Date: 26 Oct 2016 4:30 AM Title: Gateway to the Heart
I personally think that the Jessica situation needs to be resolved permanently. Death would be suitable. As for him proposing, he is an idiot to even consider it, and she would be a fool to accept. She should have never went back to his house to begin with. She should have went to Alice's, or even Esme and Carlisle's for that matter. Their track record speaks for itself.
Date: 10 Jul 2016 4:36 AM Title: Gateway to the Heart
Wow - I saw someone recommend this on one of my FB pages I'm on, and I took all darn day to read it. Nothing got done at the house today because of you, but...that's okay. It was a great story. Hard to see Esme die, and Edward really was a shit for parts of the story, but - hey. That's life.
Date: 24 Apr 2016 10:27 PM Title: Defying Gravity
Neither one of them are doing well without the other, and both hate Christmas apart. I had a thought, about the shower sex the morning he left. Could it be possible she's pregnant? That would explain the tiredness and nor eating!
Date: 23 Apr 2016 9:16 PM Title: Defying Gravity
Alice's timing left a bit to be desired in the gym! First she drags Bella there in case Dr. Cullen shows up and then cuts into the conversation just as he's about to ask her out! So, now brother Emmett knows about Edward's dream, and Alice knows about Bella's dream. Something should come of them knowing, I guess. Maybe help things along?
Date: 11 Feb 2016 9:18 AM Title: Fracture
I hated it when Edward couldn't even break things up with Bella eben though wayeva she was demanding was wrong to some extent. The same Bella who applied to NYU because of such a loser. I mean c'mon u talk about forever n den wat u could not fight for the one u love in which u r half as wrong. I don't know i'll ever be able to trust a person who talk about love like he is some phd holder n den wat u don't give a shit. Who is to say he wont do samething again. Well its ur story n ur perception regarding this but i must say edward is an ASSHOLE
Date: 05 May 2015 1:26 AM Title: Gateway to the Heart
I love this story, but I hated that Edward almost cheated. The way the girls attitude was so smug. I will admit I kicked my husband to the curb for that reason, so I hate that part of the story line. Bella in this story although she had her faults. Had a hardest time throughout this story, I felt. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Date: 25 Jul 2014 7:45 AM Title: Twilight Twins
Kudos to Edward and Jacob for totally surprising their girls! I absolutely agree with the timing of their marriages. It's definitely a case of carpe diem. The graduation party seems to have been a rousing success also!
Date: 25 Jul 2014 6:30 AM Title: Twilight Twins
Talk about a baptism by fire, I think Raine has just had one! At least there are no illusions of trying diplomacy with the Volturi. This way, they train to win a life or death battle, because it's all or nothing with this one!
Date: 25 Jul 2014 4:14 AM Title: Twilight Twins
That's pretty sad that Carlie seeks a way to tell Bella Charlie is dead, and Bella is searching for the same thing! I'm so glad there are more good things than bad now. Life is never going to be perfect, but they will keep working on it because they have hope!
Date: 24 Jul 2014 9:33 PM Title: Twilight Twins
This chapter was tough to read because Carlie is descending into Hell and can't ask for help. The cutting is scary for me, I think I died that way in another life, I hate sharp things so bad! I hope to God she gets some help before it's too late!
Date: 24 Jul 2014 7:21 AM Title: Twilight Twins
Bella hasn't told Carlie about the vision she had of Charlie bringing Carlie to town and leaving her to be found. I guess he's that shell thing they were talking about, since Carlie brought him back after he died and it's all that is left of Charlie Swan. It may not be perfect, but at least they are all still together.
Date: 24 Jul 2014 5:34 AM Title: Twilight Twins
I would lay odds that Bella and Carlie are Charlie's daughters. I hope it's better all around, now that Charlie knows about everyone. I really hope they can destroy Victoria and breathe freely for a while. I also want Edward and Bella to be married!
Date: 24 Jul 2014 4:23 AM Title: Twilight Twins
She may not be a monster, but I certainly won't think less of Bella, or Carlie, for taking revenge on that hideous bastard, James! It was horrifying to read what he did to them, and thank you for not being anymore explicit than you were, by the way! Mostly thank God the guys found them when they did!
Date: 23 Jul 2014 7:20 PM Title: Twilight Twins
I was so hoping that Carlie was getting bvetter in her mind, shedding some of the guilt. The merry band of vampires, werewolves and witches was having a pretty good time before this meltdown. I'm still worried about the psycho vampire stalking the twins. It gives me the creeps when you write his thoughts, yuck!
Date: 23 Jul 2014 7:42 AM Title: Twilight Twins
Crap! I guess it really was too good to stay calm and happy in Forks. Now that Bella and Carlie are happy with their loves, and everyone is getting along pretty well, crazy James shows up with evil intentions on his mind! Boy, I hate him!
Date: 23 Jul 2014 6:59 AM Title: Twilight Twins
Now that they have mated, there will be no parting Carlie and Jacob! I suppose it's inevitable that their lives will always be divergent to some extent, since their loves are mortal enemies! I hope Bella and Carlie get to Jake soon and find out what's wrong!
Date: 23 Jul 2014 6:34 AM Title: Twilight Twins
I was pretty sure the girls could defend themselves, but that display was spectacular! Then Jacob phases and scares Edward and Carlie faints! Quite the first date, I must say! Loved the description of Edward's room. Nothing is ever dull or boring around these two girls!
Date: 23 Jul 2014 5:42 AM Title: Twilight Twins
Bella better tell Carlie about Edward pretty soon, before her twin thinks of any more mischief to visit on him! I really like your Edward, he's so different from the original version! I also like that Carlie has Jacob and now Bella has her vampire! Good thing she wasn't hurt too much in that parking lot!
Date: 22 Jul 2014 10:32 PM Title: Twilight Twins
I can see why Carlie is drawn to Jacob in the normal course of things, since they both lost their mothers. What I don't think either of them yet understands is the supernatural bond they share, he is, or will be a shape-shifter and she's a witch! Now, all that's left id Bella and Edward to get together!