Date: 18 Jun 2021 8:30 PM Title: Dominated
Hot hot hot. Is this the end of the story??????
Date: 18 Jun 2021 7:41 PM Title: Dominated
Hot hot hot
Date: 15 Jun 2021 3:51 AM Title: Dominated
I am glad that Edward did not let Bella punish him. They were not in a scene. She was definitely crossing the line.
Date: 15 Jun 2021 2:37 AM Title: Dominated
Oh my, outside sex on the balcony!!!!!!!
Date: 14 Jun 2021 8:06 PM Title: Dominated
Wow, 2 weeks without sex. That is cruel.
Date: 14 Jun 2021 3:00 AM Title: Dominated
I don't blame Bella for being upset with Edward being so late. Domme or girlfriend, I would be pissed. He should have called her.
Date: 14 Jun 2021 2:02 AM Title: Dominated
Love how easy Bella is handling Esme.
Date: 12 Jun 2021 10:22 PM Title: Dominated
Hot hot hot chapter!!!!
Date: 12 Jun 2021 6:23 PM Title: Dominated
Love what Bella did!!!!!
Date: 09 Jun 2021 2:21 AM Title: Dominated
Oh my!!!!
Date: 07 Jun 2021 12:43 AM Title: Dominated
Ok, I have a question. In one of the chapters you wrote that Edward and Rose were brother and sister but did not share the same blood. What did you mean by that?
Date: 06 Jun 2021 1:19 PM Title: Dominated
Oh wow. Bella is having feelings for Edward and it is scaring her. That is my theory.
Date: 06 Jun 2021 3:39 AM Title: Dominated
Lol. Edward's family is hilarious!!!!!!! Is Dizzy Izzy Bella??????
Date: 06 Jun 2021 3:38 AM Title: Dominated
Lol. Edward's family is hilarious!!!!!!! Is Dizzy Izzy Bella??????
Date: 06 Jun 2021 3:26 AM Title: Dominated
Bella also wants a regular relationship with Edward.
Date: 06 Jun 2021 2:27 AM Title: Dominated
Lol!!!!!! Oh my gosh!!!!!! Poor Edward.
Date: 05 Jun 2021 8:30 PM Title: Dominated
Love your long chapters. That was intense.
Date: 30 May 2021 11:09 PM Title: Dominated
Hot hot hot!!!
Date: 30 May 2021 11:08 PM Title: Dominated
Hot hot hot!!!
Date: 04 Jun 2018 10:02 PM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!
glad to read they contected on a personal level. But INCOMPLETE here. so not cool. Sort of wasted my time. Kudos for writing - but not so much for the abandonment.
Date: 04 Jun 2018 10:00 PM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!
Yep some strong dom Carlisle is - pussy.
Date: 04 Jun 2018 9:56 PM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!
poor sweet man
Date: 04 Jun 2018 9:55 PM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!
Well that was painful to read. Statistic bitch
Date: 04 Jun 2018 9:49 PM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!
I held on to this fic for a long time.
Date: 04 Jun 2018 3:03 AM Title: Dominated
W/ as many errors.
Date: 19 Apr 2018 5:01 AM Title: Play With Me
The best Edward enternal dialog, and the best freaking Emmeet. Aswesome So well written. I would not have reviewed this mush on completed fic if it didn't move me in some way. This one hit my funny bone. Thanks for writing.
Date: 19 Apr 2018 2:23 AM Title: Play With Me
In the beginning she said she was a silent partner. Even with stealing they ususally stay in the background.
Date: 19 Apr 2018 2:11 AM Title: Play With Me
hahahaha Charlie a porn and a nudist. EPIC
Date: 18 Apr 2018 11:05 PM Title: Play With Me
Humm, he has feelings for her and maybe she has feelings for him.
Date: 18 Apr 2018 9:53 PM Title: Play With Me
So this has been in my list awhile. I don't read over here much, but I told myself i needed to work on my TBR list. Soooo. I love the fact she "made" him get his dick pierced. Good boy.
Date: 03 Jun 2017 6:51 PM Title: Chocolate Brown and Leather Whips
Loved it!
Date: 10 May 2017 2:30 AM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!
Oh come on?! Why have you stopped updating? I would absolutely love to see how things would develope between Edward and Bella!
Date: 21 Apr 2017 4:22 AM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!
Oh so good 😁 can't wait to read more
Date: 29 Jan 2017 4:04 AM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!
are you going to update this story ??
Date: 16 Jan 2017 5:45 AM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!
Please please finish this story! I love it!
Date: 02 Apr 2016 10:31 PM Title: Play With Me
So sorry about reviewing I read in reader view on my iPad and it doesn't give a review option all the time. Anyway, I think Edward's inner voice is the shiz for real! This is so funny and often so sweet in their cray.
Date: 02 Apr 2016 10:31 AM Title: Play With Me
Yeah Bella girl is all a mess poor thing. She didn't even give aftercare post punishment and we know that's a no no. Too bad her confidant is big mouth Rose. Hehe
Date: 30 Dec 2015 1:50 AM Title: Dominated
love doesn't make you soft
Date: 30 Dec 2015 1:32 AM Title: Dominated
did you get there
Date: 29 Dec 2015 8:08 PM Title: Dominated
yes just a little
Date: 27 Dec 2015 6:59 PM Title: Play With Me
wonderful
Date: 15 Nov 2015 2:10 PM Title: Anonymous Meeting
Hello.
Love your story. Hope you will write more
Date: 31 Oct 2015 12:10 AM Title: Chocolate Brown and Leather Whips
This is pretty enthralling so far-- I'm a Domella virgin, and I'm enjoying my first time!
Date: 21 Oct 2015 5:23 PM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!
I love this story. Your grammar and spelling are immaculate!!! I don't know if there are so many BDSM stories or what but of all of them yours is by far superior. I can't wait to read more so I better scoot and read but I couldn't leave this chapter without telling you.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! It really means a lot to me that you took the time to review the story. I whish I could publish more chapters in this fanfic right now, but I haven't had the time neccesary for long. However, I'm working on a one-shot fanfic in another fandom, not sure if it will fit in this library :)
Date: 29 Aug 2015 9:04 PM Title: Dominated
I've had your story on my favorite list for a while now to hold my place, but I've just gotten a chance to read it. It was sexy, funny, and sentimental. Another home run from you.
Thank you for always being a sure bet! (Yes, my husband is playing the horses today because American Pharoah is in the Travers Stakes - and guess who is being left to her own devices?) Haha. See you next time.
Date: 17 Jan 2015 2:09 AM Title: Dominated
i loved this story!!!!! ;) please can you add some more D/s time ;x btw in chapter 1 the e-mail from bella to edward said his name was masen? and can you put them at a play party? as you can tell i really hope you can add to this story although you've pressed complete ;D
Date: 09 Jan 2015 1:32 AM Title: Dominated
This was a quick fun read. Thanks!
Date: 13 Oct 2014 7:33 PM Title: Punishment
i LOVED this o/s ;) i'm looking forward to it when its chp2 of aa ;D will there be epov? ;D
Date: 07 Sep 2014 11:43 PM Title: Play With Me
Out takes PLEASE!!!!!!
Date: 07 Sep 2014 9:13 AM Title: Dominated
She is going to keep him happy for years and years lol. I think Edward is going to have nightmares about his parents for years lol. I want more of these two when are they getting married and kids.
Date: 07 Sep 2014 8:06 AM Title: Dominated
They needed to get that out of the way to find the love that is truly there.
Date: 07 Sep 2014 7:39 AM Title: Dominated
To go from tied up having sex on the balcony to getting a puppy and moving in wild crazy lol.
Date: 07 Sep 2014 6:20 AM Title: Dominated
He will be a good boy from now on lol
Date: 03 Sep 2014 1:53 PM Title: Dominated
Now the family knows but Esme.
Date: 03 Sep 2014 1:45 PM Title: Dominated
That was a great first meeting lol.
Date: 03 Sep 2014 9:44 AM Title: Dominated
Its love Its love
Date: 03 Sep 2014 9:42 AM Title: Dominated
Love it Angela just thought she was going to have him take her back love Bella
Date: 03 Sep 2014 9:40 AM Title: Dominated
Happy times making up for lost time may kill him lol.
Date: 03 Sep 2014 9:31 AM Title: Dominated
So glad he didnt let her get away and so glad she told him how she was feeling about him
Date: 03 Sep 2014 9:28 AM Title: Dominated
She has just confused the shit out of him poor guy.
Date: 12 Aug 2014 9:17 PM Title: Play With Me
This was a great story loved it the way through
Date: 23 Jun 2014 5:17 PM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!
OMG!!!! PLEASE COME BACK!!!!!!! ;D i have some ideas if your interested in using them ? how about having edward get a weeping pheonix rising from his foot up his calf to cover the branding from tanya to show that he has healed? (get it heeled/healed) ha ha and have edward make bella his pa so she is his equal at work? ;D
Date: 22 Jun 2014 8:53 PM Title: Anonymous Meeting
i just read your reviews after reading this story your last one was this year and you still havent been able to continue ;( i really hope you can find the time and inspiration to come back because domella and subward are a MUST!!!!!!! ;D
Date: 20 Jun 2014 2:01 PM Title: Dominated
i love this story and cant wait to read more
Date: 06 Jun 2014 8:24 PM Title: Chocolate Brown and Leather Whips
thank you for completing this absolutely AWESOME story ;D
Date: 05 Jun 2014 3:43 PM Title: Chocolate Brown and Leather Whips
i cannot believe you broke his dick!!!! how cruel are you ;) please dont let him end up with a bent penis ;)
Date: 04 Jun 2014 10:38 PM Title: Chocolate Brown and Leather Whips
oooh!! im so glad that the first chapter was a dream ;)
Date: 04 Jun 2014 5:33 PM Title: Chocolate Brown and Leather Whips
awesome ;) when she mentioned that she wanted edward to accumpany her to the dungeon on weekends i thought she wanted him to watch so he could learn ;) im so happy we got some imfo on bellas past and what james was to her ;D
Date: 04 Jun 2014 1:06 PM Title: Chocolate Brown and Leather Whips
i LOVED this chapter i read it twice!! ;) i love how he has to get a 'brazilian' its such a refreshing change from bella having one i hate it when she does ;D
Date: 03 Jun 2014 4:46 PM Title: Chocolate Brown and Leather Whips
this story is so cool so far ;) btw robert for his middle name? and 5yo twin brothers? cant wait to read the rest ;D
Date: 14 Apr 2014 1:11 PM Title: Play With Me
Awesome story I read this when it was on ff.n I reviewed then also ;) BTW where are the o/t ? Thanks so much for posting it here ;D
Date: 25 Feb 2014 10:21 PM Title: Anonymous Meeting
Would love to read more of their developing relationship.
Date: 16 Jan 2014 3:22 PM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!
Bad Tanya! Awww Edward and Bella..... Please update....... Oh and can we still be spanked just because?
Date: 16 Jan 2014 1:21 AM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!
its sad that you didnt continue this it was actually intoxicating
Date: 22 Sep 2013 6:03 AM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!
I am eagerly anticipating the next chapter! Well done!
Date: 25 Jul 2013 7:05 PM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!
So good to receive an update on this story. I love it. I'm glad it's getting past the hurt and anxiety for Edward and hope all goes well for him. I have a feeling that Bella will make damn sure it does. Looking forward to the next chapter. :-)
Date: 22 Jul 2013 7:43 PM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!
So glad that this story got updated!! Love it and keep it coming soon!!!
Date: 21 Jul 2013 11:33 PM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!
Freaking love it! I have to say your story is by and large one of my faves especially with BDSM. Can't wait to watch Subward and Domella play!
Date: 21 Jul 2013 6:29 PM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!
So glad that this story has come back to life. I love this version of Edward and Bella!! Thank you xxx Sara
Date: 20 Jul 2013 6:10 PM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!
soooooo glad you are back!!! Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Spank you very much!
Date: 15 Jul 2013 7:59 PM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!
Loved it!
Date: 15 Jul 2013 2:06 PM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!
Loved it!
Date: 10 Jul 2013 10:13 PM Title: Chocolate Brown and Leather Whips
Loved it!
Date: 20 Jun 2013 12:49 PM Title: Anonymous Meeting
Really hit:)
Date: 07 May 2013 10:08 AM Title: Dominated
Hope he really can trust rose:) pls do continue love your story:)
Date: 07 May 2013 9:55 AM Title: Dominated
I think he knew her a long time ago. She was the girl near the truck
Date: 07 May 2013 9:42 AM Title: Dominated
Oh god poor Edward. But this Dom is easy going if she doesn't cintrol his orgasms during the week. So he should be able to hold out just for the weekend
Date: 25 Mar 2013 7:40 PM Title: Dominated
I think you left us hanging. Damn. But Izzy and Mistress Isabella are the same person.
Date: 21 Feb 2013 11:14 AM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!
Loved it!
Author's Response:
:-*
Date: 21 Feb 2013 9:53 AM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!
Loved it!
Date: 21 Feb 2013 9:38 AM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!
Loved it!
Date: 21 Feb 2013 5:28 AM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!
Loved it!
Date: 18 Feb 2013 12:11 AM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!
Loved it!
Date: 17 Feb 2013 11:27 PM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!
Loved it!
Date: 17 Feb 2013 10:55 AM Title: Mistress and Pet - ABANDONED SORRY!
Loved it!