This Poem hit me like a mac truck yesterday. My pre readers Steven, Justine, Jody and Talon have said its majestically dark.  I ask those of you that read this to please take two min or more to review. I am curious to see what the masses think of this poem being the first that I have ever posted anywhere.  I would like to look deeper into poerty but unless feedback even the ones that tell me I suck are encouraged here. So please review.

Brandi