Reviews by 2mpix
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

One Bet. One Week. No Rules.

Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.

A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315694
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Destroy Everything

Where the heck did Edward go????

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Date: 03 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - End Credits

I love that he has taken care of her now twice.  He has always had a soft spot for her.

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Date: 03 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light

I'm glad we got the back story on what's been going on with A&J

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Date: 03 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Add it Up

Edward just won HUGE BROWNIE POIUNTS!!!

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Date: 03 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone

Love Mumford & sons!  

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Date: 03 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy

I was so worried she would still walk away!  I definately think jasper and Alice being together along with his dad & Esme helped Edward see it was ok to want a steady relationship.

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Date: 03 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm

He is so in love!  Now if they both can just realize it!

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Date: 03 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Son of a Gun

Ok you warned us that he was a douche but I really wasn't prepared.  I'm still laughing!

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Date: 03 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Local God

This is hilarious!!!!!

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Date: 03 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Under The Sheets

This story has kept me up all night!  It is so good I don't want to put it down.

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Date: 03 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Kiss with a Fist

Biting is the BEST!  I don't know what it is about it but it does release some tension!

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Date: 03 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Kiss of Life

I was wondering why they didn't make that agreement about not using anyone else during this week. 

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Date: 03 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Closer

Without a doubt NIN's Closer is by far one of the sexiest songs!  It is sad to admit but it has been used in lots of my sexcapades!

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Date: 03 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Giving the Dog a Bone

I'm glad she didn't want to mess with Jacob & his girlfriend. 

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Date: 03 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Situations

No doubt this forks has disease written all over it!  That's why I love fanfiction.  We can fantasize about having sex w/o diseases.  Another hilarious thing that I have never heard of is Blue Walls.  So very funny!

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Date: 03 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Sex and Candy

Another laugh outloud chapter!!!!!  That last line was priceless!  

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Date: 03 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4- Something in Your Mouth

This chapter kicked butt!  Well other than E&B getting it on that is!  I can barely wait for Bella to rock Edward's world with her skills!  I laughed out-loud with Emmett in the closet!  That is one of the funniest scenes ever written!  Also, I loved the line from jasper about "once you are bitten it is hard to stop the change."  

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Date: 03 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Freak Like Me

I can't believe I have been missing out on this story all this time!

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Date: 03 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Rock the Boat

I have to say your author note is just as funny as this chapter!

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Date: 04 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25- Echo

I'm sad that there is only one more chapter :(

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Date: 04 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26- Bad Romance

I'm feeling happy & light headed!  It was a perfectly sweet ending that they needed!  I'm making you one of my fave authors In case you ever write anything else bc I love your style in writing, thoughts, & humor!  HAPPY NEW YEAR!

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Date: 04 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24- Never Think

Thanks for giving the heads up on the HEA.  After this chapter I was beginning to wonder.

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Date: 03 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur

I hope she realizes it is her being unsure of her future that still makes her unhappy.  I hope Edward can help her.

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Date: 04 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23- Hologram

I wasn't expecting James........now hat she is so intoxicated I'm guessing James is going to try & hurt her.  I hope Edward comes to her rescue. 

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Date: 03 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands

I was soooo hoping it would become official with a public kiss in the hall way.  Granted I thought he would do it.  It was a thousand times better that she did it!



Author's Response:

Ah! So glad you liked that shift in B! I'm loving reading your reviews- so glad you're enjoying it! X KB 



Author's Response:

Ah! So glad you liked that shift in B! I'm loving reading your reviews- so glad you're enjoying it! X KB 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20- Jigsaw

I hope he just puts his arm around her tomorrow & says we are going to he'll anyway.  That is my fave part in twilight.  Also one of my favorite songs from the soundtrack plays at that moment too.  Oh and about your comment on your Edward doll you snuggle, I don't have one but I do have one of the life size window cling ons from new moon that Burger King had when they sold gift cards for the movies.  He is on my sliding glass door to this day.  It's funny bc my husband could care less.  Edward makes for a great body guard!  He can be seen from my front door sidelite windows and he looks like someone standing in my kitchen.  Whenever anyone comes to stay he freaks people out.  



Author's Response:

Haha! Bloody brilliant! Ive still got my little Edward doll on my desk- watching over me like a creeper! We are the coolest peeps with our Edwards! X KB 

Branded by Oleander Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 123]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After fifteen year-old Bella Swan and her older brother Emmett lose their parents in a tragic accident, Bella's life takes a horrific turn for the worse. Once Emmett discovers the secret she's been keeping, he moves them from Phoenix to Forks to live with their Godparents Carlisle and Esme Cullen, and their children, Edward and Alice.

Can a move to a new town help heal Bella, who has deemed herself ruined and unfixable? Can the love of a new family break through the scars of her past?

***WARNING:  This story contains heartfail, adult themes, violence, abuse, sexual situations, and is not intended for readers under the age of 18.***

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76124 Read Count: 20345
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 12 Feb 2010
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Date: 01 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Adam

My favorite chapter so far!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading!

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Date: 01 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Everything's Coming Up Rosie

CRAAAAPPP!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 am Edward Cullen and I have a deadly secret: I am a hit man. My new target: Isabella Newton. With the help of my friends, we plan the crime of the century. What the hell am I going to do when she becomes more than my target and becomes my life?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125711 Read Count: 41874
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Dec 2010
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Date: 05 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Torture

So now she really & officially has a killing under her belt! 

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Date: 05 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Reality Check

I wonder if she will forgive him & will he really never do another hit?

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Date: 05 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Killer Sentiments

So is Jacob going to be the first to die in this band of misfits?

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Date: 05 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Deadly Silent

So now Charlie even wants him to see her!  That's exciting!

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Date: 05 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Blazing Suns

The grilling chicken scene was hilarious! 

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Date: 06 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Faith

Interesting Rose doesn't trust Edward but trusts Emmett.  I think her trust meter if a bit off kilter!

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Date: 07 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Consumed

I'm hoping Charlie got to her & killed jake.

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Date: 07 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Wicked Angel

This is just AAaalll messed up! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Epilogue

Great ending!  Alice doesn't have her visions so she'll never know the truth!

Summary:

Going through the high school social system is not just looking for a gentle curvature. Friend's change, and relationships blossom and wilt all in a matter of seconds. AH, AU, OOC. Mature fic, lemons galore, and intimate story line.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64818 Read Count: 3527
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 18 Feb 2010
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Sep 2019 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

This deserves so many more reviews!! Perfect way to end this too!

Summary:

Example entry for the Age of Edward Contest: Edward Cullen is the infamous mobster who happens to take it up with the chief of police, what would his motives for blackmailing the chief be? ExB Lemon, AH, OOC


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4874 Read Count: 926
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 18 Feb 2010
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I just came across this.  I agree with the other reviews.. It would make an amazing story!

Victim by tima Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 102]
Summary: Past Featured Story

victim

 

She once lived the life of luxury with her husband, James, but then he became abusive. With the help of an unlikely friend, she escapes James' abuse, becomes Bella Swan, and starts fresh in a new town. She meets a handsome young man named Edward who will help her heal, but will she ever fully get over the abuse she suffered? 

When James gets wind that his wife isn't dead, what lengths will he go to take back what he feels is his?

Rated for future sexy times, some scenes of violence, abuse, and cursing.

(loosely based on Sleeping with the Enemy, but with large differences, and a Twilight twist)

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 166331 Read Count: 17131
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 05 Nov 2011
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Date: 09 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Family Ties

We are ready for the winery tour too!

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Date: 09 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Goodbyes

I had thought about the pictures being printed in Boston. So glad Carlisle didn't leave with the camera card!

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Date: 09 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 17: A Weekend to Remember

I'm so glad this trip was magical for them!

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Date: 09 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Similarities

Carlisle is amazing! I hope he was going to look into a job at the forks hospital.

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Date: 09 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Complete Disclosure

I hope he goes in the house and does the Girly squeal and jumps around! 

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Date: 09 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 12: The Big Reveal

Well they took it better than I expected but talk about a massive size can of worms that has been opened!

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Date: 09 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Talking About the Past

I wonder how his parents are going to feel about them dating?

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Date: 09 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Birthday Surprises

Did Carlisle & Esme come for a surprise?

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Date: 08 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Anxiety

I want lasagne now for lunch.  Is Alice their daughter?  Edward is definately their son. 

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Date: 08 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 7: The 4th of July BBQ

So Esme was abused!  I love how this is unraveling!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Edward Cullen loves two things in this world: his twins Wendy and Car, and his tattoos.

Bella Swan is jaded by her husband, who left her three months pregnant. Now her daughter Lily is her entire world and she wears her love for Lily on her skin...

Can these two broken hearted people overcome their fears and come together?

Or are they both to stubborn?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48082 Read Count: 108986
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Jun 2010
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue

This is by far one of the best epilogues i have ever read. A lot of times the epilogues seem rushed.  This was the perfect glimpse into their lives!  

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What happens at Charlie's wedding is hot and unforgettable for Bella Swan. Charlie's best man has her moaning and melting everywhere from her father's living room to the coat closet at the rehearsal dinner. But great no-strings-attached sex suddenly becomes complicated. And what will happen when Bella meets someone else who just happens to be the best man's son?

NC-17 All Human/OOC

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Sorry, but translantions on this fic are NO longer allowed.

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 112113 Read Count: 43561
[Report This] Published: 21 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Apr 2010
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Forever

Thank you getting rid of James!  I loved the confrontation with Edward & him.  This truly was a perfect ending!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing

I'm so glad here was an Edward POV.  Also, Edward admitting everything to Carlisle was perfect! I had even wanting E&B to have a bit of a lemon but I'm oh so glad you didn't let that happen!

Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195557
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Good to be Home

Esme made a deal with Aro. Hmmmm seems like she has a death wish.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Holy Night

I have to say I think Jane's killing was worse than Grandma's.  Granted, I didn't expect Felix to be a canibal.  This just came to mind.  If you put Felix & demitri together you have Hannibal lector.  You did a great job of describing both deaths. 

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Date: 05 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Blood is pumping

Loved the way Felix died!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 30: The Rescue: Part Two – Reunions

He already loves the baby & doesn't even realize it.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Happier Times

This is such an amazing & exciting story!  I do hope that you are eventually able to write a sequel to it!

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995702
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

There were so many great parts to this chapter!  I laughed so hard at all the pregnancy stuff.  You are an amazing writer! I will miss this story when it ends! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

So true about marriage!  I always say marriage is one of the hardest things but best things you will ever do.  As long as you don't dig a six foot grave and put your spouse in it.  People who have never been married can not wrap their head around the fact that you can madly love a person and still want to bury their body.  ;)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

This story has been amazing!  I was so sad about getting to the end of it and then I realized that I had already put the sequel into my favorites to read next!  So once again I'm happy & so thankful that you love these characters.  

Diamond Man by SatansDarkAngel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 302]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Bella swan is the most popular of singers in Chicago. Edward is the drinking/ smoker/ handsome mob boss who walks into Bella’s fathers club to collect a debt. While Aro gets the money Edward and his associates wait and listen to the music, that’s when Edward first lay eyes on Bella Swan and was determined to make her his.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54794 Read Count: 64200
[Report This] Published: 11 Mar 2010 Updated: 29 Aug 2011
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm loving this already!

Faithfully by LailaB Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 774]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is the lead singer of Eclipse, the most popular band in the world for the last decade. He has always considered himself fulfilled and successful despite his solitary existence. He has never felt the desire for an emotional connection outside of the band and family until meets a much younger Bella during Eclipse’s European summer tour and begins to realize just how much has been missing from his life. Can their newfound relationship bliss survive the expectations and responsibilities of loving a rockstar? Can Bella survive the repercussions of her newfound and unsolicited fame? How do you protect the one you love when you are thousands of miles away? AH/OOC

Banner by: Evilangel813

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185489 Read Count: 100551
[Report This] Published: 08 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2016
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

This story was AMAZING!  I loved every word!!

Summary:

Bella and Edward leave Forks to go to college in New England, accompanied by the whole coven. We enter a world of romance and mystery where the two vampires discover that life as students can be very eventful.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Mystery
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68455 Read Count: 4220
[Report This] Published: 19 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Oct 2010
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 02 May 2014 Title: Chapter 9: More revelations

Wow I didn't expect this turn of events!  I am glad that Bella & Edward fixed their issues in the bedroom. ;)



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review. It's very unexpected for me to receive comments on this story :0)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 02 May 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Rebooting the past

Bummer no cubicle fun times! 



Author's Response:

Lol, this is one of the few stories I wrote for a larger readership...

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is graduating high school and looking for a Dom.  Edward is the Head Master at her school and he is who she wants.  Problem - he is married, has kids, a friend of Bella's fathers, 35 and oh! he isn't a Dom.  Can she get him? - Maybe!

  My entry for FF's Forbidden Lemon contest.

Banner inside chapter 1 to comply with Google ads requirements.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, To Read , Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 210865 Read Count: 123432
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2011
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Date: 21 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 22: Fifteen Years Later

I was not expecting this ending!  It was sweet but a huge tear jerker! You really did them right! 

Two Worlds Collide by Ezzy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 253]
Summary:

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Edward Mason is the leader of Mason Corporations. Isabella Swan is set to take over leadership of Swan industries from her ill father Charlie Swan. He wants Swan Industries, she wants Mason Corporations, but their Father's have a different plan for the two to get what they want...how will they take it and how will it all work. SOME CONTENTS ARE FOR THOSE WHO ARE, AT LEAST, 17 AND OVER.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Carlisle/Esme, Emmett/Rose, Jasper/Alice
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 237944 Read Count: 56372
[Report This] Published: 28 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Oct 2022
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Date: 06 May 2019 Title: Chapter 6: Telling Alice and Jasper

Alice took the news much better than i was expecting.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. She loves her brother and just wants him to be happy and she just had this feeling that Bella was going to be good for him.

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Date: 06 May 2019 Title: Chapter 5: A Show of Heart

I was hoping it was a room about his mom.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. There isnt much memories of his mum so hence why the room is filled with what it is, however Edward Snr has kept stuff in his room of his wife so only the stuff that was meant for their kids was put in that room, but shhhh Edward Jr doesnt know that ;)

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Date: 06 May 2019 Title: Chapter 4: Just One More Condition

I wonder what the room holds??



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review.

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Date: 06 May 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Conditions

They both seem a bit robotic.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. How so?

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Date: 06 May 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Meetings and Unexpected, but welcomed Changes

I have a feeling there might be some really good fights between them. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review.

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Date: 06 May 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Introductions

I don't know how i have never read this!! 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. please keep reading.

Chromaticity by shoefreak37 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

Chromaticity: the quality of a color as determined by its dominant wavelength and its purity. Edward finds that compartmentalizing his life in shades of color doesn't make it any easier to live. Slash/AH.  Winner of the Twislash Unveiled Anonymous Slash contest.

If you're looking for a story with a happy ending, you won't find that here.

The beautiful banner above made by ms_ambrosia at twificpics.com


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9983 Read Count: 387
[Report This] Published: 04 May 2010 Updated: 04 May 2010
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 May 2020 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

I just came across this. Thank u in advance for letting readers know it won't be a happy ending. It really was a very sweet story and sadly a lot of men face this. You did a fabulous job of writing a heartfelt tragic story!! 

Summary:

Edward and Jasper, business partners and part time lovers, are in Arizona for a conference. When Jasper gets the bright idea to take Edward to a well known strip club, they meet their match in a dark haired beauty named Bella. This is 99.5% smut and 0.5% plot. You have been warned.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5129 Read Count: 1655
[Report This] Published: 16 May 2010 Updated: 16 May 2010
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 May 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Arizona

I think .5% plot is awesome!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella becomes Edward's personal assistant. He is the chief-editor of EMC, the best fashion magazine, run by a man. And what secret does Edward have? Will Bella's past come to bite her? The movie, The Devil Wears Prada inspired this one. AH. AU.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185532 Read Count: 42717
[Report This] Published: 21 May 2010 Updated: 29 Jun 2010
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Rings and an old mistake

This sounds like it is about to get dangerous!

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Date: 19 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Edward's story BPOV

I figured that is whar benji told her. 

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Date: 18 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: An old acquaintance and Rose's news

The valentines flash back was great!

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Date: 18 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Misunderstanding

The bathroom lemon was a big surprise.

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Banner by Salix Caprea

Thank you Salix Caprea for the lovely banner:

It has been four years since Edward left Bella in New Moon.  There were no werewolves and Jacob was never more than Bella's friend.  Bella has just graduated from college when Edward accidently crosses her path and finds himself being drawn back into Bella's life.  But Bella is not the same teenager he knew. She is a grown woman with a very grown up lifestyle.  This tells the story of how Edward, realizing he can't live without the love of his existence, and with the help of all of the Cullens, endeavors to win her back.  There are some laughs along the way.  The story is EPOV and rated NC-17 for sexual language and content. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117349 Read Count: 64644
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2010 Updated: 06 Aug 2010
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47-The Proposal

This was an incredible story!! It has been 6 years since you posted anything else.  I hope one day you can write the sequel.  It really was AMAZING & HILARIOUS!!   

Summary:

I have consolidated the out takes of People like us into one place!  These are the sub stories born out of the pages of PLU. 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 54321 Read Count: 225697
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2010 Updated: 05 Feb 2011
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

You described these pictures perfectly in the story!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella falls pregnant by a womanizing Edward and he wants nothing to do with her or the baby. At least he doesn't think he does, but actions speak louder than words. A story about the beauty and pain of love.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126181 Read Count: 251311
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2010 Updated: 01 Aug 2011
Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

I hope one day you add to this.  I love this family!  Finally Edward has grown up. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

I was wondering if she was going to get pregnant sooner rather than later.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Kate is so mental!  

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Date: 23 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 33: EPOV with Caleb

The sweetness of Caleb makes me want a newborn again.  And I have never had a story make me want that.  You describe all the greatness that comes with newborns perfectly. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 32: The Apology...

Finally he is starting to forgive himself.  I'll be glad when her 6 month checkup has come about. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Please do not tell me Charles had anything to do with this Theresa.

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Date: 22 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 30: The Birth

Paddington bear is so cute!  It was a perfect description of how a new father falls in love with a newborn son.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 27

I'm glad he broke down & showed his real sadness over how he treated the baby & her.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Charles POV

Now Charles is softening too! I'm glad you gave us his POV.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

Is Charles regretful or still scheming?

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Date: 21 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

So grandpa had to come see for himself.  How in the heck did he find out?

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Date: 21 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

He finally asked!  I can't stop smiling!

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Date: 20 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Tammy's POV

The grandfather totally used her! 

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Date: 20 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Hip hip hooray now they can get layed!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Moving in and in the right direction finally!

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Date: 20 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Jacob brought on the green eyed monster. Good stuff!

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Date: 20 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

So true never ever pray for patience bc if you do you will be given the great oppurtunity to learn it.

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Date: 20 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

The baby is ok!  Shewwww!  He needs to tell her about the photo of her he kept in his office. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

That was wise of Carlisle to be honest with Edward.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

They are slowly on heir way to over come this hurdle. What a B Jessica is!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Ask her to marry you idiot man