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Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2015 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 165

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2015 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 165

That was so cute I remember the smiles and then the blow outs lol

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2015 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 165

good

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2015 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 165

Loved this chapter! 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2015 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 165

Aw, she's home!  And she weighs the same as I did when I was born (5 pounds 7 ounces)!  Love their first interaction at home.  HILARIOUS!  Cannot wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2015 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 165

loved it! cant wait to read more.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2015 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 165

Yey for getting to go home

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2015 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 164

I was afraid of the hysterectomy stuff.  Glad Baby is out and seems to be ok.

Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2015 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 165

: ) READ YOU SOON ♥

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2015 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 164

Oh wow.  I'm so glad Marie is okay, and so is Bella.  My mom worked in a NICU for 18 years as a Respiratory Therapist.  I cannot wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: ELMOZ WIFE Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2015 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

She was born on my b day! !!!!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2015 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 164

I'm glad they will both survive!  I'm not sure about myself, though, with all this angst!

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2015 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 164

I knew she'd be fine! ;) I love these guys so much!! :)
My nephew was born at 26 weeks. He was 1 lb 13 oz. He spent 4 months in NICU. He is now 9. Happy and healthy! :)=)

Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2015 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 164

Read this pretty much straight thru. Love your work. Gonna check if there are any more of your stories I haven't read yet.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2015 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 164

Oh thank goodness mama and baby girl or doing well and on the mend poor Edward must have been going out of his mind 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2015 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 164

good

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2015 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 164

I dont want it to end :(  I am so sad for them but so happy to Marie is a miracal so blessed

Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2015 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 164

: )   READ YOU SOON ♥

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2015 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 164

awww, great chapter cant wait to read more!!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2015 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 164

:)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2015 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 164

Amazing... was August 2nd your mom birthday??

 

Loving this :D



Author's Response:

No, it's not. Her birthday is December 27th. It was too late to change the conception date in the story when my mom passed. However, she could have been CONCEIVED on Dec. 27th? Thanks for reading! 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2015 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 164

So happy and sad at the same time. 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2015 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 164

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2015 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 164

So glad that  little  Marie is ok  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2015 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 163

Loved the shower.  Hopefully the drugs have done their job and little Maries will be ok.

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2015 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 163

Love this story!!! i waited until now to read because drabble fic bother me because there short chapters, so i waited until there was a lot to read. lol. your storys are great ive read each and everyone of them.... cant wait to read more.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2015 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 163

I absolutely love this story! No worries Bella Marie is going to be just fine! ;)

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2015 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 163

I'm surprised that edward didn't do the hospital wedding or someting since everthing has happend to them so far.  I kinda figured that he would say something like time is too short and he wanted to be married before the baby come... anyway, I loved it and can not wati to see the beautiful ending.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2015 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 163

good

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2015 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 163

Is Bella 36 weeks?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2015 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 163

:)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2015 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 163

Awww.. sweet shower, loved the pic's.

 

Marie is on her way :D

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2015 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 163

Shower was so cute that Maria wants her stuff.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2015 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 163

Oh I loved it how sweet that was and boy Oh boy her comes the baby

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2015 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 163

Most of the time early babies are healthy babies! Fingers crossed! 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2015 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 163

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: AdminKelly Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2015 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 163

aww what a wonderufl present from Em.  nice that Alice put it all together.

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2015 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 162

Yes please, update daily

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2015 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 161

Its about time

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2015 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 162

OMGosh!  I hope the baby will be ok.  So glad  that Ja message can not hurt them any more. 

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2015 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 162

Love this story.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2015 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 162

Oh I loved it thank goodness they are OK now it's almost baby time

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2015 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 162

:)

Reviewer: landaday1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2015 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 162

bedrest , Yuck, I remember it!

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2015 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 162

So I was correct with bith of my guesses ;-) I hope that Marie is healthy and that she and Bella will go through delivery safely! I am relieved that Edward has not taken any serious damage from this attack and that he will be able to care for his girls...but he has to care for himself as well!

Not let's see how the baby shower goes and how Bella is doing...!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2015 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 162

I hope baby does not come to soon

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2015 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 162

How far into the pregnancy is Bella?
What other complication will Bella experience?

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2015 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 162

Oh my goodness!  I am so happy James is gone for good!  I just pray that baby Marie is going to be all right, as well as her Mommy and Daddy!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2015 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 162

good

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2015 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 162

I am so glad that James got what he deserved. I believe she will have a healthy baby and Edward will be fine. At least I hope. Thanks for this story.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2015 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 162

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: AdminKelly Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2015 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 162

Glad they forced them both to the hospital  Hope Marie can stay put for a little longer.

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2015 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 162

Yes can't wait to read more!  They need a break!  Too much is ending to them, they need to be married already!! Poor Edward needs to be  strong healthy again

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2015 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 161

I can't believe Bella was such a wimp. She should have shot him right away. Charlie will be disappointed that she hesitated and Edward had to finish up. They could have also died because of her weakness. Where was her momma bear instinct? 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2015 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 161

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2015 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 161

I hope they cleared the concussion area of the blast safely.
At least now they know James and his minions are gone for good.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2015 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 161

Holy snap that was crazy and the girl karma is an evil bitch now are they truly free

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2015 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 161

Halleluja indeed;)

Reviewer: Daydreamer40 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2015 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 161

Hallelujah! Sheila should have been bitch smacked before she went though! Glad my fav couple are fine

Reviewer: Daydreamer40 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2015 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 160

Oh my goodness! Not Edward! I hope Bella shoots him...really! See you soon

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2015 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 161

Thank God that SOB is gone!!!  My thought is Bella will go into preterm labor!  Hopefully they will save Bella and Marie!  I hope that help gets to the quickly!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2015 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 161

Kind of  good and let down at the same time. I really wanted Bella to be able to shoot James.  Sucked that he got to go on his terms and hi so he probably didn't suffer.  Too bad about Shelia, I'm sure she was another of James victims.

 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2015 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 161

good

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2015 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 161

Amen, 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2015 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 161

Thank goodness! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2015 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 161

So glad that both Bella and Edward got to have a shot at James. So glad he is dead. I can not believe that Bella's assistant  helped James. Thanks for updating today and not leaving us hanging for to long. Hope Bella and the baby  are ok.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2015 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 161

:) 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2015 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 161

HOLY SHIT! WOW!! That was awesome! I hope that Bella, Edward and the baby are all going to be alright!! I am so freaking happy James is dead! Does that make me a horrible person? Nah! ;) I am so excited for the next chapter!!! :)

Reviewer: landaday1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2015 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 161

H--l Yes!!   She can stop being paranoid now!!!!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2015 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 161

OH MY GOSH!!!!!  No other words.

Reviewer: trixielou Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2015 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 161

Thank God!!!! It's about time. They need healing, happiness and a wonderful bundle of joy with no looking over their sholder. 

 

Can't wait to see where their happiness leads.

Thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2015 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 161

%%**%%%**  (closest I could come to music notes)

HALLELUJAH!! HALLELUJAH!!

HHHAAAALLLLLEEEEEELLLLUUUUUUJJJJJJJAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2015 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 161

Wow he got to Shiela too.   Jeez Louise.  So many people that arsehole managed to trick.   Glad he's finally dead.  I'm afraid B's going to go into premature labor though.

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2015 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 161

HALLELUJAH! It's finally over... I suppose Bella will get bedrest for the reminder of the pregnancy, or she will deliver now...but whatever happens, James is gone and cant do any more harm and Bella and Edward finally get their happy ending! :)

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2015 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 160

You are evilness personified!!!!  ACK    Ugh how did the SOB get in if Peter locked the door????

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2015 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 160

What happened to Peter? I hope he is okay.
It's now or never Bella. Use the gun daddy gave you. But how does she distract James enough to remove it from her desk? Maybe he will be preoccupied with Edward on the floor so she can get her gun and shoot him. It will would be the best closure for her if she were the one to take James out.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2015 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 160

Please tell me Bella is going to kill James PLEASE

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2015 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 160

OMGosh!  What the hell? James had a key to Bella's business??? I  so glad that you  can  updating  tomorrow. Please do not leAve us hanging to long. 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2015 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 160

thinking charlie's gift is going to come to good use . . . hopefully

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2015 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 160

OMG, James is like the one who is the zombie that never dies.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2015 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 160

I, for one, will be very glad to see James finally go. Please let this be the last of him and please let him do them no more harm...

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2015 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 160

Nice... where the hell is Bellas gun???  I hope she shoots him in the balls!

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2015 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 160

OMFNG!!! OMG!!! OMG!!! I hope Bella can reach that gun!!! OMG!!

Reviewer: landaday1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2015 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 160

Please I can't wait that long!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2015 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 160

Let's hope she can get to her gun 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2015 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 159

Family members have a way of being a bit more calloused about each others feelings. It's sad but inevitable that we hurt the ones we love most by thinking we can act any way or say anything and they will just get over it. We tend to be nicer to friends.
That is no excuse though. Edward needs to step up and push for his healing in all areas; heart, mind and body.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2015 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 159

good

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2015 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 159

Edward is getting himself under control he is human he is allowed to be an ass

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2015 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 159

Edward has his feelings on his shirt sleeve. 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2015 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 159

It's a learning experience for everyone update soon 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2015 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 159

Edward was a jerk but man Esme's comment was so insensitive!! I am glad that the cookies did their job! ;)

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2015 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 159

Can understand Edwards frustrations but his dad is right.  Glad they are all supporting his med school stuff.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2015 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 159

:) 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2015 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 158

II feel so bad for Edward.  He is usually the strong one. The hero. I still think he should try physician assistant.  It takes less school, but he can still help people. He needs to feel useful. 

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2015 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 158

Very, very soon sounds good, but does put my stomach in knots at the same time

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2015 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 158

Such an emotional rollercoaster ride these two have been on.
Edward back in school will give him something other than their struggles to think about.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2015 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 158

OMG! I love this story! I can't wait to find out what happens to James!! :)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2015 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 158

At least  Edward and Bella are talking and being  truthful about their feelings.  I was wondering if we might get James's POV about what  he has been going through and what he thinks of  Bella's  pregnancy. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2015 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 158

:)

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2015 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 158

It's good that they talk about it and not hold it in now when will James strike again 

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