Date: 07 Jan 2016 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 18
I hope you eventually have time to finish this story as I really enjoyed reading it so far. You are a very good writer and create great story lines.
Date: 07 Jan 2016 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 19
I hope you eventually had time to finish this story as I really enjoyed reading it so far. You are a very good writer and create great story lines.
Date: 07 Oct 2015 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 19
OMG
I've just jumped on the band wagon for your story.
Come on sister update .... blah blah blah blah.
LOL
No seriously just having a go...... I've been reading your posts about this story & sorry but I have to laugh, come on. I can't belive people have been posting those things on your story (i'm not saying your making it up, sorry if it sounded that way ... I believe you whole heartedly) I just can't belive it.
Don't people realise that you & other writters write these stories for fun *shakes head*. I know i did.
Ok back to the story.
I like your story, well down & can't wait for the update.
I believe you when you say you will finish this story. Fingers crossed this message will get your juices flowing & you get your muse back.
RL can be a kicker, I know. *tsk tsk* RL just gets in the way of so much fun ..... darn it.
And to those that want to put a downer on this story or you ........ Argh your mother wears army boots ...... go blow it out your beep beep beep........
:)
Like I said keep up the good work, enjoy your work. I have read a few of them now.
Date: 22 Aug 2015 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 18
Bella is amazing!
Date: 22 Aug 2015 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 12
Fantastic!
Date: 22 Aug 2015 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 4
Loved it! What did Bella find?
Date: 22 Aug 2015 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 07 Aug 2015 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 19
I absolutely love this story. Please continue soon.
[Report This]Date: 29 May 2015 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oh wow I didn't see that coming what will happen
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2015 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 8
The feelings change
Date: 25 May 2015 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 19
Good to hear from you again, you were missed. Hope all is well.
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2015 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 4
Love the story so far. This Edward is a dick!
Date: 24 May 2015 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 19
glad B asked him to stay
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2015 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 18
This story is really good but it's been awhile since you updated...I just wanted to know when the next chapter will be out...
Author's Response:
I honestly do not know. I have a chapter written, but I HATE it. Not to mention that RL has bitten me in the ass. I have NOT abandoned this story and it will see it's completion. Please be patient and thanks for reading.
Date: 23 Mar 2015 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 18
Can't wait to read more!!!!
Date: 23 Mar 2015 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 16
I'm completely hooked! Wonder what it's going to take for them to finally admit how they feel!
Date: 23 Mar 2015 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 14
I love these two!
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2015 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 18
update soon please. I love this story
Date: 09 Feb 2015 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 18
I am so happy that Edward and Bella are getting closer.
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2015 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 18
Well Lets hope their are no more complications with Carlisle and how will they get the Kings update soon
Date: 05 Feb 2015 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 18
looking forward to more
Date: 04 Feb 2015 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 18
Kings really need to be taken out.
Date: 04 Feb 2015 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 18
Fabulous story, please post soon.
Date: 04 Feb 2015 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 18
Whew! I was worried for a few minutes. I'm so glad he's going to be okay. Hopefully with Edward now realizing that Bella can handle a weapon he will give her one of her own for protection and realize she is not made of glass.
Date: 04 Feb 2015 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 18
It looks like the lovers have finally hit a good point!
Date: 04 Feb 2015 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
YEAH YOU ARE BACK :D
Date: 01 Feb 2015 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 17
ACK Poor Carlise. Go bad ass Bella
Date: 20 Jan 2015 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 17
OMG!! I hope he lives. This is going to start a war. I hope Edward doesn't lash out at Bella and allows her to be there for him.
Ill be waiting anxiously, but patiently for the next chapter. It's a shame that someone chose to be so ridiculously rude to you. And to do it during the holidays makes it that much worse. We all have our responsibilities and priorities. As much as we'd all love for you to post all the time, you can only do so much in a day! Las the mother of 5, two of which are now adults and the other 3 teenagers, that time goes by fast and we can't get that time back. I commend you and appreciate you sharing your stories, especially when you do it because you want to, not because you're paid to. I'll be right here when you are able to post the next chapter.
Date: 20 Jan 2015 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 17
Take as long as you need to write this. I will be waiting. I'm just so thankful you write and share with us so we can all enjoy your wonderful story. I hope Carlisle lives. Bella is an awesome shot!! Too bad the body guards weren't. I can't wait to find out what happened with Edward's meeting. Edward keeps almost calling her baby, right?
Thanks for writing,
Lisa....Gail Cullen
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2015 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 17
Oh snap will he be OK and what will Edward do when she tells him update soon
Date: 20 Jan 2015 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 17
Loved your author note at that top!!! Bella kicked but maybe noe Edward will ravage her. ;)
Date: 20 Jan 2015 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 17
nice shot bella. I wonder what happened with edward and if carlise will make it.
Date: 20 Jan 2015 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 17
good. hope all is well with carlisle
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2015 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 17
I hope Carlisle will be alright
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2015 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 17
It was nice to read the new chapter; I enjoyed it but am concerned about Carlisle. When Edward says “Ba...Bella” is he stopping himself from saying baby? If not what does he want to call her?
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2015 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 17
More more more, please....and soon?
Date: 20 Jan 2015 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 17
I hope Carlisle makes it....glad to see Edward is safe also....Looking forward to more :)
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2015 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 17
Oh no! Poor Carlisle! Nice shot, Bella!
I like how Edward catches himself calling Bella baby, LOL! ;)
Date: 20 Nov 2014 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 16
THANKS FOR LETTING US KNOW :D
Date: 10 Nov 2014 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 16
Good. Glad you are sticking with this one.
Date: 06 Nov 2014 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it! I'm the midst of insanity comes sensibility (from Carlisle) and the willingness to bend ( from Bella and Edward). Admitting they love one another is not easy for these two,but then good comes only to those who take chances. I look forward to more! I think these two could be quite formidable together. If they worked at it! Kudos on great work!
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2014 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 16
I love this story can't wait for an update.
Date: 05 Nov 2014 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 16
I am glad they at least admitted they care about each other. I think Edward is more scared of Bella than she is of him. He is already in love and Bella has total control of whether his heart will be broken.
Date: 04 Nov 2014 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 16
LOVE IT SO MUCH !!!!!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU!
Date: 04 Nov 2014 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 16
Each chapter gets better and better
Date: 03 Nov 2014 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 16
I'm glad they are talking. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 03 Nov 2014 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 16
At least they are starting to talk. No test will destroy them if they remember to talk to each other.
Date: 03 Nov 2014 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 16
You are keeping us on the edge. I really thought he was going to kiss her. I know it was best that he just held her hand. The anticipation is huge! I'm probably going to be jumping up & down when they finally kiss! ;)
Date: 03 Nov 2014 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 16
good . . . more progress for e and b
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2014 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 16
Glad they are finally sharing their feelings
Date: 03 Nov 2014 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 16
love it, cant wait to read more
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2014 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 16
Well Alec is a loose canon but will Edward and Bella be able to stop him update soon
Date: 03 Nov 2014 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 16
Glad they finally talked.
Date: 03 Nov 2014 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 16
looking forward to more
Date: 01 Nov 2014 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 15
I am so addicted to this story! I am looking forward to your next update!
Date: 01 Nov 2014 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 14
I think it's better that we don't have lemons. They have so far to go in just communicating.
Date: 01 Nov 2014 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 13
I was worried Alec had some other tricks up his sleeve.
Date: 01 Nov 2014 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 12
I wonder if he will confess his love as a child for her at the wedding?
Date: 01 Nov 2014 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 11
Bella just lit them both up!
Date: 01 Nov 2014 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 10
Their chemistry is so hot with tiny embers!
Date: 01 Nov 2014 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 9
I LOED her reaction to the proposal & ring!
Date: 01 Nov 2014 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 8
Does she kiss him or does he get shot......
Date: 01 Nov 2014 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 7
A slow burn is always so so good! Mentally Edward is warming up but outwardly he can't control his anger.
Date: 01 Nov 2014 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 6
I think she is only calm bc she had figured it out & she plans on getting under his skin a lot more!
Date: 01 Nov 2014 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 5
Right now this is oil & vinegar, how much shaking will it take to get them to mix?
Date: 01 Nov 2014 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 4
I think she is about to see what her family is really apart of & she isn't going to be happy!
Date: 01 Nov 2014 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 3
I love it that they are completely combative!
Date: 31 Oct 2014 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 2
I like that Bella is a smarty pants!
Date: 31 Oct 2014 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am very excited to get into this story!
Date: 31 Oct 2014 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am very excited to get into this story!
Date: 24 Oct 2014 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 15
I think they both overreacted, just to different things. They both need to chill the tempers and take the time to talk and listen to each other. It is time they both grew up.
Date: 21 Oct 2014 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 15
I think that Edward is over protective and has a build up of...testosterone. He needs to relax, maybe Bella can help him with tha?.
Date: 20 Oct 2014 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 15
No she didnt overreact. He has to learn how to keep a cool head if he is going to be a Boss and earn her respect and trust.
Date: 20 Oct 2014 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 15
I think Edward was the over-reactor here. Dude needs to chill
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2014 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 15
Bella was not exaggerating! Edward is a mobster, I understand his violence, but he needs to control himself. I love how they are getting acquainted, I am anxious that they discover their feelings.