Date: 19 Jan 2015 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 27
oh no....i bet she is running scared by saying she loves him and is hooking up with another guy when walks in, but i REALLY hope im wrong. I think you are doing a fantastic job writing the story and putting up the pins is an added cool touch. but i would like elliot and kates story to get some more time. no more 4 ways or sharing please. i love the story line, the teasing and esp the sex. i think it is so romantic the special things he does for her and i REALLY hope she is letting down her walls. they hv found their perfect match in each other and i really think she is getting cold feet...but i hate that they aren't exclusive.
Date: 07 Oct 2014 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hated it. ! I thought it was horrible, even their hair color is wrong, you could of kept hera brunette and Kate blonde, just everything about this story was so WRONG.. you ruined a perfectly beautiful love story and turned it into a joke called yr story.. Sorry just my opinion... If yr going to keep in line of the story of AG & CG at least follow the original characters... 0 rating from me :-(
Off to read some realistic stories on TWCS about AG & CG
HAVE A GREAT DAY
I'm sorry you 'hated it' and yes you are entitled to your opinion however the idea of AU stories is to go outside of the box, make the characters what you want them to be, invent story lines that fit your creativity. Changing a characters hair colour or age or job title is part of your imagination. Hope you find the story you are looking for and you have a great day!
Date: 30 Sep 2014 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 27
Thanks for the updated chapter and the entertainment. I am glad that she kind of gave him some sort of hope of their future together. I was surprised that she said "I am fond of you".... kind of hurt him I am sure.
Date: 20 Jul 2014 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 23
Wow, wonderful updated chapter. That Carla is a real piece of work, almost worse then in the original story. I love how CG stood up for her despite feeling the same way in the beginning. The relationship is changing to something special, as it the one between Kate and Elliot. Thanks for the entertainment. :-D
Date: 31 May 2014 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 16
Love this story, glad it's got a new home and as for embedded images, that would be cool, I'm not really a Pinterest fan. I can't wait for race day to come around and Christians charms to eventually get Ana submitting to his will....(if you take it there, if you don't that's cool too!)
Date: 29 May 2014 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 14
Poor Christian he's falling in love with Ana but she's the one with committment issues. But what surprises me the most is that she is happy with multiple lovers at once. Hmm this story is getting very interesting.