Date: 11 Jan 2016 11:08 PM Title: Undisclosed Desires
Nicely done!
Date: 27 Sep 2012 12:04 AM Title: Undisclosed Desires
That would be a fucking fantastic fantasy come to life, but in my world it will only ever be a dream ;)
Date: 05 Sep 2012 12:00 AM Title: Undisclosed Desires
That was so hot. I love poly and slash stories, I'm such a perv, lol.
I love that they were able to discover and enjoy this side of their relationship and that they found Edward to do that with. That was the last thing Edward expected to happen when he met up with Jasper, lol.
Loved it.
Jane x
Date: 02 Jun 2012 3:52 AM Title: Undisclosed Desires
And now they are all happy! Great O/S & now look at your lemons. They've only gotten hotter!
Date: 27 Nov 2011 5:41 AM Title: Undisclosed Desires
Soooo good. That got my heart rate up. Who needs aerobics when there is so much fucking incredible fanfic around. You are my hero - 2 poly stories, can I have some more please.
Thank you for writing.
Date: 18 Oct 2011 2:56 AM Title: Undisclosed Desires
Isn't love grand? To be able to share it is wonderful.
Date: 11 Oct 2011 8:44 AM Title: Undisclosed Desires
That was fuck hot
Date: 26 Sep 2011 8:26 PM Title: Undisclosed Desires
OMG!! LOVED IT!!!!
I wish you would continue it! lol
I love "The Trip Home" One of my favorite poly stories ever!
Thank you for an awesome story!! :o}
Date: 29 Aug 2011 3:04 AM Title: Undisclosed Desires
So hot. Great job. I love how Edward is the person to bring them all together.
Date: 12 Aug 2011 7:58 AM Title: Undisclosed Desires
First lemon and first slash, huh? You sure could have fooled me! That was a good story and hot into the bargain. If you hadn't told us nobody would have guessed.
Date: 16 Jun 2011 6:12 AM Title: Undisclosed Desires
I loved it. I know you said you have no intention of continuing, butI really hope you change your mind. There are so few multi-chapter Poly fics out there.
Date: 29 Mar 2011 3:56 PM Title: Undisclosed Desires
That was hot hot hot... I have read MsKathy's The Trip Home and loved it... I myself an a Poly junkie.... To bad you don't feel like turning this into a full story I think you could do it justice, but I respect your feelings that it needs to stay a one shot....
Hugs
Date: 28 Feb 2011 7:39 PM Title: Undisclosed Desires
Excellent story!!!
Date: 15 Jan 2011 11:12 PM Title: Undisclosed Desires
Great os.
Date: 11 Jan 2011 1:22 PM Title: Undisclosed Desires
Loved It... You should so continue this.
Date: 10 Jan 2011 6:38 PM Title: Undisclosed Desires
You have found my guilty pleasure and left me a very happy reader :) There is just something about B/E/J that I find irresistable. Awesome job!
Date: 09 Jan 2011 7:16 PM Title: Undisclosed Desires
uuuummmm.....WOW!!!!!!
Date: 08 Jan 2011 12:18 AM Title: Undisclosed Desires
Wow! I know you said you are not taking this past a O/S... but dang girl. Keep writing. You have a good feel for the Poly pairing and I think you should continue other stories. I will be checking out your other fics soon!
Date: 07 Jan 2011 7:50 AM Title: Undisclosed Desires
Whoa! That was fucking unbelievable! Very impressive for your first slash and lemon! Double cherry poppin! Well done! ;)
I love how Edward was the one she loved all that time ago and he was the perfect match to her and Jasper. Too bad you won't consider continuing this. I can see a lot of fun times for these three.
Excellent o/s!!!
Date: 06 Jan 2011 9:04 PM Title: Undisclosed Desires
I love it! Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 06 Jan 2011 5:24 AM Title: Undisclosed Desires
Holy hell! That was damn hot!!
Date: 05 Jan 2011 10:18 PM Title: Undisclosed Desires
:)
Date: 05 Jan 2011 9:31 PM Title: Undisclosed Desires
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it's a shame ur not turning it into a story, even a small on...... Not bad for ur first time..... Keep up the great work
Date: 05 Jan 2011 7:36 PM Title: Undisclosed Desires
That was friggin HOTTTTTTT!!!!
DAMN I was turned on...lolol.
Date: 05 Jan 2011 6:11 PM Title: Undisclosed Desires
AWESOME! Im not a big fan of the slashy time but I got over it! lol
Date: 05 Jan 2011 3:27 PM Title: Undisclosed Desires
HOLY SHIT! THAT WAS YOUR FIRST? IT WAS REALLY GOOD!