Date: 08 Nov 2014 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 14
Heart to heart talk and Edward needs to make sure Bella hears him out!
Date: 08 Nov 2014 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 14
With Edward AGAIN keeping quiet, has to be the beating. I'd say Bella going home and crying about everything, while Edward goes home and feels awful and not physically. Unless he somehow, hopefully, gets some sense and finally speaks up. :)
Date: 08 Nov 2014 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 14
What will happen next? You tell us! I think he is going to push her away again. She still works for him. Perhaps she can transfer to another precint. She should get a commendation from the Major and Police Commissioner because She stopped them from carrying out their original plan. Edward did not do that much, disable the bombs and maybe kill one perp.
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2014 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 3
Kept this as a treat for myself and it is already worth the wait.
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2014 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 12
Liked the view into his thoughts
Date: 08 Nov 2014 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
Lmao love this already
Date: 08 Nov 2014 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 13
stranger danger.. Chucky has B..
I don't hate Edward. Now I am so glad she has shown him and soon his precint that she maybe small but she has got the makings of a great police officer, detective or whatever she aspires to.
Date: 07 Nov 2014 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 13
I really liked hearing things from EPOV. I think it is funny that Charlie knows that Edward likes Bella already & they go fishing together. I have no doubt that Edwrd will now save Bella unless she saves herself.
Date: 07 Nov 2014 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 13
Oh shit! (first thought in my mind) I thought maybe Edward was trying to do the right thing concerning Bella, and just messing it up, and sure enough! This is not not good, with some crazy ass pointing a gun at her head! It would be nice t see Jasper show up right about now with a sniper in tow!
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2014 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 13
Wow now the bombs are disabled how will Edward save Bella
Date: 07 Nov 2014 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 13
the Suspence is Killing me! but Love your work!
Date: 07 Nov 2014 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 13
I think Edward has been more than ahuge fool for a while. It may seem weird but he deserved to get his a.. Kicked, although not by these guys. I do hope he gets his head in order when this is over.
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2014 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 13
Love it!
I can't wait to find out who they all are.
Date: 07 Nov 2014 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 13
Edward is going to kill Chucky. I love hearing Edward pov he has done what he thought was best for both of them but he will fix that.
Date: 07 Nov 2014 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 13
Ack noooooooo BELLA!!!!!! lol for Charlie knowing E like B
Date: 07 Nov 2014 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 13
I love EPOV's better than any other!
Yes, he needs to get his head out of his ass & man up!
love this story but the chapters are too short (insert whine)!
Date: 07 Nov 2014 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 13
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 07 Nov 2014 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 13
I was afraid they'd catch her. I'm on pins and needles waiting for tomorrow. I'm completely hooked. Edward needs to come clean with Bella after this robbery is wrapped up. Til tomorrow...
Date: 07 Nov 2014 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 12
Fun story. You all never disappoint. I love thus kick ass Bella. She is gonna show up all those nasty men. When this is done, Edward owes het a huge apology.
I loved the sceen where Bella stabs her own shoulder. That was awesome!!
Date: 06 Nov 2014 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 12
All well and good, Edward, but since Bella doesn't read minds, you might try telling her why you act the way you do!
Date: 06 Nov 2014 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 12
He is hiding a lot of his feelings and hurting them both that will all change now?
Date: 06 Nov 2014 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 12
Liked hearing Edwards point of view
Date: 06 Nov 2014 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 12
He is hopefully oing to attack her in a good way when this bank crap is all over! ;)
Date: 06 Nov 2014 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 12
I like this! That you took a little time out from the bank robbery to show us Edward's feelings for Bella lends just that much more color to the story. Great job!
Date: 06 Nov 2014 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 12
Good to see Edward's pov. I cannot wait for them to finally get together!
Date: 06 Nov 2014 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 12
Well at least he has cleared up the fog about his thoughts. Now I can stop wanting to hit him over the head. :-)
Date: 06 Nov 2014 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 12
j adore ton histoire - hate de lire la suite
haine
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2014 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 12
I had a feeling that was why he was rude to her but will he stop and just tell her how he feels
Date: 06 Nov 2014 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh Edward. You've done more damage than you know. Everyone is going to treat her worse. Sigh
Date: 06 Nov 2014 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 12
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 06 Nov 2014 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 11
It seems like Edward might want some lemony goodness with Brave Bella!
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2014 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 11
Hoping helps find Charlie soon.
Great chapter!
Date: 05 Nov 2014 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 05 Nov 2014 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 11
awww Poor Charlie. Hope he'll be ok. Go Bad Ass Bella though.
Date: 05 Nov 2014 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 11
Bella is going to be a mess if she keeps getting shot and stabbed! The girl has some serious skills and she ought to be proud of herself, she's a one woman army so far! I think she's got the wrong idea about Edward's feelings for her, however. See you guys tomorrow!
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2014 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 11
There, you leave me there?
Date: 05 Nov 2014 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 11
I hope Charlie is ok. I'm looking forward to Edward's point of view. I am loving this.
Date: 05 Nov 2014 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 11
She's a wonder! I love it that a woman is saving all their asses!!
Date: 05 Nov 2014 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 11
Please post soon
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2014 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 11
Well I think Edward has been trying to keep Bella away because her cares too much hmmm and will he disarm the bombs in time and will her dad be ok
Date: 05 Nov 2014 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 11
Edward thinks Bella is amazing. They need to get this shit done so they can save Charlie
Date: 05 Nov 2014 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 11
Loving this story!!! 😊
Date: 05 Nov 2014 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 11
Well now Edward can help her she is not alone in this mission. Oh holding back answers, ha ha ha. Not you guys!
Date: 05 Nov 2014 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 10
Please don't leave us hanging too long!!!!!
Another great chapter
Date: 05 Nov 2014 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 10
good chapter she is slightly hurt now.
Date: 05 Nov 2014 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 9
she is using her head.
Date: 04 Nov 2014 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 10
Wowsers thinking some people are going to have alot more erspect for her now.
Date: 04 Nov 2014 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 10
i love this story a lot
Date: 04 Nov 2014 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 10
They must have figured out who Bella is and are going to use Edward and her dad to get her to surrender! Now that she's wounded it has to slow her down just a bit! It's about time for the cavalry to show up and lend a hand!
Date: 04 Nov 2014 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 10
Love Badass Bella! Love your work!
Date: 04 Nov 2014 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 10
Ok Bella is pretty bad ass but where is the swat team?????
Date: 04 Nov 2014 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 10
Great action. I think she's right that now that they know who she is, they will make the connection to her dad. I'm glad she told Jasper their plan before her phone was damaged. Love this bad ass Bella! Her co-workers can eat their words about her now that she is the one saving the day!
Date: 04 Nov 2014 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 7
little B doing her job
Date: 04 Nov 2014 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 6
I am glad she stood up to him.
Date: 04 Nov 2014 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 5
Good job Bella. She should have told him she was 17.
Date: 04 Nov 2014 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 4
I hope he treats her cold because she is at work and she does not need to have a crush on him.
Date: 04 Nov 2014 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 3
Are you okay? .. grr
Date: 04 Nov 2014 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
I can only say that the picture on the front of a different Bella usually stops me from reading. Weekitty only for you.
Date: 04 Nov 2014 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 10
Yes I think she is a brainiac! I hope she kills all of them!
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2014 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 10
Well she took out more and knows what they are up to but what will be her next move update soon
Date: 04 Nov 2014 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 10
I just described this story to a friend yesterday that is was like Die Hard, only with a woman and in a bank. Lol. I love badass Bella!
Date: 04 Nov 2014 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 10
Girls,
Loving this story! Keep up the good work!
jennifer
Date: 04 Nov 2014 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 10
Bella is so cool.
Date: 04 Nov 2014 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 9
Interesting story. Go Bekla, kick some ass and show em all!
Date: 04 Nov 2014 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 9
Great chapter
Date: 03 Nov 2014 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 9
I bet Bella hates Edward getting beaten, just as he hates the risks she is taking to try and help! I hope these creeps don't get their hands on her, no telling what they might do! There is some shifty plot happening here, as the robbers are making it look one way and it really is another!
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2014 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 9
I couldn't stop reading once I started! Can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2014 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 9
Wow she is good now will she figure out what they are after and stop them before anyone gets hurt
Date: 03 Nov 2014 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 9
They are defiantly trying to get to the gold bars and replace them for fake ones. But I also think they want a bunch of the police to go down too. I am thinking that Edward has way deeper feelings for Bella than she understands. I do not know the Edward/Charlie connection but I am sure you will reveal it all in due time.
At first I thought that the gold bars we hiding drugs but that does not make sense.
Date: 03 Nov 2014 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 9
I think the costumes are great! I wish Bella would put a plastic bottle on the end of her gun & use it as a silencer. ( I saw it on a tv show). She could take more guys out & not let anyone know.
Date: 03 Nov 2014 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 9
Hope Jasper and all can get them out before Bella gets hurt! Edward cares/loves bella. I don't think he's disappointed. He's worried. Can't wait until tomorrow!!!!
Date: 03 Nov 2014 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 03 Nov 2014 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 9
Awesome can't wait to find out whats Next :-)
Date: 03 Nov 2014 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 9
Just discovered this story and read it all in one sitting-- now I'm going crazy to find out what happens! Please update soon!!! Absolutely love this story. You are very talented writers! THank you!
Date: 03 Nov 2014 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 9
they are replacing the real gold bars from the bank close by with their fake ones, aren't they? thay are using this bank as a diversion and a way to get into that bank. I hope Bella fucks up their plans real good..
Date: 03 Nov 2014 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 9
She has figured out what they are doing. Edward has to be impressed with what she is doing but is scared that she is going to get hurt.
Date: 03 Nov 2014 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 9
Go Bella. Such a smart coolie she is
Date: 03 Nov 2014 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 8
Think I might need all the action in one go once it's all up, as I'm losing some of the tension in the case with the gaps? I just get all into it, and it stops again...so I'll re-read to get the flow once the whole shebang is done.
Great stuff! T
Date: 03 Nov 2014 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 8
go bad ass bella.
Date: 03 Nov 2014 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 8
cant wait to read more
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2014 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 8
Hot damn Bella is good real smart too now how will she finish the job
Date: 03 Nov 2014 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 8
She is kick-ass awesome!!! I hope she takes them all out one by one and puts everyone in their place. But it will probably only lead to a lot of jealous men calling her a show off.
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2014 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 8
Loving it! Really exciting.
Date: 03 Nov 2014 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 8
Loved it can't wait for more 😀
Date: 02 Nov 2014 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 8
Boy oh boy! The girl is good! She's doing a great job so far, too bad she can't imitate Frank's voice, but oh well! The bombs are the biggest problem right now!
Date: 02 Nov 2014 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 8
There is no doubt Edward along with the rest of the force is going to kissing the ground she walks on & giving her tons more respect!
Date: 02 Nov 2014 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 8
Love how cofodent bell is looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 02 Nov 2014 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 8
so far, so good. They will come looking for Frank, though, won't they? maybe she can spray the bombs with the fire extinguisher and freeze them? good story. I'm liking it.
Date: 02 Nov 2014 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 8
Bella is bad ass and she has proved her self over and over.