, and it is worth reading.  Thanks again for sahrign with us all your amazing talent at telling a story.

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

All I can say is thee best line IMO is “Yes, I took something…” he snapped, “I took her virginity.”

 

BAAAHHHH HAAHAAHAA

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

My Favorite Bella line is now  "As for the NFL…well…they can just…fuck off.”

Summary:

Edward cheated. Bella left – but what happens when she has no more money to live on and a baby to look forward to? She becomes Roxy Jones – legal and official prostiture at the Moonlite Bunny Ranch.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48374 Read Count: 12297
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Mar 2010
Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Mine Again

thanks for sharing this story!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella just found out she's pregnant after a one night stand. Edward is enthralled by this woman who is carrying his child, but Bella has a dark past. Will she be able to let it go and give Edward the chance he deserves? AH

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57790 Read Count: 19058
[Report This] Published: 11 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Feb 2010
Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Ten Years Later

This was extreemly deep and sad, but such a well written story.  Thank you for sharing!

Tempting Bella by dont_run Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 191]
Summary: Past Featured Story

tempt

banner by mehek18 site http://mehek18.tumblr.com/

Bella tells herself being with Edward is wrong because he's to young for her though it doesn't stop her from wanting him in every way including her biological clock picturing green eyed babies. And if it is wrong why does he feel so right?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48225 Read Count: 35522
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Mar 2010
Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Outtake 2: The Day Edward Messed Up?

Ohh I loved this story thank you for sharing it with me!

Summary: Past Featured Story

beaches

Returning to her hometown after college, Bella is thrilled to be reunited with her friends Alice and Jordan. What she doesn’t expect is the undeniable attraction that she feels for Jordan’s husband Edward. When lines blur, friendships are tested. ExB, All Human, Rated M for language, adult situations and lemons!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 66851 Read Count: 13261
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Mar 2010
Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue

I really enjoyed reading this story thanks for sharing it with me and all of us that read the stories here!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review!  I'm so glad you enjoyed the story!

Summary: Past Featured Story

beauty

Edward Cullen is a painfully shy intellectual desperately in love with his quiet, beautiful classmate Bella Swan. Eight chapter novella following the whirlwind romance of a bookish intellectual and his dream girl.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53594 Read Count: 5797
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Feb 2010
Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Their Revenge

WOW I really liked this story thank you for sharing it!

Road Maps by Oleander Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 108]
Summary:

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It's now six years later; Bella is graduating from Dartmouth, Edward is in Med School. How have their lives changed over the years and what's to come down the road?

AU-Human, rated NC-17 for mature language, mature subject matter, talk of abuse.SEQUEL TO BRANDED.  Please read Branded before reading this story.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 149939 Read Count: 18595
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 10 Mar 2010
Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Deja Vu

I <3 Em too!  So I am right there with you!  I love readign his POV on things but I still say my favorite peeps are Bella and Edward!  :) SIGH!



Author's Response:

Yeah, most people would prefer to read a B&E-centric story, and that's fine.  :)  We can keep Em to ourselves.

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Epilogue-Bittersweet Symphony

I really liked the outcome of this story, and wanted to thank you for sharing it and writing it!  :)



Author's Response:

Thanks, TeamAllTwilight.  :)  And thank you for reading it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Two years ago Edward was wrenched out of Bella's life, taking their kismet, or destiny, with him, but before he disappeared, they made a promise that changed their lives in ways they never imagined. AH/OOC/Language/Lemons

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 140799 Read Count: 8622
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Feb 2010
Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Graduation/Epilogue

Well I for one loved the cheesey ending, but then I am a total HOOR for a happy ending!  Thank you for sharing this story it made me laugh cry smile and frown but I read the whole thing from open to close in one sitting.  My kids did have cold meat snadwiches for supper but it was hot out too so I will use that as my excuse not the fact that I was nto goignt o stop reading to make a "decent" supper!  LOL  I really did enjoy your writing and this story I did enjoy for a few other reasons then the happy ending part.  I was glad to see Jake not being love starved for Bella and it was nice to see vic and james be good.  I really liked this story a lot!  Thank you again!



Author's Response: I am so glad you that you enjoyed this. It was was first attempt at an all human story.

Summary:

Bella and Edward meet at a bar in Seattle on New Year's Eve. Will they only be kissing each other when the clock strikes twelve?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3030 Read Count: 228
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Feb 2010
Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very nice oneshot!  thank you for sharing it!

Can't Let Go by madeleinejade Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 15]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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All human. Bella was best friends with Alice and Edward in high school. She decided to confess her feelings to Edward before end of senior year, but he unfortunately didn't return her feelings. Embarrassed and regretful of a ruined friendship, she moved back to Arizona for college but returned to Washington due to Charlie's illness. Can she and Edward be friends again?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 108256 Read Count: 22787
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 17 Feb 2010
Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue: Beginnings

Ok I will say that I am sorry for not reviewing before the end, but I wanted to read the story as fast as possiable. I loved your story!  It may have been full of fluffy goodness, but sometimes we all want a good rocking live sappy story!  YAY!  thank you so much!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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AH After Bella Swan's best friend releases a portrait of her, it is purchased at an auction by Edward Masen, famous photographer and notorious modelizer.  Edward seems to have an irresistible draw to Bella. Can Bella accept Edward's attention? Is there more to Edward's attentions than meet the eye? Originally by xx.Nikteche. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, TBR
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 161174 Read Count: 171312
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Feb 2010
Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....

I really enjoyed reading this story thank you so much for sharing it with us all.  It is and was truely amazing and well written and worth the read!  Thank you!

Seducing Revenge by ladyinblue6 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 64]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella isn't your regular government agent. She's a rogue agent, and she's killing everyone that ruined her life. What happens when she takes an FBI agent, Edward Cullen, hostage? Will her revenge still be burned into her mind? 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 47921 Read Count: 10823
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 26 Apr 2010
Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstar
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

liked your story thank you for sharing it



Author's Response:

No problem.

Summary:

Going through the high school social system is not just looking for a gentle curvature. Friend's change, and relationships blossom and wilt all in a matter of seconds. AH, AU, OOC. Mature fic, lemons galore, and intimate story line.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64818 Read Count: 3416
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 18 Feb 2010
Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

really sweet story thank you for sharing it!

Summary:

One thing in exchange for another takes on a literal meaning when a relationship and social opinions are put at their breaking point. How can a couple defying those social opinions survive? ExB lemons, angst, romance


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25859 Read Count: 1751
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 18 Feb 2010
Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

thank you for sharing this story i liked it.

Hot For Teacher by tawelephant Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward starts Princeton & finds himself lusting for the TA in his English class. Can Bella quench his thirst for some knowledge? All Human.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6015 Read Count: 594
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 18 Feb 2010
Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Just wanted to leave you some love!  This was fun to read and it was cute!  Loved it Thanks for sharing!  Kudos.

Summary:

Everything was fine until she stopped swinging in my backyard. I had to go to her. I had to be her friend. I just never thought love would factor in. For the 'When Love Was New' contest.

“Wh-what happened to Jacob?” I asked, angry at him.

She stopped everything she was doing and stared at the wall in front of her, not really seeing it.

“Dead, I think,” she whispered. Moisture formed in her eyes and she set her lunch down, pulling her arms around her. A small cry broke through her stiff lips and I wrapped my arms around her without any thought.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11258 Read Count: 237
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 18 Feb 2010
Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I was not offended at all, I was worried at first where you were going to go with this.  I almost wish you woul dturn this into somethign with more of a resolution, however I thought it was sweet.  I was like mad at Edward for walkign out when she called him by his name.  Anyway thanks for sharing and kudos!



Author's Response:

Sometimes I wish I did too. But I wrote this so long ago that I can see so many changes I wish I would have done.

Thanks for your review, though. <3

You Got The Look by tawelephant Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Edward is bored while he is out at the club with the guys. That is when she walks in. Human and Canon.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3123 Read Count: 525
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 18 Feb 2010
Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

very sweet story!

Dance with Me by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 206]
Summary:

Edward, a well know author, starts working at Bella's bar to help with research for his next project. But as circumstance pushes them together, and feelings grow into something serious, Bella's afraid her past will change the way Edward feels. AU/AH/Canon

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94430 Read Count: 54050
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 26 Feb 2010
Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Little Things

I really loved this story



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I hope you like the sequel, "The Family You Make" as well!

Dreaming of Edward by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 82]
Summary:

 

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Ever wonder what Bella dreams about when she calls out his name? Not my usual type of story was written by request. It was written for a fan for Christmas and we decided to share it with everyone who like this sort of story. Rated NC-17 for major mature and major sex ooc au/reg pairs EXB this story is not light and fluffy so readers beware. NO INCEST, RAPE or MULTIPLE ENCOUNTERS. Vulgar language please dont read if you dont like swearing.

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36388 Read Count: 17394
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 19 Jan 2011
Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So hot! wow!

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

this was great I could not stop reading forgive not reviewing each chapter but this was great thank you for sharing....

Kasi~

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Edward Cullen loves two things in this world: his twins Wendy and Car, and his tattoos.

Bella Swan is jaded by her husband, who left her three months pregnant. Now her daughter Lily is her entire world and she wears her love for Lily on her skin...

Can these two broken hearted people overcome their fears and come together?

Or are they both to stubborn?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48082 Read Count: 107504
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Jun 2010
Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue

I have had this on my favorites for a while and wanted to wait til it had more chapters to read or was finished I am glad that I read it all at once.  I really enjoyed it a lot and wanted to say thank you for sharing your story line with us all.

Love on the Line by TrueLovEph28 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

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O/S Bella and Edward are close, but their entire relationship is based over the phone. What will happen when the calls aren't enough anymore? All human. Rated NC-17 for language and adult situations.

Like my banners? Yeah, me too. The first one is by a sweet girl named Jeanette, and the bottom two are from my little cyber sis Emma (she's brilliant, isn't she?).


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14077 Read Count: 579
[Report This] Published: 21 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Feb 2010
Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really loved this story thanks for sharing! 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I means a lot that you would take the time to tell me!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella finds out she's pregnant, but Edward wants nothing to do with it...it doesn't fit his plans! She moves on...Will time make Edward want to be in their lives before the baby is born? Will they find their way back to each other - AH/lemons later  NC-17 RATING FOR VOILENCE IN LATER CHAPTERS.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56874 Read Count: 59967
[Report This] Published: 22 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Apr 2010
Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Epilogue

I really liked this story. I am sorry that I did not take the time to review each chapter but I started and finished this in one quick setting.  Anyway I really liked this story it was nice to see a person seldom used as the BAD GUY.  I liked your story and the plot was do-able.  Thank you for sharing this with us all.

Summary: Past Featured Story

ADC,fanfic

 

Bella is a family attorney & Edward seeks her help. Friendship abounds, maybe more? AH OOC Rated M b/c they are adults & will do adult things! Canon Couples


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 91018 Read Count: 27469
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Dec 2010
Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17, Forever & The Rest of Forever

Ohh I am bawling and I am a mess!  Sobbing is more like it.  I can barely type this but I have to type it now or I will not ever be able to!  Thank you!  This story touched my heart and soul.  Thank you so much!~

Lost and Found by nitareality Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

Frustrated student Bella has a big problem. She lost BOB and he's being held in the lost and found, in RA Edward's room. Can Allice and Rose help Bella recover her BOB without sacrificing her dignity?

Comic Smut

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6775 Read Count: 1666
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 24 Feb 2010
Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Lost and Found

hmmm Yummy!  LOL

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3983]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 985599
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

I love this story and I really enjoy reading it.  Look forward to more.



Author's Response:

thank you so much

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

Hey Michele~

I loved this chapter and where it is smaller than normal it was chuck full of good times and great storylines.  I love the palces you ahve taken this story and I love the way that you have made Bella stronger each time, even though she is always submitting she is so strong.  Thanks for always sharing your wonderful talent for writing and I look forward to the next chapter into the lives of Domward, and subella.  <3 you big time chicka~!

Kasi~

xoxo



Author's Response:

Hi Kasi, Thanks so much for your words of wisdom and encouragement.  Love you too, honey - hey - what's next for you?? PM me and let me know what you are up to!

Michele

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Michele~ I loved this chapter it was fantastic.  I am sorry that you are haivng such negitive feed back over this punishment from last chapter it was what she expected it was not an abuse issue adn honestly some people clearly have WAY TO MUCH FUCKING TIME ON THEIR HANDS IF THEY HAVE TO NIT PICK YOUR STORY ABOUT BDSM HAVING *GASP* SPANKINGS FOR PUNISHIMENT IN THEM!!!!!!!!!!! WTF-EVER!  Anyway off my soap box...I loved this story Chicka and the proposal was PHENOM! love love love it!  I am so tickled pink that he finally popped the question!  :) Hugs my dear and I look forward to more!

xoXOxo

Kasi~



Author's Response:

Wow Kasi - You are my HERO!! You have a way with words, love, which is why I love reading your stories!!!

Thanks Darlin'

xoxo

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

Oh my girlie, I love you so much Michele~

This story jsut keeps gettign better and better.  I flove it!  Seriously FLOVE it!  So glad they one of each.  Can't wait to read all abotu the birthing process.  Love the talk Carlisle had with Edward.  Love that Emmett knew about the playroom.  Alice is always so sneaky, and I love it!  I love that Bella is always so diplomatic. 

YAY....Thanks for always sharing your wonderful writing with us all!

Kasi~

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I think this will be really good been wanting to read it for a while but have so many stories going wanted to wait for a bunch to stack up.  I will review and post I jsut want to read as much as I can at once.  Thanks for sharing this

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

I am finally caught all up with this story and I am truely loving it!  I am sorry I did nto post each chapter but I am glad that I am reading it!  You are doing an amazing job and I thank you for sharing your story your writing with us all.  KUDOS to you. 



Author's Response:

it's fine and thank you for your kind comments and your review. I hope you keep enjoying it.

Michele

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

This is an amazing story and I love it I am excited to see what kind of trouble that Jake and James are goign to cause.  I have it figured that James is the missing link denali and I think that they are goig to wreck havok on the girls at Rose adn Ems but when??  Hmmmm I am stressing about this.  LOL  sad but true.  I do really though like this story and I think you are doing a truely wonderful job at it!  Thanks for sharing this and I look forward to MORE MORE MORE!!!!  yay!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

thank you for the wonderful review and the very kind words. xoxo

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Cliff Hanger it is James and Jakes weekend to fuck with the girls.  :(  I am excited to read about it and see what is going to happen.

Loving the story good job and keep it up!  you rock!



Author's Response:

thank you and you rock too :)

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

I am so excited to see and read the next chapter!  This story really rocks and you are an amazing author!



Author's Response:

thank you so much but I must give lots of credit to Fiorella who makes all my ramblings so much better!

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

I really liked what you have done and I understand your place on wanting it scary enough but not to violent to offend and such. I am writing a stalker story right now it is on here and ff and I have only paosted 2 chapters but I am writing the 12th right now and I jsut started to share it with the public. I have the rest off with my beta and pre readers.  I am really worried about a few things and reading what you have written has given me hope that I will be abel to convey the sickness and yet still make it through without being to harsh.    I really love this story of yours and I find myself reading a lot of of the BDSM involved stories.  You really rock and I hope I do at least half as well with my story as you are doing with this one!

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Your story is amazing you have done well by it and I love it I can not wait to see where it goes from here.  I would love to have your permission to pimp your story when I post another chapter of mine please let me know if you mind!  Thanks TAT~

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

really great chapter from you as always!  I wanted to tell you I had SEVERAL people all tell me that my reccomendation of your story was a great rec because your story really is great.  I wanted to pass on the love.  I am excited to see the christmas interaction! 

Kasi~ aka TeamAllTiwlight



Author's Response:

Hey there Kasi,

 

Thanks so much for the rec!!! I am glad that you enjoyed this chapter.

xoxo

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 45

this was a great chapter thanks for sharing it



Author's Response:

thanks for your review

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

I really love this story and I so enjoy reading the things you write.  You amaze me with your mad writing skills.  I have had a few tough days writing lately too, I totally understnad the feeling of being on the ledge!  Thanks for sahring such a wonderful story and great fic recs too!  WOWSA!  :)<3



Author's Response:

thanks darling!

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

I poersonally loved this chapter you only showed how the non comminication causes issues and does not help anything.  I loved this chapter and I love this story!  Looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

thank you tat

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

Michele~ I just loved this chapter, very well written and I loved the names!  I am so glad that things are good.  Hugs!  Kasi~

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

another great chapter from you like always



Author's Response:

thank you :)

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Michele~

WOW what else could I ever say!  This chapter was fantastic and I am not surprised by the cliffhanger at all.  I do nto think that there is anyway that the charges against Bella could ever EVER fly, she was a victim and being held against her will by not 1 but 2 mad men.  They both deserved to die, and as far as i am concerned they got off with much less then they would have if I got to give them their death sentences.  I think I would liek to see you have it where this si what he wants but the distric attorney thinks this is all crap, but either way no matter what you do I will read it and I will review it and I will still love this story!  Thank you for sharing this story with us all and I look forward to your next update!

Kasi~



Author's Response:

Hey Kasi,

You are too smart for your own good, Missy! Great evaluation - thanks so much for reviewing.

 

PEOPLE LIKE US – OUTTAKE # 6

OUTTAKE – CONVERSATION BETWEEN JASPER AND ALICE

“Guys, I’ve got to go – Jazz please give this some serious thought and Alice, you need to stop being so fucking stubborn. I love you, Squirt!”

Edward almost crushed her in a hug. He slapped Jasper on the shoulder as he ran out the door.

 

“So… you talk about the size of my schlong?”  Jasper said.

Alice looked up at him with mounting excitement, “Well, it’s quite impressive…” she said huskily.

Jasper smiled at her.  “Can we talk? I mean really talk; I’ve missed you Tink…”

Alice smiled through her tears. “I’ve missed you too Jazzy….”

Jasper looked uncomfortable for a moment and it bothered Alice.  She was used to Jasper Whitlock being decisive and in control.  Seeing him looking ill at ease was new.  There had been many disagreements in the Whitlock/Cullen home since Alice had moved in with Jasper two year before.

She had never lived alone, besides when she had gone to college and even then, she had attended Berkley, so that she was close to her family and Jasper.

Although over the years, they had learned to deal with Jasper’s travelling for work and Alice’s part time job as Edward’s PA which had taken her away from time to time, through everything, including Alice’s training as a submissive, their lines of communication had always been open and honest.

Alice had grown up in a house hold that was opinionated and not scared of voicing their points of view.  Esme and Carlisle had encouraged their children to have their own opinions and to share them.  They had also taught them to stick to their guns.

This was one of the many things that had attracted Jasper to Alice in the first place.  Although she was much younger than him when they met; he had always found Alice to be interesting to talk to and inevitably to argue with.  She was a spirited and enthusiastic young woman, with a warmth and energy that seemed to draw him in from the first moment.

Jasper on the other hand had grown up in a large family with two parents that had stuck together over the years because there was no other alternative for either one of them.  They were hardened by life, worn down by reality and for a reason that Jasper had never been able to fathom; they had decided to have three children of which Jasper was the youngest.  Eventually Jasper’s father had strayed and a few years later, when Jasper was about twelve, he had suddenly come back to the trailer park where they lived with three small children in tow!

He had told Jasper’s mother that they were his dead sister’s kids, but after awhile he had confessed that they were his.  Jasper felt sorry for the three youngest children and when he had begun to make money from modeling and small acting jobs, he had made a decision to see that they would have an opportunity to further their education, go to college and make a proper life for themselves.  Although none of the children were really close or affectionate with each other, Jasper had stuck to his word and the three younger children had gone on to college.

Jasper couldn’t believe that Ricky, the youngest of his stepsiblings had taken advantage of Jasper’s generosity the way that he had!  Jasper had never asked for any compensation or payment for the money that he had given to his siblings or parents over the years; the only stipulation he had for continuing to support his mother and father was that the house that he had purchased for them remain in his mother’s name.  Jasper was not close to his father and the distance had only grown when the man had abandoned his young family, leaving his wife to work three jobs to feed and clothe their three children.

Jasper had always thought that he would never find anyone to settle down with.  He didn’t ever want the life that his parents had; tired, sad, disillusioned and settling for something because there was no time or money for dreams of something or someone else.  Someone better.

So the first step that Jasper had taken at the age of sixteen was to have himself emancipated.  He had tried to live in Los Angeles and he had hated every moment of it but as he begun earning good money, he decided to take classes at the local community college.  The first one was on finances.  Jasper wanted to know how to look after his money and how to make it grow.

He trusted few people and although people liked his quiet charm and whit; Jasper had a way of standing to one side and observing people that he found made him a good judge of character.  Jasper had come to rely on that instinct over the years.

It was an instinct that he could no longer rely on.  He had never thought for a million years that his younger brother would ever turn out to be the low life, perverted bastard that he was!  Every time Jasper thought of what Ricky had done, how Richard had betrayed his own brother by lusting, perving, salivating over his Alice!  His Alice!  Jasper wanted to kill Rick with a cold fury that he had never felt before.

How he had touched her, fucking forced himself on her when Jasper had been careless enough to leave her alone with him… FUCK!

Alice gasped as Jasper jumped to his feet.  His face was a cold, furious mask.

“Jasper please!  If you want to talk to me, then you need to calm the fuck down!  I can’t reach you when you are like this!  If you are angry with me then just say so and let’s get it out there!  If you think that I did anything to encourage your brother…” Alice cringed away as Jasper was suddenly in front of her with his hand clasped over her lips.

Never – NEVER, EVER call that fucking piece of low down shit my brother!  I will kill him if I ever see him anywhere near you again!”  Jasper spat out as he held her.

Alice whimpered and she closed her eyes.  “Jazzy, you are scaring me…” 

This wild man wasn’t her Jasper…

Alice felt the tears running down her cheeks and over Jasper’s fingers.

Suddenly she was free.

Alice pushed a fist into her mouth to keep the sobs as quiet as she could.  Her whole body was trembling.

“Alice… sweet Jesus, I’m sorry… I didn’t mean to scare you… Ali…”  Jasper choked out as he sat crouched clear across the room from where Alice sat.

Alice could see the anguish clearly on Jasper’s face and she felt even worse than she had in the past few days.

This was all her fault!

“Come to me…”  Alice said, but Jasper just shook his head.

Alice slid off the sofa onto her knees and she crawled slowly across to where Jasper had slumped down against the wall.

Jasper could feel the intensity of Alice’s gaze as he watched her moving slowly towards him.

“Ali…” he said in a half pleading, half warning.

“No.  You’ve spoken and now it is my turn…” Alice said when she was inches away from his face.

Her eyes searched his intensely.  The remorse and sorrow that Alice saw gave her the courage to move closer until her lips met his.

Jasper’s head jerked backwards, but with nowhere to go, he hit the wall.

He cursed and rubbed his head.

Alice grinned at him, “Maybe that’ll knock some sense into your thick skull!”  She quipped as she arranged herself between his outstretched legs; her thighs straddled his open ones so that he could feel her heated core through her jeans.

Jasper shut his eyes tightly and moaned as he tried to adjust himself.  Alice giggled and winked at him.

“We can get to that later, but first let’s please resolve this ‘thing’ once and for all!”  She said with determination.

“Gladly, Darlin’.”

“Okay, I’m going first.  I need to tell you why I didn’t tell you about… what was happening in the first place, but you cannot freak out on me!  Do you promise?”

Jasper could see how anxious Alice was and once again he was filled with remorse at his earlier behavior.

“I promise.”

Alice took a deep breath, “I know that this might sound crazy to you, but when it happened the first time; I tried to just shrug it off.  I thought that perhaps I had imagined it or misread his signals in some way.  The next time it happened, your… well your father was in the room.  He, Rick grabbed my ass as I walked passed him.  I turned around as saw them looking at each other and Rick just winked at me and they burst out laughing… Jasper… you promised…” Alice broke off as she watched Jasper’s eyes become dark and wild again.

Jasper felt as if he was ready to explode!  That no good, low fucking, good for nothing… BASTARD!  I. will. Kill. Him.

Jasper felt Alice’s tiny hand stroking his cheek and he refocused on her anxious face.

He kissed her quickly, “I’m okay, Ali, I promise.  I won’t freak out on you again.”

Alice nodded slowly, “He apologized to me later – your father, I mean.  The next day he told me that he had too much to drink and that he had made Rick promise never to touch me again.  He begged me not to tell you and then he said that… some girls just have an ‘air’ about them…”

SON OF A BITCH!

Jasper opened his mouth to speak but Alice put her fingers over his lips.

She continued. “I know better than that, Jazz!  I know better!  I was raised to know better than that!  With all their bullshitting and nonsense, my brothers have never, ever treated any woman including me with anything than the utmost respect.  You have never treated me like a whore, but at that moment, I felt dirty.  And I felt like a two bit whore, who didn’t deserve anything better.  Rick kept touching me, stupid little insignificant ‘slip-ups’.  Every time he was around me, sometimes you were in the next room or you had your back to us… He would graze my breasts by pushing past me in a doorway, or he would rub himself against me if he were standing behind us…” Alice shuddered in revulsion and Jasper couldn’t take it any longer.

His arms wrapped Alice in a vice like grip. “Never, never, never…” He said over and over again against her neck as he pulled her closer.

“Jazz…”

“No – it’s my turn now… never, ever again, Mary Alice Cullen.  Promise me that you will never let anyone ever make you feel like that again.  Especially not me!  God, Ali, I love you so much!  Just the thought of another man touching you… Fuck!  It’s too much to even contemplate!  Do you know how I felt when I found out that Rick was… forcing himself on you?  When we forced Bella to tell us and we did force her – she didn’t have a choice really, I wanted to fucking kill someone there and then!  As you know, I sat up all night just thinking about what could have happened to you!  And about how I was going to take care of you this time!  I couldn’t help you last time, Darlin’.  I wasn’t able to stop that animal putting his hands on you… but I was going to make sure that Rick never ever touched you again.”

Alice brushed the tears of Jaspers cheeks.

“I love you so fucking much, Mary Alice Cullen-Whitlock.  You own me mind, body and soul.  If I lost you, my life would be so empty… please forgive me for hurting you and dragging this shit out.  Please, please don’t ever put me through this again, Tink, my heart can’t stand it.”  Jasper whispered as they held each other’s faces and gazed with longing into each other’s eyes.

“I love you, Cowboy; you are my everything… my lover, my best friend, my Dom, my love.  I am sorry too.  No more secrets.”

Their kiss was a relief.  For the first time in almost two weeks, their lips were soft and forgiving.  Lips touched, brushed, nibbled.  Tongues dueled and teased.  Eventually they couldn’t take it any longer and Jasper held Alice to him as he tipped her onto the floor and loomed over her, his knees pushing her thighs apart.

Alice panted into his mouth.  “Can I get my clothes back?”

Jasper smiled against her lips, “yeah, especially the underwear…”

Alice giggled, “can I get my car back?”

Jasper shook his head, “sorry, you will be driven around for a while…”

Alice groaned, “but I can see my Bestie?”

Jasper rocked back on his knees as he looked at the bright twinkle in Alice’s eyes. “Mary Alice…” He said with narrowed eyes.

Fuck! He is so sexy when he does that… now I need to change my panties! Damn Cowboy!

“Hmmm… take me upstairs Jazz… I’ve missed you…” Alice uttered the magic words.

J&A****~~~~PLU~~~~****J&A

An hour later, Alice lay sprawled across Jasper’s bare chest.  Her eyes were closed but she was humming as Jasper played with her hair.

“Alice?”

“Yeah?”

“Supervised visits only…”  Jasper kissed her forehead.

“I know – but that’s only for now…” Alice smiled to herself.

She wondered what Kate, Bella and Rosalie were doing on Saturday after the therapy session?  She had heard that Gap was having a sale….

Everything was right with the world after all.

J&A****~~~~PLU~~~~****J&A

I hope that you liked it!

Love

Michele

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

As always this chapter freaking rocked it!  I love this story and I love that Bella stood up and laid it on the line for renee, what a freaking bi-o-tch she is, and worthless to boot!

Look forward to much more from you! 

Thanks for always sharing your great story with us all!

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Just a few words come to mind.
HOT
WOW
FUCK
and WOWFUCKHOT!

I really enjoyed this chapter and the story recs you all did are all great stories! Love this so much and ALWAYS look forward to more. I can not wait until I can say what Dommellas Dungeon entry is mine because I have WANTED to talk to you about it since I started writing it. As soon as I finish MS3 I am going to be devoting my time into making my one shot into a full story. The general consensis wants that anyway according to the reviews. This story was huge insperation for my one shot. You are so talented and I really love your writing! Thank you so much for sharing your gift with us all!
TAT~

Author's Response:

Hey there TAT - I'm so thrilled that you have another story lined up for us! I love MS3!  Thanks for your review and comments honey xoxo

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Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Michele~

I loved this chapter.  As always you amaze me!  Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story.

Kasi~



Author's Response:

my pleasure Kasi - thanks for your review

xoxo

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

Michele~ Wow just WOW...very fuckhot chapter.  This was just phenominal.  Of course I want to know what happened with Carlisle and Esme, without a doubt!  Chills are running up my spine at the last scene that was super HOT! again wow!  I am so very honored by your mentioning my story!  OMG the readers that you get if even a third of them check out my story...wowsa...I am speachless.  Thank you, from the bottom of my heart thank you.  Writing A Sub Search is not an easy task for me.  I have no BDSM background, and to write Bella as a strong and mature Domme is a challenge.  I only hope that I do not dissapoint.  Thank you again my friend, because kind words from a valued writer such as yourself mean a lot to me.

Hugs..xoxox

Kasi~

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Michele~ As always another wonderful well written chapter from you!

You never let me down.  I LOVE this story!

Thank you so much for sharing it and for always supporting your friends!

Kasi~



Author's Response:

thanks Kasi, 

Your words of encouragement are awesome as always,

Love

Michele

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Michele~

You know how much I love this story and I really enjoy and love the things you did with the punishment and showing us into Charlies homelife now.  I as always look forward to the next chapter and I am always learnign things from you that helps me.  You have no idea how much reading your story is helping me with mine.  Thank you!  For everything: sharing your story, praising mine, and for being such a sweet friend!

Hugs!

Kasi/TAT~

XOXOXO



Author's Response:

You are a honey and you really are too kind, Kasi. You are so talented and I have seen how your story just got better and better! Love you.

Michele

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

michele~ absolutely love it...great chapter....never expect less from you that is for sure.....love reading your stuff adn look forward to the next one...the pictures were cool....nice break...until next time....xoxoxoxo....kasi~



Author's Response:

thank you so much darling!

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

As always Michele another fantastic chapter of your story has come out.  Absolutely LOVE it.  Thanks for sharing love the DILF part of the story the most and loved the drama....Great recs....sugar daddy needed is a really great story, I am one of her pre-readers, Jess is fantastic.

Kasi~

XOXOXO

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Michele~

I love you hard girl....and feel so bad for you!  Damn you had a rough ass week!  I loved the chapter and I guessed when (jaz and ali) shared the look at Cullen Crest that Alice was indeed pregnant...damn ia m good if I do say so myself!  I absolutely LOVE this and I am excited to see Bella and Edwards wedding.  I loved the Em and Seth stingy egg hunting, and Bella's fit.  The flashes that Edward had of future daddyward times.  I really love it!  I am so excited to see that you tried to write a Dommella scene, and I love the way that you did it, because it makes sense.  Well you know for a fact how much I love this story and I have been here a while so I have to tell you that I seriously want an out-take of the fight/wrestling go around between Em and Seth...LOL  2 hot ass sweaty men...yep that gets me everytime.  Yumm-o-licious. 

Hugs!

Kasi~

xoxoxo



Author's Response:

Damn straight you are good - you are great, Sweetheart! you know what, you need to tell me when your birthday is, because the outtake could just be your gift!  As for the Dommella scene, she should have said, "Well Honey, I got insperation from my friend TAT'S story, but that chick is just too good to try and emulate!"

Thanks for the review.

 

Love you stax and stax, (Okay your break time is over, go and write the next chapter!)

xoxo

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

Michele~

You continue to amaze me and set me in awe of your major talent, and story telling abilities.  I F*cking love you baby!  I am so honored YET AGAIN that you rec'ed my story....WOW...On a craptastic day liek today, you have made me smile.  THANK YOU!  I am so excited to see who Bella's real mother is.  I am so glad that Edward and Bella got back on that horse...(PUN intended....IE: reverse cowboy talk...LOL)

I really do love this story and I heart you big time for always being one of my biggest cheerleaders.  Thank you my friend, my very talented friend!

Kasi~



Author's Response:

Hey Kasi girl - don't know what upset you, but there is always another day!  I'm so glad that you got to smile for a bit - and you underestimate yourself and your own talent too much - you spin a great tale and don't let anyone tell you different.

Love, hugs and smooches,\

Michele xoxo

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

Michele~

You never cease to amaze me.  I love the drunk talk...the singing....the way Edward abotu went postal on the bimbos.  I love Andy thinking of Bella as a sister.  I love the text from twister.  I love that I have a easter egg hunting emmett to look forward to.  I totally understnad what your beta/reader says I coudl never live this life.  It is fun to read about and I am having fun writing the flip side of a femal dom but I kid you not, this is not the life for me.  It is excitign and erotic, but the first tiem I was refused the ability to orgasm, I would be GONE.....not to mention my thoughts on personally being tied up or hit.  Now being a voyer to that might not be so bad, I think that it could be very erotic to watch.....guess I am just a perv!  Oh well what the heck huh?  You know some on told me when I fretted over the first lemon I wrote that if you can actually make another person visualize your characters in their mind doing the things your writing then you have done a great job.  I totally understnad that to be the truth....so kudos to you and that shower scene!  WOOWHOO.  Catch ya soon, next chapter of a sub search posts soon...oh and BTW go to my profile at fan fiction and get the link for the INSPIRE AWARDS because baby you got a nomination there for this story from the fan fiction webiste.....A certain author you knwo might have been the one to have voted for you and maybe even nominated you too.....Hmmmm.  Oh and I even got some nominations I got nominated for best bella under 1000 reviews for MS3 and best lemon under 100 for AsubSearch and also over all for best WIP that has you on edge waiting for next update for sub as well.  YAY for us both!  Good luck my friend I voted.....hope you vote soon!



Author's Response:

Wow Kasi - thank you so much!  I'm stunned, I really don't understand it , but thank you so much for your nomination and your vote! And your review and congrats on your nominations.

 

I am loving Sub Search by the way and I don't read Fem Domm stuff ever.

xoxo

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Michele~

As always i love this story. I love that you are takign Edward and Bella to another level each time you write a chapter.  You are makign them grow and learn from each other.  You have them both so OOC that you have made them their own and your own.  If not for the names this story could easially be a stand alone original fiction.  Your skill at writing amazes me, and I am grateful to think of you as a friend.  You teach me so much just by sharing your imagination and story with us all.

Thanks for always being there for me in both sharing your story and reading mine.  You are truely awesome.

Kasi~

xoxoxo



Author's Response:

AAAh my FAVORITE Mistress - you are some kind of awesome yourself! So thank you for your kind and always encouraging words!

love,

Michie

xoxo

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

Michele~

Oh my girlie you know I love you hard core.  This story is so fucking super fantastic.  You amaze me with every word adn I have a bunch of guesses as to what that letter intails.  One is that Bella is not really Charlies....I really hope that is not the case btu that would be a major mind fuck for Bella and Charlie too. 

You again offer up some awesome recs for stories.  Love them!  Love the photos.  Keep in mind that you love me when you read the next chapter of A.S.S.  I struggled my behind off writing it.  It should post on Monday.

xoxo

Kasi~



Author's Response:

Hey Darling, thanks so much for your review and you will know what the letter says soon.  And I am so looking for to YOUR next chapter xoxo

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

Michele~

Yet another dramtic and wonderful chapter from you.  I never saw this coming but at least you did nto cliffy us through the shooting...thank you for that.....it would have been pure evil.  I LOVE this story so much and I am so proud to call you a friend.  You have so much talent for telling a story that makes you laugh, cry, smile, embarrassed, and at times EXTREEMLY hot and bothered.  Thank you so much for sharing this talented writign with us all, wrapped into this phenominal story. You truely amaze me!

XOXOXOXO

Hug's~

Kasi



Author's Response:

Aww Kasi, Thank you so much for your wonderful words, you make me feel so honored to call you my friend!  I've been a reading failure lately, but these two are keeping me busy and there was no way that I was going to do a cliffy - we don't do angst well around here.  I will update again next week like normal - yeah Edward isn't a great patient... :)

xoxo

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

Michele~

I loved this chapter it was well done.  I love that they all kinda stood up to Edward when he was being a prick.  I loved tha Bella got herself a backbone and ripped that table of assbags a new one.  This story continues to amaze me each post.  I love it!

Your struggling writer friend,

Kasi~



Author's Response:

Oh come on now - not so struggling! You are doing so well!  Thanks so much for your review and for reading my story

xoxo

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 May 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

Wowsa Michele~

You have gone and out done yourself yet again, not that it would or shoudl be a surprise.  I LOVE, no make that FLOVE this story so much and I am really enjoying where it is that I believe that you are going with it.  I really am so proud to have been with you through this for a long time now, and I am really enjoying it for sure.  I will MISS this story and the characters as you have developed them for this story, when you are done.  You never stop amazing me though.....just one of your chapters are like almost 3 of mine...or more.  I love this story, and I heart you big time too!  I am so proud and honored to call you a friend, and I am in awe of your fantastic abilities and skills as a writer that you share with us all. 

XOXO

Kasi~

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

Michele~

You always amaze me.  One of your chapters is liek 4 of mine, but that is all good, because I flove this story!  I love it that she is preggers already, I love Alice going on a She-rah man haters binge.  I love rosie ready to beat down some nurse, and Esme on the beat down too.  Papa Carlisle starting a fight, and then sent to sleep on the sofa.  You crack me the heck up seriously.  I have about 5600 word count on my next chapter ready, I have a tad more to add than it is off to the beta, so I will post soon.  Love this story, hugs and kisses,

Kasi~



Author's Response:

Hello my friend!  thanks for the great review and I can't wait to read your next chapter. Take care Sweet friend, xoxo

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jun 2011 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

Michele~

You never fail with this story, you keep me interested and you keep plowing through.  Again, I love this story, and I am so grateful that you share it with us all, thank you.

I have no clue how your able to put out 30,000 word count chapters or more every other week.  WOW....1035414 word count thus far, on this story......You breeched one million words, last chapter and I missed it......Holy FUCK!  Up until this last chapter I just posted CH14 of A.S.S. I have struggled to get 5000 word count.  I think I found my mojo, or at least I hope I have. 

On a personal note, I hope that you are doing well.  My son brought home strep from school the tuesday before they got out of school for the summer....Everyone in the house has now been sick.  I ended up getting broncitus, double ear infections and a sinus infection.  I coughed so hard I have dislocated a rib, or cracked it.  I can not lie down to sleep, and I have to go to the doctor again tomorrow.....What a crappy summer vacation this has started out to be! 

Hugs,

Kasi~



Author's Response:

Hey Kasi, Thanks so much for your wonderful review and comment- OMG girl, you sound like you should be wrapped in cottonwool and put in a closet for 3 months! Take care of yourself and get better soon and you know it's not the amount of words on a page, sweet thing, it's the story behind it and you weave a wonderful tale.

 

love and hugs,

Michele

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

Michele~

OMFG!!!  Sounds like BABY CENTRAL!!  Woot! Woot!  I just love it. 

You are so amazing.  WOW!  You always leave me wanting and needing more from these characters.  I am just love this story so much.  You have a wonderful talent, and I know I am not alone in saying that. 

Thanks for all the warm fuzzies you send me too, they are always appreciated.

Kasi~ xoxoxo

PS....you are really killing it with these 30,000+ chapters...hooofda lady where do you get the time???  LOL  <3  :-)

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

Michele~  Like always this was a fan-fucking-tastic chapter.  I love the sounds of the new property.  I just wish that Em and Rose were moving too....ohhh well.  This just all sounds so lovely and wonderful.  I want to go live there too!  :-)  xoxoxo Kasi~

PS...I am super excited to see more, but that is a given, I love this story so much!



Author's Response:

thank you so much sweetheart for your comments!

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

Michele~

Where to start?  Gosh this chapter was just phenominal.  I loved it, the vehicle, Edward and the overkill, Bella standing up and telling off them bathroom bitches, the house sounds wonderful.  Just FLOVE it all.  I am seriously one of your biggest fans, I hope you know just how much I value your writing and friendship.

Kasi~ xoxo

PS...the last chapter of a.s.s. will post by Sunday night, my time....It is over 11,000 word count.  There will be an epi though.

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

Michele~

As always you freakign amaze me with your wonderfully written words.  I love this story, and where it is sad to hear you talk of the end, I completely understand.  I love the way that you are workign through the issues with them and having them stride to make themselves whole together.  You do such a fine job of showing just how hard it could be to keep your thoughts focused into someone elses wants and demands.  Thank you for sharign this wonderful story and I look forward to the next chapter.

HUGS!

xoxo,

Kasi~

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

Michele~

Great chpater as always my sweet.  Loved this a lot.  I hoep that he behaves, because it woudl suck royally if he fucked up.  I look forward to reading hte next chapter and seeing what they are all up too.  I think you are doing wonderfully, your writing amazes me.

Thanks for sharing,

Kasi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Hey there Darling Kasi, You know that i would just set you on his ass if he misbehaves!  Love you lots, honey, Michele