Penname: sydneytwimum [Contact] Real name: Sydney Mum
Member Since: 22 Feb 2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I'm a mum, I love Twilight and I write...a blog about fan fiction, because I'm still working my way up to writing fan fiction!


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Bella Voce by Morgan Locklear Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 58]
Summary: Past Featured Story

bella Voce

Paris 1891: Bella is a popular stage vocalist and theatre owner. She's also a very powerful vampire. Edward is a piano teacher who attends one of her performances and captures her attention. Together they explore the Bohemian Revolution and each other

Banner by Mina

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 208805 Read Count: 3606
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 Jan 2011
Reviewer: sydneytwimum Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Up In The Air

So, I'm going to post my review on all sites this story is on, just so that other people know the awesomeness of this story!!

Ok, so this review is very disjointed, I wrote it as I was reading it, cause it’s fun that way! I’ve used quotes and hope that people reading this have already read the chapter!!!! So…here we go!

“Water trickled down his stomach and became trapped in the dusting of fine hair on his lower abdomen.”  Well now, if this isn’t a big tease!!! Thanks for the visual! Anything to do with Edward and no clothes will always be a hit, although I would like to note, that this is done in such a non-smutty way..Very classy Mr M!

Please to be thanking your lovely beta for this line: “He lay on top of his blankets letting the water dry on his hard body before crawling under the covers, naked.” ..and again with the nakedly ways of Edward…le sigh!

I’ve enjoyed the canon aspect of him being a romantic but lacking in confidence.  Do you think that canon Edward is a lot like this? Lacking in confidence, or more tortured?

Interesting of Edward to believe he couldn’t actually initiate sex.  Good thing Bella’s a vixen, I mean sexed up vampire then!

Such a dreamer: “Edward's last thought before finally drifting off to sleep was how he felt like he could achieve anything with Bella by his side” ..or is this the ‘pull’ that these two have for each other??

"I think it must have been windy as well because that coach was rocking back and forth for a while." Gigglesnort!! Wonder if she was nakedly getting aquainted with Jacob?!!!

I love Carlisle, sitting at the table reading his paper, while still listening in on the goings on in the kitchen.  Such a “dad” thing to do!!  And OOOmmaahhh…Daddy Carlisle rears his head! Naughty Rose!

Oh the sweet visual of Edward sitting at a piano, composing..yes yes I do like this, as much as the nakedly handsome Edward! Oh oh oh and you did SUSPENDER EDWARD..le-freakin-sigh…

Awww, love the excitement of him singing for her.

What would be better than Edward playing and singing piano for Bella? Doing it Nakedly!!!!

Whoa, Bella was nearly distracted by the straddle…I was definitely distracted! Visual anyone!??!!

And what a fine way to end the chapter!  I didn’t predict that to happen, but thought it ties in very nicely with the ‘rescue’ aspect to the storyline.  Am very very excited to see Edwards reaction in the next chapter!


Thanks for writing!!! Love ya stuff!

 

P.S Nakedly is totes a word! Hahahaa!

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by JaimeArkin

How long can you lust after your best friend's brother before you give up hope? How do you reconcile an attraction for someone you've thought of as a little sister? How long can two people dance around their feelings before they dance together? E/B AH Banner by JaimeArikin.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, To Read (Geddy), Kuu Faves, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Kit's Must Reads!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 80259 Read Count: 55667
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2011 Updated: 24 Nov 2011
Reviewer: sydneytwimum Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue: Forever Young

BEST STORY EVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERRR...


I miss you!! I feel so lost during the week (Oh wait, I think that's housework I see over there!!!)

Congrats on Feature, very well deserved xx



Author's Response:

You're the best EVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERR!!!! 

I miss you too! Dang. I'm gonna have to get writing again—right after the holidays. ;) 

Thank you, for everything. I'm so glad to have gotten to know you!