Date: 03 Apr 2018 8:04 PM Title: Moving Forward
I think beyond my love for your E&B relationship, I adore your Charlie. He is ever present, funny, strong and sweet and I know you can write him dark. Couldn’t finish that one. Anyway, I love the interaction between him and Bella it’s like my relationship with my Dad. Cheers and thank you!
Date: 03 Sep 2014 12:01 AM Title: Moving Forward
My daughter had twin boys a year ago. She had a very low iron and the Dr. had her get an iron drip to bring it up. The boys came 3 weeks early and one weighed almost 9 pounds and the other weighed 5 1/2 pounds. They are now within 1/2 pound of each other and running around everywhere. Thanks for the great stories. Loved them. - Zanath
Date: 27 Oct 2013 3:49 PM Title: Moving Forward
I can't believe the story has ended. This has been one of the best stories that I have read. How can you not love all of these characters. Looking forward to anything new that you have coming up. I truely enjoy your writing.
Date: 21 Oct 2013 1:24 PM Title: Moving Forward
I know Bella doesnt' mean to be so stubborn, but she still isn't listening to her doctor. All she needs to do is lay in that bed and heal. She doesn't need to tear anything by moving. Everybody knows that when someone says fine that it is a lie. You would think that she would learn. I love the names.
Date: 17 Oct 2013 1:15 PM Title: Moving Forward
I am so happy that Bella is doing ok. Edward would not have made it through another death. After this experience, I don't think they were going to have anymore pregnancies. Having a hysterectomy is not the worse thing, when it could have been death. They have 4 healthy children. Bella needs to concentrate on that then what she lost.
Date: 16 Oct 2013 11:33 AM Title: Moving Forward
Is Bella hemorrhaging ?? Sounds like what happened to a couple of friends of mine right after delivery and its scary shit especially when your a nurse/physician and know what's going on! I'd rather be like Bella and be unaware. Can't wait for next update!
Date: 09 Oct 2013 11:36 AM Title: Moving Forward
What did Bella think she could do? She can hardly walk. All that could have happened is she could have caused herself to go into labor. What would she have done if that would have happened. Bella can act so stupid.
Date: 09 Oct 2013 11:23 AM Title: Moving Forward
You had me worried for a minute there...did Edward get into an accident.... Was Bella's water going to break... Whew every body is okay but since babies pick storms for birthdays I'm guessing the twins make an appearance next chapter . ;-)
Date: 17 May 2013 11:54 PM Title: Moving Forward
I'm glad that as much as it sucks Bella is trying to be pleasant about her bed rest. The guys are all so sweet. My heart still goes out to them all bedrest is horrible. I was on bedrest for a while and that was before fan fiction. Lol
Date: 17 May 2013 11:10 PM Title: Moving Forward
BB - Great chapter. I get that this is hard for Bella, she is always the caretaker, but I probably tend to agree with the "selfish" reviewers. For being such a caretaker she was being pretty whiny. I know its hard. Great chatper though,. I love all the effort that Edward is making. So sweet.
Date: 30 Apr 2013 3:20 PM Title: Moving Forward
I have to say that to be honest you don't owe us readers nothing, you write for yourself and don't let anyone tell you different, I get it, you update when you can and its all good, I hope your son is feeling better and that your book edit went smoothly, I love the chapter
Date: 30 Apr 2013 12:11 PM Title: Moving Forward
Bella needs to grow up and stop being selfish. She is in the hospital because she wasn't taking care of herself and her babies. Their health is what is important. I am sorry she is inconvenienced , but the babies are important.
Date: 30 Apr 2013 1:04 AM Title: Moving Forward
I really love your stories so thanks for not taking them down. They r your stories so update when u can and ignore the people who pester you or just tell them that good things come to those who wait. Personally I think people need to learn how to wait and be patient. :)
Date: 29 Apr 2013 10:45 PM Title: Moving Forward
Thank you for keeping your stories up, this one is great. Life is not easy, and I think we owe you some patience and a thank you for the stories you write.
It's amazing how avlive your characters are, I can almost feel Edward's tierdness, and how much Bella wants and need to go home. Looking forward to the next uppdate.
Date: 06 Feb 2013 1:43 AM Title: Moving Forward
Poor Edward. He is going to have to calm down or else he's going to go insane. I bet it's safe to say there will be no more babies after these two. There is no way Edward would be able to handle another pregnancy no matter how good the outcome.
Bella needs to really start putting herself and the babies first. I know she is worried about the boys and Edward but they would never survive losing her. They are all lost too much already.