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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2015 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 158

They are both putting the Blame where it belongs on james

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2015 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 158

good

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2015 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 158

That was amazing!  I'm glad it will be over soon...can't wait to see how soon it is!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2015 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 157

That was amazing!  The nursery is just gorgeous!  Purple is my favorite color, so I love it!

Reviewer: AdminKelly Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2015 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 158

you are killing me with the wait.  Not sure how much more B&E can take.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2015 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 158

Poor Edward... James need to die! Soon!!

 

Looking forward to more :D

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2015 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 157

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2015 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 157

James has a way of getting to anyone he wants. I don't think Jacob, Peter and Leah will be much of a deterrent.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2015 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 157

Loved the pic of the nursery..

Cant wait to someone knocks off James.

I hope it Charlie!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2015 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 157

So sad can't even give his love a little lovin without a set back. I love how there friends are taking care of them. I'm with Edward will be happy when James is on a slab

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2015 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 156

That is one way to sleep sound lol. Bella can't get a way from thinking about James. Edward takes very good care of her

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2015 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 157

I am glad that Edward has a good friend like Emmett.  I am still on pins and needles waiting for James to show up.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2015 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 157

I love this story and the characters. Let's see...James chases after Bella. They run across a busy street. James is hit by a Mack truck! It's a sad ending for James? Hmmm...sounds like a great story to me! lol :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2015 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 157

:)

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2015 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 157

I loved it how sweet the baby's room sounds and poor Edward but he will heal in time update soon 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2015 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 157

good

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2015 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 157

Em def has no reason to feel guilty.  Rose made her bed.   Sucks that E had a setback.   Can't wait till James is in the morgue too.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2015 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 156

Sweet shooter.  Go Edward!!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2015 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 156

good

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2015 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 156

:)

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2015 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 156

I loved it wow Edward really knows how to love his girl yummy 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2015 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 156

OH MY GOSH!!  I made the "mistake" of looking at the pictures before reading the chapter...I almost got too hot and bothered to read the chapter ;)  I loved this.  Cannot wait for more.  I really hope James will rear his ugly head soon...just so we can be rid of him!

Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2015 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 156

(he he he) How do you blow out ELECTRIC  CANDLES???    READ YOU SOON ♥   : )



Author's Response:

You click them off *snorts*

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2015 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 156

Nice lemon!!  C'mon lets find and kill James, already!!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2015 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 156

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2015 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 156

James must be staking out their home or has someone reporting to him. But is aiding him in thus sick twisted game? Maybe Edward's ex-girlfriend is somehow feeding James information?
Edward knows how to satisfy his woman! ;)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2015 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 156

Love this  citrus lemony chapter.  I am sitting on pins and needles when I read the updates on this story waiting on James to pop up. At least now I know that the baby would the be hurt. Can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2015 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 156

yummy home time.   Poor B with the dreams though

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2015 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 156

Poor B/E they can not even have sexy times without James interfering!!

 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2015 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 155

Hot hot hot !

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2015 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 155

James is just waiting for the perfect opportunity to find Bella alone. I hope that never happens during her pregnancy.
At least E&B have found a way to physically connect once again.
Alice is very perceptive.

Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2015 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 155

You naughty meanie (lol) READ YOU SOON ♥   : )

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2015 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 155

:)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2015 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 155

good

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2015 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 155

GAH!!!!!  I know that once he's medically cleared for everything...it's going to be H-O-T!!!

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2015 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 155

WOW!! ;)

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2015 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 155

yummy...

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2015 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 155

Holly Shit that was hot

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2015 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 155

Hot damn that was YUMMY 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2015 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 155

She really needs to telll someone about her creepy feelings.    Yummy times

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2015 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 154

I CAN'T WAIT!! I love this! :)

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2015 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 154

I hope Bella tells someone that the group was being watched as they left the shopping complex.
Leah was entertaining.

Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2015 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 154

: )   Poor Bella that has to be an awful feeling.  READ YOU SOON ♥

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2015 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 154

So glad they found the dress 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2015 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 154

Glad they finally decided on a dress. Edward is going to be upet when he finds out that the men we're not with Bella. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2015 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 154

:) 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2015 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 154

Glad she is getting to pick out her dress and not something pushed on her from others.  Ugh James needs to get run over by a bus or something

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2015 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 154

Shit, shit, shit, please post soon

 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2015 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 154

good

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2015 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 154

That was amazing!  Bella's dress is GORGEOUS!  I love it :)

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2015 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 154

Oh what a fun day now they have a dress style but when will James strike again 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2015 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 153

That was amazing!  Glad to hear that there will be some citrusy goodness in the next chapter.  I have missed it, but I am glad they have waited until Edward was healed (at least somewhat).  Cannot wait for more :)

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2015 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 153

Carlisle and Charlie should make this a very interesting shopping trip! I hope they can provide some levity and male insight.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2015 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 153

I love this! I wonder how the shopping is going to go! ;)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2015 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 153

They are so sweet love them

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2015 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 153

:)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2015 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 153

=)

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2015 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 153

Lol for Alice.  Yey wedding coming!!!!

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2015 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 153

Hehehe hehehe I loved it 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2015 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 153

I feel for Edward and Bella. They both are so horny.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2015 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 153

This a sweet chapter

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2015 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 152

Their life is slowly coming back together.

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2015 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 152

; )

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2015 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 152

I loved it so sweet and happy 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2015 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 152

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2015 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 152

I lost my mom 4 weeks  ago tomorrow  so I truly  know your pain.  I was told to write a journal but I can't  convince  myself  to do it. I have so much anger and pain.  She was my best friend ,  my guidance  counselor  and my heart.  I know I will never be the same.  My thoughts  and  prayers  are  with  you . 



Author's Response:

Speaking from experience, the journal works. I still feel like I'm able to carry on a conversation with her even though she's gone. I write quotes, show her pictures and just vent. My prayers are with you and I'm so sorry for the loss of your mother. I know I will never be the same either, but I am taking some solace that I have a guardian angel on my shoulder who loves me. My mom is never far away. Neither is yours. 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2015 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 152

I think you should put her words to pen and paper. All the idioms she would say and the snippets of wisdom she would pass on to her family during casual conversations. These can be interspersed with your memories and feelings of loss. It could be something you pass on to future generations. Her legacy through memories.

Will Edward become a silent partner in Clearwater's? What will his next investment be?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2015 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 151

I think the name choice is perfect! An homage to your mother's legacy.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2015 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 152

WOnderful chapter as always.  Nice way to break the baby gender news too.  Aww love the new Clear Waters idea.   he could also teach other paramedics and such too

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2015 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 152

This is so fantastic! I really like the BBQ! :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2015 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 152

such a happy time but I am freaking out about where the hell is James??????

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2015 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 152

Writing a journal  is a good idea. 

I am  glad they have had a good time. I am worried, waiting on the bad to happen. When is James going to show up?  I hope he does not hurt Bella or the baby. 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2015 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 152

I loved this chapter... they needed some smiles.

 

I am glad you are naming this baby after your mom.. What a incrediable memorial for your mom.

Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2015 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 152

: ) READ YOU SOON ♥

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2015 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 152

good

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2015 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 152

:) :) 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 151

Glad the kiddos are doing better.  The name is nice too.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 151

Loved the chapter.  James needs to get hit by a bus!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 151

That was amazing!  I really loved the gender choice!  It's perfect!  I really hope that James will either be caught soon, or recognized, and murdered.  Cannot wait for more!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 151

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 151

I love this! I think it is more wishful thinking on my part but I am thinking he got out but while hiding out in a ditch or abandoned building he bled out....too much! ;)I can't wait to read more! :)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2015 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 151

Love the name.  James has to have someone else helping him, but  who? Can't wait for the next update. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2015 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 151

I love baby girls :)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2015 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 151

=)

Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2015 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 151

: )   : )   : )   : )   READ YOU SOON ♥

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2015 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 151

I loved it so sweet and bitter sweet 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2015 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 151

:) 

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2015 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 151

I'm hoping James is found dead in an alley

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2015 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 150

It's a girl,  yeah.  There are so many health care fields.  He doesn't have to spend so many years to be a doctor.  It is hard enough when you are young and single. He could be a physician assistant,  which requires less time or a therapist.  There's many types. He is going to want to spend time with his new wife and baby. 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2015 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 150

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: Daydreamer40 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2015 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 150

So great! I really want Bella to be the one to kick James' ass.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2015 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 150

Great name for baby Cullen.

Reviewer: story addict Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2015 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 150

The name seems fitting :-)

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2015 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 150

Squee! Love it! 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2015 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 150

The baby's name is perfect!
We need to know where James is and what he is doing!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2015 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 149

How did you find out that James acquired Necrotizing Fasciitis from the scissors Edward used as a weapon? Edward shouldn't have had a contaminated scissors on his person while on duty!

Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2015 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 150

PERFECT!!! YOU HAVE GIVEN YOUR MOM THE BIGGEST SMILE EVER! READ YOU SOON ♥

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2015 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 150

That was a nice surprise - and the name after your mom is very beautiful :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2015 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 150

AWWWW!!!!  That was so sweet, and I LOVED the name!  Perfect :)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2015 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 150

good

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