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Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2015 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 134

Oh wow, that was amazing!  I cannot wait for the next one!

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2015 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 134

Please let baby be fine!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2015 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 134

I am worried about what James is going to do when he finds out that Bella is pregnant with Edward's baby. 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2015 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 134

hope nothing bad happens that affects her pregnancy

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2015 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 134

Glad Alice is with her.  

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2015 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 134

If Bella has been feeling off since New Years, it was probably around Christmas that they conceived.
Someone is going to find out about the wedding and pregnancy. Could that be Renee?
Hope Peter is recovering well and Charlotte is a good source of that healing.
Edward will be a walking zombie as well until Bella is home in her bed once agian.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2015 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 134

Can't wait! :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2015 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 134

loving this

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2015 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 134

Loved it can't wait for more 😊

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2015 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 134

Poor Bella I'd stressing out... but I think even these known irrational thoughts are normal with her history.and she knows he wouldn't do that already,  which is very good

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2015 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 134

Oh crap. I wish there was no more drama   I'm so afraid that James or Renee will get ahold of Bella bean or Edward. She doesn't need to be stressed any more since she is carrying her miracle baby!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2015 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 134

Agh! Can't wait! 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2015 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 134

Im so excited that she is pregers but I am so afraid for her.  Edward will be so happy about the baby he just wants her to be safe and happy.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2015 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 134

I know he'll be happy with her pregnancy!  She needs some serious help in getting through all her fears about everything!  She needs to toughen up....

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2015 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 134

Hopefully Edward will be able to free Bella of her concerns that he would evr take her child away from her! But I think she rather needs professional support for this... And hopefully her baby will remain unharmed, otherwise I'm not sure what will happen to Bella's sanity...

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2015 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 134

OH mercy!!  Poor Bella, I dont see Edward being anything but extactic!!:D

 

Looking forward to more :D

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2015 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 134

Wow  I hope all is well with the baby and that nothing happens to her or the baby 

Reviewer: GabrielsStarr Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2015 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 134

Oh please update soon!!!! I can't wait to see what you have planned next.   -gives two thumbs up- 

Reviewer: twilightgirl1690 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2015 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 133

love it will she be pregnant or wont she that is the question update soon xxxx

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2015 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 133

I think she is - or alice would not have thrown the result at her. Probably Edward will put her in a bunker so that nothing can happen to her ;-) Hopefully Bella can gain back her strength for her baby and share the good news with Edward soon!

Reviewer: Angelfairy25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2015 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: hughug Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2015 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 133

she is

Reviewer: mass88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2015 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 133

She is! She is!  I just know it!!!!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2015 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 133

She probably is. Everyone knows that Edward has super sperm.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2015 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 133

If she's arching her brows at the results, I'd say yes. She's pregnant!
Sleeping for two days.......iron deficient, not to mention dehydrated due to throwing up.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2015 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 133

Yes she is please

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2015 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 133

I loved it I hope she is

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2015 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 133

OMFNG!!! I am freaking out! How could you do this to us?! I need to know!! Please! :)=)LOVE THIS!

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2015 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 133

Noooo! You can't stop there.....

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2015 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 133

No offense Bella but you are acting like you are five. After all this, now you decide to hide out? But I understand everyone reaches their breaking point. I am just glad that Charlie called in reinforcements. Go Alice! And my vote is that Bella is pregnant because Alice is acting too smug. Besides, it will help prove that James can't win, no matter what he tries to do.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2015 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 133

thinking yes??

 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2015 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 133

wow asleep for two days.  Lucky she didn't pee herself.  lol   Glad Alice came to knock some sense into her.

Reviewer: Cmmoore4643 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2015 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 133

Come on! I think she is! Hopefully it will bring Bella out of her funk!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2015 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 133

yeah, she must be. that would explain a lot...

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2015 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 133

OMG really! You had to stop it right here didn't cha?

 

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2015 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 133

She is!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2015 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 133

Oh I hope she is. It will give her more to fight for. 

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2015 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 133

Omg!! I just know she is!! I hope she is!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2015 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 133

Even if the situation at home is anything but safe at home I hope its positive; )

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2015 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 133

:)

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2015 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 133

Of course she is

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2015 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 132

Charlie better call Edward. He is probably going crazy and is nearly bald with worry. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2015 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 132

I'm glad she went to Charlie's. I was afraid that she would go try to find James or Renee. 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2015 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 132

I hope Charlie calls Edward to let him know where Bella is and that she is experiencing panic attacks as well as night mares.

Reviewer: AdminKelly Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2015 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 132

Glad her dad is getting her to rest.   How he calls E.   He'll be freaking out I'm sure 

Reviewer: AdminKelly Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2015 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 131

Oh b.   Hope Charlie calls E

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2015 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 132

Oh wow, that was amazing!  Poor Bella!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2015 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 132

good

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2015 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 132

; )

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2015 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 132

Poor Bella this is breaking her down will she be ok

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2015 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 132

I love this story! I can't wait for more!! I am so sad that she is so far away from Edward! :(

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2015 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 132

So, so sad. If I was in her shoes I'd do the same to protect the ones I love.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2015 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 132

poor Bella

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2015 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 131

I'm glad she went to Charlie. That really is one of the safest places for her. And while Edward will be upset that she ran in the long run I think it will help him with working with the police to find James. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2015 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 131

I am so mad at Bella right now.  How can she be so cruel to Edward?  Did she think he would not notice her not coming home? He isn't going to forget her. She should cling to Edward,  not run away and break his heart.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2015 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 131

I was beginning to wonder when Charlie would become a more intricate part of the equation.
As paniced as Edward will be at Bella's disappearance, he will figure out where she is rather quickly. The next question will be whether or not he will feel like she ran away from him.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2015 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 131

She went to her father instead of Edward??? 

Edward is going to be crushed!!!!!!!!!

 

oh wow....

 

Looking forward to more :D

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2015 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 131

Oh shit what next? Please post soon

 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2015 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 131

She is in so much pain she needs her dad but Edward is going to freak out when she is not home

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2015 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 131

I had a feeling she wouldn't go home to Edward... But I'm very relieved that she went to Charlie and not in the Lions den like I feared she would;

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2015 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 131

Oh wow she went to her dad will Edward freak out and what will her dad do 

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2015 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 131

I definitely did not expect this, but I think it's a wise decision to get away and clear the head of all the things that are bothering her...It is good that Bella did not decide to just leave everyone behind but talk to her dad first. Of course she should let Edward know where she is, but she will need some time to sort her mind out and to calm down. I don't think that James will stop even if she leaves, so it won't make it better at all! I hope that Charlie can calm her down and let her come to her senses. He will help her with his calm spirits and then try to strengthen her optimism :)

See you yoon!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2015 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 131

good

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2015 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 131

Oh wow...

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2015 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 131

I was waiting for Charlie to return. Now, let's kick some ass!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2015 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 131

I am just glad that she did not go and try to find James and Renee, so they would quit hurting her family and friends. I hope she will let Edward know where she is cause he will go crazy if he does not know. 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2015 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 131

Yes, I knew she was gonna run! :( I am so very sad for her and upset with her. Poor Edward is going to lose his mind!!! :)=)

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2015 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 131

I understand Bella's desire to protect her friends and Edward but running away isnt going to solve anything. I can only imagine what edward is going through once he realizes she has not come back to Chicago. I think they are stronger together than they are apart.

But at least Bella went to someone she knows will take care of her.

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2015 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 131

; )

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2015 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 131

Loved it can't wait for more a86;a039;

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2015 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 131

I'm positive after a slow has a good cry with her father, he will help get her back on track. Laye needs to take that pain and sadness and turn it into anger. She needs to get angry and fight for her and Edward and her friends. She's stronger than she realizes and needs to find her inner strength and help bring James and Renee down!!!  What's edward going to think when she doesn't show up at home?  

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2015 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 131

Oh my...what is she going to!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2015 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 131

:)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2015 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 130

Loved it can't wait for more 😀

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2015 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 130

; )

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2015 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 130

I'm now concerned that Bella will attempt to see her mother while in Florida. How close in proximity are they?

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2015 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 130

Bella needs to get pissed off and ready to fight back! 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2015 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 130

Oh boy well Bella is OK for now but why did she hang up on Edward hmmmm

 

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2015 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 130

Please let her be stronger than we think she is!  They need to get james and Renee soon!!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2015 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 130

hopefully she'll be extra careful

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2015 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 130

Poor Bella

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2015 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 130

I think for sure she will pull back.  But, I wonder if her mother is in Florida and is blackmailing her.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2015 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 130

I am sure that will be Bellas instinct but hopefully she has enough resources to take care of herself. She should know by now that she is not alone. I also worry about her being in Florida.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2015 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 130

Glad B is ok. Aww for flirty Peter.   Wonder if B saw her mom or something which  made her get off.

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2015 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 130

More, more, more please post soon!!!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2015 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 130

This is not looking too good right now, but im glad she called him back...

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2015 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 130

ahh... poor Bella! 

Peter has met his match!! LOL

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2015 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 130

OMG!!! She'd better get her ass back to Chicago!! I can't wait to find out what happens next! :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2015 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 130

:) :)

Reviewer: sassy973 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2015 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 130

Loved it update soon.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2015 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 130

I hope she doesn't try to contact James or Renee.  That would be awful. 

Reviewer: GabrielsStarr Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2015 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 129

Oh please update soon!  That cliffie is not fair!!!!! 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2015 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 129

OMG!!!

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2015 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 129

; )

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2015 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 129

Oh no. Where is Renee!!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2015 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 129

I hope her battery just died...

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2015 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 129

Oh no!!!  I hope Renee doesn't have her or one of James' associates!  

Poor Peter. Hope he has a speedy recovery!  Can't wait for next chapter. That was really evil...  😊

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2015 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 129

I'm concerned that this was a two pronged attack. Carried in separate locations to keep everyone off of their main objective; getting to Bella while she is away on business.
I'm glad Peter survived with minimal burns to his body.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2015 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 129

Please dont let Renee have her. Poor Peter he put up one hell of a fight

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2015 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 129

I hope Bella's not in danger, but you never know...! I hope that they can find James soon!

Honestly I was a bit irritated why you informed us about the climax of the story and repeatedly added that it will be a happy ending - it kind of takes the thrill a bit out of it, unfortunately.
Nevertheless, I'm going to read the story till its end, but know that we approximately know when the big blow will come, it is kind of too much knowledge in advance...

See you next time!

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