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Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 19

Trust Bella to go into labour during the service, lol. At least everything went well in the end and Alice wasn't upset. They are a great family, and have a wonderful bond between them all. Debbie

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 18

I'm certainly glad that mike got what he deserved..let's hope the men in gen population find out what he did, lol. Glad rose and the babies are ok too. Debbie

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 19

Great end, you make me LOL at Alice's wedding. Thank you for sharing !

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 19

Nice

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 19

Really enjoyable story.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 19

I love the weddings but I must say Alices was the most fun poor girl just wanted to see them get married lol to funny.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 19

good

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 19

:)

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 19

Excited for the new stories.  Love the outbursts during the ceremony. I love all the new perks Renee got at being coo. The orphanage idea was wonderful. The daycare is a wonderful job for rose.  I love how they all live by each other. 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 19

Would that all CEOs everywhere take a hint from your fabulous chapter here and run their business like this!  loved the chapter, the story, all the characters, and had a great time reading this. Thank you!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 19

Wonderful seeing thier lives in various areas.  So glad they are happy.  Awww for babies.

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 19

Lol,nice bella

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 19

Awesome loved this story. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2014 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 17

Glad that the Viper and her pack got what they deserved. I want to know what Tanya did in Russia to warrent the death pentaly. 

So glad that they worked everything out. Glad that they are moving in with each other.

Loved Rose's little speech!!!!! 

Can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2014 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 18

Lol, ros is too dopped up

Reviewer: flightlessbirdje Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2014 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 18

<3 it

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2014 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 18

That Mike guy is really a piece of shit, I'm glad it is away now.

Thank you for this good chapter.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2014 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 18

good

Reviewer: bird1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2014 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 18

yes i wanna know what she did to get the death penalty. edward is so romantic no matter how he proposes. i love that everyone got what they deserved from taking advantge of bella and her now family. this was a joy to read. so sorry it has to end.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2014 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 18

I'm quite sure I can imagine why she's wanted in Russia. Maybe sending her right back would've been better? No, prolong her torture!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2014 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 18

Great story.

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2014 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 18

That would be cool to see why she got the death penalty.  I love the proposal.  Mike is such a creep. He deserves everything he gets in prison. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2014 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 18

I could see the shock on Emmetts face when Bella slaped him pricesless.  Mike got what he deserved what an asshole. Edward goes with his heart love it.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2014 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 18

Finally Mike got what was coming to him I hope bubba makes him his bitch hahahahahahah and how romantic is Edward more please

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2014 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 18

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2014 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 18

Lots going on in this chapter.  Wow, Mike has some nerve. I am glad that he is getting jail time.  Love the way Edward proposed to Bella.  I am a little sad that there is only a couple of chapters left. Love this story. 

Reviewer: Cockerspanmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2014 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 18

Mike definitely got what he deserved. Cant say there is anything that was missed. Loved the story. Love the writing. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2014 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 18

:)

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2014 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 18

Great chapter.  Glad Bella stood up to mikey's father.   He'll do just fine in prison....muhahahaha.

Yey for babies!!!

Hell yeah to one shot.  I'm thinking she was a golddigger who married someone with money, then did a black widow.

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2014 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 18

Very good

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2014 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 18

wow you certainly covered a lot in this chapter!  I'm sorry to see this coming to an end as I have really enjoyed reading it. Thanks for all you give us!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2014 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 17

Life is good

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2014 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 17

Thanks good chapter s

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2014 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 17

Great chapter!

Reviewer: flightlessbirdje Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2014 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 17

Hmm... i need more hahaha

 

Kasi and Nicola yet another great story this is.

 

Love angie noell

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2014 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 17

Wonder what tanya did lol

Reviewer: Mada Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2014 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 17

perfect

Reviewer: malleigh Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2014 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 17

Sentencing was a relief. Why does Bella want to do everything herself? Lovely retreat.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2014 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 17

=)

Reviewer: Cockerspanmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2014 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 17

Everyone got what they deserved. Glad Bella has her family back. 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2014 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 17

good chapter.

Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2014 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 17

Loving it! Fantastic story.

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2014 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 17

This update is great

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2014 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 17

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2014 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 17

Excellent judge work.    Glad the dinner went well as well as  their  getaway. 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2014 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 17

The only sentencee I feel for at all is Angela. She seems remorseful.  All others got what they deserved.  This story has a settled feeling now, and I love the house!!  Thanks for giving us this!

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2014 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 17

Lovely chapter.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2014 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 16

So glad the badies got found guilty.

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2014 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 17

Aww that was a sweet ending to the chapter. I'm so happy that the people involved with Tanya were punished properly. I liked the twist about her being wanted in Russia, no wonder she paled, lol.

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2014 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 17

Tanya was so smug up until she found out she was going back to Russia. If she can survive fifty years in prison serves her right she is evil.  Glad that Edward and Bella are moving in together and all the good they will be doing. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2014 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 17

:)

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2014 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 15

What a lovely chapter.  I like the trick they played on Emmett.

Reviewer: Cockerspanmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2014 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 15

So happy they made up. Perfect new year eves. 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2014 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 16

Glad tanya drama over!!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2014 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 16

Wow  Skankya and crew were clearly in denail.   LOVE that the kid recorded her.  Poor B.  Hate the media and the garbage it prefers to pretend is the truth.

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2014 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 16

Sorry not to have reviewed these last two chapters, but our family was on vacation.  Now I've caught back up and I must say it was really worth the wait!  I certainly hope Tanya and Corp. get everything that is coming to them during sentencing.  I love that Bella and Edward began again as friends!  The best relationships always do because in times of trouble they have that enduring friendship to fall back on!   Emmett is a howl at times, yet, when things are tough he is there, strong, and reliable!  I do love Rose's description of him and what she loves in her man!  Excellent!  Different women love and need different things.  A sentence you wrote about Jasper was something of a familial revelation.  Bella told Edward that if he loves Alice Jasper must accept Edward.  We are having a " boyfriend" situation just now and while my daughter has tried to accept her cousin's boyfriend, he absolutely does not like my daughter.  The cousins' friendship threatens him, I think.   So more than anything, thank you for that piece of sanity!!

Again, marvelous fiction and it more than entertains!  Kudos!!

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2014 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 16

Im certainly glad that the viper and her minions got found guilty of all charges. Let's hope they go done for a long time and there assets are striped and go back to Bella for the comp she paid out to all the companies. Also that he warns the press about printing shit anthreat they could end up in his court for doing so. At least it is nearly over for them now. Debbie

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2014 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 16

So glad they went down can't wait for the sentencing how long will they get. I love how Bella explained to him about there money so sweet

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2014 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 16

Bella is such a sweet girl that i al glad she is going to get her happily ever after and that tanya will be wearing an orange jumpsuit.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2014 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 16

I am glad that Bella did not leave after being in Edward's bed. Glad the Viper and her minions got what they deserved. Can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2014 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 16

=)

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2014 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 16

Fabulous, please posst soon.

Reviewer: pimmcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 16

I hope viper goes down for a very long time, it time Bella had some peace.

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 16

I am glad they are all going to jail and get what they deserve.  I am glad they are talking thru the insecurities and he will be getting help with his anger issues. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 16

:)

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 16

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 16

Poor Bella but I think life is getting better everyday and now she has a family to support her and even the judge is on her side update soon

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 16

I'm happy with the verdict! Very happy!  I'm even happier with the judge voluntarily seeking to make a public statement!  I bet it won't stop the papz, though. They arent' interested in the truth. See you Monday!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 16

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 15

Hope she sues mike and his pals for libel.   Yey for family time and our kids doing well

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2014 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 15

What a way to bring the new year in with a bang lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2014 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 14

He is willing to do what ever it takes to have her in his life

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2014 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 15

Great progress.

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2014 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 15

Perfect way to start the new year. I love the way they stole all the ham from Emmett that was too funny.  I love that they are having twins.  I am glad jasper and Edward are friends now. 

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2014 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 15

Awwwwwww! Twins

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2014 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 15

BEAUTIFUL! THANK YOU!!!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2014 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 15

=)

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2014 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 15

Thanks good chapter

Reviewer: shegoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2014 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 15

They are so sweet together and I can tell he will be so good to her. What a nice chapter.hopefully no pics will be taken.

Reviewer: msbullcullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2014 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 15

Love it. This story is amazing.

Reviewer: noway Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2014 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 15

Great chapter!  Is it Friday yet?!  Come on Friday! Momma needs the next chapter!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2014 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 15

Love love love it!!!!!!!!!

Perfect! !!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2014 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 15

Wow...  :)

 

Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2014 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 15

Yea for them!

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2014 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 15

I loved it wow everything is coming together nicely and Edward and Bella are now better and are together but will Mike and his followers pay for what they are doing karma is a bitter bitch

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2014 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 15

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2014 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 15

Ah yes!  a sweet lemon!  knowing these two, how could it be anything else.  How quickly the end is coming.  :(

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2014 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 15

Finally!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2014 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 15

:)

Reviewer: CFG Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2014 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 15

wooo hoooo!!! great chapter guys!!! Great story too!!!

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2014 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 14

Loved it. They really need to go slow and work things out. Can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2014 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 14

Love it! They're getting to know one and another again.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2014 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 14

Wow.. they have came a long way!!

 

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2014 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 14

good progress.

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2014 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 14

Thanks good chapter

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2014 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 14

Finally a happy chapter for all involved.  (;

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2014 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 14

They are on the mend. 

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2014 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 14

That was rather sweet.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2014 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 14

Slow and steady is good, very good. They need to really get to lnow each other and this unique tactic seems to be the right choice.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2014 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 14

Going slowly is a good idea. It's clear they have feelings for each other, but trust needs to be rebuilt between them. It is sweet to watch!

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