Date: 31 Jan 2011 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 15
OMG what is Carlisle problem Edward better not punish her because his daddy said so. I think Charlie is going to go all protective over Bella. I cant wait to find out what happens.
Date: 31 Jan 2011 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 3
so far sogood, nothing to take offense at
Date: 31 Jan 2011 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 15
Oh no, what's going to happen to Bella? I'm kind of afraid of Carlisle. Good cahpter and I can't wait to see what's next.
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2011 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 15
I love this story too! Edward is to funny, he can't take on his father so he acting out with Bella as his child. Just like little girl does with her doll baby. LOL
Date: 31 Jan 2011 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 15
Are you kidding me? If he spanks her, I say the girls gang up on Carlisle and whip his ass!
Date: 31 Jan 2011 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 15
Oh okay so is it safe to hate Carlisle????? Cause well if not too damn bad!!!!
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2011 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 15
OKAY - WHAT THE HELL IS CARLISLE'S PROBLEM??? He needs to get that stick out of his ass - or someone needs to beat him with one!!! Asshat!
Loved this chapter!!
Date: 31 Jan 2011 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 15
Carlisle needs to mind his own business. Edward was not mad at Bella. What did Carlilse say to him that made him all of the sudden mad at her? If this is the way it is at his parents house Bella better not talk when he is around.
Date: 31 Jan 2011 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 15
OMG I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO SAY BUT IT WAS A GREAT CHAPTER!
Date: 31 Jan 2011 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 15
hahaha... I wonder what Bella has done now... and why is Carlisle such a dick?? I hope that Charlie and Bella can have some type of relationship...I can't wait to see what Edward has in store for her....and see what happens with the contract...
Date: 31 Jan 2011 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 15
Oh boy! Bella is in trouble. Please update again soon! I absolutely love this story.
Date: 30 Jan 2011 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 14
That was great...
Date: 30 Jan 2011 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 10
OHHH! I think a 24/7 daddy time would be interesting....
Date: 30 Jan 2011 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 9
I wonder if she is going to ask him about charlie.....
Date: 30 Jan 2011 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 8
I am really enjoying this story. It is very different. I like that Bella is having more girl time.
Date: 30 Jan 2011 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 7
On no I think that talking her way out of that punishment is only going to make it worse for her if she tries again.....
Interesting family
Date: 30 Jan 2011 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 4
Bella's ass is going to be very sore by the end of the weekend......
Date: 30 Jan 2011 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 2
It's like a little trial weekend....
Date: 30 Jan 2011 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very interesting story idea. I can't wait to see what happens.
Date: 29 Jan 2011 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 14
I knew Bella would loss it when she found out that Edward knew. I can not believe that it has been months and he never said a work. I would be furious and very very hurt too.
I have read chapter after chapter and now I have to wait for you to update. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon. This is sooooo good. I can't wait to seee what happens when Charlie and Bella finally meet.
Date: 29 Jan 2011 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 13
WOW!!!!!! Edward really does have a problem with jealousy. If I were Bella I would be scared too. I am glad she is moving out but I don't know about Edward right now.
Date: 29 Jan 2011 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 14
Secrets, no matter how much you try to keep them hidden, they end up coming out into the open. That's when they cause the most trouble too. Bella had reason enough to be upset with Edward. He did something really wrong and was aware of it.
Something is still in my mind, whem Edward talked with Charlie, he said he would fix this. How could Charlie do that?
Date: 28 Jan 2011 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 12
I hope Charlie will talk to Bella soon and I hope that she will understand the reason that Edward did not tell her. I am glad that Bella will have Alice and esme to talk to. What is Rose's problem? Ok, Rose said that she and Emmett dated and then broke up because he was to controling but then they got back together. Does Emmett control Rose like Jasper, Edward and Carlisle control their women???
Date: 28 Jan 2011 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 11
Thank you for explaining things about Charlie and Edward. I hope that Charlie and Bella can have some sort of relationship. I hope we get to read about Bella's shopping trip with the firls and what all they talk about. I can not believe that Bella asked for 10. Is she crazy?????
Date: 28 Jan 2011 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 10
Is Edward going to do something about Renee? He just seems like that type of person. I am soooo glad that he did not give her her punishement after he found her crying. I knew he was going to let her know that she could move in. I hope Bella and Alice get a chance to talk and Alice give her some insight on how Edward, Jasper, Carlisle and Emmett are the way they are.
Date: 28 Jan 2011 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 9
I can not believe that Renee said that to her. That was just mean. I hope Edward gets soooo mad that he MAKES Bella move in with him. I want to know why Edward has not said anything to Bella about Charlie. I just knew that Bella was going to use being upset of NOT workout. lol.
Date: 28 Jan 2011 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 8
Does Edward know that Charlie is Bella's dad? If so, he should have told her. If he did know, what he did a awful and mean. Renee is and awful mother. She is definately a gold digger. I am surprised that she did not have more childlren but I guess that would have meant more kids would have dampened her lifestyle.
Date: 28 Jan 2011 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 13
Time has passed and things have been going rather well. All was fine while nothing came up, as soon as the Holidays were mentioned things weren't so good. Then add Renee her mean comments and tontop it Edward's jealousy, not the best day for Bella.
Date: 28 Jan 2011 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 12
Bella found out a lot in this chapter. Notonly about Edward and his family but about her life too. What she heard from that pone call is giving her plenty to think about.
She is scared of what can happen between her and Edward. She is falling fast for him and wouldn't want to loose him.
Date: 28 Jan 2011 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 7
Is Bella going to get into terrible for not telling Edward that her mother would not be there until midnight. Why does Rose get to cuss and Bella does not? Let me guess Esme started out just like Bella is starting out. What was with Bella getting a weird vibe from the men when they were sitting at the table. Can not wait to find out more about how all then men want from their women.
Date: 28 Jan 2011 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 6
I sure thought she was going to get a spanking when he came downstairs and she was eating breakfast. Off to read the next chapter.
Date: 28 Jan 2011 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 5
I was laughing at the begining of the chapter. Bella is acting like a little child. lol. This is going to be harder than she thinks.
I can not believe that she said that at the end. OMG!!!! What is Edward going to think. I bet Bella is thinking that by saying that that it is a dael breaker. Off to read the next chapter.
Date: 28 Jan 2011 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 4
I am enjoying reading this story. You have done a great job writing it. Can't wait to continue. So glad that I do not have to wait for the update. Off to read the next chapter.
Date: 28 Jan 2011 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 3
The question sounds weird BUT he is her Sugar Daddy!!!!! LOL!!!! So Jasper is his best friend and lawyer. Jasper also has a "little girl", Alice. Is Alice Edward's sister in this story? Edward did not mention she was his sister. But he said that Emmett has a girlfriend. So there is a different.
Date: 28 Jan 2011 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 2
I can not wait to see what are all his rules. He sounds like Mr. Perfect. Something has GOT to be wrong. lol.
Date: 28 Jan 2011 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
Glad I found this story. Can't wait to read more. Sounds really good.
Date: 27 Jan 2011 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 11
Edward knows who Bella's father is. He has known about Charlie's daughter for a long time. Now things just came together.
Bella has been told a different story, Renee has her reasons, they aren't good or right and hopefully she will explain herself later on.
Edward is more than happy with Bella. So much so even hopes she will stay with him permanently. He will work in trying to do so. There's a lot about Bella he loves, some he doesn't like and some he hopes to modify. Bella won't always cooperate easily, but after a bit she changes her mind it seems.
The nature of their relationship is unique and yet, Bella seems to be adapting to it quickly and with ease. Will it remain this way?
Date: 26 Jan 2011 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 14
I am really enjoying this story. I can't wait to read about Bella and Charlie's talk. I am also happy that she didn't get spanked for leaving Edward (even if she only ended up downstairs).
Date: 26 Jan 2011 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 10
Edward wasn't pleased at all with what Bella told him. It has to be shocking to most people. But sadly there are people like Renee in this world. Bella isn't like her, she didn't have to say it to Edward for him to know it, although it was good that she did.
Edward spent sometime looking at Bella in the kitchen, he was pleasantly surprised by it. I can't explain why but I liked that and I think it will be something good.
Alice kind of got Bella in trouble, although Bella could have ended the call sooner, Alice has been in this situation longer and probably should have paid a bit more attention. I guess Bella will be careful about bedtime from now on, when she gets her phone back.
So.... it's off to a shopping trip....
Date: 26 Jan 2011 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 9
It's one thing when you think what someone's opinion might be, another one is to have it said to you by said person. When it's something as cruel as what Renee said, it hurts and hurts really bad. Bella was always aware her mother wouldn't win "mother of the year award" but still she considered there was a strong bond between them. In the last two days, Renee has shattered the love Bella had for her. Bella can't believe it, and that's more than understandable. Having to say it out loud and to Edward can't be easy, but it's what she should do. For several reasons, to get it out of her chest, to come clean with him and because she will have to figure out what to do about it.
However, there's still the matter of Charles Swan, is it all really a coincidence? Can she say something to anyone? What would she say? And to whom? There's a lot in Bella's head right now, lets hope she can figure it out.
Date: 26 Jan 2011 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 8
Well the morning talk with her mom didn't go too well, in fact it went terrible. Her mom has her ideas which she wants Bella to follow. Something she isn't sure to do, so she snapped. Sadly she took it out with Edward, not the best idea.
Her outing with Angela was going okay, theywere having fun and talking. Maybe some of the things they talked about they shouldn't but one was raher a big surprise. I wonder what she will do now.
Date: 26 Jan 2011 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 14
I love this story!!! Can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 26 Jan 2011 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 14
he is a pervert lol, update soon
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2011 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 14
Oh this was such a emotional chapter, but good!
Date: 25 Jan 2011 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 7
I think Bella wasn't really trying to get out of the exercise when she set the shopping date. It might have come to her later and she probably assumed Edward wouldn't disagree since it's an outing with his mother, she was wrong. However, once again she is walking on a thin line trying to get out of the exercise. I will sound like a parent, but it will be good for her.
The dynamic in the house was not normal, that I have to agree with Bella. Yes, the women do as the men say, but there's more, there was no interacting as a group. Carlisle was very serious and almost didn't speak, he didn't seem to like Bella's answers either. As for Rose, she wasn't too nice, but not too terrible either.
I'm still wondering what will Bella tell her mom. Also the lunch date with Irina and Angela.
Date: 25 Jan 2011 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 6
He is relentless with the spanking, I think I will have to agree with Bella, he must enjoy giving them.
I am trying to figure out Irina. She is a very nice lady, she has a daughter Bella's age and is completely aware of what Bella and Edward have. She seems okay with it, she is even organizing a lunch date for the three of them. She also tried to calm Bella about meeting Edward's family, as if it's the most normal thing to bring a girl who is half your age.
Should we assume Bella isn't the first one? Will we find out more?
Date: 25 Jan 2011 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 5
It's not a very usual relationship, so him asking her to call him daddy, even if it's odd, well, it kind of fits here.
We learned a very important piece of information about Edward in this chapter. As he said, not everything is perfect. It doesn't explain his choice of relationships but it gives us a glimpse of the man. He hasn't said what he does for a living has he? When will Bella find out?
She is falling and falling hard, what about him? Will he too? And what about Bella's mom? How much will Bella share with her?
Date: 25 Jan 2011 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 4
Bella got in trouble really soon. She was supposed to know she would be spanked, she assumed it wasn't going to happen, she was wrong. And she was also wrong in keeping her game on.
So Irina knows Bella, but will say nothing, she seems like a very nice lady. As for Edward, yes, he does nothing, is it wrong? Perhaps, but that's who he is, Bella just needs to get used to it. It might sound awful, but it can't be that bad to be taken care like that.
Date: 25 Jan 2011 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 3
I think Bella is going to be surprised and punished sooner than she thinks. The rules might seem simple but for someone like her, so used to braking them, perhaps it won't be. She will find out soon enough.
Edward has said twice the contract is for his benefit only, what does he mean by that? Also he said Jasper would be with his little girl, does he mean in the same sense as Bella is his little girl?
Date: 25 Jan 2011 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 2
So, neither wastes time or goes around the bushes. Bella was impressively honest with him, something he seemed to have liked. He also was very clear of what he will give and what he will expect.
He is a strict man, kind of serious, but sexy at the same time. Bella seems to be under his spell. She is spending the week-end with him... how will that go?
Date: 25 Jan 2011 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
Bella doesn't go around the bushes. She knows what she wants, but is aware it won't always be easy to get. However she has seen her mother and the life she has lead, she might not be too thrilled to try it, but she knows no other way.
She is taking her own pace now, lets see how it goes...
Date: 25 Jan 2011 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 14
I guess Edward won't be keeping any more secrets from Bella!
Date: 25 Jan 2011 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 13
Bella is going to be in such trouble!!!
Date: 25 Jan 2011 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 14
I would say he did a major over reaction I was suprise that she did not leave for a time but I hope it was long enough for him to relise that he could lose her.
Date: 25 Jan 2011 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 14
I can understand Bella being upset, but Edward is still the best person she has ever had in her life. Edward needs to keep to his rules. If he wants Bella to be honest with him he needs to be honest with her. She should come first.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2011 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 14
thanjks good chapter
Date: 25 Jan 2011 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 14
Poor Bella I don't blame her for being mad at all nor wanting to go to the dinner with her Father. That being said Edward calling and crying thinking that Bella was leaving was so sad I felt for him. I hope Thanksgiving goes okay, if not I am sure Bella's backside will know.
Date: 25 Jan 2011 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 14
damn!!! I was looking forward to that lemon!!!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2011 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 14
Waht a great chapter!!! I'm glad that Bella stood up for herself - even if it does get her a red ass!
Date: 25 Jan 2011 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 14
Edward- you should just kill all the men in forks so Bella doesn't mess up by talking to one. Nice to see Edward's feelings about how losing Bella was so painful for him. I hope Bella doesn't lose some of her spunk.
Great chapter
[Report This]Date: 18 Jan 2011 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 13
WOW this story is fu*k awesome! OMG, its hard to wait for updates.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2011 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 13
oh dear she really puts her foot in it every time!
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2011 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 12
I loved this chapter and I think that an a & j story would be great
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2011 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 11
"The second reason was where my problem lies. I didn't want Bella to think bad of me. It was a selfish reason, but it was the truth. I didn't think it would scare her away, per say, but I had a feeling that it would make her second guess our relationship. "
Ok, I have to say, I am a little concerned about what Edward might be keeping from Bella. Is he going to start making her wear a chastity belt or diapers or something??? I am not judging, just wondering...lol
Date: 17 Jan 2011 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 13
Renee is such a bitch I hope she is home and Edward can see how she acks. He is to insucure and he does not need to be.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2011 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 13
thanks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2011 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 13
Oh Love it! Can't wait to find out what Bella will do!
Date: 17 Jan 2011 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 13
Wow I think Edward needs a wake up call. He can not have a relationship with his constant disrespect by calling her names. That is where he pissed me off. I mean I can deal with a possesive Edward but not name calling. If he loves her then he wouldn't treat her that way.
Date: 17 Jan 2011 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 13
Bella just needs to realize she messed up. Edward takes care of her. She chose to be a kept women. She has to play by his rules.
Date: 17 Jan 2011 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 13
Renees a bitch...glad Bellas leaving..Possive edward so hot
Post again soon
Date: 17 Jan 2011 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 13
oh oh i can only imagine what's going to happen when they home. yikes! (run bella)
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2011 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
Can't wait for the update.... :)
Date: 13 Jan 2011 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 12
I love this story, I read all of this tonight. I just had to fav. it!!! Keep it up.
Date: 12 Jan 2011 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 2
Going home with Edward?? Now that could be alot of fun!!:)
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2011 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 12
This is an amazing story. Bella trying to out smart E. Hum spankings and sassing.
Date: 12 Jan 2011 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 12
It was interesting to find out just how Bella's day went. The other girls need to tell Bella more. Poor Alice the way she was treated before Jasper so sad. That had to be Charlie talking to Renee man oh man she is a Bitch.
Date: 12 Jan 2011 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 12
I NEED MORE!!!!! COME ON NOW!!!!!!
Date: 12 Jan 2011 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 12
yaaaaa...please do an alice/jasper fic bout this....
Date: 12 Jan 2011 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 12
I love the story just hope her Mom gets hers.
Date: 11 Jan 2011 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 12
I don't like Alice so I probably wouldn't read that story if you did it but this one is kick ass. I don't think that she should except the rule about them being the only girl's she can hang with. That's not right, he keeps adding the B/S rules. I hope she calls him on it too after she finds out about Charlie for sure and the fact that he knew. She can't keep things from him without getting in trouble so that should work both ways
Date: 11 Jan 2011 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 12
Bella needs to stop over thinking everything. Edward will take care of her. She just needs to work on making him happy, which actually makes her happy.
Date: 11 Jan 2011 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 12
It was interesting to these events from Bella's POV. I would definitely read Alice/Jasper based on this world.
Date: 11 Jan 2011 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 12
I think bella is fitting into the crazy cullen world just fine! Loving the story!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jan 2011 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 12
thanks good chapter
Date: 09 Jan 2011 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm nervous when she finds out about charlie!
Date: 06 Jan 2011 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 11
READ THIS TODAY WHILE AT WORK. REALLY GREAT THE DADDY THING KINDA WIERDED ME OUT AT FIRST BUT I THOUGHT TO MYSELF I CALL MY HUSBAND THAT WHEN I WANT SOMETHING REALLLLLYYYYY BAD!!!!
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[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2011 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 11
great story and really good chapter
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2011 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 10
i'm sad that I'm all caught up!!!!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2011 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 9
oh man - that renee is a BITCH!!!!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2011 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 8
here we go...
Date: 06 Jan 2011 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 11
Edward does love Bella very much. Bella does need a little disapline in her life. She has never had any but I think she should not tell Edward how to do it or her backside will never get a break.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2011 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 7
I loved this chapter - what is off about the guys? Why won't they talk to Bella??
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2011 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 6
more spankings - geez, Daddy doesn't give many chances! another great chapter
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2011 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 5
This was a great chapter! Hmmm Edward is stern but he seems really kind as her.