Date: 02 Aug 2014 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 7
LOVE IT, MORE PLZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!THANK YOU
Date: 02 Aug 2014 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 7
So when will they figure out she is a SWAN??
Looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2014 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 7
Damn I think Tanya works for Bella's company what will happen when the Cullens and Bella figure it out and poor Bella she just wants to do nice things for everyone
Date: 01 Aug 2014 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 7
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 01 Aug 2014 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 7
I think Bella has a great judge of character so that may be why she trusts them. Plus thay have not been falsely doting or overly kind to her. She is doing well with what she knows and what has happened to her. As for the Edward fondle, shit I would have done that too if it was Edward Cullen, vamp or not.
Date: 01 Aug 2014 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 7
I wonder was Eleazer Charlie's friend?
Date: 01 Aug 2014 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 7
they will help her
Date: 01 Aug 2014 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 7
lol for waking up on top of Bella. Glad she is asking for help. She is getting better with it too.
Date: 01 Aug 2014 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 7
I'm still wondering if there is any connection between any one of her companies and Tanya Denali.....
Date: 01 Aug 2014 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 7
I knew Edward's family would love Bella. I still want to know what the family business is that Bella has.
Date: 01 Aug 2014 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 7
Him I'm betting the friend was Edwards grandfather and the temp CEO is Tanya. Loving reading this story
Date: 01 Aug 2014 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 7
I'm pretty sure now that Bella owns the business that Victoria is working for... She's the fibber she is referring to. And that would explain why the big reveal hasn't been made in the story yet.
Date: 01 Aug 2014 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 6
Really enjoying this story
Date: 31 Jul 2014 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 6
Poor Bella...
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[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2014 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 6
This was rather sweet.
Date: 31 Jul 2014 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 6
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 31 Jul 2014 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 6
They are adorable
Date: 31 Jul 2014 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 6
Much better relationship... I hope he tells her what's going on and sees if her company can help.
Date: 31 Jul 2014 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 6
He cares more for her than he thinks that is good because she needs someone who cares for her.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2014 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 6
Liking this so much...keep on updating.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2014 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 6
I loved how she knew she could count on Edward when she called him. I love that all of the family easily pitched in and helped out.
I wonder if someone is trying to hurt her. I guess time will tell. I love the relationship that is developing for these two
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2014 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oh wow thank goodness she called Edward that could have killed her now what's next will he tell her about the company update soon
Date: 30 Jul 2014 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 6
Bella is so sweet. She would fit right into their family. I think she should make Edward the CEO of her company.
Date: 30 Jul 2014 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 6
I think its good she called Edward when she needed help. When will he ask her more info on her company? I have a feeling thats the answer to all their problems. The could probably take Tanya out too.
Date: 30 Jul 2014 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 6
I'm so glad Bella and Edward are finally getting along!!!! Bella really needs someone to lookout for her. Thank you for the update! As always it was great! Can wait for the next.
Date: 30 Jul 2014 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 5
I love that Bella is allowing Edward into her world, and that Edward is open to it now. What Bella needs to do is hire Marcus and Debbie to cook for her at her home! If they lost their business, They could look after Bella and see that she eats right but more importantly, give her that "family " feeling she is missing so badly. Wonderful chapter!
Date: 30 Jul 2014 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 6
At least she called Edward. It seems they both took steps in the right direction in this chapter. Cant wait to see what morning brings for all of them.
Date: 30 Jul 2014 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 6
Yes it is good that she called him that could have been bad. He seems to be warming up to her.
Date: 30 Jul 2014 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 6
Glad she called Edward. I can not believe that she does not have some type of guardian. At least a head Butler or someone to help her with the house.
Date: 30 Jul 2014 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 6
Great chapter! And Edward is finally not only showing his softer side, but his smarter one - like telling Bella to leave the house and NOT turn off any lights or anything. Smart! No one needs a spark in the middle of a gas leak. These two have real possibilities!
Date: 30 Jul 2014 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 6
I'm glad he is easing up on his preconceived notions about rich girls....Bella is special and I think he is beginning to see that...lovely story that I very much enjoy reading!
Date: 30 Jul 2014 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 6
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 30 Jul 2014 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 6
I want to give Bella a hug.
Date: 30 Jul 2014 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 6
Was that gas leak an accident or is someone trying to take her out? Maybe Tanya is trouble for both of them.
Date: 30 Jul 2014 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 6
Wow the doctor was being a jerk. Glad she thought to call E. Wonder if it was a leak, like just a leak, or if someone made it leak.
Aww for 20 questions.
Date: 29 Jul 2014 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 5
Loving the new story. What's your updating schedule for this one?
Date: 29 Jul 2014 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
Really good so far!!
Date: 29 Jul 2014 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 5
That is funny she wants to give it all up and help people out she is not a rich snob that is for sure.
Date: 29 Jul 2014 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 5
Interesting start, good job as always. A few questions though: Considering the scope of the business, who is in charge of running the day-to-day operations of Bella's company? Hopefully someone competent and trustworthy. Also Bella said she has one year to prove herself - to whom? If she owns the majority shares, she doesn't have to prove anything to anyone.
Date: 29 Jul 2014 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 5
edward is starting to see her as a women
Date: 29 Jul 2014 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 5
He is finely getting the chance to see who she really is and he is loving it.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2014 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 5
Love this story and loved the chapter. So sweet and I totally get that a certain place brings back memories.
Date: 29 Jul 2014 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 5
EDWARD IS GETTIG BETTER! MORE PLZ!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2014 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 5
They do say never judge a book by it's cover... well most of them.
So happy he's seing her in new light.
Great chapter!
Date: 29 Jul 2014 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 5
Loved seeing Bella so care free. Wow, Bella has lots and lots of money. Can't wait to find out what different businesses that Bella has.
Date: 29 Jul 2014 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 5
I hope Edward confides in her the dire straights the family is in ...she could buy it fron the viper and then give it to him for a wedding present ...good business decision...makeing him once again master of her universe ...
Date: 29 Jul 2014 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 5
Well, what a fun day they had. I think Edward is looking a Bella in a whole, different light.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2014 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 5
Wow for as rich as she is she is very down to earth and sweet will Edward let her help him and his family update soon
Date: 29 Jul 2014 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 5
That was so visual. I could feel the sparks through the computer.
Date: 29 Jul 2014 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 5
Wowser great chapter. Love them getting to know each other better
Date: 28 Jul 2014 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 5
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 28 Jul 2014 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 5
My favorite part of the chapter was when they were trying on clothes....
Date: 28 Jul 2014 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 5
AWE I love their day together. Aro rocks, I absolutely love him. He is a trip.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2014 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 4
Tanya is a ...
Maybe asking Bella what her company is would be a good idea. At least a good start.
Great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2014 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 4
Wow poor Bella she needs the Cullens in her life they are sweet and caring but Tanya is a grade A bitch I hope Bella can help them take her down update soon
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2014 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 4
Viper needs to get a clue. Edward is slowly but hopefully surely figuring it out. Hope it doesn't take him too long.
Date: 27 Jul 2014 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 4
Can't wait to find out what Bella's family business is and if it could help Edward and his family. Thanks for updating. Can't wait for the next update.
Date: 27 Jul 2014 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 4
They need to check into the business Bella owns as Tanya isn't going to just sale.
Date: 27 Jul 2014 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 4
Well he has a better attitude towards her... I wonder what her company does?
i think they should wire Edward when that viper talks to him... I do hope he tells his family what she wanted.
Date: 27 Jul 2014 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 4
I knew that was what Tanya wanted. I really want to know more about Swan's company. I think she shoukd just hire all the Cullens now.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2014 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 4
Viper is VAPID, and I strongly despise her!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2014 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 4
I cannot believe a young rich girl would be left totally alone, not even hangers on around her? I like that Edward has stopped being an arse though.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2014 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 3
Poor Bella but I am glad she called Edward out on his rotten behaviour.
Date: 27 Jul 2014 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 4
She is disgusting wanting Edward as a toy. I think Bella can help him if he will let her and I think he can teach her a thing or two. I think she needs Esme as a motherly figure in her life.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2014 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 2
Well Edward is a huge arse and Bella must be desperate not to tell him to take a flying leap.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2014 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
How lucky is Edward to meet an heiress in need of his help. Awesome chapter.
Date: 27 Jul 2014 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 4
Tanya is a real piece of work! Something tells me that Taya has something is going on behind Edward's back without his knowledge. Company - wise. Viper isn't the word I'd use for her though. The word I'd use starts with a "B" ! As for Bella, I think she needs to do what she wants to - become a nurse. Perhaps Edward can run her company for her on salary. Excellent chapter! Finally the masks are coming off! Thanks for all the hard work! Ave a great weekend!
Date: 27 Jul 2014 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 4
Hope E changes her mind about her company helping.
Date: 27 Jul 2014 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 4
Tanya is a viper..
Curious to what Bella's dad's business was.
Looking forward to more :)
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2014 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 4
i hope edward knows it is a pipe dream. tanya is not going to sign the business over to his family wheather the have the money or not
they need to figure out something else
bella wow so much going on with her. i feel for her. my heart just goes out to her
so much more to learn about life than just the business
loving it
Date: 27 Jul 2014 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 4
I think the viper is hiding something. I think Bella's company can and will help. I'd love to know if Bella is of age so that she and Edward can one day merge....
Date: 27 Jul 2014 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 4
I think Tanya is a slimmy BITCH they need Bella's company to help Edward us doing better but he still is not there with her yet
Date: 27 Jul 2014 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 4
I hope he doesn't bow down to Tanya, talk to Bella
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2014 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 4
bella is the viper's sister?!
Date: 27 Jul 2014 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 4
Oh I hate Tanya! Edward needs to ask Bella about her company again... I think she holds the answers to a lot of problems.
Date: 27 Jul 2014 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 4
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 27 Jul 2014 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 4
I'm trying to figure out the connection between Bella's company and that of Edward's family. I feel like there's a connection... Especially when Carlisle said he hoped she didn't say anything important when Edward wasn't listening. Felt like foreshadowing...or maybe I'm thinking too hard. I always look forward to updates of your stories! I love them all.
Date: 27 Jul 2014 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 4
Tanya is a piece of work. Im glad Bella and Edward seem to have found a common ground to work on at the moment.
Date: 27 Jul 2014 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 4
I really hope he doesn't give in to the viper. I hope Edward and Bella are the ones to bring her down. Two women who have money, yet are completely different. Innocent Bella, evil viper. Can't wait for more!
Date: 26 Jul 2014 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 3
Awww that is sad she is all alone. I think the relationship has turned a corner for the better.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2014 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 3
Great chapter!
Can't believe that Bella has no one... poor girl.
Date: 25 Jul 2014 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 3
EDWARDS AN HUGE ASSHOLE!!!!! IS HE A MANWHORE? DOES HE HAVE A GIRLFRIEND? JUST CURIOUS.... UPDATE SOON PLZ!
Date: 25 Jul 2014 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 3
Edward can do better...
Date: 24 Jul 2014 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 3
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 24 Jul 2014 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 3
That is so sad she is alone. So glad Edward has pulled his head out of his ass and will now see her forwho she is.
Date: 24 Jul 2014 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 3
I'm enjoying this story very much. I can't wait to see where you take it, and them!
Date: 24 Jul 2014 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it! Poor Bella. I'm glad Edward got his head out of his ass.
Date: 24 Jul 2014 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 3
Something tells me that things are in for a big change on the Bella- Edward front! Mike better not open his mouth up now! So Bella is alone - really alone - and in a strange way both she and Edward want the same thing - to save their family businesses. That's a point that they can bond on. Also, they both have to deal with the "rich elites" that like to make things hard for others. I have a feeling that together they are up to the task. But Edward really needs to get the girl's phone number!
Once more, another amazingly chapter! It's gritty and emotional - the best kind! Thanks again!