Date: 22 Jan 2013 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 6 - On The Ledge
A WONDERFUL ODYSSEY
Date: 15 Sep 2010 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Out of the Ordinary
Loved the story. Not my usual subject. But it was a beauitiful and intense love story. Thank you for sharing it. I cried many times while reading sometimes because it was heartbreaking and sometimes because it was beauitiful Thanks for sharing. Meg
Date: 13 May 2010 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Awry
I just recently found this story and I love it. I can feel the intense love you created between them and I found myself talking to my computer more than once because of it. When I got to the part where Edward kicked Jasper out of his apartment I was crying so hard that I barely finished the chapter. I am definitely looking forward to reading the rest but that was all I was able to take for one night.
Thanks for the great story. You rock.
Date: 10 May 2010 8:05 PM Title: Epilogue
i loved this story and i almost cried at the end lol xxx well done xx
Date: 09 May 2010 6:32 AM Title: Outtake 2 - Holiday Vignettes
I loveed this story i laughed and cryed you did a great job.
Date: 22 Apr 2010 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Reconciliation
Aww wow. I think I love a chatty Edward too! Nice :)
Date: 10 Apr 2010 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Days Go By
Yea Alice! Can't wait to see how pissy she'll be. Guess she won't be with Jasper in your story huh?
Favorite line - "and now I've got jizz in my bathwater" LOL!
Favorite memory-my Mum wore Youth Dew. Definately brings back memories.
*sigh* I flove this story.....
Date: 09 Apr 2010 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 21 - According to Carlisle
Stop whatever you are doing and carry on writing this wonderful story ! Its fantastic. X
Date: 08 Apr 2010 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 21 - According to Carlisle
well i love this story although i have done nothing but cry over the last few chapters lol xx will i need more tissues or do we have a happy chapter coming up lol xx
Date: 08 Apr 2010 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 21 - According to Carlisle
great chapter. Edward's finally starting to heal. Hopefully more ups than down's from here?
Date: 08 Apr 2010 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 21 - According to Carlisle
I am crying. Big fatfucking tears, by myself, at 6am! I love this story. You tell it so well. I am so glad Edward is trying to fix his life. This was so great in Carlisle's POV. So very descriptive. Again, tears!
Date: 08 Apr 2010 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 21 - According to Carlisle
Awww. Some familial fluff. I just hope everything can work out for everyone involved. Loved the two-fer, but we need some Kas action. Lol.
Date: 08 Apr 2010 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Trojan Horse
I was hoping he was going to Jasper. I really hope they get back together. They are good for each other...at least in your fic they are. PLease bring them back together...soon? Maybe?
Date: 06 Apr 2010 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Outrunning the Waves
this is not the type story i usually read, but i came across this one, and i am really enjoying it. Maybe the heartfail will resolve soon...
Date: 05 Apr 2010 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Outrunning the Waves
eeek. edge of seat...what's up? There's more to Edward than just this. Can't wait to find out what.
Date: 30 Mar 2010 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 18 - In Retrospect
An impass, hmmmm, whatever will Mama Whitlock do? Yep my money is on Mama to break the ice.
Date: 29 Mar 2010 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Aftermath
My God, Loved this the first time around on FF and still lovin' it now!!!
Date: 29 Mar 2010 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Aftermath
Oh Edward please dont go and be stupid and throw yourself to the boys again. I understand he is hurt and he is going to do the only thing he knows and that is shut himself off from his feelings and push away all that care about him. It is so sad seeing how much Jasper is hurting I just hope he doesnt give up and Edward because I feel he will come around at some point. I just hope it isnt to late. Awesome work.
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Date: 27 Mar 2010 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Awry
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Again, never read slash. Love this story. Can't believe I'm reading slash and now heartfail slash.....
Date: 26 Mar 2010 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Awry
oh my ...my heart hurts....... i really dont see edward listening to anyone... i see him going back to the club hooking up with different boys and rubbing it in jaspers face or at least flaunting it..... and i dont see a way for them to get together after that, it may seem to jasper taht if edward could do that he must not have truely had feelings for jazz. but i will put my faith in you........... i hope this will work itself out.
Date: 26 Mar 2010 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Dangerous and Subversive
Sorry this little fact is kind've bugging me! Isn't jasper 5'8? and edward being 6'1 means jasper can't be taller than him. Or did you make jasper taller to mee the requirements of your story!
Author's Response:
In point of fact: Jackson's height is 5'8" and Rob's height is 6'1". :) These are the characters, not the real people. :) Thanks for asking!
Katie
Date: 26 Mar 2010 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Awry
This is so sad. Edward is so hurt from his past with his family he could not even hear the truth in Jaspers words. I am hoping when Edward calms down enough he will see the truth but I have a feeling it will be a little to late and he is going to do something that will hurt Jasper. Please dont let Jasper give up on Edward and his stubborness. They need each other and I feel Edward really does love Jasper but he is just to afraid of being hurt again. Great job i cant wait for the next chapter.
Date: 26 Mar 2010 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Out of the Ordinary
Wow. I have to say that I am not usually a slash fan, but this is a great well written story.
Date: 15 Mar 2010 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Sweet with Heat
I am glad to see Edward staying to open his feeling up. I cant wait to see what Jasper will say Edward tells him. I love that the only picture in Edward home is of Jasper. It is just ashame that Jasper doesnt know it yet. I have a funny feeling Friday night is going to be big night for these two. Great job and hot as hell as well.
Date: 15 Mar 2010 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Gift
omg....i'm still panting...so descriptive and emotional...i feel like a peeping tomasina...u place me right there and i can SEE everything...the tenderness, the love and emotion...ty ty ty
Date: 11 Mar 2010 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 14 - The Chief and The Club
I hope Jasper waiting until Friday is not going to bite him in the ass. I am glad to see Edward willingness to show there relationship to other that know him. Great job.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Ensconced
I wonder what twist this will add to Jasper and Edwards relationship. I am glad these two boys have found each other but I am afraid they have a few bumps in the road to over come still. Great job and I cant wait to see where this is going.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Ensconced
Again, not really into slash but this is a great story. Good writing. Very easy to read and keep up. Fun story line. Lots to find out and learn about the characters.
Date: 07 Mar 2010 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Unpleasant Memories
normally not a slash fan but this is a beautiful love story. written well with just the right amount of description and I can't wait to see where it goes.
Date: 01 Mar 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Unpleasant Memories
We find out a little something about Edward's past here and that tub. Great job. :)
Date: 28 Feb 2010 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 10 - In Jasper's Apartment
Edward loves him. He is just too messed up to know it.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, my darling!
xoxo Katie
Date: 28 Feb 2010 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Vancouver
Edward does have a heart. lol It's there even if he hasn't used it in a long while. Your Jasper is just the most adorable guy. Love it.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 8 - The Gamble
oh no Jasper freak out. Well played by Edward with the flowers and nice intro with Kathleen. Great job.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Sidewalk
Really sweet interaction here between the guys. Great job.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 6 - On The Ledge
oh that ledge. Great job.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Morning
I am addicted to Starbucks' Christmas Blend because of this chapter. lol Definately loved being inside Jasper's head.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Gift
"I want you in our - er, my bed." hehe definately fallen for him. Love this line also. I can just picture Edward's face after. hehe Great job.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Confessions
I love how even in these first chapters, Edward thinks of Jasper as "pretty," "God." He has fallen for him and has absolutely no clue yet. Great job.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Dangerous and Subversive
hehe Great chapter and great story.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Out of the Ordinary
"I want to make you sit on my nine-inch cock." hehe My favorite line of all time-Bryan's and Edward's. I am so glad to see you over here. I really like this site so far. Great job. Love ya, Katie.
Date: 24 Feb 2010 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Out of the Ordinary
I love this story. It it hot and sweet. I am glad that I found it here. I read it on another sight, and can promise it is well worth reading again. This story contains probably one of my favorite Jasper's of all time.
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
xoxo Katie
Date: 19 Feb 2010 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Out of the Ordinary
All I want to say is you ALL MUST READ THIS!!!!!
This is the slash story that will get you hooked the love, passion and angst is second to none.......LOVE YOU Star where ever you are xxxxxxxxx
Author's Response:
Smooches, Ruby! Thanks, bb.
xoxo Katie
Date: 19 Feb 2010 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Morning
What i can say
fantastic..)
Date: 18 Feb 2010 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Gift
Reall good you wrote this..)
Date: 17 Feb 2010 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Confessions
Yeah and pretty soon the
drama beginns.But
really good u write
so emotional.:)
Date: 17 Feb 2010 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Dangerous and Subversive
I like it so much,..)
Date: 17 Feb 2010 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Out of the Ordinary
Really good.But
i know that allready i know
your story and read that all..)