Reviews by mountainlion718
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

World War II Navy Pilot Edward meets shy wallflower Bella at a USO dance and starts to fall in love immediately.  Two weeks and a wedding later, they face separation as Edward ships off to the Eastern Front.  How will Bella handle life back in the states while Edward fights for their country abroad?  Will the letters they exchange be enough to help them get through the painful separation?

Rated NC-17 for the lemony exchanges in the first few chapters and perhaps later on in the story.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Twilight, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98833 Read Count: 64094
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Apr 2010
Reviewer: njdevil30718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: The New VIP

awesome, Edward would be so proud! can't wait till the Chicago office get a hold of her

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Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Corporate Hat Trick

woo hoo, love fiesty Bella, Edward would have been so proud! i'm just hoping Aro won't end up hurting her or the baby

Reviewer: njdevil30718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Transitions

i like Cherie! and for the boy so far Travis or Daniel. i hope he comes back in time

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Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Unpleasant Surprises

That was Esme right??? OMG when Edward finds out what happened he's gonna take one of those fighter jets and bomb the hell outta James

Reviewer: njdevil30718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: United Front

that wasn't a dream was it.....they are seriously connected like that.

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Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: A Pain In The Back

man, i so want him there for the birth! (i know it's not possible ;()isn't she a wee bit early????

Reviewer: njdevil30718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Welcome Baby Cullen!

Awww, Edward is gonna be over the moon! Can't wait till he gets the pics. Damn those nurses were bitchy!

Reviewer: njdevil30718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Back Home

I love that they have that unconcious connection. I mean maybe its all in her head but if its the only thing that keeps her from falling apart with the "not knowing" at least she has that to keep her grounded

Reviewer: njdevil30718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Evil Brown Envelopes

OMG, FREAKING NERVE WRACKING...... i hope she starts getting the letters on a reg. basis again.....just to keep her sane

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 21: The Mysteries of Time

it's so cool that she has that connection, but then again so frightening....Edward's a smart guy and very resourseful (kinda like McGyver, yes i'm showing my age...lol) he'll find a way to get on that truck

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Safe

Whew! yay he's coming home! can't wait for that reunion....i'm stocking up on the kleenex now....lol

(formaly njdevil30718)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Birthday Party

:( he missed the party.... it's got to be so frustrating.....but soon, he'll be home soon

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Foreign Familiar

sweetest homecoming ever! Cherie will have daddy wrapped around her finger and they will be as thick as theives...lol

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Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 25: A Clean Start

omg "dada" i'm gonna cry......I'm glad they did bring up the "James incident" no need to mar Edward homecoming with bad memories.....

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 26: It All Comes Together

awww.....they're so mushy cute....lol that's great that they had jobs for the boys.

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Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue: Chicago, May 1966

beautiful ending!, great job as always! Can't wait for your new fic! sounds exciting, you'll definately have another popular fav under your belt!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What if Edward finally found his mate, but she had a troubled past and wanted to kill herself? Could he help her? This story has DARK Themes and Rape discussion.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 248279 Read Count: 76224
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Jun 2012
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Balancing Relationships

i'm so glad that Jasper can spend time with her alone, i think it will benefit her greatly. i love the touching aspect between Bella & Edward, even though they can't consummate the bond, the touching is very intimate to them....for now

Author's Response:

Touching is almost more intimate because they aren't consumating the bond.  You're very perceptive!

Yeah, it's a good thing she can trust Jasper enough, though he is about to push her which will make her mad, but will have to happen.  So be prepared!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - Ignoring the Holidays

she's definately taking bigger steps. i'm so glad she went to church with Carlisle and Edward. Can't wait to see her in the gym with Emmett

Author's Response:

yep, she took some pretty big steps and church with Carlisle def gave Edward things to think about!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Trying New Things

i'm glad Edward was ok with everything in the end..(even with Em's teasing) let's hope Bella's workouts and therapy will do wonders for her

Author's Response:

Edward, the poor boy, I do admit to feeling bad for writing him such a hard time but it was needed for him to ever move forward with Bella.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 - Her Dimonds

Wow, that was so emotionally painful for both of them, more for Bella of course. Maybe now her future will change?

Author's Response:

Her future . . . it will change slowly.  It can't be overnight but this is the biggest step Bella's taken to healing.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 - Moving Forward

i think that was the best thing they could have done in making that agreement to tell each other their likes and dislikes. i hope she does move in with them.

Author's Response:

thanks.  I love it when readers like what I have my characters doing.  I agree that their relationship would be doomed if they don't communicate.  Then again maybe I just want Edward to start talking dirty . . .

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41 - A Time of Healing

Please let him be right! so proud of Bella, she's doing wonderfully :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 - part 1

i hope Edward will be able to control himself at the trial.....he just might need Esme, Alice & Rose in addition to Emmett to hold him back

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 42 - Getaway

i'm glad her confidence is slowly building, NY was great minus the Vlad issue. I hope he wont blab to the Volturi

Hiding Bella by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 214]
Summary:

stories/8628/images/hiding_Bella_Banner.jpgI found a secret hiding in the Alaskan wilderness while on summer vacation. Now I need to keep that secret safe and protected. But what affect will it have on me? What will happen if its exposed? What will I sacrifice to keep it safe? AU,REG PAIRS  EXB

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 79986 Read Count: 22413
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 19 Feb 2011
Reviewer: njdevil30718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

great story, i think the girls are in tons of trouble. Bella will feel like crap tomorrow

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Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

i swear if she upsets Bella, Rose will have a field day beating her ass, so will the rest of the family

Reviewer: njdevil30718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

wow she ripped off Tanya's arms off! good for her, that'll teach her!

Reviewer: njdevil30718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Something's gotta happen to the Volturi, the Cullens can't keep running everytime.

Author's Response:

yeah thats is definiatly changing real soon lots happening in the next chapter! its almost already in the works...

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

i can't believe the other 4 died...:( and what's going on with Em and Rose???

btw i used to be njdevil30718, just in cas you are confused...lol

Author's Response:

next 2 chapters are going to be full of twist on turns! not everything is as it seems;) sorry i can be slightly evil! but all will be rewardeed in the end!! promise!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

OMG, PLEASE TELL ME THAT EDWARD CAN AT LEAST GET SOME OF HIS VENOM IN HER SO SHE CAN CHANGE BY HIS HAND AND NOT HTE GUARD

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

thats great that Rose can have children now!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

love the names :) will EJ and CE have any special powers?

Author's Response:

Sorry it took so long for me to get back reply to your reveiw, vacations with no wifi are excruiating! Thank you for your review and for reading it! As for powers do you have any suggestions? I dont like to reuse my names or abilities so I would definitely entertain your thoughts.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well, I was thinking that one of them might have the power to heal, since Rose might have partially human baby and Rose is as well, in case something was to happen go either, the babys venom can cure the ailment. As for the other power thought it might be cute if the baby had telekinesis .... I dunno just a thought. Hope you enjoyed your vacation!!!

Love at 1st Bite by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 64]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is instantly drawn to the new girl, Bella Swan. From their first meeting he is overtaken by a desire for her body as well as her blood. After a week in Denali he returns to Forks and visits the object of his obsession. What happens in her room that night will change both of their lives forever. First chapter was written for the "In the Dark" Contest.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wanna read
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50865 Read Count: 17343
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 03 Jan 2017
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: An Arduous Journey

damn, Aro's a sneak. I wonder where they will end up.

Author's Response:

Not to go cryptic, but its somewhere mentioned in the series but not often visited in fanfiction...glad you liked the chapter!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373176
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Banished

YES, She's GONE!!!!!!!! evil bitch from hell....good riddance!

Reviewer: njdevil30718 Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask

so i hope Bella won't cheat on Edward with this "Tony" guy, and maybe Edward will fall totally in love with Bella once he sees her again and spends time with her

Reviewer: njdevil30718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Wedding Eve Festivities

i seriously hope that the wedding and wedding night are really enjoyable for them, maybe it'll help with the nervousness.  and uh the thing with the witnesses...EW, they're not gonna be watching the whole time right? how can they......"get into it" with someone watching ( i know the curtains, but they can still hear and B & E will know they are there).  at least if it's only for a short time and not the entire time they are "together" or can't they just look @ the blood on the sheets afterwards..... sorry for all the questions, :)

Reviewer: njdevil30718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: A Day For Miracles

omg! i freaking knew it! i had a feeling after re-reading the last few chapters that Edward might be Bella's "Tony" That had tp be the best surprise for both.....yeah that wedding night chapter should be a doozie!

Reviewer: njdevil30718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Bliss

oh good they didn't actually have to watch them in the act. and at least they had private time before and the witnesses weren't in there the whole time

Reviewer: njdevil30718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Altering Plans

i hope they're leaving Jessica behind. will they have a safe journey.

Reviewer: njdevil30718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Bon Voyage

is thier little bubble gonna pop when they get to England.....will trouble be waiting for them?

Reviewer: njdevil30718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: A Foreign Shore

finally a honeymoon..:)

Reviewer: njdevil30718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Fantasy Fulfillment

great start to the honeymoon :D Now that they're maried, does Edward take over the Kingdom? or does Carlisle have to pass away :(

Reviewer: njdevil30718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Presentation of Future Queen

well if Lady Tanya (and i use the term "lady" loosely) wants to start some trouble, they can try the beheading on her too!

Reviewer: njdevil30718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Demands of Duty

I hope all 3 will come back safe and this drama with France will be over.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Confidante

Bella must be estatic and wait till she tells Edward, he'll be so proud!

btw i used to be njdevil30718, just in case you are confused....lol

Author's Response:

Oh okay :)  I don't think I would have put that together :)  Glad you told me.  Edward will be proud, but Bella is right, the menfolk won't be so happy with the situation :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Deceptively Beautiful

AWW, Poor Bella, i see Rose already knows that Tanya is gonna be trouble. Can't wait till Edward comes home,

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: The Dog and The Cobra

ok, Tanya's got some freaking issues....what a mental case.....the guards better keep an eye on her..

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: The Dog and The Cobra

ok, Tanya's got some freaking issues....what a mental case.....the guards better keep an eye on her..

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: The Brewing Storm

well thank god they finally got rid of that harpy! but poor Bella, she so upset and thinks that Edward is with her right now :(

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Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Aftermath

i'm so glad he was able to put her mind at ease...and she's prego...yay!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Diplomacy and Alternative Forms of War

new Tanya was gonna start trouble even if banished.....hope Emmett DOES find her!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: A Snake Hiding in the Garden

love it when they all come together!!! Tanya's not gonna know what hit her

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Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Christmas Eve Surprises

Aww, what a sweet gift! He's so thoughtful! Hmmm wonder where Tanya's hiding out

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Clandestine Meetings

Tanya better spill her guts. Do we already know the murderer?

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Manipulation and Punishment

so there are probably others still lurking around that can pose danger to the Royals....right? i hope james does not escape....

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Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Embracing the Crown

Alexia, Natalia or Sophia for the Girls and Ivan, Leonardo or Theodore for the boys. Hope this helps ! I'm so happy for Emmett!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 27: A Critical Choice

So glad Alice is ok, got worried there for a second.

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Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: The Birth of Two Heirs

aww, i love the names! i'm glad she was ok and the kids too considering they were early.

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Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

Crying, crying, crying! I know she lived a good full life, but just the thought of death *shudder* and Edward died of a heart attack *sob* I will miss this story, great job once again!

Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195557
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: I Trusted You

HOLY......!!! Bella, if i were you i'd bck outta that room quickly until he calms down.

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Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Sin

yay! Alice forgave him!....i think Bella will be the one to tame that monster inside of him....can't wait for the Ball

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and the coffee cups! Next chapter is already half way edited, so you wont have to wait as long!

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Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: All My Daughters For a Son

oh no freaking way! where the hell is Jasper????!!!!

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Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: We Gonna Run This Town

that is unconditional love right there.....wow even the demon had a change of heart

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: I'll Always Come Home

ok if that isn't foreboding, i don't know what is......please don't let anything happen to either of them....

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: None So Corrupt as Those with Power

they both groud each other so well, in such a crazy life they have some form of peace

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Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Good to be Home

damn, who could be the mole????? the whole lot of them in Aro's camp are beyond eff'ed up!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Holy Night

omg!!!, i would so NOT want to be ANYWHERE near Edwards pissed off side right now....I can't wait for his revenge on those 2 sick psychos

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Blood is pumping

Omg! Esme is sick! But I think Edward is smarter than all of them

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: My December

please, please, please let Edward get the upper hand, i don't want to see anyone in Edward's circle be hurt or attacked (well maybe Carlisle and definitely Esme)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: I Would Die for You

ha.....can't wait to see if he wins...lol

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Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Vacations and Nightmares

he killed himself????? I hope Edward can stop her from going after Charlie, he's gotta know it's a trap.....BTW, the laundry scene was the funniest thing EVER!...lol

Author's Response:

No, Charlie didnt kill himself. He wished he would die because then Isabella would be safe. Thanks so much for all your reviews. I know you review each and everytime and that is so fucking awesome in my book! Appreciate it.

Greenaway

 

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo

it's a trap, it's a freaking TRAP!!! don't go!!!

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Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Finding Purpose

good 1st steps to repairing the damage :) He's going to be such a good papa! (super crazy overprotective...but good) Bella will hopefully come out of her PPD without treatment. Please tell me the psycho trio will not resurface anytime soon......

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and those coffee cups. im addicted to them somehow..... lol. He will be a good dad. Thanks again. xxx

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: The Difficult Choices We Make

no freaking WAY! what a mess, do i even wanna see how psychotic Edward will be hen he gets back. he is gonna so kill his mother. the blood, Bella's blood in the boot of the car! will Edward be able to tell???? waiting impatiently patient...lol for the next chapter :)

Author's Response:

LOL, thanks for the coffee cups, those things are so cool! Im nearly finished the next chapter and once it is done i will post without delay. Thanks for all the consistent reviews, I appreciate it alot.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Friends in Unlikely Places

OMG!!!!! CLIFFY!!!!! i'm biting my nails off hoping Edward finds her in time and that she doesn't lose the baby. I hope he can maybe save Kate too. Wow, Esme did a freaking 180, is she gonna tell him about the baby?????

Author's Response:

YAY! Coffee Cups! LOL. Thanks for the review. I wish I could answer your question, but I dont wanna ruin the next chapter for you. Hopefully I will have that out to you guys next week. Thanks again and dont think that I dont recognise you from the story I co-author with Cinnamontwist. You are awesome by the way.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: The Rescue - Part One: Farewells

wow, Esme is gonna sacrifice herself...i'm so excited about the next chapter! Edward's gonna be in for the shock of his life when he sees Bella. i hope they all come out alive (well, not the Volturi, of course, just Kate)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Edward's Clan

omg! that was painful to read :( i can't wait to hear that conversation in the car (unless he ignores her the whole time) i'm actually siding with 'the demon' ...it's funny that he's the voice of reason all of a sudden.....

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Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 31: – the Rescue: Part Three – Home is Where the Broken Hearts Lay

Omg! Talk about PAIN!!!!! I know Bella will be hurt when she finds ou he's gone, but that will just make her go deeper into the abyss of sorrow and pain that she is in now. She might go catatonic..... God know how long it will take Edward to find those 3

Author's Response:

Hello you! Thanks for those coffee cups!!! I really appreciate your reviews and the fact that you do so on every chapter including on the stories I co-author. I think that kicks ass. Too awesome. Thanks again and just remember HEA.......... Eventually. lol

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Finding Purpose

yay! hope! Edward's slowly coming around, he still has to deal with the trust issue, but he's already fallen for Aidan. how will Bella react when she sees him? she's gotta be numb by now, can Edward bring her back outta it????? missed you! hope all is well!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Happier Times

Missed you hun !!!! Dimitri better not ruin their wedding ! Emmett was a riot with the priest . i can't believe its almost over , hope you have a wonderful holiday ...can't wait for the next chapter

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995704
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

great chapter!, Bella was awesome handling Heidi...lol. i sense some foreboding since Renee was mentioned.....omg, i felt so bad for Emmett since he was so scared but i wanted to smack him since he didn't got to his father 1st to clear up his fears. love the proposal!!! ....finally!!!! YAY!

Author's Response:

Oh ML - you are such a great reviewer! I love your comments, they always keep me on my toes.

Michele

xoxo

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

great pics! *sigh* i hope Bella is going to retain this lesson, cause that little devil on her shoulder is getting her into a lot of trouble.......

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

jeez, i cried so much during this chapter....it was just so emotional....Amazing job on this. I'm s proud of Bella the way she spoke to Jazz and Esme. i don't know if it's too soon for them to go to the party, i think they should at least start therapy 1st and have some time alone just them 2.

Author's Response:

I think so too, but we'll have to see how they handle it :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Great story....i couldn't stop reading!!! i love Domward (but i like when Bella pushes his buttons....Jazz is so sweet and helpful, great friend and confidant. Alice should be on that protector list with the boys.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

i really think Rose and Em need a key too. just in case..... and yeah, not trusting Vicky too much....

Author's Response:

Out take for E & R has been posted - yeah that Vicky chick - not sure about her...

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Happy Birthday!!!!

if Edward finds out about this, he'll move her out without even telling her

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

oh shit! they are both sooooo dead! they are never gonna let Alice and Bella stay alone together again

Author's Response:

the things we do with friends and for friends! thanks for the review

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

whew! that was awesome, i was really afraid to open this, i thought Edward was gonna see her this chapter. She better be ready when he comes hope, it'll be a long ass night. and i really hope she tells him about the James thing, cause if he finds out any other way, he's gonna hit the roof.

Author's Response:

thanks for the review - I keep telling just to tell him - but she is so darn stubborn!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Loved the ceremony and the reunion. But she really needs to tell him about Jim, if she goes to Emmett (which I think is smart because he can watch out for her since Edward is no there) and Edward finds out that she kept this from him, after all those words she just repeated... There will be consequesces and Edward will be pissed and hurt that she is keeping things from him.

Author's Response:

I told her, but she never listens! Thanks for the review

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

yup, i think he just flipped out enoung to make her leave. i just hope she doesn't go to her apartment. I think Bella should call Jazz or go to Em & Rose's.

Author's Response:

OMG - could you imagine if she phoned Emmett?? talk about drama! Thanks for the review and taking the time to read my silly story!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

finally she is listening and understanding...i really thought she was gonna run. She has to get out of that apt. I hope Emmett comes with news about James and then she'll have to move out

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Hmmm, what will make her move in faster, the paparazzi or Jim & Vicky?

Author's Response:

And there in lies the quandry!! We will see!

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TEASER FOR CHAPTER 29

“P-pardon?”  Bella felt faint.  This is bad! This is really, really bad!

Mona looked at her as if she was in awe, “Sit down Bella, you don’t look so well.’’

Bella groped her way to one of the chairs in front of Mona’s desk.

Riley cleared his throat, “Your face says it all. When I went outside to ask the photographers what they were doing here, one of the guys that I have become sort of friendly with informed me that they were not here for me, but for you.  It seems that your secret is out.” He raised an eyebrow.

Bella felt her stomach heave. She put a hand over her mouth and ran to the little bathroom adjacent to Mona’s office.

 She made it just in time as her stomach was emptied of it’s contents.   Bella sat sweating on the floor for a moment with her head leaning against the toilet bowl.

My secret is out? Oh my god! Do they know about what Edward and I are? Have I ruined his career? His life? 

Her jumbled thoughts were racing around in her head.

What had she done?

Her phone vibrated as she was rinsing out her mouth. She answered it with a shaking hand.

“y-yes?” she whispered.

“Bella?”

“Edward…” she closed her eyes as she heard his voice. She could feel the tears well up in her eyes and she felt the hot trail down her cheeks.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

does Aro see Bella as a problem as well????? someone better tone down her attitude before there are some dire consequences

Author's Response:

Aro isn't the bad guy in this - I made him good!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

I figured Rose and Em knew about Edward & JJasper. Poor Bella was mortified...I can't believe that thing is real..lol

Author's Response:

yip ml718, you and me both!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

i was about to strangle Edward myself!!!! omg, yelling at the possums and at Bella, moody and cranky! lucky he snapped outta that! they so needed that time alone, i can't wait till they all go to MT

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

That was one crazy emotional roller coaster from every side!!!! I'm seriously afraid of what's gonna happen during the holidays. I hope none of it stresses Bella out, she has to relax. I'm thrilled about the twins and "possums" that is the cutest thing ever!!!! Esme's gonna think that B & E are taking sides....not good :(

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

guess Edward is learning better control of his anger, cause he was calm compared to before....cant Bella move in like today, Jacob is gonna hurt her and he might bring Jim in on it

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

great chapter, she had such a great turnaround. so proud of Edward for not destroying everything once he found out about Jim

Author's Response:

thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

wow, what a chapter!! i seriously got ill when Renee was lusting after Edward, that was just EW! i was so happy Bella knocked her on her ass! will we ever find out what was in Phil's letter? i think her therapy is helping tremendously.