Date: 04 May 2015 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 140
Not cool to leave us hanging like that . Edward has to live for Bella and their child Please!!!!!
Date: 04 May 2015 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 140
SERIUOSLY! I sure hope you post the next chapter ASAP
Date: 04 May 2015 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 140
I bet James will bleed to death because of the scissors to the neck. I'm sure Edward will be rescued, but will be seriously injured and probably in a coma for a while. I hope Bella doesn't lose their baby because of the stress from all of this. Boy, paybacks sure are a bitch, as Renee found out the hard way. No tears lost over her going up in flames!
Date: 03 May 2015 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 139
Thank you for what you have given us. I think things are about to come to a head. Really love the story. My thoughts and prayers go out to you and your mom. Hope all is getting better.
Date: 02 May 2015 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 139
Youre evil always ending with some sort of a cliff here;)
Date: 02 May 2015 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 139
Uugh!! TWCS is still not sending me updates.
oh no, hope no one gets hurt this time.
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2015 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 139
I hope nobody else has been hurt
Date: 02 May 2015 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 139
Aww shit this is really gonna hurt Bella if Edward gets hurt
Date: 02 May 2015 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 139
Welcome back! Good chapter. Time to getthese two back together again.
Date: 02 May 2015 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 139
Alice better be ok Missy!!!!
Date: 02 May 2015 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 139
No dont let Alice be hurt please
Date: 02 May 2015 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 139
I hope it wasn't Alice's home.
Date: 02 May 2015 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 139
Oh for crispy crackers sakes!!! I am dying here!!!! Who is it now!?!
Date: 02 May 2015 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 139
Thanks for giving us Edward's POV. You left us hanging. Please don't let it be Alice. Please don't let anything happen to her. It is going to be torture till your next update.
Date: 02 May 2015 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 139
What!!??!! Oh no, who now, please please post soon.
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2015 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 139
Oh snap who is it and will they be OK update fast please
Date: 01 May 2015 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 137
Thanks for what you can give us and we are sending all the prayers that we can and hope your mom gets better. Love and lots of prayers you way.
Date: 01 May 2015 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 138
Loved the chapter. Praying for you and your mom.
Date: 30 Apr 2015 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 138
Prayers to your mom.
I am really enjoying this story! I love that Edward is there for Peter. :)
Date: 30 Apr 2015 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 138
I hope your mom feels better!!
Date: 30 Apr 2015 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 138
My heart is with you and your mom it is so hard to see the ones we love not doing well take care of yourself we will be here and the ones that are not are not worth your worry.
I cant wait for Bella to come home to Edward.
Date: 30 Apr 2015 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 138
Great chapter. Can't wait for Edward to hear the good news but most importantly, take care of yourself.
Prayers for your mom!
Date: 30 Apr 2015 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 138
good chapter
hope your mom and you are doing better
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2015 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 138
My thoughts and prayers are with you. Loved the chapter.
Date: 30 Apr 2015 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 138
Hang in there! We're still with ya!
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2015 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 138
: ) READ YOU SOON!
Date: 30 Apr 2015 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 138
Most definitely! Prayers for you
Date: 30 Apr 2015 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 138
I am still praying for you and your mom.
Glad Edward got some sort of rest. Glad Peter is gettingout of the hospital.
Date: 30 Apr 2015 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 138
Glad that he got some time off and Peter is ok.
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2015 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 138
Poor Peter but he is in good hands now Edward is in need of some deep sleep
Date: 30 Apr 2015 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 138
I'm sorry about your mom. Please don't worry about updates while this is happening. Your real fans won't mind at all...
Date: 30 Apr 2015 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 138
Can't wait for these two to be reunited again!
Date: 30 Apr 2015 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 138
Prayers your way!
I hope you mom gets better.
Date: 29 Apr 2015 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 137
My prayers and thoughts are with you, your mom, and your family. I hope that she starts feeling better soon. While I am glad to be able to add you and your mom to my prayers, it's awful that a couple of selfish people made you feel you needed to explain about your mom. I have been a fan of yours for years starting on Twilighted and will be here when you have the time and your muse to continue writing. I'm not a writer, but I guarantee you that if my mom was sick I wouldn't be able to focus on much of anything except for her. Your focus should be on your mom and your family right now. Prayers and lots of hugs in spirit are being sent your way!
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2015 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 137
I'm sorry to hear about your mother's illness and pray for a recovery with renewed strength for the entire family.
NO ONE, and I mean NO ONE has the right to make you feel pressured into reveal anything about your personal life that makes you apprehensive! We, your true fans will stick by you adjusting to what ever time line you are able to keep. Take all the time you need for your family and yourself.
Date: 26 Apr 2015 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 137
Prayers are sent your way, write when you can we faithful readers will understand.
Date: 26 Apr 2015 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 137
My prayers are with you and your family.
GracefulMom
Date: 26 Apr 2015 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 137
Yea long ass shifts such. Glad Ali is there with b.
Date: 26 Apr 2015 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 137
Continueing to pray for your Mom and you take care of your Mom she is more inportant then the story it will still be there when you can write.
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2015 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 137
Great chapter.
No explanation needed, you write voluntarily and without payment therefore you have no obligation whatsoever. Make the most of your time with your mom, you can't have this time again, I speak from experience. My thoughts are with you.
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2015 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 137
You have ALL my family's prayers! Hang in there FAMILY comes first - Xanath
Date: 26 Apr 2015 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 137
I'm sorry to hear about your mom. I hope all will go well
Date: 26 Apr 2015 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 137
All my thoughts and prayers are with you and your family at this time. Take care.
Date: 26 Apr 2015 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 137
Prayers for your mom.
I love this story! It so fantastic! I can feel that something really, really bad is coming. I am excited for more but I will definitely be patient for you. :)
Date: 26 Apr 2015 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 137
so sorry to hear about your mother. my prayers are coming your way. Hold on to her mom's are so special and we need them for as long as we can keep them. you story is still so fun for me to read while watching the shows they are made after. Loving this idea alot. stay strong
Date: 26 Apr 2015 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 137
I'm so sorry to hear about RL and your mom. There is def power in prayer... My thoughts and prayers to you and your family.
Of course I love seeing any update from your fics may give you a reprieve from the RL since you need to make sure you still take care of yourself in order to help with your mom.
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2015 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 137
AWW IM SORRY ABT YOUR MOM HOPE SHE GETS BETTER.. MY PRAYERS ARE WITH YOU.
Date: 26 Apr 2015 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 137
Family first!!! I'll keep you and your in my prayers. Peace.
Date: 26 Apr 2015 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 137
Loved it can't wait for more 😇
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2015 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 137
Thank goodness he has Alice. Sorry to hear about your mom, sending prayers your way.
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2015 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 137
So sorry to hear about your mom. She is in my thoughts and prayers
Date: 26 Apr 2015 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 137
Prayers for your mothers health and your strength!
Date: 26 Apr 2015 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 137
positive thoughts for you and your mom
Date: 26 Apr 2015 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 137
I'm not big on reviewing, but I wanted you to know that even if it took you another year to update this story again I would be right there. Just remember to take some time to yourself to decompress the stress. Keeping yourself healthy will help keep you sane and stress free. Don't feel bad about wanting to remove yourself from life for a while, we all need that, so do it for fifteen minutes once a day.
Date: 26 Apr 2015 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 137
So sorry about your mother. Be strong for her. If writing is your therapy, perhaps that can be your new muse. Take care.
Date: 26 Apr 2015 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 137
First off, I am sorry about your mother. I hope she gets better. Enjoy your time with her. I have been given ad news about my mother too. It is hard. I have already lost my dad, over 30 years ago, I was not only 14 then. You and your mother are in my prayers.
I am loving your story. I worry about Edward and the guys not getting enough rest. Hope nothing stupid happens o any of them.
Date: 26 Apr 2015 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 137
This whole situation sucks for everyone involved. Hopefully they will use it make themselves stronger instead of tearing them apart.
I hope your mom recovers soon.
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2015 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 137
First you and your mom are in my prayers and second poor Edward life is really ruff for him right now will things start to look up for him
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2015 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 137
My prayers go out to you first and foremost because it is always harder on us the care givers. May god keep your mom in his tender care and grant you more time with her. I'll miss your updates but totally understand the need for family time. Smile : ) it will be ok. READ YOU SOON.
Date: 26 Apr 2015 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 137
My prayers are with you and your family. I truly can relate with you. Hugs!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2015 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 137
Sending up prayers for your family. Take care of yourself and your mom and don't worry about posting. We will be here waiting when you get back.
Date: 25 Apr 2015 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 137
I'm sorry that RL is a bitch to you and your family. But more I feel the need to apologize for people not understanding that you're spending a lot of your private time to entertain us all for nothing more than a few kind words as a thank you!
I wish all the best to you and your mum, take the time away that you need to take care of her and forget the ungrateful air heads;)
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2015 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 137
I'm not one to write reviews and I'm sorry for that. I love your writing and this story and follow it advidly. I want you to know I'm sending prayers your way. I have dealt with a parent who was very ill (I was 25 at the time) while it isn't ever the same for 2 people it kind of puts you in a club no one wants to be a part of :-(. If you want to vent about the emotional exhaustion, the pain, the fear, or the sadness I am willing to hear you out and let you know you aren't alone. It really sucks. There's nothing anyone can say or do. But I do hope and pray your mom gets better and while sick can find peace and comfort at the very least. Sincerely - Lauren
Date: 25 Apr 2015 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 137
Please take your time with your mama. She needs you. Life is too short to worry about FF.
Prayers being sent and we will be here for you when you need us.
Thank you for sharing your gift with us.
Take care. See you when we can. {{{{HUGS}}}}
Date: 25 Apr 2015 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 136
So sad he feels so lost and helpless
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2015 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 136
They need to be together - they are stronger together
Date: 25 Apr 2015 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 136
Please let alice be okay!!!
Date: 25 Apr 2015 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 136
Glad Charlie called them. Poor E all freakin out
Date: 25 Apr 2015 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 136
I don't blame Edward for missing Bella. But I would be a little pissed at her to for notletting him know that she was ok ans that James or Renee had not gotten to her.
Date: 25 Apr 2015 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 136
Loved it can't wait for more 😉
Date: 25 Apr 2015 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 136
Oh, that was so sad...
I was hoping that Renee was one of the dead in the car. Does that make me awful??
Looking forward to more an thank you for the update :D
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2015 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 136
Poor Edward that had to be so scary for him
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2015 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 136
I hope Renee gets apprehended soon!
The fact that James is still out there somewhere unknown is very unsettling.
What happened to Alice and the faulty alarms?
Date: 23 Apr 2015 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 135
Hope B doesn't lose the baby. Ack for Alice leaving. Hope she thinks to take someone with her.
Date: 21 Apr 2015 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 135
I understand Bella is scared but she is leaning on everyone but Edward and I don't think that is healthy for their relationship. She really needs to work on her communication skills. I know it is influenced by her past bad experiences but automatically assuming that Edward would yell at her is not giving Edward enough credit.
Date: 21 Apr 2015 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 135
Glad she is pregnant. But scared what James will do. Edward is going to be over the moon happy. Hope Alice is ok.
Date: 20 Apr 2015 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 135
NONONONONO not Alice!!! Please post soon.
Date: 20 Apr 2015 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 135
I would watch Look Who's Talking all the time when I was pregnant with my son 😃😃
Date: 20 Apr 2015 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 135
Please not Alice too. Let them finally catch James and Renee. They need to be the ones who die in a fire.
Date: 20 Apr 2015 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 135
Loved it can't wait for more 😉
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2015 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 135
Well, that just solidified my concern that Alice was next on the list. I hope she took someone with her to the shop or call for a backup employee to assist her in this weird security breech at the store.
Dr. Popper seems like a very nice doctor and unfortunately she is now associated with Bella and a future target for James and Renee.
Date: 20 Apr 2015 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 135
OMG! SO FANTASTIC!! :)
Date: 20 Apr 2015 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 135
Bella needs to be extra careful . Edward will be so happy about the baby.
Date: 20 Apr 2015 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 135
Don't let anything happen to Alice. So excited for Edward to find out he is going to be a dad
Date: 20 Apr 2015 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 135
Hopefully nothing will happen to Alice. Hope Bella tells Edward soon.
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2015 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 135
I loved it yes Bella is pregnant but oh no is Alice going to be ok
Date: 20 Apr 2015 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 135
I'm so excited Bella's pregnant! I'm terrified for her though! Can't wait to see Edward's reaction. I'll be sitting on pins and needles for the next chapter!
Date: 19 Apr 2015 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 134
Please post soon, this is a fabulous story. Love it.