Date: 15 Aug 2018 1:23 AM Title: Future Take
Loved this story
Date: 26 Feb 2016 4:59 PM Title: Future Take
I loved it so cool Thanks so much.
Date: 26 Feb 2016 4:52 PM Title: Epilogue
That was so cool life is good and they both have something they didnt think they could have a happy life with love and family. Thanks so much
Date: 26 Feb 2016 10:39 AM Title: Armor
There is so much love with the pain. They are both on there way to healing
Date: 06 Nov 2015 3:37 PM Title: Future Take
I loved this story , thank you.
Date: 26 Sep 2015 5:16 PM Title: Future Take
AWESOME!!! hea ;) i LOVED this little story thanks for sharing ;D
Date: 13 Sep 2015 8:54 AM Title: When It Rains It Pours
one of your best
Date: 23 Aug 2015 1:38 PM Title: Future Take
What a great ending! Apparently, little Peyton lacks a verbal filter just like her mother. That was too funny. I hate to see the story end. Thanks for telling such a great story. Looking forward to your next one. Maria
Date: 18 Aug 2015 6:51 AM Title: Future Take
Ive seen this story several times but for some reason I had never read it. I'm so glad I did. I started reading at lunch time today and didn't stop until I was done. Absolutely amazing!! I loved every chapter and I'm sure I'll read it again.
Date: 11 Jul 2015 4:27 AM Title: Future Take
Really great story. I loved the pace of the story. No grass growing under anyone's feet, not even Edward's, he's just stubborn!!! So many emotions revealed and brought forth from the reader in so few chapters. You've written one hot Edward with a sassy little Bella as his equal. My one word review would be "Excellent!"
Thank you for writing for our fandom. You're an amazing writer and I look forward to reading more of you stories. Thanks again.
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Date: 09 Jul 2015 6:44 PM Title: Future Take
I loved this story. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 08 Jul 2015 1:10 PM Title: Epilogue
Really enjoyed this and hate its finished
Date: 07 Jul 2015 10:11 AM Title: Future Take
I kind of hate saying goodbye to all these people, espcially Bella and Edward. I have enjoyed their love story so much!
Date: 07 Jul 2015 10:02 AM Title: Epilogue
I loved when Edward said she saved him, too. That was a nice way to wrap up the story.
Date: 07 Jul 2015 6:21 AM Title: Future Take
Oh I loved it that was perfect so very perfect thank you for writing this story
Date: 07 Jul 2015 3:39 AM Title: Armor
Now he really is totally exposed to her, and how trusting is that? It nearly made me cry when she was shaving him and weeping and he lost one tear. On the other side of the coin, his parents were darling, expecially his dad under the influence of too much lemonade!
Date: 07 Jul 2015 1:03 AM Title: Roadside
Thank heaven they both got smart before they got to her house! A couple of minutes later and it might have been embarassing to have Emmett catch them by the side of the road.
Date: 07 Jul 2015 12:38 AM Title: Snapshots
About damn time he decided to say something!
Date: 07 Jul 2015 12:20 AM Title: Learning From the Past
Okay, Edward she's told you the whole of it , now it's your turn! I'm hoping they don't have to run and leave his family behind.
Date: 07 Jul 2015 12:04 AM Title: When It Rains It Pours
It's so sad that he thinks his medical problems are something to be ashamed of. Thay don't seem to be scaring her away as he feared they m ight.
Date: 06 Jul 2015 11:47 PM Title: Torn
Somehow just knew it was going to be that way between them and sure as hell it was! Seems as if she doesn't want him to shave? Makes me wonder why he would want to?
Date: 06 Jul 2015 11:34 PM Title: Focus
Okay, I'm a bit surprised she told him as much as she did, but not surprised there's more to be told. I hope neither of them burst into flames and burn down the forest!
Date: 06 Jul 2015 11:00 PM Title: Some Truth
No damn wonder she has been running and hiding all this time! I hope so much they repudiate those stupid, angry words about what they can give each other! I feel they can be each other's salvation!
Date: 06 Jul 2015 10:45 PM Title: Interlude
I'm dying of curiosity here! What in the world has messed up these two so much they would do this to each other?
Date: 06 Jul 2015 10:31 PM Title: On the Counter
Got a feeling this is going to be epic! Can't wait to hear where she's been and why she had to go!
Date: 06 Jul 2015 10:18 PM Title: Crash
Oh shit! I don't want anything more to happen to her, bad things anyway! Who would take her, and why?
Date: 06 Jul 2015 8:06 PM Title: Future Take
Really good story..
Thank you very much,
Date: 06 Jul 2015 6:34 PM Title: Future Take
Thanks once again for this. I truly enjoyed reading this story. A lot. Come to think of it, there hasn't been one story of yours that I've read that I haven't at least liked, if not loved.
Date: 06 Jul 2015 6:13 PM Title: Roadside
if and employee of the bank gave some one another customers funds then>>> THE BANK IS LIABLE and must pay Jacob back. Then they get the police to go after the person that took the money. The employee maybe an accessory to the crime.. Just saying
Glad Bella and E worked it out.
Date: 06 Jul 2015 2:59 AM Title: Epilogue
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY!!! I wish there was more but I love knowing that they are happy!! :)
Date: 06 Jul 2015 12:32 AM Title: Epilogue
Thanks again, dear! I enjoyed this story very much!
Date: 05 Jul 2015 11:54 PM Title: Armor
Thank you for finishing this story. I know you've been struggling with various things and I greatly appreciate your efforts. Everything you write is top notch and touches my heart in various ways. This story, which started out in a contest, was a long time coming, but worth every word. I'm glad Edward is facing his fears.
Date: 05 Jul 2015 11:35 PM Title: Armor
I have really enjoyed this story! :) I am so happy for this update but sad to know there is only an epi left! :(
Date: 05 Jul 2015 11:07 PM Title: Epilogue
:) loved this story
Date: 06 May 2015 6:53 AM Title: Roadside
About time they got that out lol. I am so happy for them and glad Jacob came back to face them.
Date: 05 May 2015 1:20 PM Title: Roadside
I love that they finally found happiness.
Date: 01 May 2015 4:09 PM Title: Learning From the Past
I am loving this fic and I'm almost caught up and I hate that cause then that means I'll have to wait for updates lol. Keep'em coming! One of the best fic's I've read in a while
Date: 30 Apr 2015 12:48 AM Title: Roadside
OMG!! I love this so much!! I can't believe there is only an epi left! I am really gonna miss this. You got me so hooked!! ;)
Date: 29 Apr 2015 8:20 PM Title: Learning From the Past
WOW!! That is a whole lot to handle! I love it! :)
Date: 29 Apr 2015 7:24 PM Title: When It Rains It Pours
Holy shit!! I love this!! :)
Date: 29 Apr 2015 5:49 PM Title: Roadside
thank you for the update....I love this Bella & Edward...he sent Jake & Emmett away..to funny..until you post again
Date: 29 Apr 2015 5:47 PM Title: Torn
OMG! I absofreakinlutely LOVE this!! These characters are fantastic!! :)
Date: 29 Apr 2015 2:41 PM Title: Some Truth
OMG! 'Nuff said! :)
Date: 29 Apr 2015 1:27 PM Title: Interlude
OMG! I am loving this!!! You have me so excited to read on! What has happened to Bella in the past? What will happen with them? What about Jacob? So many questions that I have to go and read more to find the answers to!! :)
Date: 29 Apr 2015 12:34 PM Title: On the Counter
I am excited to read the next chapter!! :)=) I love this already and I have only just begun reading it!! :)
Date: 29 Apr 2015 12:15 PM Title: Crash
OMFNG!! WOW!! I am hooked!!! :)=)
Date: 29 Apr 2015 5:53 AM Title: Roadside
OMG! I LOVE IT!!!!
Date: 28 Apr 2015 11:49 PM Title: Roadside
Good chapter thought it was a new one though..........love the story............
Date: 31 Mar 2015 2:42 PM Title: Snapshots
I'm glad Edward stopped the truck. They need to talk.
Date: 29 Mar 2015 8:57 AM Title: Snapshots
They have gone throught so much they are both so afraid to count on someone else to love them. I am glad she had her little fit so he can know he needs to fix it now.
Date: 29 Mar 2015 8:15 AM Title: Learning From the Past
He is just so happy she is with him and he wants to keep her safe.
Date: 29 Mar 2015 8:04 AM Title: When It Rains It Pours
That is so scary but it wont scare her away
Date: 29 Mar 2015 8:02 AM Title: Torn
She doesnt want him to change.
Date: 24 Mar 2015 4:56 PM Title: Snapshots
Oh wow that was sad he lived through hell but it's crazy her ex took care of the danger but I thought Jacke was her ex not Jasper but what is Edward going to do or say to fix this update soon
Date: 24 Mar 2015 4:34 PM Title: Snapshots
I want to cry for her. No matter what he says the pain is there. Oh I am sorry lets try this. Nah you go back to your mountain and grieve for whatever you feel you have lost and I will just live down below or maybe I won't. Maybe I will travel again. So many words in hurt.
Date: 24 Mar 2015 3:50 PM Title: Learning From the Past
I am rereading this. Where was I when last you updated? I hate being old. Well anyway great story. Please keep it going.
thank you,
Date: 24 Mar 2015 2:14 PM Title: Some Truth
Now he is going to get some of the info he needs
Date: 24 Mar 2015 1:20 PM Title: On the Counter
yes to all of this. I am still trying to figure out why she left.
Date: 24 Mar 2015 11:12 AM Title: Snapshots
Love it, please keep writing
Date: 24 Mar 2015 8:01 AM Title: Crash
I have been reading this on FFn and I have loved it.
Date: 24 Mar 2015 12:53 AM Title: Snapshots
WOW!!! Each chapter the look become more complex and intense. If we were playing hockey,a I would way it was a triple hat trick! I can't get my head around her being in a secrect/nonsantioned. Ops. Operation much less the fact Jasper was
her ex-husband and got her involved in that nightmare. Tens all the way!!!!
Date: 23 Mar 2015 6:16 PM Title: Snapshots
moving chapter! I was holding my breath, once they found out Riley was dead and the message that it was safe for her to come home was received, wondering how each of these stubborn people would come to realize that one couldn't live without the other. It took miles of silence and small talk about the weather for Bella to break down and finally be the one to talk first, albeit in the form of a heated, emotional outburst about being abandonded once again....thank god for that! I don't even mind the cliffie because now I have an inkling of how this may end. I love this story, am so glad you stuck with it through all of your life turmoils, and now will be giving all of us who stuck with you, a closure worthy of all of us. Thanks!
Date: 23 Mar 2015 5:44 PM Title: Snapshots
Wonderfully done! The end was especially excellent! Thank you!
Date: 09 Mar 2015 5:40 AM Title: Learning From the Past
I loved it wow she has been through a lot in her young life will Edward be able to keep her safe and will he give into his heart and love her
Date: 07 Mar 2015 6:22 PM Title: Learning From the Past
I love this story! I know you've had a rough time lately and am very happy that you are still writing through it all.
Bella told him the whole story and I'm glad she did because now WE know her story. The lovemaking scenes in the past few chapters have me hot and panting for more. These two seem to be just what the other needs! Thanks so much for this, and all the stories you give us!
Date: 23 Feb 2015 5:13 PM Title: When It Rains It Pours
Love this story, please don't keep us waiting!
Date: 04 Feb 2015 7:53 PM Title: When It Rains It Pours
They really are perfect for each other.
Date: 30 Jan 2015 9:52 AM Title: When It Rains It Pours
Well here we go into that arena she has held back.
Date: 30 Jan 2015 8:58 AM Title: Focus
so many questions.. I have
Date: 30 Jan 2015 7:58 AM Title: Some Truth
Yep, Witsec or something like that. Poor B
Date: 30 Jan 2015 7:30 AM Title: Interlude
Well she has guns so I guess she is an agent or ex agent of some kind.
Date: 28 Jan 2015 11:57 PM Title: When It Rains It Pours
so many secrets between them....this was a wonderfully sexy chapter. I love how they are together. Each one so sure the other will leave...I hope not. I love that you write damaged and complex characters in all your stories!
Date: 28 Jan 2015 8:41 PM Title: Crash
Wow amazing please add more
Date: 28 Jan 2015 8:15 PM Title: When It Rains It Pours
Oh boy they are getting closer and now they feel each other deeply she knew he needed her and will this conversation break them
Date: 09 Jan 2015 11:22 AM Title: Torn
Hot hot hot. Good job on the sexy times.
Date: 07 Jan 2015 7:23 PM Title: Torn
oh what a smoking hot chapter!! I'm going to read it again! You tease with a cliffie, but I don't mind being teased as I know you'll deliver the goods, sooner or later!
Date: 22 Dec 2014 8:38 PM Title: Crash
Please update soon Love this story
Date: 05 Nov 2014 4:37 AM Title: Focus
Wow! I really hope they have a chance at an HEA! I love their connection!
Date: 30 Oct 2014 1:14 PM Title: Focus
Just started reading, read straight through. Love love love this.
Date: 28 Oct 2014 6:53 PM Title: Focus
These 2 need each other. They need to hide away to feel safe and to heal their wounds. They will be stronger together.
Date: 28 Oct 2014 7:57 AM Title: Crash
Love the story, and hoping for a speedy update!
Date: 27 Oct 2014 12:18 PM Title: Focus
Oh now, where the hell is the next chapter!! you left us THERE?!!! aargh!!!
Date: 26 Oct 2014 5:40 AM Title: Focus
love the story, cant wait to read more....
Date: 26 Oct 2014 5:12 AM Title: Focus
Wow well we know more of why she is hiding but will she ever tell Edward everything update soon I loved it
Date: 26 Oct 2014 3:41 AM Title: Focus
so many questions.....why did she say she had been running for six years if the murder happened four years ago? I'll just stop there. You said she is hiding things. I'll wait for you to reveal them in time. You stopped just as things were heating up, so I am forced to wait for the next chapter! I can't believe you don't have more reviews for this story! It's a good one!!
Date: 11 Oct 2014 4:35 PM Title: Some Truth
Yes, please. Kissing is good. More is better. It's good to see a new chapter of this story. Thanks!
Date: 26 Jul 2014 10:55 PM Title: On the Counter
Wow, holy hotness!
Date: 26 Jul 2014 7:51 AM Title: On the Counter
Well where did she have to go and why and how is she free and will they talk heheheheh hehehehehe yumm