Date: 05 Oct 2017 9:55 AM Title: Home
Have you noticed that there are often British English to American English for the Americans, but it's not the other way round for the British. We have to figure out what is meant ourselves. Loving the story so far.
Author's Response:
Oh, thank you so much for taking the time to let me know you are enjoying my story. As for the British idioms, I do take you point - but then I often feel that Americans think they invented English LOL. I do recall that I once received a review for one of my other stories from a rather cross American who informed me that it was unnecessarily distracting that I used British words and phrases in a story set in England with English characters, and 'suggesting' that I used American terms instead to make it easier - presumably, this person had never read Austen, Trollope or Dickens, or, indeed, Rowling or any number of other British authors.
Thanks again for your kind review, it's very much appreciated.
Liz
Date: 28 Jul 2016 8:46 PM Title: Epilogue
The best thing about fanfic is access to so much creativity and willingness to share and risk. The worse thing about fanfic is finding story magic only to have it pulled or disappear before you can read it again. It is rare to read a story that is beyond lovely in all the right aspects of a good read. Stories filled with raw emotion, hurt, loss, fear, beauty, love and the ability to connect to the reader. You have managed this brilliantly in my humble opinion. Yes, SM owns the cannon characters and its plot but what you've done with them here is fantastic, moving and simply beautiful. Your story falls into the category of 'please don't pull this before I can soak in its loveliness once again.' ;-D Thank you for your time, efforts and creativity. Carry on...please!
Author's Response:
Gosh, what an absolutely lovely review. Thank you so much for taking the time to let me know that you enjoyed my story. Once a fic has finished posting, reviews are few and far between, so I really appreciate any and all that I get, especially when they are as kind and generous as yours. Rest assured that I have no plans at this time to take this story down, so it should be available for you to read and enjoy for the foreseeable future.
Thanks again for your kind comments.
Liz
Date: 10 Jan 2016 11:38 PM Title: Epilogue
bravo
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for all your kind reviews, they really are hugely appreciated. I'm delighted that you enjoyed my story.
Liz
Date: 10 Jan 2016 9:04 PM Title: Celebration
had to listen to the song, it is classic
Date: 10 Jan 2016 1:46 PM Title: Joined
wonderful, you should be published
Date: 10 Jan 2016 3:54 AM Title: Confessions
he is a sweet boy
Date: 10 Jan 2016 1:42 AM Title: Samaritan
I loved your "Out of the corner of my eye" so I am starting this journey with you
Date: 02 Oct 2015 10:36 PM Title: Epilogue
ABSOLUTELY AWESOME!!! story ;) thanks so much for sharing it on here ;D
Date: 09 Jun 2015 8:18 PM Title: Epilogue
Thank you so much for sharing your work with us all.
Fab story! Xx T
Date: 03 Mar 2014 12:58 AM Title: Epilogue
one of my favorite stories
Date: 29 Dec 2013 5:52 PM Title: Epilogue
What a sweet story!!!!! Absolutely loved it.
Date: 24 Nov 2013 1:09 AM Title: Epilogue
This was a wonderful story. I loved every word. Great job.
Vicki. Madison, WI
Date: 18 Nov 2013 8:54 AM Title: Epilogue
What a great story. I am glad that I found it. Your work is amazing.
Date: 27 Oct 2013 11:28 PM Title: Epilogue
I really love your story. Thank you
Date: 28 Sep 2013 10:26 PM Title: Epilogue
This was a wondful story. Thank you for sharing it.
Date: 22 Sep 2013 11:34 PM Title: Epilogue
Wonderful story..very well written. Its refreshing to read fiction from an author with a varied vocabulary and not to offend any other authors out there, but I applaud your ability to use the word 'nonplussed' in the way it was originally intended. It was an absolute pleasure!
Date: 27 Aug 2013 5:47 PM Title: Epilogue
This has been a wonderful story. Thanks for writing!
Date: 13 Aug 2013 12:51 AM Title: Epilogue
Loved it thanks so much!
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Date: 13 Aug 2013 12:34 AM Title: Forever
Sweet! How romantic!
Date: 12 Aug 2013 10:00 PM Title: Closure
Sad,,but at least he has closure!
Date: 12 Aug 2013 11:19 AM Title: Justice
Good for Ed! Sad though :(
Date: 12 Aug 2013 10:30 AM Title: Celebration
Sweet....dang I almost cried too!
Date: 12 Aug 2013 4:12 AM Title: Confrontation
Yeah! Guess I was wrong about him leaving
Date: 12 Aug 2013 1:52 AM Title: Triumph
Lovely....Jacob has arrived!
Date: 12 Aug 2013 1:38 AM Title: Interruption
They are so sweet together
Date: 12 Aug 2013 1:28 AM Title: Plans
Oh Bella...hot Ed very hot!
Date: 12 Aug 2013 1:06 AM Title: Joined
Like your story it is interesting that you switched their roles
Date: 12 Aug 2013 12:43 AM Title: Doubt
Will these two ever get it together?!
Date: 12 Aug 2013 12:32 AM Title: Job
Things are looking up :) Jacob should show up soon
Date: 12 Aug 2013 12:11 AM Title: Possibilities
Poor hard up people...dang jasper you are no help!
Date: 11 Aug 2013 11:52 PM Title: Explanation
Ok no more self love we need some real stuff! LOL
Date: 11 Aug 2013 11:40 PM Title: Horny
:( I know he doesn't want to give her a disease
Date: 11 Aug 2013 10:18 PM Title: Closer
ALice is a piece of work!
Date: 11 Aug 2013 10:09 PM Title: Tragedy
Just go for it Bella...who cares!
Date: 11 Aug 2013 9:27 PM Title: Confessions
How terrible for Ed :(
Date: 11 Aug 2013 9:04 PM Title: Understanding
Ed is sweet....poor Bella but she is strong I am sure she will get it together
Date: 11 Aug 2013 8:40 PM Title: Neighbours
Always loved Alice and jasper...I wonder how long Ed will be around, I am sure. He will leave her at some point.
Date: 11 Aug 2013 8:17 PM Title: Home
Poor Ed...looks like he has had a bad go of it
Date: 11 Aug 2013 8:12 PM Title: Samaritan
How much younger is he?
Author's Response:
Hi Maria
At the beginning of the story, Edward is 19 and Bella is 29.
Thanks for reviewing.
Liz
Date: 11 Aug 2013 7:27 PM Title: Escape
Interesting...lets see what happens
Date: 06 Aug 2013 6:11 AM Title: Epilogue
What a wonderful, heartfelt story! Thanks so much for sharing it with us.
Author's Response:
Date: 05 Aug 2013 12:05 AM Title: Epilogue
You forgot Slan (The Irish for goodbye). Loved it. Thanks. Kathryn
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Date: 04 Aug 2013 3:36 AM Title: Epilogue
great story
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Date: 03 Aug 2013 1:27 PM Title: Epilogue
:) loved this story
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Date: 03 Aug 2013 12:54 PM Title: Epilogue
Thank you so much for this story it's been brilliant something to look forward to every Saturday x
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Date: 27 Jul 2013 1:36 PM Title: Forever
Such a lovely story. Thanks for a great read.
Date: 13 Jul 2013 4:58 PM Title: Justice
Awesome Story that just keeps getting better....
Date: 07 Jul 2013 12:28 AM Title: Confrontation
I fall more in love with this story every chapter....
Date: 28 Jun 2013 9:34 PM Title: Triumph
Oh no what a place to stop.... I must tell you I love this story.
Date: 28 Jun 2013 3:33 PM Title: Triumph
I reaaallly hope Jacob ends up looking like a total jackass and this doesn't cause problems for E/B. Toss him out on his butt!!
Date: 22 Jun 2013 5:49 PM Title: Triumph
Oh dear!!! Love this story
Date: 22 Jun 2013 2:09 PM Title: Interruption
I don't like the way that ended off. I hope nothing breaks them apart.
Date: 18 Jun 2013 3:08 AM Title: Interruption
I am so enjoying your story. Thank you for sharing!
Date: 02 Jun 2013 3:39 AM Title: Joined
God they are so damned sweet!
Date: 01 Jun 2013 7:10 PM Title: Joined
Great chapter. I have to admit, though, it makes me nervous that she's going back to London. You know Jake is going to pull something. He's not going to let her go without a fight. I just hope she gets through it unscathed.
Date: 19 May 2013 10:01 PM Title: Job
Yay for Edward! A hot guy who can cook....jackpot!
Date: 19 May 2013 12:54 AM Title: Job
I love that Carlisle owns the restaurant. I soon as I saw his name, I knew Edward would get the job. Now I really hope they go home and celebrate exactly the way he wants to. And with no interruptions!! Great chapter.
Date: 11 May 2013 9:28 PM Title: Possibilities
It seems like things could be looking up for them. It sounds like that catering job would be perfect for him and could lead to bigger and better things. Now, if they could only get into town for certain supplies *wink*, things would be perfect. Then I'm sure Jacob will show up to cause trouble, but I'm positive they can deal with him.
Date: 11 May 2013 5:14 PM Title: Possibilities
u always leave me wanting more
Date: 04 May 2013 3:22 PM Title: Explanation
I love this story! I hope you decide to surprise us with an extra chapter this week (hint, hint). I'm glad this misunderstanding was fixed so quickly. I hate long, drawn out angst over stupid things. You are a great writer and I can't wait for what happens next.
Date: 03 May 2013 5:05 AM Title: Horny
I love this and can't wait to read more! I hope you can update again soon.
Date: 02 May 2013 5:44 PM Title: Horny
Aww, poor guy. Bella is kind of adorably oblivious. I love these characters!
Date: 02 May 2013 2:28 AM Title: Horny
Anyone worried about STD's? I love Edward & all but he was in a relationship with a prostitute. Does that not bring up any concerns dear Bella?
Date: 01 May 2013 11:35 PM Title: Horny
I'm guessing he doesn't want to do anything until he gets tested, I'm just hoping she gives him the chance to explain. I love these two together and I hope it gets fixed in the next chapter. Thanks for the extra chapter. It's always appreciated!
Date: 27 Apr 2013 10:05 PM Title: Closer
I am so excited that u are writing a new story because I loved reading ur last sory wild child I will most definatly be following this story for sur as well!!
Date: 25 Apr 2013 2:17 PM Title: Tragedy
Oh NO I've ran out of chapters please when do u update again
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Date: 25 Apr 2013 2:51 AM Title: Understanding
Aw, now get rid of Jake for good
Date: 25 Apr 2013 1:45 AM Title: Neighbours
I want to know Edwards story what all happened to him
Date: 25 Apr 2013 1:09 AM Title: Snow
So far I know what everything is without having to read your clarifications. Still loving your story so wanting him to stay and her to stay there, I so hate Jake and Tanya so baddddddddd
Date: 24 Apr 2013 11:26 PM Title: Home
let it snow for days
Date: 24 Apr 2013 10:24 PM Title: Samaritan
I'm so into your story here and I normally go for Mobwards, Controlwards, etc. strong Edwards......gone to find your facebook page
Date: 24 Apr 2013 5:33 PM Title: Escape
so far you have me hooked
Date: 24 Apr 2013 8:16 AM Title: Tragedy
What a sad life he has led. His mother set his life into that channel. No wonder he did drugs to get away from all of that.
I would not have sex with him until he was tested. He had sex with a herion using hooker who used needles. There are lists of diseases associated with that.
Author's Response:
Date: 24 Apr 2013 7:48 AM Title: Confessions
Well since she is older she can help him heal. Get him into culinary school to be a chef. He has skills. That will give him an education in a field to make some good money. Let him live with her. Lord knows she needs a friend as well as he does.
Date: 24 Apr 2013 6:39 AM Title: Neighbours
Good story. I am enjoying it. If Jacob never comes in I will be happy!
Date: 24 Apr 2013 6:15 AM Title: Snow
Poor kid. He dyed his hair, I guess it goes with the piercings.
Date: 23 Apr 2013 2:36 AM Title: Tragedy
You know, I really enjoyed your story, Wild Child, so when I saw this one I knew I had to read it. I'm glad I did because it is fantastic! I can't wait to see what happens next.
thanks, Maria
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