Date: 23 Apr 2016 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love your story and I certainly hope you keep working on this story because is so amazingly good and well written. It has touch my heart and soul on what Natalie has gone through but also Bella's history with domestic violence at the hands of her ex boyfriend Tyler. You have open many eyes and a good discussion forum on this subject that is still consider taboo to many people. You have done more good with this work than I think you will ever know. Somewhere there is a woman or young reader that is seeing herself in Bella's previous situation for the first time, She is taken a long hard look at her situation and hard look at the guy she is dating and is begining to ask her self the some questions. On behalf of all women around the world who have or are still suffering from domestic violance I thank you so oh so much for writing about this subject. I hope to see an update very soon in the future. I look forward to it in fact! Thank you
Date: 20 Apr 2016 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 16
At least now we won't have to worry about them exploding! I thought that scene was beautifully done. I have to agree with Bella, how are they going to refrain from doing that all the time? Love this couple and their little girl!
Date: 19 Apr 2016 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 15
That child still has the ability to shock them both, with her views on life! It's pretty sad that she has thoughts like that, but I'm sure her therapy will help with those! I'm really looking forward to these three having a good life together!
Date: 19 Apr 2016 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 8
That poor child, to have the knowledge she has, way before she should have had to deal with it! It looks like she really wants to be with Bella, and won't mind if Charlie and Edward come along to the zoo. How sad that she is nine years old and has never been to the zoo!
Date: 19 Apr 2016 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 7
Shame on both Bella and Edward for not rooting for the Seattle teams! It's nice that they have hit it off like this, even considering the circumstances of their first meeting! It will probably be a fun date at the zoo, especially if Natalie has never been!
Date: 19 Apr 2016 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 6
Bella is getting to meet Edward's family, bit by bit. Natalie's mother seems to be not long for this world. It would almost be a blessing if she just quietly slipped away. Then her chils might have a chance at a decent life!
Date: 19 Apr 2016 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 2
At least she's honest about what she does to make rent money. It's nice of Bella to offer to keep Natalie so she isn't exposed to what goes on at her apartment. You can't help but feel sorry for the way this little girl lives!
Date: 19 Jun 2015 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 14
Yeah, it's so obvious that both Bella and Edward are falling hard for each other! Moving in a normal house and a new neighborhood will be a great start for Natalie. I hope we get more updates on this story. :)
I'm reading/following Come Back Tomorrow too! Really a sad story. I'm still hoping some miracles to happen to Edward but it seems he's getting worst. I hope he doesn't get pneumonia...
Date: 19 Mar 2015 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 13
This is a hard chapter to read. Natalie talking to her mom, letting her go so as not feel more pain really made me cry. I don't know how I'll deal with something likw that but it proves that even if Heidi made poor decisions in life, she's done a good job raising that little girl. Hope there'll be an update soon...
Date: 14 Mar 2015 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 13
This is a fantastic story. And I totally understand what Natalie meant about her mum not being there. I felt the same about my grandmother the last time I saw her.
Thank you! I have an aunt that overdosed on heroine and too much insulin. While she was in a complete coma I really felt as though she was gone. Her soul wasn't there. She eventually did wake up and recover enough to live but is now a 47 year old 3 year old.
Date: 14 Mar 2015 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 13
So glad to see an update......thanks for not bailing on it......
Natalie is one amazing kid......that was the sweetest goodbye ever.......now her and Bella can start their bonding as a family......
See you next time....
Date: 13 Oct 2014 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 12
My heart is breaking for this little girl and all those around her she is such a sweet brave little girl that has had to grow up way to fast. I was so excited to see your post thanks much I am here when ever you post.