Date: 18 Jul 2014 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 26
Esme is a waste!! Seriously a waste! She is divorcing Carlisle. And since she is it makes it ok to treat Edward like crap for something that happened ten years before he was born. And she knew what Carlisle was doing and went along with him... Waste!
Renee... what a evil, demented woman!! She has more demons that Walmart has pills!!
Looking forward to more :)
Date: 17 Jul 2014 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 26
Wow Esme has a lot of nerve. She's lucky they listened at all. YEY for Rose getting Justice. If only it happened that way in the real world.
Ugh Em huh?
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2014 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 25
Wow what an awesome new years and than a new shit storm will it ever end will her mom get to her and did someone help her get out update soon
Date: 17 Jul 2014 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 25
Wow E's mom's letter was really sweet. Renee needs to just die. What a psycho. I'd be suing the doctor and hospital that let her out. Poor B
Date: 17 Jul 2014 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 23
seems like maybe carlisle is involved with aro
Date: 17 Jul 2014 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 24
I have no idea why he hates him so. But I am glad Bella told Carlisle off.
Date: 17 Jul 2014 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 24
Someone needs to jack Carlisle up! How much more proof does he need?? Can't wait to find out what his problem with Edward is.
Date: 17 Jul 2014 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 24
I dont know if you can answer without revealing the plot.... but why does Carlisle hate him so much??
I have read and re-read parts and still dont get it..
Anyway, loving it and looking forward to more :)
Date: 17 Jul 2014 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 24
Holy Shite. That poor kid. Carlisle really needs a personality and
conscious transplant. Again I hope the media DESTROYS him because you know this is going to be high profile case.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2014 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 24
Wow Carlisle needs a kick in the head damn he is a stupid man I hope Esme leaves him and Emmett needs a beat down too and Alice needs a reality check but it doesn't matter he has the swans and her dads family
Date: 17 Jul 2014 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 24
Jealously, he is a member of a family from Italy, or blames Edward for his sisters death??? Thank you for sharing your work with us!!!
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2014 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 23
Oh wow Carlisle has it in for Edward Sr not Jr so what happened to make him this way and will all the Cullens but Carlisle want forgiveness and what a great Christmas hehehehe and I am happy for Jessica now what will they tell him is it about his real dad update soon
Date: 17 Jul 2014 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 24
Wow, Dr. Cullen still a pompous ass. Great chapter, I want to see Emmett come crawling back and Esme.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2014 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 24
Thanks good chapter
Date: 17 Jul 2014 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 23
I hope Carlisle is not involved. That would be too sad. He was a ass not wanting to give him his jewelry and the piano.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2014 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 23
Thanks good chapter
Date: 16 Jul 2014 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 23
So I have a feeling Caius killed his parents and Carlisle is behind it some how. Don't know if I'm right or not, but can't wait to find out.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2014 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 23
I think Carlise is working with Aro in some way. And by the way he talked about Edward's father, I wouldn't put it past him to have been involved in their murders in some way. I think he is super pissed because Edward was suppose to be their scapegoat, but Bella and her family put a crimp in that. I'm glad that Rose and Jessica turned out to be good friends to our favorite couple. Can't wait to read what Martin tells Edward. Thanks, Maria
Date: 16 Jul 2014 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 22
That was sweet of Edward to give rose and her mom a place to live. Rose seems to have gotten close with bellA that is good. To bad jasper is still on drugs. I wonder what it will take for Esme to get her head out of Carlisle ass and see that Edward is not a bad guy.
Date: 16 Jul 2014 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 23
Yikes!
btw - what the hell is Carlisle's problem? His ranting is bordering on psychotic!
Date: 16 Jul 2014 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 23
What please dont tell me they are siblings.
Date: 16 Jul 2014 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 23
Wow Carlisle is a real piece of work. I'd love to go to the media and embarriss the hell out of him for what he's doing/done.
hmmm Are Edward's parents still alive or something?
Date: 16 Jul 2014 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 22
Please posst again soon. Love this story and the fact you post frequently
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2014 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 22
Thanks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2014 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 22
I loved it wow Bella is awake and talking Tanya is still full of herself now what is Bella not telling Edward and will dr Cullen ever get over what is stoping him from being the dad he said he would be update soon
Date: 16 Jul 2014 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 22
I think the bedtime story she was told was about the murder of Edward's parents. I think she is afraid to upset Edward. I hope we get to hear the story tomorrow. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 16 Jul 2014 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 22
Wow Carlisle is a real prick. LOVED Jessica standing up to Skankya. Wonder what the Martin and Peter secret is. So glad she is ok
Date: 16 Jul 2014 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 22
carlisle is still a huge ass . . . not surprising
Date: 16 Jul 2014 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 22
Dr.Cullen is going to be dick to the bitter end isnt he...
Looking forward to more..
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2014 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 21
Thanks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2014 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 21
Wow poor Bella she lived through so much only to have to go through another now will she be ok will all of them be ok update soon
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2014 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 19
Hell yeah Aro and his goons are caught and in jail but as for Edward and the Cullens I don't think they can undo the hurt and pain they caused him but Bella and the swans will always be there for him that is what families do update soon
Date: 15 Jul 2014 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 21
Holy cow. How many people did Renee kill??? Jeez. The system definitely failed her. Glad E didn't give up and his parents were there to help her back out
Date: 15 Jul 2014 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 20
Ugh Damn cops not finding Caius. Poor B. Hope She's be ok Old saying, they aren't dead till they are warm and dead. Cold slows everything down
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2014 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 21
Loved it even though Edwards family is still full of a bunch of assholes. I love how Carlisle has just decided that even though Edward brought down a huge drug ring that was supplying everyone in Forks that it's still all his fault because he didn't tell them or get Jasper off the drugs. Like sorry Jasper made the decision to do the drugs. Edward didn't make him do it!!! Also can't wait to see how they react to finding out that Rosalie was really seeing Royce and that Edward saved her from being raped. God he better not let any of them into his life again because they sure as hell don't deserve him at all. Can't wait for the next update!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2014 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 19
Wow So much going on in this chapter. Jeez his ex family is so pathetic. LOVED Bella going off on them at the end Poor Rose
Date: 15 Jul 2014 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 21
Sleep well. Wow she got to meet Edwards parent I love that. She kicked cauis ass it is a good thing he died or he would have been in a world of hurt if the guys got ahold of him. So glad she is awake and safe.
Date: 15 Jul 2014 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 21
Fabulous chapter and feel free to post another one!!
Date: 15 Jul 2014 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 21
Thank you!! Thank You!!
I was worried there for a few! :(
So glad she didnt die!
Looking forward to more :)
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2014 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 20
Thanks good chapter
Date: 15 Jul 2014 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 19
wow - his family are really a bunch of assholes
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2014 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 20
No don't leave me hanging
Date: 15 Jul 2014 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 20
Ok, hoping for a happily ever after for Bella and Edward.
Date: 15 Jul 2014 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 20
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOooo
Update.. take tylenol and update... Please!! :(
Im gonna cry!! :(
Date: 14 Jul 2014 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 20
Oh nooooo that is so sad. Edward will save her.
Date: 14 Jul 2014 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 19
Great!! Emmett, weak a-- Mom, punka-- Dad?!?!?!
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2014 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 19
Carlisle is an ass an shocked at esme for not defending him. Id kick his ass out. Bounce fool! bounce!
Date: 14 Jul 2014 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 19
Jasper is with other women what a dipshit. I love that Aro and the rest of them got arrested. I can believe Alice acted like she did not know him. Carlisle is a jack ass calling him mr. Masen and not wanting him to call him dad and his mom wanting to go to him but douche nozzle would not let her. I am happy there are new people in authority. Woohoo for Bella standing up for Edward.
Date: 14 Jul 2014 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 19
i love this story so much thank you for writing it :-p
Date: 14 Jul 2014 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 18
can't wait for more
Date: 14 Jul 2014 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 12
I hope she hurd him. What is Carlisles problem they need to have it out figure it out.
Date: 14 Jul 2014 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 18
Once again you have me hooked. I LOVE your stories. I think it will be Alice that tries to contact Edward first, but more than likely for selfish reasons (like shopping). I'm so glad that Rose is the first to redeem themselves. The person I'm most upset with is Esme, no matter what she should not have turned her back on Edward. My favourite is Charlie, one of the best Charlie's I've read so far. Can't wait for more :)
Date: 14 Jul 2014 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 11
Grandpa knows that they are more than friend even if they dont yet I love Charlie and Bella's relationship it is the best.
Date: 14 Jul 2014 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 10
I dont think I like that Forks school.
Date: 14 Jul 2014 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 18
I love this. Do Carlise and Esme realize what Edward has?
Date: 14 Jul 2014 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 18
Oh wow so much new information , Edward is a great guy of course he help rose even after all she did to him. I think it may be Alice that will contact him once she learns the truth. Carlisle is a dick trying to find a way to kick him out he was looking for an excuse. I am glad Edward is living with Charlie he needs a positive role model.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2014 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 18
Thanks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2014 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 18
Love this story!
Date: 14 Jul 2014 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 18
wow Rose has been through alot. She's lucky B&E aren't spiteful people.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2014 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 18
I think it'll be his mom or it could be Emmett but we shall have to see. His family is still full of assholes like seriously. How l ok ng until we hit all the drama cause I wanna see how things are gonna go down woth the accusations of Bella and mr.banner supposedly sleeping together and Edward supposedly black mailing Bella. God his family makes me wanna kill them all and ugh. They better beg and beg hard and if I were him I wouldnt take them back. They kicked him out of their lives so easily he can do the same.
Date: 14 Jul 2014 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 17
I am glad Bella stayed. It just all fell in on him and could not take it any more but he handled more then most people could. So it was Emmett's good friend Royce, maybe now we will find out why rose was saying it was Edward.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2014 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 17
Yes please!!!!!
Date: 13 Jul 2014 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 17
Glad E is going to live with Charlie. Carlisle et al has a big surpise once Aro at al gets arrested on federal charges and they realize what morons they are. still wonder if he's not in on it somehow. Wonder if Rose is going to make something up or finally tell the truth.
Date: 13 Jul 2014 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 17
Next chapter, can't wait until tomorrow
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2014 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 17
Thanks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2014 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 17
Yes next chapter please!!!! As soon as possible!! Like seriously what's Edwards family gonna do when they realize that Edward was the good one all along he better never take his family back they don't deserve him!!!! God the FBI better get a move on with this shit!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2014 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 16
Oh snap with his family turning in him and his friend than everything Rose is doing now Aro will he be ok will Bella and did the cameras catch who put something in his locker update soon
Date: 13 Jul 2014 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 16
Rose is evil and needs to be dealt with. Ugh no one is believing him and that piece of shit he calls a father is so beyond fucked in the head tell him to leave so he can spend time with his family. Aro planting crap in his locker that is such bullshit. He need to get a good attorney I am sure Jeeves has one on retainer.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2014 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 16
C'est horrible ce qui se passe Edward.
Bella a aussi des problèmes, ils sont complètement fou dans cette école.
Le parentsof Édouard ne méritent pas qu'ils aiment encore entre eux.
Date: 13 Jul 2014 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 16
What the heck!!! No no not Edward!! and Bella and Banner, please.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2014 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 16
Poor Edward. His family are horrible
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2014 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 16
OMG Martin et al need to take these people down now. Lets dust the baggies for prints. E's wont be on them. His "family" needs to all just die at this point. What a bunch of arseholes.
Date: 13 Jul 2014 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 16
Crazy chapter. What is up with his family? I've had a suspicion for awhile Carlisle is in on this drug scandal.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2014 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 16
Okay first off Edwards family is full of a bunch of assholes and douchebags like I don't care what you've done before but no one deserves to be treated like that and the fact that no one will even listen to anything he's saying is bullshit!!! Like Emmett beating him up was wrong and I mean even Charlie believes in him more than his family so it's terrible I wanna kill all of them!!! I also can't believe that Carlisle is like you're not my family an that jasper abandoned him an wont even listen to him!! They better feel like shit when the truth comes out about all of this shit!!! And also can't believe Jacob is trying to say that Bella and mr. Banner were sleeping together total bullshit!!!! And I can't believe they are framing Edward with the drugs!!!!! This is all such bullshit!!! I really hope things get fixed and soon and god his family better hopes he takes them back!!! Also why the fuck does Carlisle believe Rosalie like seriously he's a dumbass!!!! Great story even though I wanna kill some people!!!
Date: 13 Jul 2014 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 15
I love his little talks with himself. Finally it is out and they are on the same page. Doo da and hoo ha interesting names there. I wish Emmett would just listen to Edward and see the truth.
Date: 13 Jul 2014 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 15
woo Hoo for the kiss. 
Glad they are finally official. His "family" is so pathetic.
Date: 13 Jul 2014 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 15
I absolutely love this story!! :)=)
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2014 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 15
Thanks good chapter
Date: 12 Jul 2014 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 14
Awwww the first kiss. Emmett can't trust his own brother and won't even listen to him. Alice is such a bitch getting in on this. His mom I thought would believe him I figured she knew about him and Bella. He just let Emmett take out all his frustration and let him attack him that takes a big man to do that. Rose need to burn in hell while being proded with rusty nails and cactus.
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2014 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 14
I love it wow his Family needs to open their eyes they are so wrong they need to stop before they loose him for good and Bella so very sweet but will the catch Aro and his goons will Rose get her comings update soon
Date: 12 Jul 2014 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 14
So... really loving this story..
But I have to ask, " She doesn't even look at me, then she stops and starts to march back, getting her keys from her pocket. I use my Dom voice – the one I know she always responds to, to get her to stop."
Dom voice???
I didnt know he was a Dom?? Did I miss that part??
Author's Response:
in earlier chapters he talks of wanting to always be in control, and she talks of being more of the submissive side. No this is not a bdsm story, but Edward does thrive on control.
Date: 12 Jul 2014 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 14
Edward is really having a hard time with his family. Poor guy.
Date: 12 Jul 2014 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 14
Wow Carlisle has the whole family blaming E for everything. Hope Rose gets run over by a logging truck for being such a biatch. Em and Alice have a lot of sucking up to do.
Wonder if Carlisle will bother with coming to counselling. Hope Aro et al go down soon so E will be vindicated and E and B get together for real soon.
E needs to just move out. They treat his like crap.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2014 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 13
Oh boy wow Bella has family well more and now she will learn more about her dad wow Edward did good real good but damn Alice they need to take the next step grandpa was right update soon